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Chapter 8:
Dadima: Maan I am about to go to Geet's house to decide the date of your marriage
Maan: Dadima ohh let me come with you then
Dadima: No Maan that won't be necessary...but why do you want to come? (smirking knowing the answer very well)
Maan: To give you company and so I can meet Geet's parents as well
Dadima: Are you sure that is the only answer
Maan: Yes Dadima. While I am there I will pick Geet up and we can go to office together...
Dadima smiled as she was expecting that answer. Both arrived at Geet's house...Geet opened the door
Geet: Namaste Dadima and looked over at Maan..Maan just winked at Geet
Dadima: Good Morning beta
Geet: Good morning...please come in Dadima...punditji is inside waiting
Dadima went ahead as Geet was about to follow Dadima..Maan held Geet's hand and whispered in her ears "won't you tell me to come in"
Geet: Do you need special invitation to come in?
Maan: Yes I do
Geet: Please come in Mr. Maan Singh Khurana aka Gabar Singh Ji
Maan pulled her outside of the enterance of the doorway and pushed her against the wall..."whenever you love call me Gabar Singh..I will be forced to show you what kind of Gabar Singh I am"
Geet: Please let me go...everyone is waiting for us inside...
Maan: You should've thought of that before...he bent forward and gently brushed his lips against hers and let her go of her hands..."lets go inside"
Geet: huh...what.....yea...lets go...walking like a zombie inside the house and trying to register what just had happend
Geet mom: Geet go in the kitchen and set the table
Geet didn't hear what her mom had said...she just stood there like a zombie...her mom came in front of Geet and shook her...
Geet mom: Geet where is your mind...
Maan: Geet are you alright, what happened? Maan tried so hard not to laugh out loud...
Geet gave him a glare and ignored him
Geet mom: I told you to go in the kitchen and set the table for breakfast...
Geet: Alright Mom
Geet got busy in the kitchen and setting up the table in the dinning table...Maan could see Geet from where he was busy...not paying attention to everyone's convorations...Geet knew that Maan was looking at her..but ignored him because of the act he pulled earlier...
Punditji: According to both of their horoscope, the good time for them to get married is in two weeks
Geet mom and dad: Two weeks? That is so early
Dadima: Don't worry, we will take care of everything from our side...
Geet mom: how will be prepare everything...all the guests?
Dadima: Guests are not that important..close family friends will do...we will get started on all the preparations...
Geet mom: hmm you are right...
Geet Dad: I will begin calling all the guests and inform them
Dadima: That means we need to go shopping for bridal wear shopping..
Geet mom: let's go today after having breakfast...
Dadima: yes, you are right...
Geet Dad: If you don't mind we have one request....
Dadima: Ji sure
Geet Dad: We have a haveli and we would like it if our Geet get married there
Dadima: Yes sure we don't mind...as long as Geet come to our house
Maan: Excuse me aunty where is the kichen I would like a glass of water
Geet mom: I will get it for you
Maan: No, its fine I will get it
Maan left for the kitchen before she could respond...he saw Geet at the dinning table putting food...
Maan: Ahem can I get a glass of water?
Geet: It's in the kitchen...still setting up the table
Maan: Where is the kitchen...(trying to get her attention)
Geet: Right behind me...excuse me
Maan followed Geet to the kitchen
Maan: Why are you ignoring me
Geet: here is your water...
Geet went and grabed the rotis daba to put on the table..Maan came in front of her...
Maan: Geet why are you mad
Geet: I got embarsed because of you
Maan: what did I do?
Geet: you know what you did
Maan: No I don't know what I did (with a smirk)
Geet: well then fine..
Maan: ohh you mean when I did this'so he grabbed her shoulders and kissed her on her lips
Geet was so shocked her eyes were open and couldn't push him away since she was holding the roti's daba..then they heard someone coming and Maan let go of Geet'
Geet Mom: Geet is the table ready'
Geet who was again standing like a zombie'Maan pinched her on her arm
Gee: ouch..mom umm yea the table is ready
Geet Mom: is everything ok
Geet gave a glare to Maan: Yes everything is fine
Maan smiled at Geet
At the dining table everyone sat down to have breakfast'Maan was the last person to sit on the table'
Dadima: Maan you can go to work today..Geets mom, Geet and I are going shopping
Geet: Smilied at Maan
Maan: woh Dadima shopping
Dadima: yes shopping you know for your wedding
Maan: ohh ok (maan didn't want Geet to go for shopping but had no choice but to agree)
After breakfast Maan left for office while the rest went for shopping'
Precap: depends on what you guys choose!
IMPORTANT NOTE: Alright so my fan fic is differnent..I want to portray Maan and Geet scenes simple that does not go into too much details but it is cute to read and the reader can get an idea of what I am talking about...NOW coming to the point...do you want me to skip to their wedding day? The reason I am asking is because there are so many fan fics that already have scenes about Geet and Maan before marriage..such as when they are going shopping together for the dresses and whtever ceremonies that come before marriage lol..I don't want to be repetitive...and as a reader I am sure you guys don't want to reread same scenes again and again...
SO do you guys want me to skip to their wedding day? or you guys want more scenes before marriage? or perfer more scenes after marriage?
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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