-truly magical- Maaneet thread 1

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Reena Varghese

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

wow. MSK and love at first sight umm interesting. continue soon :)

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ixray

@ixray

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

love it !!!! love it !!!!!! totally love it !!!!!!!!!!

poor Maan his fida on Geet from the get go. hook, line and sinker.

its going to be interesting to see how Maan gets Geet to reciprocate his love.

and as one of the earlier posters said .....'willing to read anything u write."

aisa kuch mera bhi haal hai.

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

DIFERENT CONCEPT I LOVE IT PLS DO CONT SOONNNNNNNNN

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

-truly magical-
part 2

geet runs to the college & bumps into prem
prem - geet yaar relax

geet - chalna late ho raha hain
prem - paper start huwai bus 15mins huwa
geet - phir tu yanha kya kar raha hain
prem - off course tera wait kar raha hoon
waise bhi mujhe tujh se sab teepna hain
geet rolled her eyes & tragged him in

geet - sorry sir
prem passed a dirty look to the examiner & sat beside her
prem - sssh!! ssh!!
geet - kya hai
prem - extra pen hain kya
geet - bina pen ki hi aagaya tu..yeh lain
aab please mujhe tang mat karna
2hrs passed
prem - geet ..yaar yeh wala answere galath laagh raha hain
geet - kaun sa
prem - 5th wala
geet - checks oh!! thanxs yaar

after the come out
prem - main nahi hota to tera kya hota
geet rolls her eyes - challen armaan will be waiting
when they walk out ..her body gaurds follow
prem - yaar inka kuch karthi kyun nahi tu
sachi yeh mujhe se pit jayenghe ek din
geet - papa ke wajhse yaar inhe jaale rahi hoon
prem - BMW khanha yaar?
geet - ooye teri I forget!!
she runs to the body gaurd - wat happened to the car
guard - its been taken care of maam
geet - thanxs
prem - phir se accident!!!
geet - nahi yaar can u believe meri car break down hogayee
prem - kya bol rahi hain
armaan - so tomorrow's headlines...GEET HANDA ki gadi beech rasthe main break down!!!
armaan & prem hit there hand in high five
geet - very funny!!!

they hop into armaan's scorpio & drive to armaan's flat
geet - armaan khaane ke liya kuch hain kya?
prem - lo suru hogaya iska demand
armaan - geet serioulsy yaar tu itna khayeghi to moti hogayeghi
geet - to
armaan - tujh se shaadhi kaun karegha
prem - thats not a problem Ms.Handa daughter of THE HANDA's koi bhi shaadhi karleegha
geet - maine kha mujhe boohk laaghi hain
aur tum loog mujhe sunarahe hoo..teehk hain main hi bana leethi hoon
prem - mera liya bhi bana deena
armaan - mera liya bhi
geet makes bread omelet for all of them & comes out
armaan makes her favorite milk shake

they sit on the couch & have their bread omelet
geet - yaar koi picture laagha na
armaan - kaun se
prem - salt
geet - nahi inception laagha
prem - chalthi to iski hi hain
while watching the movie
prem - yaar abhi yeh kis ke dream main hain
geet - yeh second dream sequence hain
prem - yaar kitna dream dehkathe hain...
armaan - yaar please chup karo dono

after they finish the movie..prem doses off on geets lap &
she cuddles up on armaan...
armaan switches off the Tv & rests his back on the cushion
geet slowly pulls out his dairy & reads it...
asmani rang ho,
pyaar ki boond ho,
roshni ho,
dhoop ho,
chahaton ki goonj ho
armaan - mera dairy wapas kar
geet - aanchal mein hain dhanak chandni,
haaton mein woh chaand hai,
gairon se bhi hai wasta
apno mein pehchan hai,
armaan tries to pull the dairy away
prem hold him back..please continue...
geet - tu zindagi
mera izhaar hai..
pyaar hi pyar hai,
yaaron ki yaar hai,
tu zindagi ......
armaan - give my dairy at once
prem sits on him & holds his hand back..geet runs away & reads
tujhse main kya kahoon
tu hi mera sukoon,
sang tere rahoon,
tu zindagi!!!!!

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KForI4i8Zt8[/YOUTUBE]
prem leaves his hand - yaar last I checked u were doctor right
phir to shayar kab se ban gaya?
armaan pulls the dairy back & says...kisi ka personal dairy nahi patna chahiya
geet - teri dairy main tu pad sakthi hoon na!!!
armaan rests his head on her...tujhe kuch kah bhi nahi saktha
yaar really love that girl, kuch karna!!
prem - yaar yeh geet hain koi ladhki nahi..yeh kuch nahi kar sakthi
geet offended - wat do u mean main ladhki nahi ?
prem - sorry tounge of slip!!
geet looked confused
armaan - iska matlab hain slip of tounge
geet - last time prem ko jab ladkhi patani thi to kisne help kiya tha
she stood tapping her foot
armaan - yaar isliya to tujhe se help mang raha hoon
gurumaiya kuch mantra bathovo
geet - let me think!!!lekin yaar she is totally opposite to u
pata nahi tum dono kya karooghe..I am sure u will always be fighting
armaan - yaar tere charan khana hain!!
armaan bends down..geet jumps up on the couch..& says jeeta rahoo & smiles
armaan - seriously when ever we meet we land up fighting
prem blowing his finger nails says - thats actually beginig of love sign
geet - prem tu kab se pyar ke bathe karne lagha????
prem - tera chakar main itne SRK, Karan johar ke picture deehka hai
I can easliy predict their love story
armaan ditches geet & moves to prem..geet looks at armaan in anger
prem - u will have to woo her & woo her parents & then woo her again
to get married to u... simple
armaan was disgusted!!
geet - relax main hoon na
armaan - tum loog sale dosti ke naam pe dabha hoo!!
geet puts her hand around armaan & says chill yaar..
armaan snaps her hand!!!
prem - yaar abhi to phir se angry young man ..Mr.Amitabachan mat banna
geet starts laughing loud...armaan fumes at her
geet holds her stomach nahi nahi..tujhe pe nahi
I met Mr.Bachan today..tum logo ko batana hi bhool gayee
prem - kya bol rahi hain??
my car broke down & u know my gaurds won't let me take an auto
so I was strated in the road..finally jumped infront of this car..
mast black merc thi...I hopped into his back seat..he looked at me
jaise ki main koi pari hoon...
prem - correction..jaise ki to koi specimen ho
geet - lekin uski aankhee to pari hi bol rahi thi
armaan - giggled pari aur tu...teehk hain continue!!
prem - nahi yaar chasma nahi pana hoga!!
geet - main nahi bolthi!!!
armaan - sorry prem - main bhi sorry
geet - his gaurds tried to pull me away
prem - tere gaurds kya churi phenkar bathe the!!..unki to!!
geet - prem tu chup kar let me continue
armaan closes his mouth..tu bool
geet - umm!! off course my guards held them back..
i pleeded him to drop me to the next signal
can u believe he droped me to the college
armaan - sach main chasma nahi pehna hoga
prem laughed & held his stomcah
geet gets angry & leaves she comes back to take her bag..
armaan pulls her back & holds his ears...prem goes dow his knees & holds his ears
geet smiles & hugs them back...I have to leave koi stupid party attend karna hain
prem - we are supposed to be going to the disc tonight!!
geet - let me see..papa ka order hain yaar ..have to attend
armaan - sneak out of the party na like always
prem - waise bhi high profile party main kuch nahi pata chaltha
geet - ok let me see!!! same disc na!! I will try to be there by 11pm
prem - 12 bhi challega aana zaroor

had to say something about maan....so thought!!! all he felt after seeing geet

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kXn581EkR0Q[/YOUTUBE]

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maan helping geet sneaking out of the party

LINK TO PART 3

THE CREDIT OF THE VM GOES TO THE CRATORS...THANXS

thanxs for welcoming my new FF with so much of love..thanxs a lot

hope u like this update too...please please do comment

love

muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

😃😃😃Yay.....😃😃😃

First one to comment....😊

Loving this FF of yours...This is the first time I m the first one to comment on ur update...😃😉

I have become a gr8 fan of urs... 😛

Ur way of writing and the amazing thoughts that u have make me fall in love more with Maaneet...😳

Thanks for the pm

Continue Soon

Sakshi

Edited by zaqxsw - 14 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

awesome update...................

pari and specimen line cracked me up😆😆😆😆😆

fabulous update....

waiting for the next update.....

reva

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nisha

@nisha_bh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

excellllllentttttttttttt👏👏👏👏

loved their frndsp very much

n geet in a nu avtaar....

liked it very much...

update soon....

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Nidhi Chandrakar

@MeetPremeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

awesome sweeti

muski plz
i have got one request
plz don't make armaan's love be riddhima
plz make the girl shilpa
but its up to u
if u don't want to
then forget i even mentioned it

love
Nidhi