SR- Love is stronger than death(Updated Page23)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Juat start writting this to take out my frustration towards current track.

Sid and ridhhima come to sanjeevani next morning. Ridhhima come to hospital with shilpa.

Shilpa: Ridhhima di aap chalo briefing ke liye main aa rahi hoon file rakh kar locker room main.

R: Shilpa main bhi chalti hoon akele main kya karoongi waha par.

Shilpa: arre sabhi log to honge waha par aap akeli kaha hain waise agar aap aana chathi hain to chaliye

Jp: arre aaj morning main hi mujhe ek saath 2-2 flower ek saath dikh gayi. Shilpa flower ji aapne sid bhaiya ko kahi dekha hain unka phone aaya tha kuch thik nahi lag rahein the awaaz se.

Shilpa: nahi abhi tak to nahi dekha hain shayad briefing ke liye reception main wait kar raha hoga main bhi file rakh kar chalti hoon

Ridz: sid plzzzzzz tum meri wajah se apne aap ko dukh mat do main dekh nahi paongi aise tumhein.

Ridz, shilpa and Jp sabhi log reception area main aate hain. Tabhi armaan bhi aata hain aur armaan ko dekh kar ridz pareshan ho jati hain.

Sid usi waqt aata hain briefing ke liye. Ridz sid ko dekhti hain par sid kisi ko bhi dekh kar briefing nahi deta hain aur sabke duty assign karke jaane lagta hain tabhi shilpa sid ko awaaz deti hain.

Shilpa: sid mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hain.

Sid: shilpa agar work se related hain to bolo agar aur koi baat karni hain to abhi nahi main Dr. Shashank ke pass jar aha hoon kuch important discussion karna hain unse.

Shilpa: thik hain sid koi baat nahi tum jao sir ke pass main baad main tumse baat kar loongi.

Sid: thanx

Ridz Dr. shashank ka naam sunte hi statue ban jati hain aur sochti hain" Kya sid papa ko sab kuch batane jar aha hain agar aisa hua to main papa ko kya jawab doongi apni is galti ke liye".

Armaan ridz ke pass aata hain aur kehta hain" Ridhhima tum bilkul tension mat lena ab hum dono ke beech main kisi ko bhi nahi aane doonga". Main aaj hi Dr.Shashank se hamare barein main ja kar baat karonga taki sir sid ko samjha kar hamare ek hone main help karein.

Ridz: Plzzzzzzzzzz armaan meri life ko aur complicated mat karo mujhe akela chod do abhi aur haan papa se koi bhi baat karne ko koi jaroorat nahi hain samay aane par main khud baat karongi unse.

Aur phir ridz waha se chali jati hain apne duty par. Armaan wahi par khade ho kar soch raha hota hain ki ridz jab sid se pyaar nahi karti to is tarah kyon behave kar rahi hain chalo koi nahi jaha itne din inteezar kiya hain kuch din aur sahi.

Idhaar sid dr. shashank ke pass jaata hain aur unse kuch baatein karta hain jise sun kar dr. shashank thode tense ho jaate hain.

DR. S: sid beta aisa kyon kar rahein ho tum koi baat hain to mujhe batao.

Sid: Nahi sir aisi koi baat nahi hain saab thik hain bas mujhe laga ki main aap se baat kar lo isliye aap se baat ki maine.

Dr. S: thik hain tum aisa chate ho to aisa hi sahi mujhe koi prblm nahi hain.

Sid: thank u sir mujhe pata tha aap meri baat jaroon manenge.

Sid phir dr. shashank ke room se ja hi raha hota hain ki ridz ke saath takkar ho jati hain. Ridhhima bhi dr. shashank ke room main hi aa rahi hoti hain.

Ridz sid ko dekhti hain aur sid ridz ko dekhta hain.

Ridz: Sid tum bhi meri tarah raat main nahi soye ho tumhari aankhein bata rahi hain par plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sid ek baar mujhe maf kardo main tumhein yakin dilana chathi hoon ki us raat jo kuch bhi hua woh ek weak moment tha par jaisa tum soch rahein ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hua hain mere aur armaan ke beech.

Sid: main janta hoon ki tum mujhse kuch kehna chathi ho par dil ki sunta hoon to mujhe sirf dukh milta hain aur agar dimag ki sunta hoon to main kuch samay ke liye akela rehna chatha hoon taki koi bhi galat faisla na ho jaye mujhse.

Sid: excuse me mujhe duty main jaane main late ho gaya hain Dr. Ridhhima so please give me a side.

R: shayad maine saare haq kho diye hain isliye sid mujhse aise baat kar raha hain. Sid mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hain.

Sid: I m sorry dr. ridhhima main abhi aapke saath baat nahi kar paonga ek emergency hain mujhe wahi jana hain.

R: sid plzzzzzzzzzz ek bar mujhse baat karlo.

Sid: I m extremely sorry dr. ridhhima main sach main busy hoon.

Ridz: thik hain phir break main baat kar sakte ho na sid.

Sid: actually main emergency attend karke kahi jar aha hoon isliye main aapse break main nahi mil paonga.

Rid: sid plzzzzzzzz mujhe 5 min de do main tumhara jyada samay nahi loongi.

Sid: jab mere pass samay tha tab aap kisi aur ke liye pareshan thi par abhi mere samay nahi hain so plzzzzzzzz excuse me.

Ridz sid ke baatein sun kar bahut dukhi ho jaati hain aur phir sid ko raasta deti hain jaane ke liye. Ridz dr. shashank ke room main jati hain aur dekhti hain dr. shashank thode se pareshan bethe hain. Sid ne kahi papa ko saari baatein bata to nahi di, main papa ko kya jawab doongi itni badi galti mujse kaise hi gayi hey bhagwan.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi

thanks for this siddhima FF

really well written, keep it up

do continue

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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written. i like it a lot =]
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Ridhhima keeps on giving heart attacks to shahank one after the other.. Jennifer has destroyed the character of ridhhima
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well written do continue writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing👏 do me a favor destory ridz for sure, she makes me hate everyting, make her suffere
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hey annu
Nice start dear
Looking forward to d next part
B/w thanx 4 d PM
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON
IM WAITING😊
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amazing part 👏
waiting for the next part.....
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part -2

Ridz: papa kya hua aap aise kyon bethen hain?

Dr. S: ridz sid itna pareshan kyon lag raha tha aur usne chutti bhi le li hain aur jab maine pucha ki kahi ja rahein ho to kehta hain" Sir muhe bhi nahi pata main kab aayonga bas muhe itna pata hain ki main akela rahna chata hoon". Ridz tum dono ke beech kuch hua hain kya maine sid ko kabhi nahi dekha tha aise bahut pareshan lag raha tha pata nahi kyon par mujhe uski tension ho rahi hain. Ek kam karo tum bhi half day le kar ghar jao aur sid ke saath raho mujhe lagta hain usse tumhari jaroorat hain.

RidzL(in her mind): aap ko kya batao papa main ghar nahi ja sakti main sid ko aur pareshan nahi kar sakti, par sid ne chutti kyon li mujhe pata karna chaiye aur kaha jar aha hain sid. Papa mujhe kuch kam hain main aap se thodi samay bad milti hoon.

Ridz jaise hi room se bahar nikalti hain armaan se takar hota hain.

Arre ridz main tumhein hi dhoond raha tha mujhe kuch dena hain tumhein aur phir saab kuch thik ho jayega.

Armaan ridz ko envelope deta hain aur jab ridz envelope open karti hain to uske andaar se divorce paper nikalta hain jise dekh kar ridz ko bahut gussa aata hain.

Ridz: armaan yeah kya hain?

Armaan: ridz isse jaldi se sign kar do phir main sid se sign karwa leta hoon taki ab hamarein beech koi bhi nahi hoga.

Ridz: plz armaan maine tumhein nahi kaha tha yeah divorce paper lane ke liye aur waise bhi yeah mere aur sid ke beech ki baat hain aur humdono ke beech kisi third person ko interfere karne ki jaroorat nahi hain. Aur tumhein kisne kaha ki main in paper par sign kar doongi aisi galti main ab dobara nahi kar sakti. Ek bar maine gusse main aa kar sign kar diya tha jiski wajah se mere aur sid ke beech main bahut galat famiyan ho gayi thi par is bar nahi. Isliye plz mujhe aur sid ko akela chod do humdono ko pata hain ki humein kya karna hain.

Armaan: par ridz main janta hoon ki sid tumhein kabhi woh khushiyan nahi de payenga kyonki tum abhi bhi mujhse pyar karti ho jiska sabot woh raat hain jo humdono ek saath the.

Ridz: plz armaan har waqt us raat ko yaad dila kar tum kya kehna chathe ho woh meri galti thi jo main kamjor ho gayi thi par ab nahi mujhe pata hain mujhe kya karna hain so plz mujhe akela chod do. Aur haan ab koi aisi harakt mat karna jiski wajah se main tumhein kabhi maf na kar saku.

After that she left that place and went to locker room. Jaha par sid akela betha hua tha aur uske aankhon se aanson nikal raha tha.

Ridz sid ke pass jati hain aur usse dekhti hain aur bolti hain" sid kya tum apni biwi ko ek mauka nahi de sakte apni galti ko thik karne ke liya main janti hoon ki meri galti mafi ke layak nahi hain par main tumhein yeah yakin dilana chathi hoon ki main sirf aur sirf tumhari biwi hoon Mrs. Riddhima Modi. Tumne har bar mera saath diya hain ab mera saath mat chodo is waqt mujhe tumhari bahut jaroorat hain".

Sid ridz ko dekhta hain bolta hain " plz mujhe akela chod do main kuch bhi sochne ke halat main nahi hoon. Main tumse itna pyaar karta hoon ki mujhe abhi tak yakin nahi ho pa raha ki tum mere saath aisa kar sakti ho".

Itna bol kar sid locker room se bahar chala jata hain aur ridz wahi par bethi rehti hain aur sochti hain main sid ko kaise yakin dilao ki main sirf uske saath rehna chathi hoon. Meri ek galat kadam ne mujhe sid se alag kar diya. Main sid ke bina nahi ji paongi plz bhagwan koi to raasta dikhao.

Idhar shilpa jaise hi duty karke room se bahar aa rahi hoti hain uski takar sid se hoti hain. Arre sid itni jaldi main kaha ja rahein ho riddhima ko dhoond rahien ho kya?

Shilpa dhoonte us cheez ko hain jo apna hota hain aur mera koi apna nahi hain main bilkul akela hoon abhi.

Aisa kyon keh rahien ho sid hum sab hain na aur phir itni pyaar karne wali wife bhi to hain jo sirf tumhrein barein main sochti hain.

Shilpa tumhein pata hain jab registan main tum pani thodne lagte ho na tab tumhein doori se har cheez pani hi lagta hain par jab uske pass jaate ho na to woh pani nahi hota hain isi tarah rishtein bhi hote hain jab tum kisi par aankh band karke yakin karte ho na aur woh trust jab tut jata hain na to tab tum apne aap par bhi yakin nahi karte ho. Isi tarah meri zindagi hain. Mujhe ab apne aap se nafrat hone lagi hain pata nahi main itna pagal kyon hoon jo har kisi par aankh band karke yakin kar leta hoon aur jab sach samne aat hain to bahut dukh hota hain.

Sid kya hua tum itne upset aut low kyon sound kar rahein ho tumhare aur ridhhima ke beech kya hua hain. Ridhhima bhi kal se bahut pareshan dikh rahi hain. Agar koi problem hain to share karo tabhi koi solution niklega mann main rakhne se koi fayda nahi hain aur taklif hogi tumhein.

Tum ridhhima se hi ja kar puchi woh kyon pareshan hain wahi par tumhare saare swalo ka jawab milega.

i m writing this FF in two more parts. i hope u all like it. do leave ur comments.

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