#FF-I vl never leave you NIVEDITA-VIREN#part9-done

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi all...
i am liking this show very much ..viren is helping nivi scenes are awesome...even though i am not pretty sure abt with whom nivi pairs up...
if sid or viren..but i just want to write an FF on viren and nivi.

this is my first FF...hope u ppl like it..

it is night nivi is in deep thoughts of all the things that happened in sood's house and
viren is standing at balcony whr sid used to stand and watch nivi from the terrace.
nivi cannt get sleep and came out..nivi is standing at the garden.. and thr viren sees nivi...he cannt take his eyes off from nivi.. he keep on staring at her.
and after few minutes he realized she is the one behind of her grandpa's condition.
how this innocent girl who always be in trouble can behave with his grandpa in a rude way..how can she do this?
no..i dont know her well..mom is right..she is the one behind all this wrong things happened to my grandpa.

i will take revenge for wat u have done nivedita..main aa raha hun...on the other side nivi who lost in her thoughts turns around and sees viren who is standing in the balcony
and becomes frightened a bit and approaches the door by looking at viren..viren is still looking at nivi with mixed feelings.nivi stops at door step and sees viren for a minute and finally she went inside.
viren still cannt believe and thinks is this the girl done everything and thr comes his inner soul and says to him wat r u thinking viren..dont feel abt her.
she is the one behind ur grandpa's situation. take revenge on her..let her know what u can do if someone gives trouble to ur beloved ones.
the inner soul of viren disappears by seeing the determined look of viren.and he goes to bed.
in the next morning nivi is hurrying up to office. thr she gets a call from her boss. and she rushes to work.

in sood' house viren is well planned to take his revenge on nivi.
in the evening nivi abt to start from the office thr the don(lady boss) comes and gives a lecture to her and asks her to prepare a pakka plan for sood's engagement.kuch gadbad na ho jawe..tho mein thuje chodegi na..bahut bura haal hogi teri..samji ...nivi says yes mam...koi gadbad nai hoga...main hoon na...😆...main sab sambaloongi...DON shouts at nivi tho yaha kya kar rahe ho...mere muh mein kya hain khade khade dekthe ho...ab chal yaha se...jake kaam karo..nivi is sad and leaves ...and she is sad that she need to do all this instead of being the dulhan.. thinking all nivi is walking towards bustop...

thr comes the hotty viren..and background a bice racing music..but this time he is not coming come by bike..he is coming by sports car..
nivi is heading towards bustop...it is night..thr comes the goons and started teasing nivi. all from nowhr...arrives Mr.viren Sood in rescue of niveditha and a big BG music of floot with high beat...and finally all the goons r beaten up by him and they escpaed.

now nivi is with viren sitting next to him in his beautiful sports car in a tensed mood..as usual not saying thanks to him...😉...viren is as usual with dont care expressions ...driving his sports car...nivi just staring at him with suprise how can he be thr all the time in rescue of her...and she takes her looks off from him suddenly she notices they r at the outcuts of the city...she is shocked..

i know all of u r waiting for some romantic scenes of nivi and viren... plz bare with me...soon u vl get those
hope u all like..


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Part4 : page 6

Part5 : page 9

Part 6 : page12

Part 7 : page17

Part 8 : page20

Part 8 : page23

Edited by pesi11 - 13 years ago

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shaazi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff.........viren with sports car😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow lovely start do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI pesi
was just going through and read ur ff
its really interesting . really liked it
update fast
and do pm me when continue :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tnx for ur replies..soon vl update the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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If I'm watching CCMB then it is for Viren-Nivi ,so i will definitely be waiting for next part👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here goes the second part....hope u all enjoy...

nivi shocked when she realized she in not on the way to her home..instead she is at the outcuts... and asks niven whr r we going...? 😕...guess..no reply from viren...just concentrating on driving...😆...nivi is all tensed up and shaking viren for an answer...here comes the dont care look from viren to nivi..😉 and again turned his face and concentrated on driving.now nivi starts crying and demands ans from viren..whr r u taking me..? viren replies in an angry tone chup chap baito...u vl know it after some time...y so hurry ...keep quiet.. nivi starts crying and says to herself y r u doing this to me..aakhir kiya kya maine... kuch bhi tho nai..she starts shouting and asks viren to stop the car...but our viren never listen to anyone..ek baar commit kiya tho khud ko bhi nai sunega...lol...😆...nivi is frustrated and finally thr they lands at a guest house sorrounded by a small jungle kind of...
viren gets down from the car and opens the door...and asks nivi to get out of the car...nivi says no..i wont come with u..she keep on insisting and viren lost his patience and holds nivi's hand and makes her out and forcibly he takes her inside of the house...
nivi has no idea whr she is..and wats going to happen...she is looking around the house ..and asks viren whr r we..kuch tho bolo..y u take me here..and a big background music of floot...and viren says in a cool voice..😊. its ur punishment..nivi asks viren 'punishment'... for what??? thr comes the ans from viren for making ma dadaji arrested by police and making him ill .... without knowing who u r i helped u..but after knowing who u r how can i keep quiet..never..u vl get the punishment for all wrong things u have done..
nivi is shocked to hear it from viren and says maine kuch nai kiya..i love dadaji aswell... i vl never harm him..aisa soch bhi nai sakti main...plz understnad me..u r mistaken..mujhe jane do.. viren got irritated and says bus karo ye drama..i wont listen to u..nivi is shocked and no time to speak her as viren started taking her inside the room by holding her hand..he is trying hard to take her as nivi is insisting...he is taking her thru steps by pulling ... and and our nivi slips..no doubt viren holds her back...and an eye lock.....the same flute BG music....nivi is looking at viren with confused expressions...and viren realizes that he still holding nivi..and helps her to stand up...he again started taking nivi to upstairs..now nivi neither insisting nor supporting.just staring at viren with pleased epxressions..viren takes her into a room and says you betr be here in this room all alone without anyone..this is ur punishment..for ur father's support u created problems for my dadaji...now i vl see how can u support ur family..... i vl make ur life hell...and locks the door keeping nivi inside.. 😭 .
He is standing outside of the door and looking at the closed door hearing the voice of nivi who is asking to open the door and she has to go home as her dadi waiting for her..
viren is in thoughts and thinking am i doing correct by keeping nivi in a locked room...y i am behaving so rude..no i should not..this is not the way of taking revenge...he is abt to open the door..but stopped thinking no he has to do this..she deserves this..nivi is crying all alone in the locked room.. viren is time passing thr sitting at the hall by eating apples...then he thinks abt nivi who is also didnt have any food..

i know i am dragging this..but wat to do..am wearing CV's cap..ha ha.. hope i managed
Edited by pesi11 - 14 years ago
shaazi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice update....waiting for the next part.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Pesi
thanks dear for pming !
i just love ur update
its superb
so Viren kidnapped NIvi sounds interesting !
keep up the good work

do pm me when update :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran255

Hey Pesi
thanks dear for pming !
i just love ur update
its superb
so Viren kidnapped NIvi sounds interesting !
keep up the good work

do pm me when update :)

tnx for ur support dear......viren kidnapped nivi...to fall for nivi..not to take revenge😉...

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