FF: Kismat ki Kagaz par..- Last Part , pg 107 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
i bow to u dear.....................🤗😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
wat scenes dear superb amazing extremely beautiful original n the shanak scene in the end...................... just dead reading that
i know i say it everytime but yr like a classic writer just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
thnks fr updating so soon so thnkful to u
now toh im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dying 2 read the next part like annything cause i know it will make me dead wid the shanak scens u have fr the next part
pls pls pls upload by afternoon if u can plssssssssssssssssssss srry to bother u but ur so good that i dont mind troubling u😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Its just gets better and better!!! Loved the illusion parts..beautifully written👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww !! So cute...!!
Acha hua Sunil told him to go and get Khanak...warna pata nahi Burthal ko kab realize hota ki yeh bhi ek option hai...Soo cute..

Continue soon !!

Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!! lovely dear emotional. romatic and exceelnt.keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update! Waiting for next part:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww really cute updates: for chapter 9 Aww felt bad for Shaan that he found out that khanak left him he was heartbroken but even more when he found out that his mum was behind it but Woop for that attest he knows which is a good thing and then chapter 10 Aww khanak and feeling her shawms presense was so sweet and romantic and loved how he gave her red bangles via the little kid and then the sweets and then their hug was cute like two souls beginning one after a long wait anyways great updates and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks karishma, Vandu , simi, Shriya , unnatia and shamima...........thanks alot yaar...

Part 11:

Shantanu was being pampered by suraj's parents..he still felt guilty from inside whenever he looked at them …..after dinner everyone sat together and talked about city life…shantanu got up from the sofa and walked towards suraj's ada and kneeled at his knees…he looked at khanak who was standing upstairs..who nodded her head in insurance ….

shnatanu: ada..hmm kya main app ko ada bhola sakta hoon …ada looked at his wife and noded yes ….

Shantanu: main janta hoon jo mujsey 5 mahenay pehlay bhool hoee thi wo mafi ka kabil nain hai…lakin fir bhi ho sektey to mujey maaf kar degiyee…..wo aik hadsa tha…. Shayad mere laparwhii ka karna …..main janta hoon main app ka beta tu app ko nain luta sakta..lakin kya app mujey apna beta maan saktey hoon…our main wada karta hoon kay main aik beta ka har farz nibionga….app ney shuba mujey bte kaha tha..tu kya app ais bte ko maaf nain karsakty….he puts his head in ada's lap…..

Khanak was watching this from upstairs with tears….and felt really proud of shantanu….she saw a new shantanu who has transformed from a spoiled brat to a responsible man….she knew whatever he was saying was straight from his heart and also asking for forgiveness from his heart….she knew that her ada and baii will forgive him….

ADA: with tears patted on shantnau's head and then make him standup by holding him from his shoulder….5 mahenay pehley jo howa..hum usey kismet ka khel samj kar bhool chukey hain…our bte main janta hoon tum pehley wali shantnanu nain hoo abb…our bte mafi kiss baat ki..wo to aik hadsa tha our kiss key bhi haath say ho sakta tha…..tum tu hamarey liye hamray bte key saman ho bte ….he wiped shaan tear and ask…kya apne ada kay gale nain lagey ga….shantanu touched his feet and hugged him ….shantanu saw khanak who was smiling and crying at the same time ….. he signaled her to wipe her tears and smile..She instantly smiled at his gesture…and mouthed burthal…

In the morning, everyone was in the rosuii ghar…..shantanu was having difficulty in adjusting but he was trying his best …he sat down with everyone else for breakfast…….shantanu completely ignored khanak…khanak was amazed at his attitude…..(in her mind) arey shantanu ko kya howa….even ada and baii saw this …… later in the day …..ada and bai were talking about khanak and shantanu staying door door from each other...gopi walked in ….gopi: ada mujey lagta hai khanak nain chatee kay usko our shantanu bha ko dekh kar app log suraj bha ko yaad karo…usey lagta hia kay app logon ko bura lagey ga un dono ko saath dekh kar….

Khanak saw shantanu sitting at the railing of the balcony against a pillar…..she walked up to him…he turned to the other side…khanak goes and stands in front of him held his face…..kya howa shantanu ..app aisey kyun behave kar rahoo hoo…koi baat hoee hai kya…boliyee na …

Shantanu: acha tu madam ko apne pati ki yaad ai gaeee…..kal sey tu asey behave kar rahee ho jesay mujey jantii nain hoo…aik bar bhi mere samney nain ai….our tu our mujey tum sey door guest room main sona para….khanak laughed at sulking shantanu…

Khanak: aisee baat nain hai shantanu …wo main bas ada our baii kay samney app key pass nain ana chatee thii…wo un ko bura lagta hum dono ko saath dekh kar…shayad un ko suraj kee yaad aitee….app samj rahey ho na shantanu …she turned his face towards her …shantnau mere taraf to dekhye….acha theek hai app ko mere taraf nain dekna tu main chaleee….

Shantanu held her arm from behind and pushed her to the pillar …main ney tumey purey teen din say theek say dekha nain hai ..our tum ja rahee hoo…she got lost in his eyes..the love for her was soo visible in his eyes….he caressed her cheek and got close to her … (in low tone) i love u khanak …main tumsey buhat pyaar karta hoon bolo khanak kya tum ney mujey miss kiya …..she could see passion and desire in his eyes…he held her hands behind her back with one hand and his other hand reached her shoulder….he pulled her dupatta away from her neck (.she closed her eyes)…he got close to her neck…khanak felt his warm breath on her neck…she felt her knees going weak and quickly held tight on to his shoulder …..he kissed her on the neck passionately and sucked onto her skin …she felt slight pain and moaned …. His other hand moved up to her her face….and started outlining her lower lip with his thumb...her lips trembling and slightly parted….he moved forward inches away from her lips….but she turned her face and his lips landed at the corner of her lips…they both stayed at the same position….but they both heard something falling and quickly moved away…. Khanak was blushing and not dared to look into his eyes….picked her dupatta from the floor and ran to her room ….shantanu saw her lipstick on his thumb and kissed it…he signed and muttered uff yeh duri …

Shantanu and khanak were enjoying there chori chori chupke chupke ka khel…laughing..playing and being in love….they both decided to stay in Dhulwadi for few days……but shantanu was a bit annoyed at khanak for staying away from him in front of suraj's parents…..next day …khanak was serving afternoon snack to everyone ….shantanu saw the love bite on her neck (her hairs were tied up) and had flashback of the beautiful moment ….khanak saw him staring at her with a smile..she asked him what he was looking at through her eyes ….shantanu signaled her by placing his hand on his neck…she was confused but touched her neck and felt a little bruise there and remembered the moment….she blushed and looked at shantanu…he signaled her to put her hair down …. She blushed and quickly pulled her hair down to hide the love bite from everyone ….. She mouthed thank u to shantanu for saving her from getting embarrassed in front of everyone ….he smiled at her and teased her by placing his finger at the corner of his lips …khanak remembered there first almost kiss and blushed…..

They usually tried to meet at night or somewhere outside ……shantanu wanted khanak to say ILU to him ….because he already said it……

Khanak being stubborn never listened to him…and always got away from the situation…one night khanak came down to get some water….but was pulled behind the stairs …she gasped with fear but then saw it was shantanu …kya shantanu app ko raat ko bhi neend nain ati….buri atma ki teran yahan wahan betaktey rahtee ho…choriye mujey buhat payas lagi hai …

Shantanu got close to her (in low tone and looked at her lips) khanak payas to mujey bhi buhat lagi hai …our meri payas wo teen shabd suney kay baad katam ho gi ….bolo na wo teen shabd plz…. Puts his face in her neck and whispered again bolo khanak …..she was losing herself by his closeness …but she saw baii coming out of her…and panicked with fear….

Shantanu wo baiii …shantanu choriyee janey dejey plz..agar bhi ney dekh liya too….shantanu : (moved away) kya yaar khanak tum kabhi romantic nain ho saktee….khanak gave him a confused look: kya nain ho sakti….shantanu: kuch nain choro…..

Shantanu smiled a naughty smile and decided to take full advantage of the situation …he hugged khanak from behind and started nuzzling her neck and tickled …khanak was finding it very hard to control her laughter …khanak (whispering in very low tone) plz shantanu mat kejeye …ahhh shantanu baii sun ley geee….shantanu…she closed her mouth with hand to control herself ….finally she managed to push him away and ran upstairs leaving a sulking shantanu behind….

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Cheers

Shai 😊

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simikr thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Darling!!! Lagta hai ke mujhe SICU jaana hi padegaa!!!😕🤢

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: simiv

Darling!!! Lagta hai ke mujhe SICU jaana hi padegaa!!!😕🤢



lol ....of course yaar..agar ham log SICU nain jain gay to un ka business kasey chaley ga 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnks a lot dear fr the fast update
....................omg the pillar scene was kick ass.lovedtthe romance n i was soooooo touched by the emotional scene between shaan n surajs family..loved that scebe a lot just tooooooo good
the pillar scene made me go out of breadthe n i couldnt stop blushing...................extremely romantic




dear all yr scenes r so original n the way u put it is just tooooooooo good
the most beautiful thing i have read
thnks a lot fr such wonderful scenes




pls pls pls upload soon im dying to c the next part cause its again gonna b super romantic😍

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