MY 1ST FF...(updated part 6)

Hey guys m Jasneet... This is my 1st attempt on writing a ff... hope u lyk it... plz read n do cmmnt...😊

Intro: Mayank, Nupur, Samrat, gunjan studying in excel colg... Mayank -Nupur in same class n Sam- Gunjan in same class jst lyk original... Now d difference strts... Nupur taking Gunjan's Samrat's nd sum oder studnts of deir stnd's tuitions at her home... Mayur hate each odr... Samrat flirting wid both nupur n gunjan... n ya der r sum new characters in d stry...[/B]


The story strts wid nupur taking tuitions...[BR
]Nupur is writing on d board suddenly she hears sum1 talkin... she turns nd strts...


N: Yes Mr. Samrat Shergill... kya hua???


S: Oh plz mam muje sam nhi to sammy kahiye but mr samrat shergill sounds too budha... aur me abhi buddha thode hi hua hu...


N: (smiles)By God apni hi teacher se flirting kr rhe ho... kya tumhare stndrd ke log apne colg me isi tara s teacher's k saath flirting krte hai???
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S: nhi mam hamare colg me ap jaisi sundar aur cute teacher kaha???


N: Oh to ab ye bhi meri galti hai???


S: nhi upar wale ki jisne apko itna sundar aur cute banaya...


N: Oh... chalo ab padhai karo...Dekho gunjan kitne ache se padh rhi hai... hamesha padhai me dhyan lagati hai...


S: (nw flrts wid gunjan) wahi to mene kitni bar chashmish se kaha ki itna mat padho pr aapki behan sunti kahan hai...


N: Kya?? Samrat tum to use bhi bigad doge...

Suddenly fone rings...


N: me dekhke ati hu...
(picks up d fne) Hello...


d odr side: hello nupur beta kaisi ho??? me Rama bol rhi hu...


N: Oh mam aap... aapne muje kaise yaad kiya???


R: kya hai na beta muje kuch kaam se sheher ke bahar jana hai... aur mere students jo tumhari std me hai unke xams hai... isliye me soch rhi thi ki agr tum unke saath padhti to unki kuch help ho jati... aur unme se 1 ko shayad tum janti ho tumhari hi colg se he...


N: acha unke naam kya hai???


R: Ravi, Sheela aur...


Suddenly sum1 calls out 2 nupur frm hr studnts... meanwhile R says d 3rd nme........ MAYANK...

Nupur doesn't hear...
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N: ha aa rhi hu.... tum board pe jo likha hai padho...

(den turns 2 d fne) Ha theeke mam aap unhe mere paas bhej dijiye... pr subah me tuitions leti hu to aap unhe dupahar me 3 baje bhej dijiyega...


R: theeke... thnx beta... bye...

N: are mam aap tomeri teachr hai aap kyu thnx bol rhi hai ye to mea farz hai... Acha Bye...


Comes 2 students...
N: acha to theeke aak humne jo bhi seekha wo kl padhke ana me test lungi... ok... bye...


All say bye n leave...

N: gunjan tu apne kamre me ja... aur ha thoda music sun lena aaram milega kitna padhegi...


G: ji di...

In d aftrnun...

D door bll rings...


Nupur opens d door with a smile bt as it opens hr smile changes to a frown...

N: Tum???????? (den realizing oders around) oh aap sab Rama mam ke studnts hai... aaiye na...


She takes dem 2 hr room n asks...

N: aap sab ke naam kya hai???


they ans..Ravi, Sheela, Mayank


N: (trying 2 smile wid a frown) Mr mayank aap mere saath aenge muje kuch books lani hai...


M: Sure nupurji...
(outside d room)

N:tum yahan kya kr rhe ho???


M: muje kya pta tha ki tum ho mam ki choice...


N: (wid atitude)dekha mera naam kahan kahan tak faila hai?? tumhari teachr tak muje recmmnd krti hai...


M: faila hoga pr me aur tumhare saath... kabhi nhi padh sakta... me ja rha hu tumhare sath padhne se acha akele hi padhu...


N: (in a figthin way) to tumhare sath bhi kaun pdhna chahta hai... jao na...

(aftr he goes...) by God kitna akdu ladka hai acha hua khud hi chala gaya...


(nupur making arrngemnts fr ravi n sheela wen fone rings)


R: Nupur ye kya tumne Mayank ko wapas bhej diya...


N: ha mam me uske sath nhi padh skti... hum dono to dushman hai...


R: dekho nupur beta tum bas apna gussa sambhalo... aur samjho na mene Mayank ki mummy se wada kiya tha ki jane se pehle use 1 achi student ki company me chodke jaungi... agr ab wo akela padhega to me uski mummy ko kya jawab dungi? tum meri pareshani samjho na...


N: (dil pe patthar rakh ke) theeke mam lekin use keh dijiye ki mujse jhagda na kare...


R: tum dono bas apne gusse pr kabu rakho... me use samjhake bhejti hu... Bye...


N: bye mam...


Aftr sum tym d door bll rings...


N: zarur pizza wala hoga mene mangaya tha na...

(she takes her purse n goes towards door... opens it n without seeing n lukin in hr prse tells...)
Kitna hua bhaiya???


M: Bhaiya???


N: (lukin up)(sees him n frowns) oh tum... ao aur jake us room me baitho me ati hu...


M: (starts goin bt den stops n says) madam...


(nupur feels happy he cald hr mam n trns smiling)


M: sirf hume hi nhi aapko bhi padhna hai... hum aapse sikhne nhi balki saath padhne aye hai...


N: (angry at his masti wala madam) (wid a frown cum smile) ha jao na me ati hu...
(he goes...)
(to hrself) hey bhagwan me iske sadu ke saath kaise padhungi... mujpe daya karo...
par kya karu mam se wada kiya hai ki unke ane tak me isse acha bartav karungi... chalo ab kuch din is akdu ko bhi seh lenge.............





thats all fr now guys hope u lykd it... plz do cmnt...




Regards,

Jasneet...

Actly i had strtd dis topic as an os bt convrted it 2 an ff so i'v re-posted my 3 parts here...
PART 2.-

Nupur gusse me aakar andar chali jati hai sab ke saath padhne k liye…

Nupur: hey guys chalo padte hain…

Ravi, Sheela: sure…

(thode time baad)
(Nupur bore ho jati hai…)
Nupur: guys tum log kuch khaoge kya muje both bore ho rha hai…

Mayank: ms.nupur bhushan padhte same khate nhi hai… ek waqt pr ek hi kaam kiya karo…

(Nupur gives him an angry look)
Ravi: ha nupur plz kuch khane ko lao na… padte padte neend aa rhi hai…

Sheela: ha nupur hum pad pad ke bore ho gye hai… ab frnd ke saath padne ka koi to fayda hona chahiye… Rama mam to kabhi khane nhi deti…….
(in nupur's ears)
Sheela: mam Mayank ki deewani jo hai… (luks at mayank n smiles) bilkul meri tarah…

(nupur luks at hr den mayank den her den mayank… she is shocked)

Nupur(2 hrself): by god is sadu ko bhi koi pasand kr sakta hai… wo bhi koi ladki… by god… kahin me sapna to nhi dekh rhi…(pinches hrself)…

Nupur: neways… guys tum biscuits khaoge ya chips… aur cold drink to loge na???

Mayank: (grins to himself): nupur tumne kya ghar pe general stores khol rakha hai???

Nupur: (angry bt tries 2 cntrol): dekho mayank tumhe nhi khana to mat khao… par aise hamare khane par nazar mat lagao…

Ravi: arre nupur chodo na… jao dono bhi le ao…

Nupur: theeke…

(nupur goes n brings d snacks)

(all r eating n studying)

(nupur purposely goes near mayank n makes sounds of eating in his ears 2 disturb him)

Mayank: nupur tum ye kya kr rhi ho??? Ya to aawaz mat karo ya fir dur jakar baitho… mujhe disturb ho rho hai…

Nupur:to muje kaunsa shauk hai tumhare paas ane ka… kahi tum hume khate dekh jal to nhi rhe ho??? Tum chahte ho to kha sakte ho… mene mana nhi kiya…

Mayank: agar muje khana hoga to me le lunga… waise aapki permission k liye shukriya ms. Nupur…

Nupur: (ekdum style me) oh ur Welcum…

PART 3:

(Sab padhke ja chuke hai)
(nupur goes 2 gunjan's bedroom)

G: di tum hamesha mayank se ladti kyu rehti ho?
N: gunjan… me ladti hu??? Tune use nhi dekha wo meri har baat ko kitna tokta hai....
G: di par…
N: dekh gunjan tu mujse uske bare me mt baat kr… aur waise tu behan meri hai ya uski??? Uski itni tarref kyu k rhi hai.??? Tuje lagta hai me jaan puchkar usse jhagda krti hu??? me buri hu???
G: di di di… bas… me to sirf itna keh rhi thi ki mayank ek acha ladka hai tumhe usse dosti kr leni chahiye… kuch logon ki tarah nhi…(thks abt samrat's flrting)
N: dekh gunjan tu mayank ko nhi janti… wo both hi sadu ladka hai… (gets angry n sad) isliye me to usse baat nhi karungi…
G: (sees nupur's sad face) arre meri di to bura maan gyi… by god ab me aise kabhi nhi bolungi… theeke…
N: (smiles) hmm…
(both hug each odr n go 2 sleep)

(Next day is a holiday)

(mayank thnks us din zyada padhai krni chahiye to he speaks to ravi n sheela abt it n dey agree… he tells sheela to tell nupur… bt she frgts)
(as usual gunjan subah subah uthkar terrace pe jati hai padhne ke liye n mayank abse pehle nupur ke ghar aata hai)

(door bell rings)
N: (wid a towel in her wet hair n wiping hr face with its end) aa rahi hu baba… kahin aag lagi hai kya… ye gunjan bhi na kitni baar kaha hai jab terrace pe jaye to chabi lekar jaye par ye ladki…

(opens d door)

(both mayank n nupur c each other)
(dey have an eyelock or a few minutes)

(den nupur realizes n asks)

N: tum ? yahan? Is waqt?

M: ha wo…
(before mayank can complete)
N: kya wo ha??? Tum muje milne ke bahane dhundhte ho kya???

M: kya??? Tum pagal ho gyi ho??? Kya baat kar rhi ho.???

(suddenly sheela comes)

S: oh Mayank tum aa gye… (n smiles)

N: sheela tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho???

S: kuch nhi…(in mayank's dreams… she's staring at him n mayu feels odd)

M: sheela nupur kuch puch rhi hai…

S: oh… kya hua nupur???

N: tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho???

S: oh… m soo sorry mayank n nupur… actly mayank me nupur ko batana bhul hi gayi ki hum aaj jaldi aenge padhne ko…

M: kya??? Sheela tumhe ek to kaam diya tha…

N: sheela tum muje bata deti to me taiyaar hokar baithti na…
Neways ab tum dono wo room me jaakar baitho me aati hu…

S: theeke… n sorry once again ha…

N: its ok ab jao…

(mayank n sheela go to d room)
(aftr sum time ravi also comes n all of dem start studying)

(while studying nupur ke geele baal mayank ke muh pe lagte hai)
(pehle wo khota hai jst fr few seconds n den realizing gets angry n says)

M: nupur tum plz apne baal sukhakar ao… meri books par paani pad raha hai…

N: mayank baalon ko naturally sukhne dena chahiye nahi to wo kharab ho jate hai…

M: nupur… chodo… tum meri baat to sunogi nahi… yato apne baal us taraf rakho nahi to……….. ek kaam karo sheela tum mere baju me baith jao…
(sheela's shocked 2 hear mayank's words… she's super duper exited… she goes n sits nxt 2 mayu…)
(she's just staring at mayank)

M: (2 himself) agar ye isi tarah muje ghurti rahi to na khud padhegi na muje padhne degi…

(den purposely)

M: (to ravi) ravi ye sum dekhna to…

R: (ravi comes nxt 2 mayu) kaunsa?

M: sheela ek kaam karogi plz toda udhar shift ho jao na ravi ko yaha baithne do…

S: sure…( shifts bt is sad)
( lukin at dis nupur feels lyk laughin)

M: nupur tum ha kyu rhi ho?

N: (trying 2 cntrol hr laugh) me kahan has rhi hu???

M: chodo tumse to baat krna hi bekaar hai…

N: to tumse kisne kaha baat karne ko…


Thats it guys for dis tym… I kno its little long… but don't frgt 2 leave ur commnts…

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee parts dear

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PART 4:
hey guys i have updated this ff after a very long tym...
so i wrote a long part... hope u lyk...
Next day in colg
Nupur is talking 2 Ravi

N: Ravi muje ye chapter samajh nahi aa raha… plz samjha do na…

R: sure… kaunsa dikhao zara…

R: arre ye wala… ye kaunsa hai meri text buk me to nahi hai…
(checks the cover page)

R: arre nupur sorry me tumhe help nahi kar sakta… kyuki ye mera subject nahi hai… par ha mayank tumhe help kar sakta hai… aakhir tumhare saare subjects same hi to hai… ryt???

N: same to hai par us akdu se baat kaun kare… aur mene agar usse help li to to wo aasmaan me udne lagega… no ways…

R: chodo na nupur… usse puch lo… agar usse nahi aega to tumhare saamne uska popat ho jaega, aur agar aa gaya to tumhara kaam ho jaega… waise do as u wish… par mai tumhari help nahi kar sakta … sorry… acha ab mai chalta hu… class shuru honewali hai… bye…

N: bye…
To herself: waise Ravi ne baat to sahi kahi…chalo ek baar puchke dekhte hai… shayad aaj ache mood me ho…

She sees 1 girl n asks her: tumne mayank ko kahin dekha hai kya???

Girl: ha wo library main hai…

N:thnx…
To herself: by god ye to poora samay library me hi baitha rehta hai… pata nahi kitna padhta hai…

She goes 2 lirary n sees mayank

N: hi mayank…

M:oh no! aa gayi miss morena express…

N:kuch kaha tumne???

M:mene? Nahi to… kya hua kuch kaam tha?

N:ha wo actually mujhe ye chapter samaj nahi aa raha tha… kyat um muje samjha doge…

M 2 himself:by god ye bhi padhti hai…… BY GOD???

N: mayank kya hua tum kaha kho gaye…

M:nahi kuch nahi aao me tumhe samjhata hu…

He starts explaing…

M: aajkal humare paas kitne modes hain media ke…usi kea are me chapter hai… its easy bas words twisted hai to thodi mushkil hoti hai samajhne me… no problem…

N: ok…

M: ha… to jaisa kit um jaanti ho ki aajkal television is d fastest mode of media… tv pe kitne shows aate hain jo log enjoy karke dekhte hai…

N: nahi par best to films hi hoti hain… aur wo bhi shahrukh wali… hai mera hero….(strts dreaming about shahrukh)

M:nupur kya hum yahan jo likha hai uspar concentrate karen… tumhare shahrukh ki film hum baadme discuss karenge…

N: offo mayu tum kitne sadu ho…

M:mayu???

N: wo galti se nikal gaya…

M:tumhe kaise pata ki maa…

N:maa kya???

M:kuch nahi lets concentrate on our studies…

N:fyn…

suddenly some1 going from there drops nupur's 1 book…

both mayank n nupur bend to pick it up n dtheretheir heads collide which leads to an eyelock…

then both realize n down their eyes n start lookin here n there…
they get up n their eyes meet again n they start laughing…

suddenly some1 tells: shhh… keep silence…

both stop laughing…

N: by God mayank tum haste bhi ho…
M: kyu hasne pe tumhara copyright hai kya…

N:nahi matlab tumhe dekhke aisa lagta nahi kit um haste hoge…

M: kya y???

N:tum itne sadu jo ho…

N she runs away laughing… 1st mayank keeps seeing her n smiles n den realizes n hits his head n starts studying again…...

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