FF *~*Mera Dil Teri Dharkan*~*Updated chp17 pg44

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Hi guys, I'm new on this forum..can't say new actually😆 i'm on the forum since last year october just made an accout finally. I had this ff in mind thought of posting it hope you like it.


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Lalit Juneja and Balraaj Maan are best friends and business partners. Lalit lives in London with his family and handles the business there. He has three children Kulraj, Prem and Preet all of them were brought up in London .Kulraj is soon getting married to Kiran although she is brought up here still she is a very traditional girl. Prem is in the last year of college he is a very big flirt and so is Preet he is in second last year. All the girls in college die over Prem, Sanjana is his best friend. He is very close to his brother and they share everything. Prem and Preet have never been to India they think it's damn boring there are no hot girls, no clubs,no discos.

Balraaj lives in Mumbai with his family his younger brother Balwant his wife Daljeet and their daughters Vishaka and Aslesha live with them. Tegi died 9 years back and since then Balraaj had taken very good care of his daughters Heer and Meher. Heer is in the last year of college she is very stylish and sexy girl and all the boys in college want to be her boyfreind but she is not interested in anyone. Heer and Meher are very close to each other and they are very obedient girls love their father alot and will never go against him.

Kulraaj is getting married very soon Lalit invites Balraaj and his family to London for her wedding.

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Index
chapter 1 pg 1
chapter 2 pg 3
chapter 3 pg 6
chapter 4 pg 8
chapter 5 pg 11
chapter 6 pg 13
chapter 7 pg 15
chapter 8 pg 18
chapter 9 pg 21
chapter 9 pg 21
chapter 10 pg 25
chapter 11 pg 28
chapter 12 pg 31
chapter 13 pg 33
chapter 14 pg 37
chapter 15 pg 39
chapter 16 pg 41
chapter 17 pg 44
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Chapter 1

Beeb! beeb! beeb! went the alarm clock slowly a hand stretched out of the comforter nd switched it off.

Prem in a sleepy voice"why the hell does this alarm clock ring so early." He turned to the other side and went to sleep again.

Half an hour later his phone rang lying in bed he answered the call "hello?" Sarah"hi Prem." Prem"hi" Sarah"can we go to college together today?" Prem"sure sweetheart..I'll pick you" Sarah"okay I'm waiting" Prem"already..its so early" Sarah"no it's almost time for college." He turned to see the time"shit" Sarah"what happened?" Prem"nothing..I'll be there" he hung up and jumped out of bed to get ready.

He took a quick shower and got ready messing up the whole cupboard. Before going he looked in the mirror again and fingercombed his hair "I look hotter that yesterday..I'm just so good."

He came downstairs everyone was having breakfast Lalit was busy reading the newspaper Prem"good morning dad good morning mom" Lalit without removing his eyes from the newspaper"good morning" Gayatri"good morning beta" he hit preet's head playfully Prem"good morning preet good morning di."

Preet suffed the last peice of toast in his mouth"your late" he stood up to leave Prem sat"no I'm not" Preet"yes you are" Prem"I'm never late Preet your early." He started having breakfast. Preet"fine your choice" he left for college. After having breakfast Prem went.

He stopped the car infront of Sarah's house. She was already waitng for him she came and sat in the car"what took you so long." Prem"I was completing my homework." Sarah"oh please Prem I know you, you never do your homework." Prem"if you know then why are you asking, anyway lets go." Sarah"we'll be late" Prem"no we won't."

His phone rang Sanjana's name was flashing on the screen. Sanjana''where are you?'' Prem"Sanju I am about to reach the college." Sanjana" yeah yeah I know you must be with one of your girlfriend." Prem"obviously" he hung up.

They reached college just on time Sarah"your the best Prem we're on time" Prem''I know'' she kissed his cheek and went to her class.

Prem was going to his class when a girl called him"hi Prem" Prem turned ''hi gorgeous'' girl"you remember me?" Prem''of course Jane'' girl"my name's Jeniffer by the way'' Prem''oh..I think Jane suits you more'' Jane exited''really..if you say so" they started talking.

After ten minutes he realised he was late for class Prem''I have to go..we'll talk later" Jane"bye." He quickly went class already started. The door was open and the teacher was explaining something. He said to himself ''great.'' Sanjana was sitting infront she looked at Prem and moved ther head negetively.

Mrs Thomous started writing something Prem turned around and started walking backwards inside the class. As soon as she turned he stepped forward Mrs Thomous shouted ''Prem!! how dare you try to leave my!!!" Prem innocently''no miss..I was just going to close the door there is a really hot girl outside and I couldn't concentrate on your lecture because of her'' the whole class burst into laughter hearing this.

Mrs Thomous''I know you very well Prem..get back on your seat.''
He went and sat next to Sanjana. Sanjana''how do always manage to get in class" Prem proudly''because I'm Prem Juneja'' Sanjana''yea right'' Prem''why do always have to sit infront Sanju."

Mrs Thomous angrily''Prem this is the second time your disturbing my class today.'' The bell rang she was very angry now''look now all because of you the whole class is wasted'' Prem"what did I do it's all your fault you wasted the whole class'' Mrs Thomous was fuming with anger''Prem I would like to talk to you ALONE!'' Prem''but I wouldn't like to talk to you I've got much better things to do'' Mrs
Thomous''come with me NOW!'' He said in a low voice''b****'' and went behind her.

They were standing in the corridor Mrs Thomous was going on about how unattentive he is in class Prem was least bothered about what she was saying. A girl passed near them he blew a flying kiss.


Mrs Thoumous''PREM!!'' Prem turned towards her ''you were saying something?'' She was getting very irritated now''leave it'' and went.

He went to the canteen Sanjana, Sameer, Preet, Arjun and Arohi were chatting he joined them.

Prem''why is she always mad at me?'' Sanjana sarcastically''maybe because you were being so sweet to her'' Arjun sarcastically''he's always sweet to girls'' Prem''GIRLS!!!! not aunties'' all of them started laughing.

Arohi''what class do you guys have next?'' they started telling Preet''I have maths'' Sanjana''i have chemistry'' Sameer''me too'' Prem''lets bunk'' Sanjana''no way'' Prem''come on Sanju your such a a nerd'' Sanjana''whatever come on.''

He saw a girl''you go I'll come'' Sanjana''no we'll be late and besides she is so ugly'' she dragged him to class.

India:

A girl is practicing basketball after the college. She is wearing a sleeveless tank top and a mini skirt her long hair tied in a pony tail. Another girl came in the basketball court"Heer its time to go home will you stop it now."

Heer"just 2 minutes Simran." Simran"your crazy about basketball. Now will you please hurry up!" Heer"okay I'm coming."

Heer came they both started to walk towards the college gate Heer"have you completed your science project." Simran"not yet Heer you know i am not a nerd like you." Heer" whatever!" Simran"okay bye Heer my car is here" Heer"see you tomorrow."

Heer gave her a tight hug and Simran went. Heer was making her way to the front gate of the college a boy came"hi Heer." Heer pleasantly"hi" Boy"shall i drop you home?" Heer"no thanks my sister is waiting for me."

Boy"oh come on Heer." Heer"excuse me! who the hell are you to force me." Heer tried to leave but the boy came infront "bye! and you are looking super hot today." Heer"shut up! get a side now." Heer went.

She saw Meher and went near her "hi Meher, how was your day?" Meher" fine di lets go home I'm really tired." Heer"okay but where are Aslesha and Vishaka?" Meher"how am I suppose to know?" Heer"okay! calm down I'll call them.''

Vishaka came"hi Heer hi Meher ets go home." Heer"but where is Aslesha?" Vishaka"she is already gone with her boyfriend." They all went home.

They reached home Balraaj was witing for them Meher"hi dad! why did you come so early today?" Balraaj"actually I wanted to give all of you a very good news'' Heer''what?'' Barlaaj''we are going to London next week."

Vishaka''London thats awesome'' Heer"but why dad?" Balraaj"Kulraaj is getting married next month Lalit called today he wants us to come early" Heer"thats great dad."

Meher"thank god atleast we will get rid of these studies for some time." Heer"Meher we are having vacations after 2 weeks." Meher"please di it's just one week and how can we miss kul di's wedding?''
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awasome update.................try to update next part soon.........................
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nice one. do continue soon.
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awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.

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awesome nd lovely update
waiting for the next
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Superb part !
Loved it !
Waiting for Premeers first meting !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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great start... waiting for premeer and Meet first meeting....continue soon
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awesmeee..just luvd it.....waiting for premeers meeting....continue soon and add me to ur pm list.
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hey i loved your ff
its great
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