FF; Forever - Maneet (Part 12 p 57) - Page 2

thanx 4 the pm update soon

Amazinggg concept.

aWesome intro
looks intresting
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Looks interesting can't wait to read more 😊

Hi Ammo!(can I call you that,sorry in advance)

wow lovely intro... looks very interesting.. do continue soon

@All; Thanks all my sweeties. Errrrrrr, I have some problems with my internet connections, that's why could not post anything last night. But will try today, and thanks for liking the concept. I have the same pm list and if anyone is missing will add😛

Forever ' Part 1

Geet was talking to her best friend Tasha while coming out of the college 'Tasha, how dare she yelled at you, how I wish I were there to defend you' Geet forgets about herself when it comes to her friends problems. 'You don't worry ok, babaji will definitely punish her' she has faith in babji. Being best friends for three years did not change their behaviors as Tasha still did not speak much like Geet. 'Thank you Geet' Tasha said as usual when Geet helped to ease everything for her. Geet bid a good bye to her best friend before heading towards her house.

Bunty was following Geet when he saw her walking at a fast speed 'I will teach didi a lesson today' he murmured himself while thinking of what he could do to challenge her. 'Idea' he ran into the house and came out with the transparent rope he used to fly kites. 'It will be fun to watch' he hid himself behing a car parked out there and waited for Geet. 'Mere angne main tumhara kya kaamhe'' Geet came towards the house singing one of her favourite songs and she stopped for a while sensing someone was glancing at her. 'Bunty, Bunty' she called for Bunty but walked to get into the house when she did not get a response from Bunty. 'aaaaaaaaaaaaaah' she cried as she fell down with her books.

'Hey, what is this? Is this how you get into the house?' she heard an unfamiliar voice behind her. 'Come on, hold my hand' she saw a strong hand waiting for her to hold. 'Excuse me mister, I don't need your help and by the way what are you doing at my house?' she gathered herself straight and held on her waist before looking at the man who stood in front of her. He was the most handsome man she has ever seen, with a perfect physique. He would stand out from the line of Greek Gods, she thought. 'Oye, why are you staring at me? ' Maan asked her angrily and clapped with his hands trying to bring her back to senses 'now close your mouth or else a fly may get in' he smiled at Geet who forgot to blink her eyes and moved towards his car. 'So handsome, so hot' Geet murmured forgetting Bunty who was witnessing the actions of her. ' Oye, didi, he is gone' Bunty pulled her dhupatta. 'Shut up Bunty' Geet ran after Bunty as he started to run to escape from her.

'Bauji, I'm sure Maan sir will help us to get back our land' Brij talked to Bauji, who was worried about their land being claimed as someone else's. Brij being the youngest in the family never let anyone to point a finger at his father; that was the reason why Mr. Shylendra still remains as one of the most respected man in their area. Mr. Shylendra has got three children; Handa, the eldest son has an 18 year old Geet; Pradeep the second one has 10 years old Bunty and Brij being the youngest son has been married for three years.

@Ansah, thanks dear....Sorry I was late with the first part, but have updated the first part now, and thanks for liking the concept

really nice....update was really nice....i loved it...