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Posted: 14 years ago


How r u dear

update



doctor came for the morning round, he read the reports
doc - every thing seems fine, just continue the medication
she really needs to rest, otherwise the groW*H is normal
maan looked confused before he could ask further

brij - good morning doctor & smiled at maan entry


yaar yeh baby ki speeches and brij ki entry itne galat time pe kyo hoti he ?


in ki tuning karwao nahi to yeh such bahir nahi ane den ge



daadi - I wanted to ask geets hand for maan my elder grand son good daadi jaldi karo ab app ki hamara sahara ho.

brij - aap log yeh sab kya bol rahe hoon, how can we even think of geets wedding now!!! for gods sake she is pregnant
darji - lekin geet ka kya hoga?
brij - aap uski chinta mat kariya, she is my responsibilty
she is maan's responsibility
darji - yeh shaadi hojaye to
brij - DARJI!!! woh log bhut aache hain, hum unke saat koi dhooka nahi kar sakte
to sach bata do dhoka karne ko kis ne kaha he hum bhi to yehi cahte haan k maan ko pata chal jae

baby~aap ko kahte to hya hota...humm!!! turns his face😒
geet~baby mama k itna under estimate nahi karte..baby~ignores her

yaar is baby ka kuch karna pare ga yeh to hadd par kar raha he


precap
Darji's reply to daadi's proposal!!!!..ok I want a poll...




ans to ofcourse hi hoga but filhal to darji ko emergency me HP wapis bhejo without koi ans diye.






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Posted: 14 years ago
poll: yes bt i wnt maan to knw tht geet is pregg with his child nd thn all thngs will sort out n thn darji shuld say yes to proposal .
thn update the nxt sonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
dadi gave d proposal to darji😲.............i mean 4 maan n geet obviously😆😆
anyways.... lovely update!!!! i loved the way maan is taking care of geet n geet surrendering herself to maan!!!!
n 4 the proposal i think darji shud say geet abhi shaadi k layak nhi hui n all dat.........n finally say no........though i desperately want it to happen.........
but ryt nw i want maan to discover abt his baby 1st......n then he shud propose geet in his MSK style😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
just caught up wid ur FF....
couldn't stop myself from reading it again n again...
love it big time...
plzz add me to ur pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan di.... where are u??? Please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi caught up with the ff. really gr8888888888 cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn and plzz let darji say yes o the proposal!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
next update jaldi plz 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congrats on your new thread!!
Love all the updates!!
Soz not been able to comment, but i always check if u have updated before i go college every morning!!
But now i have holidays, so i can defo comment!
YES!! i want Darji to say yes, but Maan should know the truth only!!
If not then No! :'(!!
Thanks for the pmz and please update soon...!! xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 39

their passion was becoming lawless with their closeness
they pulled back with a knock in the door
adi - siiirrr
maan - yes adi
adi - woh land papers
maan looks at geet... she was looking pink in embaressnent & stood looking down knotting her duppata
maan - geet land papers
geet - ji kal veer ji se kah doonghi
maan - any thing else
adi - no thats it
maan locked the door & looked at geet
she stood rooted hearing the doors click, her heart beat was growing
louder & louder with every passing sec, next she knew was they were
all over each other. Kissing, groping, they were necking in the office cabin

garm saanson ki sargoohiyoon mein
jaanay kya kya Kkhonay chalay they
raqs karti hantoon ki sharaarat
hoont labon ko chonay chalay they...
kaise madhoshi thi..ek dsre is ek pal bhi door nahi rah pate the...
maan took a long breath & pulled himself back and closed his face with his
hand pushed his hair behind...he sat on the couch feeling pathetic to have
lost control on himself... geet straighten herself and sat next to him
on the floor resting her head on his lap
maan wanted to move away...but did'nt want to hurt her
maan - mera itna bhi kareeb na aavoo ki door jana namukin hojaye
geet - aab aap se door nahi raha jata
maan - humeri nasdikiyoon ka koi manzil nahi
geet - aab manzil ki kisi cha hain!!!
Her arms reached up to him and took him into her warm embrace
oh!! geet tum mujhe pagal kardoghi kisses her & tries moving back
geet cries & resting her head on his lap...jaanti hoon
main aap ki pasand nahi, jaanti hoon main aapki mazil nahi
phir bhi najane kyun aapki koi bhi baat galat nahi lagti
mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaraha yeh mujhe kya horaha hain
maan - tumhare nasamjhi main mujhe shamil mat karo & walks out
geet mumers babaji aapko mujhe inse hi milna tha jina pyar karna to door
pyar ke lafaz se hi nafrat hain
baby~did I hear correctly..

geet~blushed...& shied umm!!!
mano kuch kuch samjh ne laghi thi woo aapne dil ki baat
yeh naa poochho kaisi haalat thi uski..
naa subha ka pata, naa khabar shyaam ki
najane kab, najane kyun uska yeh dil sirf maan ko hogaya
dil hi dil main aapna maan chuki thi..phir bhi kuch na kaha
shayad uski javaab se darti thi

PINKY'S HOUSE
darji - I am going to say a YES
brij - nahi aap aise kuch nahi karenghe
darji - any way u are planning to get her married to some one latter
why not now?
brij - thats only after the baby matter is solved
darji - is shaadi se bhi baby matter solve ho jayega
brij - nahi
brij get a call from the hospital
nurse - ji woh
brij in angry tone - what happened
nurse - Geet is missing
brij - how can u be so careless
nurse - she was looking for some one
brij - how can u all be so careless
he bangs the phone & walks out
he calls pinky & tells her what happened
pinky - veerji woh to office mein hain
veerji closes his eyes in anger

KC..MAANS CABIN
maan walks in finding geet cuddled up in the couch
maan - mujhe kuch mails check karne hain, then I will u drop u home
geet - ji
maan starts looking into the mails
there was this silence ...only click of the mouse & typing of the
keys where heard ...
geet cleared her throat
maan - umm
she kept quite
baby~pooch hi loo papa se
geet~kaise poochloo naraz hogaye to
baby~woh to waise bhi hote hain
maan wondered why she was quite
maan - kya baat hain geet
geet she was still quite
maan - GEET
geet spontaneously - dev really loves meera na? so I was wondering wat is love?
and she hit her her head
maan - kya?
geet - nahi i was wondering yeh pyar kya hota hain
maan - backwas hota hain
geet mumers kaha tha na
& turns her head away
baby~aap baaten aise karte hoo
geet~aab maine kya kiya
baby~try again
geet~ok
clears her throat again
maan - pyar war kuch nahi hota
geet - phir dev aur meera
maan - they are very good friends, they know each other for quite some time
they are comfartable with each other...so they decided to be togather
geet - so friends can get married? looked confused
baby~aap to papa ki friend bhi nahi ho
geet~nahi nahi aise nahi hain
baby~sasha to hain
& starts laughing🤣
maan - tumhari problem kya hain
geet - aap
maan - to yanha kyu bethi ho javoo yanha se... maan closes eyes thinkig what he just said
geet snaps her duptta & walks away


maan pulls her back into his embrace looking closely at her worried & confused
eyes...moves her curls
geet - choodo mujhe...aap ka kuch nahi hosakta
maan - kyun
geet - aap to pyar ko hi nahi maante
maan - nahi aise nah hain
geet - matlab ki aap pyar ko maante ho
maan - mujhe nahi lagta ki koi kisi se aaj kal ki duniya main pyar karta hain
sab ko aapna matlab hi soch tha hain
geet - aise kaise ho sakta hain
maan pulls her closer - pyar se pyara to humrah nafrat ka rishta hain
jo hume bina kisi matlab ke ek dosre ke itne kareeb rakta hain
baby~kah do aap papa se nafrat nahi karte
geet - lekin main aap se nafrat
maan interupts - jaantha hoon u hate me 2, 3, ...10... baby~
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OPD-YL4ADgY[/YOUTUBE]
tears rolls down geets eyes because of her emotions
maan moves back & lifts her chin kyun aise rodethi hoon wipping her tears
brij barges in - GEET shouting really loud
he looks at maans hand on her cheeks wipping her tears & looks away
geet moves away from maan, maan puts his hand in his pocket
brij - tum yanha kya kar rahi hoo?
maan - woh mere press meet ke..
brij interupts - aap humare beechmain mat boliya
waise bhi yah bhut galat kar chuki hain, aab aur nahi
brij drags her out of the cabin & takes to the hospital.. maan kind of under stood his discomfort
geet - veerji aap itna naraz kyun ho rahe hain
brij - tum hospital se bina kuch bole yanha kyun chali aayee
geet - woh maan sir ko
brij - tum maan sir se milne aayee thi? shot a glare
geet - nahi veerji
brij - phir unke office main kyun?
geet - woh HP main dam bana rahe hain na
brij - haan
geet - woh kuch farmers land nahi de rahe the
brij - to
geet - unka pura project karab hogaya aur aaj press waloon ke samne unki
bhut batnami bhi horahi thi
brij felt bad for maan
geet - is liya meine aapne zameen de di, aap unhe kal woh papers de dena
brij hugged her - tum maan sir se pyar karti ho kya?
geet snapped back & fumbled aise kuch nahi hain
brij - lekin tumhare harkato se sab ko aise hi lage ga, maan ko bhi
geet - unhe kyun aise lage ga (baby~kash papa ko lagta 😍)
brij - geet samjhe ne ki koshish karo tum pregnant ho
tumhara yun maan ki kareeb jana teehk nahi
geet - lekin
brij - u r giving all wrong hints to people, ek bhale inshaan ki feelings
ke kya saat kyun khel rahi ho?
geet - woh galat nahi samjhenge
brij - tum pagal ho kya? ghar main koi tumhe tumhari pregnancy ke liya blame
nahi karta to iska matlab yeh to nahi...ki tum khud ho sahi samjh loo
sab meri galti hain ... jo main humesha tumhari khushi chata hoon
geet started to cry listening to those harsh words from brij
brij - stop crying now
they paid the cab & walked into the hospital
brij - geet please I am sorry I did'nt mean to hurt you
please samjhne khosish karo
geet still weeping
brij - tum chathi kya ho... main tumhari shaadi Maan se kara doon?
geet - aise nahi hain... baby~haan haan
brij - tum sach bol rahi hoo na baby~nahi 😡
geet nodes with tears in her eyes
brij - waise bhi maan to bilkul bhi tumhare raj jaisa nah hain
geet - bhikul bhi nahi??? she wondered then why did she fall for him
baby~aab yeh raj kanha se aagya?
brij - yeh baby ka matter solve hone do, phir hum tum milke tumhare liya
aacha sa raj donde ge
geet gave a weak smile
baby~yeh brij mamaji to kansh mama se bhi dangerous hain...at least krishji knew
he was mean...mujhe to samjh nahi aata ki yeh aache hain ya bure

POLL RESULT -
YES - 63%
NO - 33%
OTHERS - 4%

precap
darji meeting daadi

VM thanxs to TheSanjana88
AVIS thanxs to meyis
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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