For Geet: When you left me.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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My You.



I ran, the grass,

how cold its scale.

as summer jeered through her winter veil


My feet are soft

they'll scratch and tear

the wind so strong

my breath , mere.


My arms are stretched

and heart beats shallow.

but a lie,

for I run.

I run towards my own sun.

The blood that dropped

it seared of He.

so red, as is flowing in me.


The wind has learnt

my warmth now flows

I laugh through tears

my secret shows


my treasure

for I have but few.

You may have been the one who's gone,

I still live in me MY YOU.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow... it perfectly expresses how Geet feels alone, determined, and broken in love. awesome poem!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

wow... it perfectly expresses how Geet feels alone, determined, and broken in love. awesome poem!

thanks😳

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