Maaneet FF *A Second Chance* |NOTE P.65|

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: kirti_fiji
oh thats sweet of maan to think for Geet, nice, cant wait for the next update😊

thankyouuuu!!!!!!

Originally posted by: -afsha-
That was sweet
Liked the part
Maan was obeserving Geet's beauty oye hoye he is changing
Liked the way Maan clamed her by his simple gesture
Looks lik Geet holded his hand very badly tabhi circulation also stopped😆😆
Lets c how her 1st day goes

thanks so much!! im glad you're liking my ff 😃

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: shreya satish
Its really a cute update.....
enjoyed every bit of it...

waiting for next

aww thanks a lot!!!!!

Originally posted by: ansah
that was just so awesome...really loved it..
you are great writer...keep writing...
and maaneet scenes are just so
nice...loved it

wow thanks so much!!!!! im so glad you like my writing!! im wasnt too sure since this my first FF 😃

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: shalini_s
nice and sweet update.. liked the way Maan held her hand..

thanks!!!!! glad you liked it!! 😃

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
lovely... n awesome

loved it a lot

superb job yaar

wow thanks so much!!!!!!

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: charmed ones
Nice done...!!!!😃
Fablous n simply lovely...!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
initial stage of friendship...!!!! hehehehe😆😆😆😆😆
so sweet n cute Cheer her up😳...giving Ice cream😳...I too want from Maan hands☺️.....Vanilla one...!!!!😆 ma fav..>!!!! 😳lolz......😆
Maan to different from Arjun...!!!!😃
when v gonna c Luv in d Air...!!!!!😳😳😳😳
waiting 4 more...!!!!😉

haha thanks so much!!!!

i know, how awesome would it be if Maan could actually give us ice cream..with his own hands!!!!!! now that you said that, im dreaming too hahahaha 😆😆

Originally posted by: Chotii
Awwwwwwww! i'm smiling like an idiot! HOW SWEEEEEEEEEET! MAAN! AND GEET! how sweeeeeeeeeet! this was defo such an adorable update!!
he brought her ice cream to calm her.. that was so cute, and then held her hand in the car - no words needed that gesture was enough and thats exactly what made it so lovely.. awww
omgggg how can i forget to mention when maan first see's her and is dazed by her beauty hmmmmm maan singh khurana ji, feeling something are we? lol love it!

great update !!! super duper awesome update!! loved it!!

cant wait for the next one !!

Saz
xxx

thankyouuu!!!! im glad you liked it!!!!!!!! 😃😃

Originally posted by: swetha10
maan holding geet's hand was really cute.. luved the update.. do continue soon

thanks!!!!!! 😃

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Happy Navaratri everyone!!!!!! this is the first time im not with celebrating with my family 😔 lol

anyways......

hey guys!! im sooo glad you guys liked the last part!!!!!! here's the next chapter. i hope you guys like this one as well 😃

im not sure if i'll be able to update next week because i have midterms 😔 so i have to study for those......so do wish me luck! lol im going to need it!!!!

and please continue to leave comments, because thats how i can tell if im being confusing or not lol!! im trying to clear up confusion as i go 😃

Shreya

Chapter 9

Geet grabbed her bag and stepped out of the hospital, closed her eyes, and took a long deep breath. Today had been an extremely busy day. First days always were, or at least that's what Geet thought. Being the newbie wasn't exactly her favorite. It was probably one the feelings she hated the most. She loathed having to learn names, especially because she was horrible with names, she hated not knowing any one she worked with, and the thing she disliked the most was how she had to constantly ask everyone how to get to other places in the hospital. No, not because she was embarrassed or anything of that sort. It was because she was extremely directionally and geographically challenged. How many times had she gone down the wrong corridor, or opened the wrong door, or just walked in on private conversations today? She couldn't count. She mentally hoped that tomorrow would be better and that she would somehow miraculously memorize the entire map of the hospital. And these interns? She thought she had come here to be a medical supervisor, not to take care of immature adults who called themselves doctors. Actually, most of them were pretty well behaved and listened to what she had to say. But then there were, of course, the oddballs of the group, who decided that they would be as irritating as they possibly could. "I don't want to work with her!" "I don't want to work with him!" "I don't want to work there!" "What's with the sari?" They were just so annoying! How immature could they possibly be?

But other than that, her day had been pretty good, actually. For the first time she was able to go to the hospital and she wasn't expected to go treat a patient. She could just stay in her office all day, visit the wards, and like Vicky said, just give orders to people, and make sure that everything ran well in the hospital. Suddenly a startling cool breeze stroked her face and she naturally pulled her sari pallu closer around her. She had just realized...how was she going to get home?

Maan watched the clock every five minutes. It was almost ten and Geet still wasn't home yet. He had forgotten to ask if she would need a ride back. Actually, he didn't even know when she would be done for the day. He knew he probably shouldn't be worried. Geet was an independent woman. He remembered that Vicky had once mentioned how she had been living on her own for the past nine years, ever since she was a freshman in college. She visited her family a few times a year, but the rest of the time she was on her own. And he knew she could probably take care of herself, but she had seemed really nervous that morning, and that's what made him nervous too. He wondered how her day had been...

He stood up and paced back and forth in his room, stopping to look at the clock every few seconds, wondering when Geet would get back and hoping she was all right. All of a sudden, his dull and repetitive ringtone unexpectedly disturbed his anxious thoughts.

"Hello?" Maan answered.

"Hi, it's me," It was Geet. "Can you come pick me up? I don't want to get a taxi or auto and come home by myself..."

She was alright. That was Maan's first thought. "You're still at the hospital right? Stay there," he commanded protectively.

"Thanks," Geet smiled.

"And don't stand outside either, Geet," Maan added instinctively.

Geet laughed softly, "Okay," and turned to walk back in through the doors.

"I'll be there soon," Maan said as he jogged out to his car and got in.

"Okay, bye," Geet hung up, smiling to herself. She looked around the lobby and found a few empty chairs outside the waiting room. She decided to sit there while she waited for Maan since it would probably take him at least fifteen minutes to get to the hospital. She watched the front doors fly open as more visitors walked in, as more patients were admitted, as the nurses ran around busily, and as doctors paced from ward to ward, doing their daily rounds. Geet leaned back into the chair and closed her eyes. She was glad she was finally done with work and she didn't have to be a part of it anymore.

"Geet?" a voice suddenly said, startling Geet.

"Oh no," she automatically thought and shifted uncomfortably in her seat. It was Dr. Rahul Narayan, one of the senior doctors at Sanjeevani. This entire day, he had taken it as his responsibility to show Geet, the new comer to the hospital, around, not letting her out of his sight until she herself somehow managed to escape. Geet, pretending she had not heard him, looked down in to her bag, pulled out her phone, and immediately began texting an imaginary person.

"Geet?" Rahul tapped her shoulder.

Geet closed her eyes tightly. "Damn it, he caught me," she thought instantly. After pulling her lips into a fake smile, she looked up at Rahul slowly. "Hi."

What are you still doing here? I thought you were done fifteen minutes ago?" he asked with his hand still on Geet's shoulder.

"I'm going to leave right now," Geet said as she stood up, causing Rahul's hand to slip off her shoulder. "I was just resting for a bit.

"How are you getting home? Not in a taxi I hope. It's to late for a woman to be traveling by herself," he continued without giving Geet a chance to speak at all. "Don't worry though. I'll give you a ride home." Geet couldn't believe it. Had Rahul just made a decision for Geet without even asking for her opinion at all? Rahul's bar on her respectability chart was already pretty low, and his current behavior took him completely off the chart now. Unfortunately, or fortunately, Geet had never needed to extend the numbers on her chart down into the negatives.

"But - " He cut Geet off again and she was getting more and more infuriated by the second.

"You're coming with me," he pulled Geet by her hand to the door.

"Let go of my hand," Geet commanded, holding her ground. She wouldn't budge.

"How else are you - " Rahul was cut off by Geet's ringtone. Geet looked fiercely into Rahul's eyes and then at her hand, which was still in Rahul's. He instantly let her hand go.

"Hello?" she answered her phone, turning away from Rahul.

"I'm outside," Maan said. Hearing Maan's voice after all that with Rahul suddenly made her feel much more protected.

"Okay. I'll be out in a minute," she faltered.

"What's wrong?" Maan asked.

"Nothing. I'm coming out now," Geet repeated.

"No, stay in there. I'll come get you inside," Maan said and hung up before Geet could say anything else back. He felt like something was wrong. She hadn't sounded like that fifteen minutes ago when she had called him.

It had been less than a minute, for sure, since she had hung up with Maan before Geet saw him walk in through the front doors, turning his head from side to side looking for her.

"Maan!" Geet called, waving to him.

"Maan?" Rahul turned back to see who she was waving to.

Maan quickly made his way towards where Geet and Rahul were standing. Geet seemed uncomfortable next to the man who was standing next to her. She tensely looked into Maan's eyes, trying to tell him something. Maan noticed, however, that she looked slightly relieved when she saw him. After giving Rahul a questioning look, he forcefully took Geet's hand and began to walk away. Geet didn't try to stop him, but instead walked faster along with Maan so she could get as far away from Rahul as fast as she could. "Who is he?" Maan questioned Geet.

"You'll let him take you without a single word, but you won't me?" Rahul called behind them.

Maan stopped in his place and turned back to look at Rahul and then Geet, who was now looking down uneasily. She twisted her hand out of Maan's tight grasp and, instead, interlocked her fingers with his tightly, just like she had the entire car drive to the hospital that morning. Geet's nervous gesture was enough for Maan to understand what had happened between Geet and Rahul.

"She's mine." Maan said boldly and headed towards the hospital doors, dragging Geet behind him.

Edited by shrezzj - 14 years ago

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Anjali-K

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Nice update! Especially the last line > "She's Mine" wow if Maan's like this before marriage, wonder how he'll be once they are married!😆 It'll be fun to see him jealous!😉

Anyways, continue soon.

Anjali

Edited by *angel94* - 14 years ago

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Samina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

amazing part

the last line were maan says shes mine was the best i really liked the way u are potraying maaneets relationship.

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Nanthini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

loved the update! maan is awesome!

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Hetal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

thanks a bunch shreya!!! love the end and how he says "she's mine"...so cute!! Love maan!!! Thanks a bunch babe...looking forward to the next part desperately...i hope you update quickly!!!!!