I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN!!FINALL PART- 4 UPDATED PG 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really continue please...do the honours
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awesome..plzzz continue n plzzz pm me wen u update the next part..i

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Very nice.....please do continue if possible!!!
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amazing👏 please do contiune!
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GUYZ in this shilpa's point of view and armman's was suppose to be there but my focus is on sid ridhimma and armaan.
PART-2
IN THE LOCKER ROOM

Ridz:she's all gloomy and sad all the way in the car she was thinking was about sid and she enters the locker room and sees armaan

armaan:he is all excited to see ridhimma hoping that she must have by now said the truth to sid
armaan:ridhimma kya tumne sid ko sab sach bata diya humare bare mein

ridz:she is for some reason is irritated to hear this question and even replies in an irritated tone haan meinne sid ko sach bata diya uska dil tod before she could complete her sentenced armaan huged her

armaan:ridhimma mein nahi bata sakta ki aaj mein kitna kush hoon ab hamare beech koi nahi aa sakta and he remember and asks ridhimma sid ne kya kaha?

ridz:sid.....she starts crying and leaves from there

armaan:ridhimma ko kya hua?then says shayad thodi disturb hogi par koi baat nahi mein usse mana loonga!

scence shifts
back in penthouse sid sitting in a dark room thinking about ridhimma her words echoing in his mind he was trying to accept that ridhimma is no more his,he have to let ridhimma go his situation was exactly like this song tujhe bhula diya last para

Dol pal tujh se juda thha,
Aise phir rasta muda thha,
Tujh se main khone laga,
Juda jaise hone laga,
Mujh se kuch mera

Tu hi mera liye abb kr dua,
Tu hi is dard se kar de juda,
Tera hoke tera jo main na raha,
Main yeh khud se kehta hoon,

Tujhe bhula diya, oh,
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Tujhe bhula diya, oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya.
all he was left was with memories he held his marriage picture close to him and his heart was just weeping then he thinks mein ridhimma ko samjhote ki zindagi jeene ke liye force nahi karsakta,kya hua agar ridhimma mujhse pyaar nahi karti lekin mein toh usse pyaar karta hoon usnne kabhi mujse se yeh kaha bhi nahi mein hi pagal tha jo ye samjbetha ki ridhimma mujse pyaar karti hain meri care karti hain,par ab aur nahi mujhe ridhimma ko apne se door karna hoga use apni manzil ke paas lekar janna hoga uske pyaar ke paas armaan ke paas(u guyz can just feel the pain what he might be going through) agar mein yahan raha toh ridhimma phir se guilty feel karegi jaise woh armman ke liye feel kiya karti thi mein nahi cahta ki meri wajhe se undone ki zindagi par koi asar padhe mera yahan se jana hi theek hoga (he plans 2 go back to U.S) HE PACKS HIS bags and leaves for sanjeevni.
sid leaves and after 5 min ridhimma enters penthouse

at sanjeevni
sid is done with all the formalities.he goes to the locker room meanwhile armaan was to leave sanjeevni he was done with his duties and ready to go home he enters the locker room sees sid
armaan is hesitant and dint know how to confront sid and says hi sid woh actually meri duty khatam ho gayi hain mein ghar ja raha hoon kal milenge k then bye he is about to leave and sid stops him

sid:armaan ruko

armman:turns and looks
he tries to say sid woh......

sid:mein sab janta hoon armaan aur tumhe embarrase hone ki koi zarurat nahi hain yeh toh sab kismat ka khel hain shayed ridhimma kabhi meri thi hi nahi

armaan:sid hum tumhe hurt nahi karna chahte the

sid:armaan its k i understand. mujhe tumhe kuch dena tha

armaan:kya

sid:after a pause gives an envelope

armaan:yeh kya hai

sid:yeh mere aur ridhimma ke divorce papers hain

armaan gives a shocked expression

sid:dont worry meine in par sign kardiya hain bas ridhimma ki sign chahiye aur uske baad mera lawyer sarri formalities puri kar dega kyun mein toh yahan nahi and then stops

armaan:kyoun ki kya sid?

sid:chod na yaar

armaan:tu theek hain na are u sure

sid haan yaar mujhe kya ho sakta mein bahut kush hoon yaar tumdone ke liye and smiles

armaan:sid dekh

sid:armaan jane se pehle tumhe aur kuch dena chahta tha

armaan:is not feeling good somewhere deep down in his heart he knew he was doing wrong but he dint wanted to destroy three lives he comes out of his thoughts and feels he is right he wants ridhimma to be happy and ridhi mma will be happy with him

sid:he gives armman sindoor box and says yeh meri maa ne ridhimma ko diya tha aur ab yeh mere kaam ka nahi yeh ab tumhari amanat hai isse sambhal ke rakhna waise ridhimma isme aur bhi zyada khoobsurat lagti hain.(he was almost lost thinking of her)

armaan:lost in his thoughts and says janta hoon

sid:he hugs armaan

armaan:inside he is feeling guilty but his mind was happy to know that ridhimma will be his forever

sid:comes back from hug and says aaj se ridhimma tumhari and says tayaar rehna ridhimma tumse aaj milne aayegi .

armaan:excited to hear that and says sid i think mujhe chalna chaiye tayari bhi toh karni itne dino ke baad ridhimma ghar aayegi and goes from there

sid:he is standing in the locker room all alone he is trying hard to forget all his moments spent with ridhimma but is not able to all the moment he spent with ridhimma in the locker room is refreshed and he is hating this fact.

precap:ridhimma's feelings,sid leaving ridhimma at armaan's place

criticism is most welcomed!hope u guys r enjoying it while reading and feeling the emotions of each character.

Edited by iqster - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sid can't leave Ridhima 😭
plz update it soon
Thanks for the Pm
Edited by sidhima3jsp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful job could u pm me the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thanks 4 d PM
n once again a beautiful part updated..

m almost cryin reading this n thinkin of hw sid wud feel.. 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshd_fan

hey thanks 4 d PM
n once again a beautiful part updated..

m almost cryin reading this n thinkin of hw sid wud feel.. 😭

u r welcome
thanks 4 liking it
n yeah ppor sid!!!:'(

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