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Posted: 14 years ago
Just loved it to the core....wow...Maneet's first kiss (Why am I blushing...W*H!!!)...........please continue soon as I am waiting with baited breath to see if Geet actually flies with Maan.....that will be tooo cooooooollllllllllllllllll...............❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Baap re ! Kya ladki hai ? Aur kitne nice friends hai ! 😆 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Kya likhoo???, Kya bolo??? You have made me speechless......The update was fabulous...magnetic...electrifying...I still have goosebumps....Wow Maan actually kissed her....and with such ease...with such surity and authority...I am completely bowled by this update...I know its going to linger in my thoughts throughout the day...I wonder what will happen if people catche me smiling unnecessory....😆😆

Waiting to see Geet's reaction....she won't be able to concentrate on anything after this...just like me......😆😳

Thanks for such adorable updates...you've put a smile on my face this morning.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lolz luvd the manaofying 4m both sides:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet going with Maan..waiting for what reaction..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow maan kissed geet😳😳
ohh that was so...😍😍..I even forgot about prem's bomb thing😆😆😆
lovely update
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 25

she slowly pulled out of the hug not breaking eye contact...airhostess closing the door
she looked at him lost for few mins...the flight was in motion with announcement on wearing
the seat belt...she touched her checks still looking at him
she got up still looking at him ...her eyes were dark & piercing..but seemed blank
she hit her head on the baggage part above the seat...she still had her
one hand on her cheeks & other now on the head rubbing still looking at him
she tried walking out turning away..still not wanting to break the eye contact
airhostess - maam please be seated..she did'nt seem to register
plane was now on the run way
the catching up speed of the flight & her emotions it was crazy, she could not
ignore the thrill of excitement that rippled through her with his touch
she was pink and lost. maan watched her closely he could read those eyes
he probably knew how exactly she felt since he was feeling it himself
the kiss was just perfect combination of sweetness & romantance & gentleness!!!
it was magically sensitive adding to their closeness. she was touchy-feely types
he knew but could feel that very closely now, how she was so lost with his
soft pat on her cheeks, as if she lost all her senses, more than that brief
moment it was the state in which they found themself like on a new plane of pleasure.
geet could actually feel how compassionate & caring he was. she could feel how much
he really cared about her feelings...she turned without realzing the flight was taking off
she lost balance & trembling down on the aisle.
maan held her from falling down the aisle and she fell in his arms hugging him
closing her eyes tight it was like the butterflies in your stomach hurtling
down a rollercoaster. It is the single strangest feeling she ever had
a combination of shock, fear and immense euphoria.
maan - geet ...geet ...shook her & made her sit in the seat
plane was steady in the mid air now..after few mins of silence
maan clearled his throat
geet - I am sorry
maan - GF yaar tum to mujhe manane ke chakar main fas gayee
geet - I just hope I get the next flight back ..nahi to papaji ne meri tang thodni hain
maan - I don't think that will be a problem
geet - aap kab wapas aarhe ho
maan - kal
geet - pehle nahi bolsakte the
maan smiled
geet - sachi aap ki is smile ne mujhe kisi din marvana hain
maan - kya zaroorat thi tumhe meri peche aane ki? aise koi karta hain kya
geet - kisi aur ka to mujhe nahi pata, lekin Geet Handa to kuch bhi kar sakti hain
maan - sachi main pagli ho tum
geet - aur aap challaak lomadi
maan - GEET
geet - challaak hi nahi cunning bhi
maan gives a strin look
geet - aur nahi to kya, kitna pareshan kar raka hain mujhe
maan - why do u get so disturbed with what I say
geet - pata nahi..very innocently
maan - mujhe pata hain
geet narrowed her eyebrows - no forget it I know another flirtish comment of urs
why are u going to mumbai
maan - business meet hain
geet - kab hain
maan - kal hain
geet - cool phir aap beach lekar jana aaj
maan - are u crazy, u have to be back in delhi
geet - raat ki flight leloongi, please na...waise bhi I am in this flight beacuse of you
maan - tumhe kabhi mana kiya hain jo aab karoonga
geet smiled - I am so excited..beach without gaurds...OYE TERI
maan - kya huwa
geet - prithvi..he might be waiting for me outside the airport
main use kya kahonghi
maan - tell him you are in some friends place
geet - aapni car parking main chod kar
maan - say u went in ur friends car
geet - not bad bachan ur really challak lomadi
they reach the mumbai airport
geet goes to the booking counter looks for the late night flight
maan picks her ticket & they drive to the hotel
maan - I have some work in the hotel, tum tab taak freshen up hojana
geet - umm
they check in to the hotel & maan leaves to meet the client
geet calls prithvi & tells him to take the car home
then calls prem
prem - patch up hogaya
geet - thanxs
prem - kanha hain
geet - mumbai
prem - are u mad
geet - I could not get off the flight
prem - tu flight main kya kar rahi thi
geet kept quite
prem - aab kya
geet - mama
prem - teehk hain..bali ka bakra
geet - umm!!!
prem - please aaj raat ko aajana
geet - umm
prem - warna teri papaji mere ghar puri police force behje denge
geet - raat ke flight hain
prem - ok..bye ..take care

geet rests on the bed & watches TV & dosses off waiting for her bachan
not realizing it is Maan Singh Khurana....when it is work..time just flies for him
maan comes back quite late 9pm.. he looks at her sleeping
and smiles.. walks up to her & lies down next to her resting his
head on his elbow.. just silently watching her ...his hand move to
move the locks that teased her cheeks.
geet with her eyes closed - aap nahi lagta ki aap kuch jada hi
fayada utta rahen hain
maan snapps up & sits - i thought u were sleeping
geet - so
maan - so
geet - so what where you doing lieing next to me
maan - tumhe deehk raha ta
geet - are u sure Mr.Bachan..aapke irrade neek the
maan - tum samne ho to irrade neek kaise ho sakte hain
she picks up the pillow & starts waking him..flirt karne ke liya ek dam ready ho
aur mujhe jo beech lejana ke plan tha uska kya
maan - meeting thodhi lambi keech gayee
geet - very bad bachan u spoiled my plan...abhi we won't be able to go to the beach
I hate u for this
& turns her face around


precap
so wat say beach ho jayae???😳
NEXT PART 26
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
YAY!! ! 1st to comment 😃

Loved it, loved it, loved it! 😳 Geet toh bilkul pagal hai 😆. I just love her!
Precap sounds awesome..Geet will be smiling in no time!

Thanks Di! 🤗
Edited by radiant_raisa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes beach let them spend time together great update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
amaziNG!!!

dat kiss was mind blowinG!!!

challaak lomadi....lmaooooo😃

nw a date at beacH????:P:P



update ASAP!!!!
Edited by anufa - 14 years ago

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