Sohil ff pt 5 pg:34 - Page 25

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Hey thanks for PM.
Will comment after reading full..😛
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Ok Finally I have read it.. Frm first part to 4 th. Such a sweet and big family... (sigh) This was fabulous. And plus point is that couples still have same love for each other and same nauk jhoonk after many years (children are grown ups) ...
I love last part. Awesome.
sam comes and says:naman pata nahi bhagwan mujhe tere jesa beta kyun diya
naman:kya hua papa??😛
I can imagine Sameer;s nautangi style and his son, dus qadam agey hai baap sey😉
Keep updating👍🏼

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New day,new morning:

Rays of sun hits the face of neil,he wakes up and remembers his last night conversation with sohini,a small smile covers up

his face,he says:

neil:Sohini!!!!!

but at the same time he comes out of his trance and then says:

neil:yeh mujhe kya horaha uss nakchari,baddimaagh,spoilt brat...........

but then again he starts remembering last nights moments and says:

neil:cute,sweet,mesmerizing,exquiste,beautiful

then again he comes out of his trance and says:

neil:ohh god yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai,mein uss keh baare mein itna acha kese sock sakta hoon,God please help me

at the same time rahul comes and hears the all conversation and says:

rahul:hum tumhari madad karenge balike

nahi balike nahi,male ko hindi mein kya kehte hain

haan........hum tumhari madad karenge male balike.........

neil is shocked to see rahul there,he says:rahul......t....tum.....yahaan....kya huaa??/

rahul:tum confused ho naa apni feeling ko lekar di ke baare mein

neil:n...nahi.....ky......kyun???

rahul:neil,zyaada jooth mat bolo,tumhare chehre se sab saaf saaf pata chalta hai

neil:mein nahi maanta,ab mujhe jaane do mujhe kaam hai

neil leaves from there...................

Sohini's room:

sohini is also lost in last night's moments,she says:

sohini:jab uss neil ne mera haath pakda tha,meri dhadkan kyun tham gayi thi

OHH god mujhe kya ho raha.....

mujhe neil se dhur rehna hoga,bilkul dhur..........

everyone gather for breakfast at dining table:

everyone takes their place,leaving only one place for sohini next to neil,she goes and sits next to him......

both looking at eachother now and then but also regretting,both are falling in love but both dont know,then

ayush anounces:

Hello all,aaj meri beti Riya,aa rahi hai,actually woh aaj aaney waali thi california se,toh mein ne usse yahaan bula

liya,tum sabse mil bhi legi iss liye

neil:wow DAD, lil sis aa rahi hai,woh bhi aaj aapne pehle kyun nahi bataya mein uske liye koi gift le leta

a voice comes from outside:bhaiyaa aapse mil liya yehi bohut hai,mujhe gift ki koi zarurat nahi hai

neil runs towards riya hugs her tightly and says: kesi ho tu??aur khudko dekh toh sahi kitni patli hogayi hai,

kahin dieting toh shuru nahi kardi,koi mil gaya kya???

riya:bhaiyaa aap mujhe jawab toh dene do,patli kyun hui hun,yeh aapko lag raha hai bhaiyaa,mujhe toh lag raha hai

jese mein aur moti hogayi hun......

ayush distracts both of them saying:hogaya tum dono ka toh riya ko aur logon se bhi milne do

ayush makes everyone meet riya

riya greets everyone but when she was about to greet rahul,rahul says:hi I am rahul,naam toh suna hoga

riya:nahi nahi suna

rahul:toh ab sun liya right?!?!?1

riya:Wrong,i bet you've a very flirty nature

kiya:yes,riya you are right,bhaiyaa toh flirts ke guru hain,kyun sohini di??

sohini:haan riya isse dhur hi rehna

riya:nahi sohini kisme itni himmat ke woh riya ko haasil kar paaye

after saying this all three girls move out from there,arya goes to rahul and says:

arya:kyun bhaiyaa,pehli baar kisi larki se haar gaye

rahul:rahul kabhi kisi larki se nahi haarta......................

par iss larki mein kuch toh baat hai
......

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thanks di for liking it,hope you liked the new character
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing part dear...
could not resist myself... to jaldi se padh liya aur comment bhi kar diya...
Lovely work... Continue soon.... :)

Sakshi
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome part sheetal ...

and have u shifted to india ...??? 😕
i wasnt sure about it ...

really missing u ...

update soon ...
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hey guys,sorry for so much late update

neil enters his room and bangs the door:

neil:yeh mujhe kya ho raha,woh stupid larki mujhpar haawi kese ho sakti hai,mujhe kabhi

pyaar nahi ho sakta because i am neil oberoi par phir mein uski taraf kyun attract ho

raha hun,mujhe jald hi jaana hoga keh mujhe konsi beemari hui hai......

on the other hand:

sohini:neiil is cute par thora ghusse waala bhi hai toh kya hota hai sabse toh bohut

pyaar se baat karta hai.....

Ohh God i m so confused,kya karun!!!,kese pata lagaun keh neil mere liye perfect hai

koi toh tareeka hogaa......

haan yaad aaya jab kisi insaan ko parakhna ho toh dekho woh apne se chotte logon se kese

behave karta hai,mil gaya idea chalo ab iss execute karne ki baari and she leaves

Plan 1

neil is coming down when accidently crashes with a old lady maybe from domestic staff

neil:ohh i am sorry aunty aapko lagi toh nahi

old lady:beta mujhe aunty mat bulao,shayad aapko pata nahi keh mein yahin kaam karti hun

neil:aunty toh kya hota hai,aap phirbee mujhse badi hain aur meri maa ki tarah hain,aapko

izzat dena mera farz hai

old lady:jeete raho beta

sohini who is watching this whole scene from behind a pillar says:hmmmm iss pathar dil insaan

mein dil toh hai,par dikhta bohut kam hai,i am impressed mr neil oberoi,ab dekhna parega

ke aap larkiyon se kese baat karte ho........

neil reaches to garden to meet rahul actually he wants to take advice from rahul,as he is

a love guru

rahul comes with riya(neil's sis)

riya:hey bro,kya hua??

neil:tum iske saath kya kar rahi ho

riya:chill bro relax

neil:chill ko maaro goli jao tum andhar jao

riya:byeeeee rahulllll

rahul:byeeeeeeeeee riyaaaaaaaaaa

neil:riyaaaaaaaaa ko chodo batao tum meri behen ke saath kya kar rahe the

rahul:yeh sawaal mein bhi tumse puch sakta hun,tumhe sohini ko dekh keh ya ho jaata hai

neil:nahi kuch nahi i just hate her

rahull:good!!!!!!

rahul turns to leave when neil stops him by saying:

neil:Acha rahul ek baat toh batao

rahul:kya??

neil:mere liye nahi mere dost ke liye huh???agar pyaar ho toh pata kese chalta hai aur

uske symptoms kya hain

rahul:jab tum kisi larki se pyaar karte ho toh hazaron koshishon ke baad bhi tum usse

dhur nahi reh sakte chahe jitni bhi koshish karlo,aur tum khud uski taraf khinche chale

jaate ho,tumhe woh sabse khubsurat lagti you can say aishwariya rai se bhi zyaada,agar woh

tumse do pal ke liye bhi dhur hojaye toh khud bakhud dil uski fikar karne lagta hai,usse kisi

aur keh saath dekh bohut jealousy hoti hai,yeh duniya khubsurat hojaati hai.

neil:ohh toh yeh sab hota hai pyaar mein,thanks rahul you made my day,byeeeee

neil comes inside and says:

neil:ab mujhe yeh sab symptoms ko check karna hoga,so pehle sohini se dhur rehna hoga,bohut

dhur................

Plan 1 (by neil)

arya:neil aayo khana khalo

neil:aaya ek minute

arya:haan mein toh tumhe batana bhul gaya aaj sohini di ka bohut puraana friend aa raha

hai,some rohit!!!!

neil:arya puraana friend matlab???

arya:puraana friend matlab woh dono bohut ache dost the

neil:aur????

arya:aur kya??hume toh kai baar yeh bhi laga that they both are dating each other

neil:WHAT?!?!?!?!

arya:tumhe kya hua??tum kyun itne shock ho rahe ho

neil:bas kuch nahi tum jao mein aata hun

neil goes inside and sees sohini talking to some handsome,he thought it was right,and he

was right,its seemed like they both were enjoying eachother's company but they dint knew

that some one was burning,

riya:chalo bro,bhook nahi lagi kya??

neil:(staring at rohit) bhook toh bohut lagi hai,dil kar raha hai kisiko kacha chabba jaun

riya:what???kya kaha bhaiyaa??

neil:kuch nahi,tu jaa mein aata hoon

neil then to himself:tu phirse apne mission par concentrate,concentrate kar dhur reh sohini

se........

at dining table two seats were empty one was with sohini,and the other one was opposite

that seat:

arya:neil aap aayo yahan sohini di ke saath beth jao

neil:nahi.....woh....mein wahaan beth ta hoon

it gives a shock to sohini that neil was ignoring her,she was that much bad,that a person

was ignoring her,but then rohit comes and takes the seat which was with sohini

From time to time,neil was consequently staring at rohit,and was now red wit jealousy and

anger.......................

to be continued.............

guys i know this part is not up-to-the-mark but i am extremely busy nowadays,and ishaan bhaiyaa is also having her exams but i assure you all that this ff will soon be back with a bang,but till then dont discontinue reading it




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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome n supahcute part sheetu.......thnx so much for updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyccc & very interestingg😃😃
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thx 4 d pm..😊
sorry 4 late comments😭
awesum part👏
continue soon!!!!😊🤗

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