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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 22

maan musmerized with her touch on his lips...
maans lips parted to kiss her soft & tender palm...he held back turned away. he was really uncomfartable. geet was not sure of his discomfart she looked at him & took her hand back
geet - aap waise to bhut baatein bante ho lekin, but u really do'nt care
maan looked out & opened the window ...fresh air blow from her side to his
filling the car with her scent...maan closed his eyes & took in the scent
geet - I don't like you. you don't deserve my friendship
you are very rude, selfish, selfcentered & evil
maan snapped out - GEET
geet - deehka kaise baat karte ho...chi chi babaji..
maan looks up confused
geet - pata hain no one dares to talk to me the way you do
maan turns her to face him - geet meri baat suno
geet - mujhe aap ki baat nahi suni, aap bhut hi nakchade ho
maan shakes her - geet I am sorry
geet - mujhe nahi chahiya aap ka sorry, koi aapne Gf ke saat aise behave karta hain
jab deehko gussa karte rahte ho, ek to main itna upset hoon aur aapne
mujhe get out kaha
maan - maine gussa main kah diya tha
geet - i will never talk to you, kabhi phone nahi karongi, kabhi millon ghi bhi nahi
maan - sorry kaha na
geet - lekin koi aise kah sakta hain aapne her lips crushes into his chest as he
hugs her. She hits on his chest...aap bhut rude ho. he holds her tighter mar tum mujhe rahe ho
aur main rude hoon
. She bites his chest really hard in anger. maan smiles and keeps quite
she looks up at him scared & wondering his reaction. He bends his head - hogaya ki aur
bhi gussa uttarna bhaki hain
she looks away...I am sorry really ..I mean it..
I did'nt want to hurt you he said
. Her hands that rested on his chest slipped to embrace him.

she felt comfartable and calmer. sorry she said
maan - maine suna nahi
geet - kuch nahi & pushes him away
maan smiles & started the car
maan - tumhari mama tumhe lekar pareshan hogayee hongi isliya kuch kaha hoga
geet - mama kabhi bhi kuch nahi kathi
maan - its ok mama hi to hain...mama logo ka to haq ban tha hain
geet still looked worried
her phone rang
geet - i missed missed missed missed you so much
rajveer - missed u too
geet - how do u know I wanted to talk to u
rajveer - tum dil se yaad karoo I will be at ur service
geet - thanxs..u just made my day, pata hain mama na danta
maan smiled
rajveer - firing wali baat ko lake
geet - umm
rajveer - aunty ko tum janti ho
geet - phir bhi
rajveer - I need to tell aunty, next time se geet aise kare ghi to
mujhe dant de...akhir tumhe gun challana maine hi to sikaya hain
so I am the person to be blamed
geet - aise nahi hain
maan kept looking at her change in mood & happiness
rajveer - tum teehk ho na
geet - haan main teehk hoon
rajveer - yah bachan ke saat kya scene hain
geet - kuch nahi
rajveer - does'nt sound all that simple
geet looks at maan....maan was looking at the road
geet - kyun
rajveer - nahi mujhe laga
geet - when are you coming
rajveer - not sure
geet - jaldiana I am really missing u a lot
rajveer - me too
geet - waise u remember ur promise right
rajveer - umm
geet - bye
rajveer - bye
geet was much better now, maan was happy to see her cheerful self
geet - raj ka phone tha
maan smiled
geet - he is my bestest of friends, he is a darling
maan - dinner? turns the car to the resturant
geet - umm
maan - Chinese
geet nodes..busy texting
maan - tum raj ke bare main kah rahi thi
geet - hmm!! geet was lost texting
they reach the resturant & she was still texting
maan gives her the menu card
maan - order karo
geet looks partially in the phone & at the menu
maan - GEET
geet - umm
maan snatches the menu card & places the order
mid way through the dinner geet realizes maan was not saying any thing
geet - kya huwa
maan - kuch nahi
geet - phir aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahe
maan keeps quite
geet - aab maine kya kiya
maan continues to eat
geet - aap phone ko lekar naraz ho, maine kaha na rajveer ka tha
maan still does'nt say anything
geet - arrey yaar if u r angry bolkar naraz ho na
she pushes the fork in the plate & crosses her hand over her chest looking away
maan - don't create a scene hear now
geet - main scene create kar rahi hoon
maan - GEET
geet - aap mujhe se baat nahi kar rahe ho aur main scene create kar rahe hoon
aap ko mera raj se baat karna aacha nahi laga to main kya kar sakti hoon
maan - why will I have problem with u talking to anyone
geet - phir aap ka mode off kyun huwa aachanak
maan rools his eyes - i was asking u to place the order right
geet - umm
maan - tumne kiya?
geet - nahi !! woh main .. I was texting
maan - pichale 30mins se tum text kar rahe ho
geet - oh!!!sorry
maan - meri saat ho to atleast mujhse baat to kar he sakti ho
geet felt guilty & looked down making a sorry face
maan - waise tumhe kyun laga ki main raj ko lekar insecure feel karoonga?
geet - jaise aap naraz huwa to mujhe laga
maan smiled - mujhe tumhe lekar koi insecurity nahi hain, na hi hogi
geet - yeh kaise ho sakta hain, mera sare x-crushes ko mera saat wohi problem hian
maan - then they did'nt know u well enough
geet - as if u know me
maan - kuch kuch
geet smiled
maan - waise bhi main tumhara crush thodi hoon
geet naroowed her eyebrows
maan - BF hoon
geet rolled her eyes
maan - waise tumhare kitne crushes rah chuke hain
geet - I thought u just said u are not insecured
maan - I am just curious
geet - let me see....vivek, rakesh, sha..
maan - teehk hain teehk hain..lambi list lagti hain..phir kabhi discuss karlenge
geet smiled

precap

major weekend plans😍
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di 🤗

wonderful update👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it soooooooooooooooo much ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Raj has entered 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
loved Maaneet momens❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
wat r d weekend plans?????????
😉😉😉😉😉😉
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssssssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗
Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

COOL UPDATE ;p LOVED IT.. SO WHATS NEXT ???😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
I hope Geet not love with Raj..if she has a feeling i hope she talk to Maan that he don;t go ahead with her...I know what i am talking..
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesom update................loved it................

so rajveer has entered ..................
what are the weekend plans...............
plzz continue soon
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
So very cute, Muskan!!! I really enjoyed the update!!
Good going!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update pls do cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
di cool update...So Geet as informed abt Maan as bachan to Raj also....That is coollll of her... don't u think Geet is bit little childish like Maan has asked so many sorries but shewas not ready to accept him.... Finally she bit him OMG.... Maan dnt say anything...Loved it.....Was thinkg wat wud be Maans' rection for the bit and Geet's reaction for the hug ... coolll and awesome update di....
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME weekend plans maan n geet alone some place far away will b ROCKING!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muski di..😃
very nice update🤗.....luvely hug by maaneet i jus....😍....luv it.....cute romantic talks but wen will maan ever tell her....😆☺️...iam very much eager and geet ki itne sare crushes...che che...!!!🤣......continue soon.....di thnks for double update
rohini ❤️

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