I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN!!FINALL PART- 4 UPDATED PG 8

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GUYS this is more of a os kind but i wish this happens in DMG!! this is the continuation 2 d story wats going on in DMG!THE CURRENT TRACK I HOPE U LIKE IT this is the first time i m gonna write something on IF so if u want me 2 continue then let me know!
PART-1
OK the story is according to the current track.armaan forces ridhimma to say the truth to sid about what happened between them in the tent and ask her to accept the fact that she is still not moved on from her past. ridhimma finally realises that yes she has not still moved on from her past.but she is still not happy to accept her feeling she is all over confused with her emotions she herself is not able to understand what she wants in life she is dead scared to tell sid the truth but she somehow gathers the courage to tell sid the truth.
its early in the morning and ridhimma goes to sid
sid is all happy happy to see ridhimma come in ,there is a small eyelock the two share ridhimma is thinking sid i m sorry par ab bass mein tumse sac
h nahi chupa sakti
she goes close 2 sid and says: SID mein
tumse kuch kehna chati hoon.
and her heart at the same time was saying something else.


sid:bolo ridhimma

ridz:sid.......after a pause she breaks down and says mujhse bahut badi ghalti hogayi

sid:he is shocked his brain started thinking about armaan and ridhimma but his heart said no sid ridhimma cannot break u r trust
he asks kya hua ridhimma

ridz:she tells the whole scence wat happened between her and armaan

sid:his heart was broken into pieces every word of ridhimma was breaking it more his eyes were filled with tears of pain,his trust was broken,his heart was weeping.

ridz:she could feel the pain what sid was going through she couldnt look back into sid's eyes she at that point just wanted to hug sid and say i m sorry i dint want to hurt you but she couldnt even take a step forward towards him her heart just wanted to erase this moment for life but she knew it was not possible

sid:he without uttering a word sayz ridhimma tum se ek baat puchu

ridz:haan sid sid mein.......shes crying

sid:humari shadi ke din jab mein ne tumse armaan ke bare mein kaha tha toh phir bhi tum shadi karne ke liye tayar kyoun hogayi aur jab hum mandap mein the kya tumhe armaan ki fikar ho rahi thi???????????

this question was to decide the future of sidhimma this was the question which shattered ridhimma and on the other side sid was still hoping that ridhimma will say no, but his mind knew the answer but his heart which loved ridhimma unconditionally was expecting a NO!!!

ridhimma's condition was more pathetic she was shattered by this question she did not want sid to know the answer 'coz even she knew if she said yes then sid would be broken but she dint want to lie also her heat was screeming why did i do this why did i think about armaan she was crying crying and crying she couldint say anything she was just silent

sid was waiting for her answer but he got silence from her and he knew the answer.it was YES!he was broken into pieces he couldnt face ridhimma 'coz he knew if he saw her all broken he cannot control himself his emotions which just said whatever happened can be erased he was ready 2 forgive her, at that moment he just wanted to go and take her into his arms and make her calm but his mind said that ridhimma never loved you she still loves armaan YOU HAVE NO RIGHT ON HER. and he says nothing and leaves from there locks himself into a dark room.

on other side ridhimma wanted to kill herself she couldnt see sid in pain 'coz of her.she decides to go to sid but couldnt gather courage to face him.she decides to leave him alone then she wipes off her tears and thinks she should go to the hospital and leaves to hospital.
there she meets armaan in the locker room

K GUYS IF U WANT ME TO CONTINUE WITH THIS THEN LET ME KNOW TILL THEN enjoy this part.do leave u r comments about this part

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start 👍🏼
plz continue and PM me when u update it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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continue it pleaseee!! and can u also add me to ur pm list once u have written the next part? thank youu 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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86 views and only 3 reply!!! so i m suppose 2 continue!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plzzz. continue its really nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start and continue it.........
and please pm me..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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please do continue! it's really good and it seems realistic too =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice...pm me if u update it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was very nice dear
u really should continu with this
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please continue....N really hoping something like this happens fast

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