CASE IS DONE 6.11
Kartik celebrates New Year with his GF
Kartik Aryan Sympathy
No Sympathy For Hrithik
Happy 1st Anniversary Manvikians
PARTY AT PODDARS 7.1.26
Started Rewatching Jodha Akbar and addicted once again.Hoping for S2
SRK explains the actual meaning of most misunderstood word "Jihad"
Mahadev and Sons-Colors
Nache Nache Video Song - The Rajasaab
Part 9:
Khanak pacing up and down in her room '.wo koon tha our kya sach main ada kee halat theek nain hai ' gopi ko phone kartee hoon 'she tried calling but couldn't get through ' she got worried and strange feeling came to her heart'. Mujey jana chayeee' agar ada ko kuch hoo gaya to....nain nain main ada ko kuch nain honey doon gee ' she starts packing '.
In office 'shantanu suddenly felt some fear in his heart ' oh god what is this feeling '.. mujey kuch darr lagraha hai' khanak ko tu kuch ..nain nain ..main kya soch raha hoon 'lakin mujey kuch khooney ka daar kyun lag raha hai .. khanak koo phone kar leytaa hoon '
Khanak: mujey kuch ajeeb laga raha hai ..kuch khooney ka daar 'lakin kya '.janay sey phelay shantanu ko phone kar deytee hoon '.she dialed his number but phone was busy'.on the other side shantanu was calling her and phone was busy'they both were calling at the same time '.
Khanak : yeh phone nain lag raha 'abb kya karonn. ..hmm ..she goes towards her bed ' write something on a piece of paper with a red rose and kept it on the side table '. picked her bag and walked out of her room'.
Mdhvii: khanak joo driver tumhara wait kar raha hai ' khanak walked to the door' she felt a tug on her dupatta ..she turned and it was stuck to the door handle ..she pulled the dupatta and looks at the house for one last time and walked out'.
Shantanu: phone nain lagraha ' damn it yaar' main ghar ja kar dektha hoon kay khanak to theek hai .. he was about to leave when sunil called him to his office..shantanu hit his fist on the table and walked out
Madhvi and kushboo were laughing and high five each other 'plan successful '.
Shantanu wasn't much into what sunil was saying in the meeting room .. he kept thinking about khanak and continuously looked at his watch 'sunil noticed his behavior and saw that something was bothering his son .. he called shantanu and tell him to leave because he's not looking fine ' shantanu mouthed sorry and thank you dad and left '.
Shantanu on the road'.something is definitely wrong I can feel it '.kuch to galt honey wala hai 'he kept honking 'to get out the traffic 'he hits his hand on the steering..damn this traffic '
Finally he reached home 'and ran inside 'he saw his mom sitting in living room 'she saw her son running with heavy breath ..shantanu beta sab theek tu hai na'han mom sab theek hai 'lakin kya ghar per sab theek hai'he was looking for khanak '.mom: han bte ghar per to sab theek hai' he ran upstairs calling khanak's name '.
Shantanu: walking downstair 'mom app ney khanak ko dekha hai kya ' wo apne kamray main nain hai '.she looked down '.shantanu felt fear'mom plz boliye khanak kahan hai 'mom plz'.say something '.
Mom: wo bte wo khanak ghar chor kar hamesha kay liye dhulwadi chalee gayee hai '
Shantanu: felt his world crashing ' khanak ghar chor kar'.lakin kyun '.
Mom: pata nain bte 'wo jatey jatey bole kay mere yahan koi kaam nain hai our our yeh bhi kay wo tumharay saath nain rehana chatee'.
Shantanu: mere saath nain 'wo mujey ..apne shantanu ko chor kar chalee gayeee ..nain aisa nain hoo sakta 'I don't believe this 'I don't believe this '.and walked to his room '
Khanak mujey chor kar chalee gaye'wo asey kasey chalee gaye ..mujey bataya nain 'nain kuch to garbar hai ..wo mujey pyaar katee hai 'wo khud yeh zindgi chatee thi tu phir achanak kya howa '. His eyes fell on her photo on the side table ...and notice a paper with red rose' he picked it up'. SORRY'.was written on the paper'
Shantanu was confused.. Sorry our red rose 'aiska kya matlab howa '. Wo sorry kyun bol rahee hai..our yeh phool 'a tear dropped from his eye'walked toward the window'looking at the moon '.oh god 'koi pyaar kyun karta hai '.app ney pyaar main itna dard kyun likha hai '.pyaar main dard kyun hota hai 'kyun pyaar kiya our kyun dard liye 'why 'and slides down the wall and sat there in the dark '.
After a while , again looked at the paper and the rose'suddenly he spotted a small piece of paper all crumpled up ..he picked it up and opened it'it was 10 rupes note ..he was shocked to see it in their room ' aisa ka matlab hai khanak key pass tha yeh note'lakin us ney mujey nain bataya ..wo tu ais kagaz ka apne kismet ka kagaz mantii thi ..phir bhi wo mujey chor kar chalee gayee' kismat ney aik ishaara tu diya hai phir bhi wo chalee gaye '..
He looked at the paper and the rose again then at the 10 rupee note 'kuch to matlab hai in sab cheezon ka 'is rose ka'is note ka ' lakin kya '.mujey pata karna hoo ga ' he got up and quietly walked out of his room to settle his mind 'but as he passed by his mom's room..his steps were frozen to the spot and felt being hit by a lightning bolt '.
Kushboo: thank god 'mom wo gawar ais ghar sey hamesha ke liye chalee gaye '.. wasey mom app ka plan kam kar gaya .. Our us gawar ko ham per shak bhi nain howa'ur genius mom '.
Mom: han kushboo' wo becharee to yeh bhi nain jantee kay wo phone call hamharey khaney par aya tha'usey kya laga kay main haar mann loon gaye '.wo letter switching wali baat kartey howee us ney humey dekh liye thi'..main tu darr gaee thi kay wo yeh baat shantanu ko bata deygee ..per nain ..us ney aisa kuch nain kiya 'main bhi chup thi main ney bhi usey yeh pata nain chalney diya kay main ney usey dekh liya tha'.wo KFD chalee thii apnee zindgi kay sapney dekney wo bhi mere bte ke saath .. per wo yeh nahi jantee kay madivi khandalwal ki DIL bana itna asaan kaam nain hai '.
Shantanu felt tears in his eyes'..mere mom ney aisa liya '.i don't believe this ' he walked in the room 'Kushboo saw shaan at the door and was rooted to the ground 'Madhvi saw her like this and turned 'she was dumbstruck 'shantanu'he raised his hand to stop her '
Shantanu : mom app ney yeh sab ..but why mom 'kyun kiya aisa '. koi ma apne bte ki khushiyoon ke dushman kasey hoo saktee hai'. Kyun 'tears rolling down on his cheeks'
Mom: shantanu bte meri baat tu suno
Shantanu: nahi mom'jo sunna tha wo main ney sun liye hai '.app ney wo letter switch kiya ..app ney Natasha ko wahan beja ..our main becharee khanak ko saza deta raha 'our wo bina kuch kahey sab sahtee rahii'app apne bte ko takleef main dekhtee raheen par kuch nahi kaha'.
Mom: bte main jantee hoon ..tum khanak sey pyaar nain kartee..wo sirf aik attraction tha ..sirf infatuation nothing else'.
Shantanu: han mom app ney bikul theek kaha..ye aik infatuation tha par khanak key liye nain mom Natasha ke liye ' khanak se pyaar kiya hai mainey '.jantee han kyun 'kyun kay jab khanak ghar chor kar gayee thii to mujey dard howa tha ..buhat dard kasee kay khoo denay ka dard 'lakin jab Natasha chor kar gayee the..tab asa kuch feel nahi kiya main ney kuch nain '.bas bura laga tha aik dost key liye '.
Our mom app jantii hain ..app pyaar usey kartey hain jiss kay liye dard hoo..usey khoo deney ka dard '.jis insaan ki dhoriii app ko tarpayee..us sey pyaar hota hai '.jis insaan ki aik hasii kay liye app kuch bhi karney ko tayar hoo..us sey app pyaar kartey hoo'.jis insaan ka dard app mehsoos karoo 'usey chot lagney par app ko dard hoo'.usey pyaar kehtay hain mom'our yeh sab main ney khanak key liye feel kiya ai mom 'lakin app to apne bte ko samj nain paieee tu app pyaar ko kya samjgeen '.
Our mom jantii hain 'khanak ney khabi kesay kay liye bhura nain socha ..wo to khud chatee thi ki main Natasha key saath shadi karoonn..lakin us kya kasoor agar mujey us sey pyaar ho gaya hai 'agar main apni puri life us kay saath spend karna chata hoon '.our yeh baat main ney Natasha ko bata dee hai ..or wo bhi mere liye khush hai 'agar Natasha mere liye khush hai tu mom app kyun nahi 'kyun nahii mom '.
our bhabii app ney mere saath aisa kiye woo theek hai 'lakin apne bhen kay saath bhi 'kya app chatee hain Natasha aik asey insaan kay saath rehay jo usey khabi pyaar nain kar payeega 'kushboo for the first time felt bad for what she did '.
Shantanu walked out from there to his room'.he puts his hand through his hair and signs heavily'main janta tha kay meri khanak mujey khabi chor kar nain jasktee'wo to khud mujsey pyaar kartii hai'.he walked toward her photo on the side table'hmm tu madam ko mujey pheliyan boojaney main maza ata hai 'yeh sorry or phoool ' lakin madam tum mujey jetna burthal samjthi hoo main outa hoon nain ok'..ab samja kay ..sorry ais liye kyun ko tum mujey bata ka nain gaye . our yeh phool ais liye because u love me'.hmm khanak tum say baat karney ka bhuhat maan hoo raha hain'aaj mujey apne mom ki planning kay baray main pata chala '
Tum yeh jantee thi phir bhi mujsey kuch nain kaha kyun khanak 'kyun tum itnee acheee hoo ..kyun sab dukh akelay bardasht kiya ..kyun nain mujey bataya '.main janta hoon tum yeh bata kar mujey apni mom sey door nain karna chatee theee'. Lakin khanak mom ney tu khud mujey apne sey door kardiye 'aik ma apne bte kay saath aisa kasey kar saktee hai 'tears rolled on his cheeks 'he hugged her picture '..i need u khanak ..i need u 'buhat akela mehsoos kar rahan hoon 'buhat lonely
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Part 10:
Dhulwadi:
Khanak reached her gaon around 8 in the evening …she felt good to be back …but she felt empty from within …she couldn't feel her heart in her chest …she felt as if her heart was still in Mumbai…
She reached the haveli ..gopi was shocked and happy to see her …she quickly hugged khanak and ask her how come she's here…khanak walked inside without answering gopi…and looked everywhere…gopi: kya howa khanak..tu aisey kya doond rahee hai…khanak …
khanak: han ..wo main ada ko doond rahee hoon …kahan hain woo bol na gopi …
gopi:khanak ada tu apne dost key saath bhar gayeen hain ..lakin tu itni gabraiye kyun hai ..sab theek tu hain na ..shantanu baa tu theek hain na….
khanak: han sab theek hai ..tu yeh bata ada ke halat kasee hai abb…
gopi: ada ki halat …ada tu bikul theek hai oney kya howa…kuch bhi tu nain ….wo tu balay changey hain ….
Khanak: (in her mind) ada bikul theek hai …tu phir wo phone kiss nay kiya …koon ho sakta hai ..itna gatiya mazak kiss ney kiya mere saath …
Gopi: khanak ..khanak …tu theek tu hain na…kuch bool na khanak
Khanak: han main theek hoon …nain bus wo tum sab sey milney ka mann ho raha that u chalee aiyee (she forced a smile on her face) ….kyun tu khush nain hai mujey dekh kar
Gopi: arey nain paglii main tu buhat khush hoon …ada our bai bhii buhat khush hoon gay…tu chal..bai kay pass chaltey hain…. Chall..
At night after meeting everyone khanak went to her room ...she unpacked her bag and took out her night suit to change into ….her hands reached at the back to untie her dhori of her sari…she felt cold skin against her hands…she jerked and looked back ..shantanu was standing in front of her…she whispered "shantanu" …she looked down and again up…but he was gone ..she looked around but he was gone….she turned and changed into her night suit…she walked to her bed but was pulled by her arm…..she again saw shantanu in front of her….she was lost in his eyes full of love and burning passion….his hands moved to her face….
She felt his cold skin against her cheeks …his hands caressed her cheeks in slow motion …he traced her jaw line with his fingers…her lips trembled ...she was losing her senses she closed her eyes…..his hands traveled to her shoulder down to her arms….he took her hand and placed it on his face…she opened her eyes and traced his face with her hand ….he moved toward her neck…pulled her night suits sleeve down from her shoulder and planted a kiss there….she was losing her senses and suddenly felt cold air on her body …she opened her eyes….she looked around the room with a confused look …..she was on her bed….she touched her shoulder …It was her dream …she pulled blanket on her body and closed her eyes … tears trickling down from the corner of her eyes……..
Next morning:
In Dhulwad, suraj's parents were happy to see khanak .. kept asking her about city life and shantanu's behavior towards her…khanak had flashback of her journey with shantanu …a soft smiled appeared on her lips . …but she was in dilemma what to tell them.. will they be happy to know that she is happy with shantnau or will they get sad knowing khanak is moving on ………she just looked down without answering them……
In Mumbai: shantanu was still in bad state after knowing his mom's truth…he was lost and never showed up for breakfast ….Sunil came up to see shantanu….he saw him sitting on the bed in dark with a phone in his hands ….. Sunil quietly goes and sit beside shantanu ….
Sunil: shan beta ….(shantanu looked up without any expression) I know beta what ur mom did to u …I m sorry beta I couldn't do anything for u…. main ney tum dono kay childhood ko ignore kiya because of my business but beta not anymore ..i wont let anyone hurt u …shantanu hugged his dad and collapsed in tears … no shaan beta ...sabar rahkoo beta …sab theek ho jiyeega …. And he pulled shantnau away from him …and wiped his tears…
Sunil: buhat pyaar karney lage hoo na khanak sey … (shantanu looked at his dad with a slight smile) …wo hai hee itnee ache kay koi bhi us say pyaar karney lage…. Jab sey wo tumharee zindgi main ai hai …ur are being more responsible and mature…I m very proud of u my son …very proud … kya khanak bhi tum sey itna pyaar kartee hai …
Shantanu: hmm wo mujsey buhat pyaar kartee hai ..shayad mujsey bhi zayda…main hamesha us key pyaar per shak karta hoon … I always lose my hope…and my man ego comes between us …but dad she loves me more than her life .. wo bas mere aik hasii kay liye kuch bhi bhi karney ko tayar ho jatee hai … aaj bhi main us per shak kar raha tha…but no dad…wo mujey chor ke nain jana chatee thi…it was all planned out …..she loves me a lot ….
Sunil: tu tum wait kiss baat ka kar rahee hoo.. go get ur love, ur life, and most importantly my DIL….Shantanu: DIL…..Sunil: ya DIL…my daughter in law ..in ur mom's style u know …..shantanu smiled…..Sunil: and my son u look nice smiling so always keep smiling ….never lose hope….tum dono ko kismet ney milaya hai …and no one can separate u from khanak…
Shantanu hugged his dad and stayed there for a while as if he finally found peace, sunil kept patting his son's back, he knew that his son needed someone to hold on to…
After few hours, shantanu came down with his small bag….madhvi saw him ….Shantanu its good beta ..kay tum kuch dinoo kay liye bahar ja rahoo…I know u will be fine once u come back…go have fun beta now ur free from that KFD ….shantanu held on the bag very tightly to control his anger , looked at madhvi with bloodshot eyes and left…..
In Dhulwadi: khanak was roaming around the haveli …she was lost in her thoughts ….
khanak: to herself…mujey kal raat sey aisa lag raha hai kay shantanu ko mere jarorat hai …wo mujey yaad kar raheen hain….kya main un ko phone kroon …nain agar mummy ji ney utaya tu wo mere khabhi bhi shantanu sey baat nain karney dein gee. Hay thakhur ji…mere shantanu ka khaya rakna …wo buhat ache hain …..a tear escaped her eye…gopi saw her all day lost…
Gopi: khanak tu theek tu hai na….mujey aisa kyun lag raha hai kay tu shantanu bha ko yaad kar rahee hai..han bol na..kya tere un sey koi jadra howa hai …bol na khanak …acha khanak shantanu bha ko phone kar ke Dhulwadi bulateey hain chal….khanak: nain …nain tu phone nain karoo gee….Gopi: lakin kyun khanak sab theek tu hain na…..Khanak: han wo aaj aney walee hain …mujey liney ..…main ney phone kiya tha…wo bas sham tak ai jayian gay…she lied…..
Gopi: acha ..chal khanak bhar chaltey hain …gomney ..chal tu bhi dekh tere dhulwadi badla hai in 5 maheno main kay nain ….chal
Khanak and gopi went roamed around the goan .in bangle shop…sarii shop everywhere…wherever khanak went she remembered shantanu….at bangle shop she had flaskback of their fight over bangles ….a smiled appeared on her face…. a small child walked up to khanak and gave her a small set of red bangles…yeh kiss ney diya …she turned to look at the kid but he was gone….
Then both khanak and gopi walked to ghat (river) to spend some time there…khanak saw shantanu's reflection in the water and quickly turned but no one was there…..khanak: mujey aaj aisa lag raha hai kay shantanu mere aass pass hee hain…wo chorii (bangle) ki dukan per bhi muujey laga ….lakin bala shantanu yahan kasey ho saktey hain…lakin yeh kiss ney diya (she looked at the bangles in her hand) ……….later khanak in her room…but was still restless …
Someone walked to her room with big boxes of mithii….and asked yeh mithaiii kahan raknee hai …khanak still lost in her world…han yahan rak doo …she got up from the bed and saw shantanu through the mirror… "shantanu" ..she quickly turned but he was gone…..she thought it was her imagination but then saw the boxes ….wo sach main they yahan….she walked out of her room ..and again saw shantanu leaning against a piller hands folded with a smile…. She ran with full speed downstairs but stopped when she saw baii ada and gopi…
ADA: arey shantanu beta app yahan …sawagat hai app ka…aio aio…. Shantanu took ashirwad ..and looked at khanak who was standing at the stairs….. she ran upstair and hide behind a pillar….
ADA: beta app baitoo main kuch khaney ka parband kartha hoo and walked out….gopi and baii went to rosuii ghar (kitchen) to prepare something for shantanu….
Shantanu looked at khanak who was still hiding ….he opened his arm ….khanak no longer could control herself and ran towards shantanu at full speed..and come into his arm with full force…..two people were embracing holding tightly to each other as if they met each other after a life time of separation ….hands moving on each other's back…khanak could no longer control her tears that were built inside her eyes from last two days….she sobbed into shantanu's chest…..Khanak: hit him on the chest ..kyun nain pehley aie ..kitna tarpee hoon app nain jantey …kyun sataya mujey itna…he wiped her tears and kissed her on her forehead…rest his forehead onto her's……and held her face in his hands…..caressing her cheeks…khanak main ai gaya hoon ..plz rona band karo…look I m here in front of u….he held his ears ..i m sorry thora late ho gaya na….Khanak smiled and pulled his hands down …thora nain buhat late and pouts ……
They both heard ada talking to someone outside….khanak freed herself from shantanu's arm…but shantanu held her arm…shantanu mujey jana hai ..plz choryee..sab kay samney nain plzzz…..and ran from there….
Originally posted by: shanakforever
ill b eagerly waiting..... gosh wen i saw ur topic come up i thought yay new part updated..... but only saw u reply😆
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