When I First Saw You - Maaneet FF (Up. Part6 Pg20) - Page 12

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Thank you soo soo soo much to everybody! 🤗
I'm overwhelmed! 😃
Never expected sucha good response! 😆
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Hey my dear people! 😊 Here's the next update!
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~Part 5~

Geet comes out from the bathroom wearing a jeans and a beautiful black kurti. She makes a pony and applies kajal on her eyes making them all the more beautiful. She quickly picks a sandwich which she had prepared and rushes outside!


G : Aaj college ka pehla din hai, aur mujhe aaj hi late nahin hona hai! Sab us Monkey ki galti hai! 😡 Na woh aata aur na hi main late hoti! Nahi - waise uski kya galti hai? Woh toh bas--- Bas kya? Khair chhodho!

Hey Babaji, aaj bacha lena! Bas koi rickshaw mil jaye!

She starts to run towards the road and (as always) she slips on the road. 😛 She is about to have a very bad fall but suddenly ,like magic, from somewhere a strong manly set of arms holds her from the waist. 😳 She had closed her eyes due to the fear of falling down. She feels that someone's watching her too closely but she still doesn't open her eyes. In fact, she felt that the touch was familiar and soon she realized why!

The boy who was clutching her couldn't stop admiring her-Again! 😛 Yes girls, he was Dev! Lol! I'm kidding! 😆


G : Maan! 😲

M : Main jaanta hoon ki mera naam Maan hai! 😉

Geet had nothing to say to him. She kept 'hanging' in that position. 😛

M : Geet, main jaanta hoon ki tum mujh jaise handsome, dashing aur hot ladke ke baahon mein rehna chahti ho lekin main tumhe do cheezein yaad dila doon! First, main tum jaisi ladkiyon mein bilkul bhi interested nahi hoon aur second, hum abhi bhi college ke liye late ho rahe hain. So please hurry up! Main saari zindagi tumhe pakad ke nahi khada reh sakta! 😆


Now Geet had lots of things to say to him! 😡


G : Dekho '

M : Baad mein dikhana! Please! Pehle college!

Geet thought, "Finally I can have my sandwich now." But her hands were empty.


G : Mera sandwich kahan gaya? 😲


She looked for it and found it lying on the road.

Geet was pissed off. She started blabbering.


G : Mera sandwich gir gaya!! Ab main kya khaungi? Kal raat ko dinner bhi theek se nahi kiya tha. Aur ab bhi maine kuch nahi khaya hai. Yeh sandwich gir gaya sirf aur sirf is Maan Singh Khurana ki wajah se! (looks up) Babaji! 🤔

M : Geet please, we're getting late.

G : Haan toh maine kab kaha ki we're not!

M : Geet!

G : Maan!

M : Geet!

G : Maan!

M : Geet! Hum koi game nahi khel rahe hain! Baitho gaadi ke andar.

Geet sits in the car and is highly irritated because her stomach is empty. Her stomach too is annoyed and starts making funny noises. Maan hears that but pretends as if he has not heard anything whereas Geet is feeling very weird but she keeps quiet.

After some time, Maan stops the car. Geet looks outside and she sees a restaurant. She is very confused and looks questioningly at Maan.


M : Kya? Aise kyun dekh rahi ho?

G : Yeh tumhara 'college' hai? 😆

M : Tum ladkiyan zara bhi dimag istemaal nahi karti na! Yeh restaurant hai. Jao aur fatafat kuch khaake aao.

G : Par tumhe kaise ----

M : Geet Jao! Humare --- Uhh.. Mere paas time nahi hai. 😉

G Okay.

Geet runs towards the restaurant and quickly orders sandwiches for herself. After around 5 minutes, her order comes. The waiter comes with the bill, she is about to pay when she remembers that she forgot her purse.


G : Dhat tere ki! Main toh apna purse ghar hi bhool aayi. Ab kya karoon?


She decides to explain it to the waiter but suddenly a person comes and pays the bill to the waiter. The waiter returns back.


G : Maan tum? 😲

M : Jaldi se sandwiches uthao aur chalo.

G : Par ---

M : Jaldi karo Geet.


Geet picks up the sandwiches and they go and sit in the car. He begins to drive. Geet eats her sandwiches enjoying them whole heartedly. She offers one to Maan but he denies. She shrugs and enjoys her sandwiches yet again! Having finished them, she says,


G : Thanks Maan, sandwiches ke liye. 😊

M : Hmm.

G : Aur bill pay karne ke liye bhi thank you.

M : Hmm.

G : Main paise tumhe lauta doongi.

M : Hmm.


He realizes what she had said and says,


M : Nahin, uski koi zaroorat nahin hai.

G : Nahi, main apne sir pe kisi ka ehsaan nahi rakhna chahti.

M : Jaisi tumhari marzi.

The rest of the drive passed quietly.

As soon as they reached the college, hundreds of eyes turned towards them as if they had come from Mars! 😆

G : Maan, yeh humein aise kyun dekh rahe hain? 😕

M : Kyunki, Maan Singh Khurana pehli baar kisi ladki ke saath college aaya hai! Ladke tumhe check out kar rahe hain aur ladkiyan tumse jal rahi hai!

G : What? Ladke check out kar rahe hain- that's pretty obvious! Because men are dogs! 😆

M : Excuse me? 😲

G : Excused! But girls kyun jealous hain? Don't tell me ki main ''tumhare'' saath baithi hoon, isliye! I mean 'tum' hi toh ho!

M : Miss Handa, 'main' hoon! Maan Singh Khurana! Yahan ke sab ladkiyan mujh par marti hain! 😉

G : I must say, yahan ki girls ki choice kaafi kharab hai! 🤢 😆

M : Excuse me?

G : Tumhe aur kuch bolna nahi aata? Jabse dekh rahi hoon 'Excuse me' hi bole jaa rahe ho!

M : Tumse matlab! And anyways, jaise ki main tumhe pehle bhi bol chuka hoon ki main in ladkiyon mein 1% bhi interested nahi hoon! So just ignore them and leave!

G : Yeah whatever!

M : Ab niklo bahar car se! Professor yahan aake nahi padayenge tumhe! 😆

G : Haan haan nikal rahi hoon!

She gets out of the car and slams the door! She is very irritated because of Mr. Maan Singh Khurana!

M : Oh hello! Yeh meri car hai, thoda tameez se, okay!

Geet turns around and walks away.

M : Kitni ajeeb ladki hai. Ek toh uska wait kiya, usko yahan tak leke aaya aur woh'woh mujhe hi tevar dikha rahi hai! Ek Thank you tak nahi bola! Anyways, I care damn! Ab agar who Thank you bolegi bhi na, toh I won't accept! Haan! ---

Waise maine uska wait kiya kyun? Maine toh aaj tak kisi ka bhi wait nahi kya! What is happening to me? Focus Maan, Focus! 😡😆

Geet on the other hand realizes that she should at least have said 'Thank you'. "Usne mera wait kiya aur mujhe yahan leke aaya, ek 'Thankyou' toh banta hai boss!" 😉

She turns around to see if he was still there but he was gone! She promised herself to say convey him her thank you!

She checked her time table and with the help of other students she reached her class. All the students had reached the class and were talking. This indicated that the professor had yet not arrived. "Bacha liya Babaji, Thank you! I'm not late!" Phew!* She looked around for empty seats and found one in the middle row. A boy was also sitting there. She very politely asked, "Excuse me? Kya main yahan baith sakti hoon?"

The boy turned around to look and it gave both of them a shock of their lives!


B : Geet! 😲

G : Maan! 😲

M : Tum!

G : Not Again!

M : Yeh toh mujhe kehna chahiye!

G : Meri toh kismat hi kharab hai!

M : Believe me, mujhse zyada nahin!

G : Main '

Everyone stood up as the professor had arrived. Geet quickly took that seat.


Everyone : G'morning Sir! 😊

Sir : G'morning! Have your seats! So, we have a new student between us today!

G : (to herself) New student? Magar kaun? 😕 😆

M : Tumhe nahi pata? Main hoon new student! 🤣

G : Really? Par tum toh ---

Sir : Miss Geet Handa, welcome to our college!

G : (murmuring) Arrey Haan! Main hi toh hoon woh new student! Tu bhi na Geet, pagal hai bilkul! (to sir) Thank You sir! 😊

Sir : Your welcome! Have your seat! 😊


Geet just smiled sheepishly. 😛


Sir : Geet, you have missed a little bit of your college work but you don't worry! Maan tumhari help kardega.

G : Maan? 😲

Sir : Oh I'm sorry. I didn't tell you na! Maan is sitting right next to you!

G : (murmuring) Mujhe pata hai Sir! Aur isi baat ka toh dukh hai.

M : I heard that!

G : Good for you!

Sir : Maan, you are going to help Geet out. Is that alright?

M : Perfectly alright sir! ( to himself) Yeh kahan fas gaya main?

G : I too heard that!

M : Good for you too!

G : Huh!

M : Huh Huh!

Both of them completely ignored each other for the rest of the class!


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That's it guys! Hope you enjoyed it. 😊

Do hit the 'Like' tab if you liked it.

Your comments/criticism are welcome!


Love,

Yoshita

A Crazy Maan-Maniac 😳


['~Next Part - Part 6 - Pg 20~']


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😊 For You Lovely Guys! 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovelyyyy update.
Loveeee the fighting of maneet.
I really likeee the way maan helps geet.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickachu

Lovelyyyy update.

Loveeee the fighting of maneet.
I really likeee the way maan helps geet.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima



Thankew soo much!! 😊😃
Just check it out again please !
I have added a pic! thnks! 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it.... Enjoyed everybit of the update....
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG OMG OMG thats Fabulous.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........
Loved it soooooooooooo much...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....
Loved every single line..❤️❤️❤️......
OMG U made us laugh sooooooooooo much....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣....My stomach is still paining....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.....
Loved Maaneet's nok Jhok...❤️...
Maan is so Sweet.....
The Pic of Guru is Lovely...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.....
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I read all five parts and am in love!!
thanks a lot
please add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. am really enjoying maneet fights.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read through your FF, it's awesome.
Love maan and geet's arguments and the fact that they are at college together. Looking forward to Maan helping Geet catch up with her work.
I'm sending you a buddy request, could you please add me to your PM list?
Jiwan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovly post dont forget to PM me the next part

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