Maaneet FF *A Second Chance* |NOTE P.65|

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Ahhhh wow!! That was fantastic....short but so full of impact. I hope your future updates are longer and just as awesome :-D

Cant wait to read more...

Pushpi

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shona

@shona2010

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#272

awesome update
i totally loved the last line maan said
thanks for the pm

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#273

Maan to Rahul "She is MINE MINE MINE" (like the sea gulls in Finding Nemo 😉) - Ah terretorial aren't we 😉

Awesome update 👏 👏 👏

Hey I do not know your name. Is it Shreya? 😃

I love how you brought out Geet's first day at work and all the frustrations that go along with it. 😃

Loved how Maan sensed her discomfort and rose to the occasion. 😃.....Ahh prince charming to the rescue.

Can't wait to read more.
Jhan

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#274

'She's mine'... amazing.. waiting for more..

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

OMG!!!!!

Protective MSK...Hayye!

Loved it when he said,''She's mine!''

There were so mant strong emotions trapped in those 2 words.

Thanks a lot yaar

Please update soon

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

aaww.......such a lovely update.
All the best for ur midterm exams 😉

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#277

Hey,

I started reading your FF today. It is amazing. So different from others.😃😃😃😃

The character name Arjun - did you get inspired from Kitani Mohabbat Hai?

N Vicky is related to the car accident that Arjun was in right? Since Vicky was not driving - is it Dev who was driving? First I thought it was Maan who was driving when the accident happened? but if Maan was driving Vicky would not tell Maan to drop Geet off to hospital...

Anyways....loved it.

Please update soon.

Love

Rachana

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Wowwwwww....She's mine....that was super cool....!!!!! This Rahul guy should have understood it the moment Geet started walking with Maan....hmph..duffer....😆😆😆😆

All the best for your exams...do well and come back with another superb part....!!!😃