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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-5

next day while studying at nupur's place...

mayank nupur n ravi were studying wen suddenly sheela came from behind n scared nupur... nupur turned in a quick reaction... her hair hit mayu's face n she caught his hand n put her head wid eyes closed on his shoulder...( i hope url r getting d scene)

mayu was lost in her...

S: arre nupur main hun sheela...
😆

nupur luks up n seeing mayu so close 2 him both have an eyelock...

R: arre tum dono kahan kho gaye...

both leav each other n start luking here n there... so 2 chang d topic mayu says...

M: oh to miss nupur darti bhi hai... 😃

N: n...n...na na...nahi to me ki...kisi se na..nahi da..darti.........

M:wo to tumhari awaaz se hi samaj aa raha hai...

N: mene kaha na me nhi darti...

M: nupur is a darpok darpok...

R: ha nupur ab maan bhi lo ki tum darti ho...

S: ya nups maan lo na kya fark padta hai...

N: mujhe padta hai... 😡

n she leaves d room... all r stunned ki nupur ko kya ho gya... sheela goes behind her... n so does mayank n ravi...

nupur goes 2 d terrace n is followed by sheela...

S: nupur... tum theek to ho na...

N: ha me theek hu sheela tum jao yahan se... 😭

S: nupur m sorry agar tumhe bura laga... plz mat ro..

N: m fyn sheela just need 2 b alone for sometime...
(trying 2 wipe her tears)

S: are u sure???

N: yes u go n study ll cum in sum tym...

S: ohk...

Sheela leaves n goes down n tells mayank n ravi dat she wants 2 b alone...

both ravi n sheela go 2 d room 2 study while mayank is just wondering wat just happened n is feeling a little gulity for what he did...

suddenly he sees gunjan n goes 2 her n asks her ...

M: gunjan kya nupur ko koi peeche se aakar daraye to use darr lagta hai...

G: bas darr nhi mayank bohot darr... bachpan me di ke saath.............................................................................................................................................hua tha... aur fir kisi ne unhe darpok kaha aur wo gusse me chali gayi aur rone lagi.............. par tum kyu puch rahe ho.......

M: wo actually...(den mayank tells her evrything)

G: oh no mayank hume di ko sambhalna hoga... pata nahi unki kya halat hogi...

M: sheela abhi uske paas gayi thi par usne kaha ki wo ro rahi thi aur use akela rehna hai...

G: main abhi di ke paas jati hu...

M: nahi gunjan galti mene ki hai to muje maafi mangni chahiye... me hi baat karta hu...

G: par mayank tum logon ko thodi na ye pata tha warna tum aise thode hi karte........

M: ryt gunjan par nupur ko samjhana padega aur maafi bhi maangni padegi... aakhir thodi bohot galti to humar thi hi na.......

G: theeke jaise tumhari marzi... agar kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to muje keh dena...

M: theeke... thnx...😊

G:😊

gunjan goes from there...

M to himself: ab jhansi ki rani nupur kumari ko bhi manana padega...
(puts his hand in pocket, blows air from his mouth n heads towards the terrace)..........................


hope u lykd d part guys do comment about it... n i kno i hav kept vry few scenes of mayur but don't worry next tym mayur hi honge wid mayu manaofying nupur n their nok-jhoks n regained friendship... till den read this part n enjoy...........
Edited by get_jasneet - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing update plzzzzzzzzzcont sooon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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update after a long time
and that too so short
but it was amazing
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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tht was soooooo awesome i love it plzz add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 6:
Mayank went 2 d terrace...
M:nupur............

nupur was crying hearing his voice she wiped her tears n asdked...

N: ha...

M: tum theek to ho...

N: ha muje kya hona hai...(wiping her tears n trying 2 control herself from crying further...)

M: nahi wo... kya main tumhare saath beth sakta hun...

N: arre nahi me theek hun me aa hi rahi thi neeche chalo...

M: mene kab kaha neeche chalne ko...

N: acha to tum jao me ati hun...

M: magar me tumse baat karna chahta hun...

N: magar muje kuch nhi sunna tum jao...

M: nupur plz ek baar meri baat to sun lo..........

N: mene kaha na jao yahan se......... chodo me hi chali jati hun..........

was abt to leav wen mayank catches her hand... both r still for a moment... then

M: tum kahin nahi jaogi............ mene kaha na yahan baitho aur meri baat suno..........(jst lyk a teacher)

N: nupur muh fulake baith jati hai........

M: dekho nupur...... m sorry ... muje tumhe darpok nahi kehna chahiye tha.......

N: ab kyu keh rahe ho tab to keh diya na...........

M: dekho nupur muje tab samjha hi nahi ki agar me tumhari jagah hota to me bhi aise hi react karta................

N: to tumne.........( mayank puts his hand on her mouth)

M: bas nupur ab tum kuch nahi kahogi bas chup chap suno..........

both r looking in each others eyes.... nupur is seriously staring in his eyes........

M: nupur really sorry......... aage se tumhe kabi darpok nahi bulaunga..... aur kisi ko bulane bhi nahi dunga.........

N: promise

M:promise😊................... waise nupur tum itna kyu darti ho kisi ke darane pe............

N: wo darsal mayank........ pehle promise karo kisi se nahi kahoge..........
M: ha baba nahi kahunga...........
N: wo mayank muje hai na bhooto se darr lagta hai...

M: par nupur bhoot pret nahi hote........

N: janti hun par fir bhi........... ya darr mujme bachpan se hi hai....... isliye mumy dady muje kabhi bhi akela chodke nahi jate the.................. par ab mene apneaap ko kafi sambhal liya hai.......... par jaise hi sheela ne daraya me darr gayi....................

M: par fir agar humne tumhe darpok bulaya to tum bhadki kyu... u kno ryt ki tumhe darr lagta hai.............

N: haa...... par mene humesha apneaapko nidar rakha hai.......... me nhi chahti ki log samjhe me itni choti si baat se darrti hu.......... warna sab chidhayenge.......... aur me humesha se hi apni behan ki raksha karti ayi hun aur apne mata pita ki beti nahi beta rahi hun aur hamesha rahungi............

M: ohk........... sach kahun muje humesha tumpe bohot gussa ata hai tumhari badbad pe........... par aaj tumhari baaten sunkar i have a feeling of respect for u.......... not becoz ki tum darti ho...... par kyuki tum apne darr par kabu paane ki koshish kar rahi ho aur usme kafi safal bhi ho...............

N: thnx mayank.........😊 (in he nautanki style) waise tum bhi itne bure nahi ho...............😉

M: thnq madam............😊 n both laugh.......

N: by god mayank mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki me tummseee baat karungi aur hasungi bhi..........

M: mene bhi nahi socha tha..... par kya karen natural disasters jst happen.....

N: mayank........

M: acha nupur........ kya ab hum friends ban sakte hain........ kab tak yuhi ladte rahenge..........

N: haan ryt ab hume dosti kar leni chahiye......... baaki sab bhi humare jhagdon se tang aa gaye honge...........😊

both shake hands n smile.............


i kno guys bohot late late update kar rahi hun........ but i gt no tym due 2 classes........... newayz hope url lyk dis part...............n plz keep commenting.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update loved it

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey wow..
amazing update
loved it
continue soon and this time pls update soon..
will be waiting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice job
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update.

continue soon.
plz pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing udpate
loved mayurs convo at the end
add me in ur pm list n do pm me wenever u update

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