TaSha FF Journey of love note on 82

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Posted: 14 years ago
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TaSha FF Journey of love
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Part25-pg31 silver jubliee FINALLY TOGETHER 4 EVER
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Part42-pg67 Baji weds Sophie
Part43-pg67 Baji Sophie SR
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Part:1 It seemed incredible to naku that she was actually back in Mumbai. A stray of wisp of conscience tugged when she saw the card board in front of her it read Miss Nakusha. The card board holder smiled at her and her beauty she handed him the bags and sat on the limo provided to her by her mom.naku's eyes grew dreamy as her though flew to three years.

Three years before:

Naku

Naku was in her ugly form she and her family had just got saved from morey and her savior was dutta. Dutta took naku and her family to his home and introduced them to his family, his family consisted of his mom, and 3 sisters and younger brother baji. They seem to bond well and became the best of friends

.dutta cared and trusted naku a lot. He liked naku due to her beautiful heart he hated beautiful people they gave him dhoka that's what he has been telling naku. Dutta was falling in love with naku. He told kala so and that he wanted to marry naku. But his sisters kala,roops and leela where not pleased they wanted to break tasha . kala started spying on naku one day kala was hiding behind the curtain when she saw naku enter the bathroom she was shocked to find a beautiful naku emerge from the bathroom she waited to see what naku does and waited till naku finished applying kajal to her face and shouted nakusha so this is ur true colors dhokey baaz ladki and dragged her to the hall calling dutta dutta

She then gathered everyone around and splashed water on naku seeing this dutta was speechless he went numb he couldn't move a muscle ,kala took advantage of the moment and threw naku and her family out naku begged and cried to let her explain herself but dutta was in shock.

After trying to no avail naku and family left baji shook and begged dutta to stop naku but he did nothing. Madam we have reached ur place naku jolted from her flash back and got out of the car.

Dutta

it was a perfect day the weather was perfect dutta was sitting at his office looking out the window to many it seemed he was enjoying the weather and the nice scenery ahead but in actual he was lost and drowning in thought of three years back. He closed his eyes to travel through the past.

When dutta came to his senses naku was gone. Baji was sitting next to him he was lying on his bed the he realized that the love of his life was not in his life anymore Naku he said in a pained voice baji said we weren't able to find her and baji told him about his sisters plan and he found out that naku was innocent but what to do naku was gone now. He packed his clothes and informed his mom that he was leaving to Mumbai forever and that he can't live in a place where his sisters are living baji begged to be taken along his mom joined into he left all his money and property to his evil sisters and moved to a new city, new life it took him 3yrs of hard work and naku's sweet memories and encouraging words of past to build the patil empire. Bhao someone called him and he opened his eyes from the past to present.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woah...First of all Congratulations for your First FF!!!
Nice start hun.. you sure its your first time?
Enjoyed it and i hope you will continue soon.. Damn 3 years they stayed apart?
How did they live without each other? Arghhh kala!!! Whats her problem? Thank god dutta left his evil sisters behind... But he shouldnt have given them the money...They deserve to stay in the slums and beg!
Anyway it's awesome
Please continue soon!!
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on ur 1st fan fic 👏
brilliant start👍🏼....so its been 3 yrs since they hav met one another n 2day both r successful...naku in a limo😲--hw did tht happen? 🤔
btw whats ur ff's name? thought of 1 yet?
plz update soon
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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congrats on your 1st FF.. a very fresh start.. pls continue
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First of congrats dear on first FF. I love it.. the starting of it as..the FR has happened.. dutta knows his sisters are evil no longer in the pic i hope..ha ha.. dutta so still in love with naku. she is comign back i wonder.. because she is arriving in a limo.. mhh update soon and pls PM me dear..

tc vika



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow wonderful and interesting beginning keep writing and update soon. don't forget to pm ok.
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congrats .........👍🏼. ur first ff is too gud and its a wonderful start👏 ....pls update soon 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start dear .... 😉😉😉

please continue as it seems interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice congrats on ur ff very well written..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all congo for u first FF.... 👏
wow....nice start.....👏
vry well written...👏
sounds interesting....😳
God thy lived separately for 3 yrs.....😲
am curiousnow....so update it and pm me......
thanx....😳
Edited by isatb - 14 years ago

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