~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 3~ - Page 18

it simply superbbbbbbbbbb yaar!!!!

I absoloutely loved this update!! vm is also awsome and dear thanks for pm continue soon

finally u updated... its awesome.. GEET n MAAN should confess their love yr and GHeet ko MAAN ko sab bata deina chahey itnaa agey nikal aney key badh frsy khamoshi...impossible MANEET

lovely update.....now update the next part asap...!!!plz..!!

Loved it.... Enjoyed it...

~madhoshi~
part 40

brij & geet meet up with the doctor
doctor hands over her reports - sab kuch teehk hain
baby's groW*H is also fine. there is nothing to worry
just make sure u have food on time
brij - ji
doc - actually I met a family who was willing to adopt her baby
if u want I will arrange for the meeting
brij - yes yes ...please we are really intrested
brij thanxed the doctor & they came out
geet - veerji I will also come to meet them
brij - nahi I don't any one to know about your pregnancy
samjhi tum...this will create problems in future
geet - lekin I want to be sure about baby's future
brij - even I am concerned about that...don't worry I will handle it
baby~mujhe aapne mama papa pas rahna hain starts crying😭
geet~baby roo mat na please...jo to chata hain woh nahi ho sakta
baby~crying louder
geet gets worried feeling him cry
na jana kaise rista tha..geet ke ankhoo se bhi ansoo behne laghe
aur udhar maan dil bechain ho utta
haqeeqat karo byaan to mazaak lagta hai
ibadat karo jab to jhootha khwab lagta hai
are ye kasi dil lagi hain, aur dil hi ki hai yeh sadaa
aur woh kehte hain ki yeh sab haseen ittfak lagta hai
maan called brij
maan - hellow
brij - hi
maan - woh!!! can speak to geet ?
brij gives the phone to geet - maan ka phone hain
brij gets busy complting the discharge formalities
baby~papa ka phone hain & smiles😃
maan - aapne aansoon pochoo phele
geet - ji ..she smiled & wiped her tears
maan - kyun mujhe itna pareshan karti hoo
geet - lekin
maan - chup bilkul chup... agar ek bhi aansoon aur nikla na
mujhe se bura koi nahi hoga
geet - aap se bura koi ho bhi nahi sakta
maan - aacha kidhar ho
geet - hospital main
maan - sab teehk hain na
geet - umm
maan - ghar kab ja rahi hoo
geet - kuch hi deer main
maan - take care
geet - umm
maan - hate u
geet - bye
maan - bye??? u r supposed to say hate u 2,3, 4, ..10
geet - veerji hain
maan - mujhe nahi pata
geet - bye & cuts the call
use chahana iski kamzori thi, use keh nahi pana iski majburi thi,
Wo kyun nahi samajhta iski khamoshi ko, Kya izhaar karna zaruri tha ???
shayad ek izhaar to aab bhi zaruri tha...

darji visits khurnan mansion with some sweets
when he entered & saw the empire he was taken a back
he felt ashamed of his thoughts & felt how brij was true about
them...he was shocked by their royality & yet so humble nature
he probably just wanted go back from the door
daadi - namaste ji hum aap ki hi wait kar rahe the
darji reluctantly walked in & handed over the sweets
daadi was over excited & getting anxious about the whole thing
maan walked in... he was really happy to see her so delighted
she was hyper arranging for sweets, drinks & snacks
maan wondered wat had gone into her
daadi - he is Sukhdev Lal Handa.. gee
maan interupted - namaste hum HP main mille the land ki sil sile main
darji - namaste beta
maan shakes hand & sits next to daadi
darji - actualy we were very thankful to u for considering
my granddaughter for maan
maan was shocked & looked at daadi ..mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni in a stirn tone
daadi held him back...he wanted to end the conversation right there
darji - actually I feel she is too young to take up all this responsibilty
aur humne abhi uski shaadi ke bare main socha bhi nahi hain
daadi - aabhi mangani to karva hi sakte hain
maan wispered - daadi when he is saying a no ...don't u get it!!!
in a stirn look daadi started to panic & faints holding his his hand
darji & maan rush her to the hospital
darji gets really worried & walks up & down
maan walks up & down too...in opposite direction
doc - it was a close call..ek min late hote to we could have lost her
maan - how she now? can I see her
doc - she is stable now... don't give her any stress please
maan & darji walk in
daadi pulls out her oxygen mask,looks at darji & smiles...
mujhe aapne pote ko lekar bhut chinta rehati hain...isliye ...
darji - aap please rest kijiya
daadi - mangani to aabhi kara sakte hain na
maan - daadi we shall discuss all this latter
darji - ji .. aap rest kar lijiye

darji sits down on the bench & regrets his all thought of going to khurana Mansion itself
Maan walks out stressed & worried
darji puts his hand on his shoulder - I am really sorry about all this
maan nodes his head
darji - beta humri kuch personal problems hain isiliya hum yeh shaadi se mana kar
rahe hain, hume aap se yah aake parivar se koi shikayat nahi
actually hum khud bhi doondhege to aap jaisa rishta nahi milega
please try to understand
maan - ji
darji - aap please savitri devi ko samjha dijiye gha
maan - kya yeh mangani wali baat kuch din aise he chala sakte hain
darji - kya?
maan - nahi mera matlab hain jab taak daadi teehk nahi hoti
darji - teehk hain....feeling guilty for wat ever he has done he half heartedly agrees

darji reaches home & narrates the whole thing to brij & pinky's father
brij - maine phele hi kaha to mano karne ko, yeh kya kar diya aapne
darji - mane to mana kar diya tha
brij - u know they saved geets life god knows how many times now
geet aaj kal khush rahati kyun ki savitri devi aur maan uska itna
khayal rakte hain
darji - I am also feeling very guilty about all this
brij - aap aise soch bhi kaise sakte hain
agar unhe geet ki pregnancy ke bare me pata chelega to
jitna pyar deehka rahen hain uttni hi nafrat bhi karenghe
geet yeh sab kaise jheel payee ghi
darji - bus kuch hi dino ki baat hain, savitri devi teehk hojayen

geet walks down hearing savitri devi - kya huwa unhe?
baby~kya huwa meri par daadi ko?
brij - kuch nahi tum aapne kamre me jaavoo in a strin voice
geet goes to pinky's room
geet - pinky daadi ko kya huwa
pinky - tumhe pata nahi
geet - nahi
pinky - daadi had a low BP & almost a cardiac arrest
abhi hospital main hain
geet gets worried & goes to her room
baby~worried too
agar chahat dil se ho to puri kaynat humko usse milane ke
liye lag jati hey. ... aab to yeh baat bhi muskan ko sach lagne laghe hain

precap
geet goes to meet daadi

nice update...di..luved it...wen will stupid maan and geet realises their feelings...????arggghhhhh...!!!😕😡....

Nice part! Plz let maan knw abt baby

wow great, maan abhi tak pata nahi hain ki, geet hain jisse o mangni kar rahi hain.. do cont..

muski hav i ever mentioned hw much i luv u