28 Sept Written Update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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kuku tells goldie to drink the good tea since he made it. goldie tells kuku to drink it first. kuku refuses. bebo says she will drink it, maybe kuku put something in it. kuku tells bebo not to drink it. bebo drinks al of the tea. bebo has tears in her eyes. bebo says the tea is very good, they suspected for no reason, she finished the tea and will get more. bebo leaves.

bebo runs to the kitchen. bebo sees the water jug is empty. kuku gives bebo a glass of water. kuku says she lied that the tea was good, he put chili in it. kuku asks her who she is. bebo says she is nimmo. kuku says she is lying, tea had mirchi, why didnt she tell. bebo says it wasnt spicy. kuku says why she lie to save him. bebo leaves. kuku says to himself nimmo is not her name, she lied to save him, what if she. bebo hears this from the side and cries. bebo says she is his laadli, she is helpless she cant hug him, til she doesnt give kuku everything back, she has to stay like this. bebo cries, then looks on determined.

biji is massaging arjun's head. bebo comes with ria. ria talks about school. bebo leaves saying she is tired. bebo walks up the stairs and thinks about the narangs touching her feet.

kuku says his heart says its not nimmo, shes. amro says not all girls are bebo. kuku says she is not nimmo. amro says she is nimmo the maid who is very bad. amro tells kuku to promise to stay away from nimmo, nimmo is just a problem for them. amro leaves. kuku says nimmo is not a problem, nimmo saved him today, nimmo is not a bad person.

arjun comes to bebo and says to come home after dropping off ria, she will get tired, its important for her to be fine in this house, for him too. bebo tells arjun to stop his natak, she knows everything he did to her, to her amrit and her family, he thought he would come with his fake face and she wouldnt find out, a person like him doesnt suit him. arjun says its good she admitted it, he is tired of acting, he ruined her family, he separated amrit from her, he made kuku crazy, she will watch everyone being ruined, she wont be able to do anything, he will make kuku so he cant stand on his own again, he will stay crazy all his life, her home and family will be in his grasp forever and wont be able to get out, he will remove their identity, her identity, she will forget she is bebo. all this was bebo's imagination. in reality arjun tells bebo to rest. bebo thinks she wants to say a lot but not now, once she gives kuku and her family everything, then she will talk, she has to stay quiet and unaware til then.

kuku tells a stack of cards for bebo to come back. he leaves. bebo comes and sees the stack of cards. the song chand agar tho plays. bebo remembers building a house from the cards and kuku giving her chocolate as inam and hugging kuku. bebo continues to pile the cards on top of it. kuku holds out chocolates and grabs bebo's hand.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am really sorry for being rood...but it should not take this long to write an update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Neela thanks for the great update
really appreciate ur hard work
awww poor bebo,
Edited by juhuti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: asheth

I am really sorry for being rood...but it should not take this long to write an update....


Please don't post such comments
it takes a whole lot of time to write an update
and neela might have got busy, otherwise she always write update soon
so please do appreciate her hard work and encourage her
don't post such comments in future
Thank You.

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