Zabardast Masala Scene Today

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Sorry I needed a catch phrase. Well I am back. As I promised I am writing another scene for everyone . I know I left everyone in shock last time with the kiss, so today the scene is gonna be zabardast😉. I hope you all have fun reading it and please do post your comments. Today we will get to see angad and Kripa together so stay happy. It is just one day. Just hope that nothing stupid happens in it today even though it would be funny. If you did not get to read my first five scene from which this is continuing from please do so. The scenes are in order. Here it goes:

First Scene

😊It all starts from the rain scene😭(raindrops of sorrow because they still aren't in love) -

Kripa tells angad that she will not get into the car till he starts it. It is pouring cats and dogs. He is like whatever and puts his jacket over his face(btw , wouldn't the seats be wet, how can he sit like that). Kripa is standing outside the car soaked from head to toe. Angad looks up and sees her shivering and she looks terrified. Kinda of sick. He thinks in his head, (why is she doing this, why is she so stubborn, she irritates me so much). The Kripa suddenly drops something(whatever you want it to be) and she is about to bend to pick it up as Angad is still peeking at her. As she gets up, out of nowhere angad "jumps" out of his car. You can hear the water splash as he jumps. It glistens everywhere as the camera goes up following kripa. When she is straight and standing up, she is with angad face to face. He has on this stubborn look and she says: "are you going to start the car or what?". Angad keeps looking at her and ..............he picks her up! She demands angad to let her down. He does not listen and goes around the car. He then drops her into the back seat and demands her to stay there.😡 As she is about to disobey him, he turns around and tells her that she dare not to get out of there and she must stay quiet till they get to pune. He says it in a mean but husband "like" way😳. She is shocked of how he said it to her and she remains quiet. As he starts the car, he sees kripa stick her tongue😛 at him with an irritated look. Angad ignores, throws his jacket into her face telling her to cover herself and presses race on the car😈. The car leaves in great speed. As they are driving to pune, Angad peeks at kripa and notices that she is fast asleep🥱. The rain stops. Angad then finds a dabba and stops to get food for both(how sincere of him). After he buys the food, he pulls kripa's arm to wake her up. He feels that it is hot and checks her forehead. It is burning up. He gets out of the car and asks a man if there is any medical help around. The man tells him there is a nurse's log cabin a short distance from the dabba. As angad goes back to get kripa, she is missing😕. He looks all around and notices her dragging herself to a lake. As she is about to trip and fall into the lake, angad runs in super speed to save her. By the time kripa's face is touching the water(the tip of her nose, her hair, the tip of her lips, mainly the tip of her face), angad catches her. His arm is around her waist as if they knelt down as they were going to turn away during a salsa dance. At this moment, Angad sees kripa as if she was about to die from sleepiness🤢, her face slightly wet with water drops, her hair wet and sticking to her face. Even though kripa does not notice, Angad has a face that clearly shows that he has just witness the great innocence in kripa's face as if God just dropped an angel into his lap. This is the romantic part❤️.

Second Scene

This is the second part. Hop you have fun reading it . EnjoyThis starts from when Angad catches Kripa(how sweet):

Even though kripa does not notice, Angad has a face that clearly shows that he has just witness the great innocence in kripa's face as if God just dropped an angel into his lap😳.(This is the romantic part.) Angad does not know if it is real or fake. He has a look on that is saying, where did she come from she's so beautiful. Just about the moment he is about to touch her face, she falls unconscious. He is back to reality. He notices that it is Kripa he is holding, the girl is hates the most😡. He makes an irritated face and tells himself, "Are, ab is ko kahan lajayu mein". Then he remembers what the man said. He picks her up and starts walking into the woods to find the log cabin. As he is going, he gets tired. He lays Kripa on the ground. As he rests, a snake falls from on top. He gets scared and jumps. His back lands on Kripa hardly and she is awaken. As she realizes Angad is putting all his weight on her🤢, she pushes him away and says how heavy are you, what the hell do you eat. As Kripa is saying this, Angad realizes that the snake was made out of rubber😆. He's thinking what the hell is a rubber snake doing in a forest. Then he hears what Kripa says, he turns around and looks at her surprisingly😳. Then he remembers what she said. He tells her:

If it wasn't for me you would have drowned. She replies: I would rather drown than travel with you. At least I don't get scared by a rubber snake(she says this with an "I am scared of nothing look"). Then angad yells bear and she jumps very quickly and hits a tree hurting herself. Angad starts laughing hysterically. As she is about to something back, Kripa sees something in front of her and points at it. Angad thinks that she was just doing that to make him look stupid until he hears a growl. He turns around A bear is standing in front of them🤢. Kripa says "Angad running. The bear chases them and after a while it stops. Angad and Kripa don't realize this and are stilling running. As they are running they keep blaming each other. Then they come upon the log cabin Angad found out about. A kid is playing outside and he notices them. He yells Nana and a old lady comes out of the cabin saying, don't you dare hurt my baby. She realizes it is just a couple. She says sorry and asks the "couple" Kripa and Angad what is it that they need. Angad blurts out that Kripa was sick and a man told him that a nurse lived somewhere in the woods. She replies that she is the nurse and asks who is sick. Angad says that Kripa was but it looks like she isn't anymore. Kripa makes a look that says "how mean😡" and the lady tells her that just to check she will take Kripa's temperature. The lady takes Kripa in and asks Angad to stay outside. Angas\d then notices the kid again and remembers the rubber snake. He goes up to the kid and asks him if he lost a toy snake the kid says no but he did put a rubber snake in a tree to scare foreigners away. Angad laughs and says Good technique. They become friends while Kripa is having her checkup. Inside the cabin, as the lady is checking Kripa she asks stupid questions such as is that guy your husband or did you guys run away from home. Kripa tells her that they are not a couple and that they are just traveling together. The checkup is finished and as she is about to open the door a bucket of cockroaches fall on her. Today all it is mostly comedy but the next part is romantic.

3rd Scene

The roaches pour all over her😵. At first she screams but then realizes that they were made out of rubber. Angad say whle laughing very hard😆 "who's scared now, see what you get for messing with me." Kripa says, "you did this, I can't believe this". Then she starts chasing angad and angad tries to get away. It is a very big forest. As she is running Angad bumps into a lot of stuff. When she is about to catch him, he hits a tree and falls on Kripa. Frightened Kripa moves and they are rolling on the ground😳. When they stop rolling, he is staring into her eyes😳 as If he has seen a shining star⭐️ up close. She is about to say something but angad does not notice. Then she says with a hurt look saying, Angad you scratched your arm. Angad is like huh? She says "your arm". He stares at his arm and the blood is just gushing out😭. They both get up sitting. Kripa picks up her dupatta to rip a bandage for angad but sees that it is dirty from the ground. Then she thinks of what to do as Angad gets up. Then as she is sitting on the ground, she grabs his hand before she starts walking. She says wait. She rips a piece of her kameez to put on his arm😳 . As she is doing this, the song from maine dil tujhko diya "Bin tere kuch nahin hai" should be on. He keeps staring at her as she ties the piece around his arm. When she looks up, she sees a glimmer in his eyes but tries to avoid it by saying😉, chale. Then as the are heading back to the cottage, she starts talking. She is saying that they could have gotten a bandage from the nurse. He gets irritated and says if it is like that he will give her the cloth back. As he is about to take it off, Kripa puts her hand on his hand and says, " why are you so stubborn, chill and don't touch the wound, it will get worse. Dimwit🤬"

He makes a annoyed face and then behind her back, he makes a strangling gesture as if he wishes to strangle her😈. She just keeps talking about something while angad calms down and goes from an annoyed face to a relaxed smile😃. When the get back to the cottage, they get a fresh bandage for angad. Angad decides to "keep" the cloth kripa gave to him😉. They say bye to the kid and the nurse as if they were all very close and head back to the car. As they head to the car, they decide to buy some food from the dabba. Then they start to head out for pune. As they are driving, Kripa is talking about what will happen in pune while angad just flashes back to all the memories he had with Kripa. Then he hears Kripa saying " are you listening, angad?" He says yes he was. Then she says," Listen I am going to go straight to Nainital from pune. I don't want to go to nainital from mumbai because then dadi and harshini and mishti plus prithvi will tell her to stay back. I want you to forget the bad memories of us and do me a favor. He is shocked😭 but asks what the favor is in a sad way She says can you please let tania sing in your next concert and try to be a nice person. He says okay in a very irritated way😡 because he believes he is not a bad person. She says there is something else. Se wants him to send all her things to nainital. He says "no way😡 do I look like your bell boy. Kripa says yes. Just Kidding. He says he will get Teddy to send her things. She pouts and kicks her and he makes a ouch kinda face😵. My scene stops here.

Fourth Scene

I Believe that Ekta Kapoor did a good job from the pune scenes to the scene where angad confesses his possessiveness to kripa😉 and applies lipstick to her mang putting them into a unknown unnamed relationship😕. I am going to include this into my story and start writing from the part where Kripa is "washing" not wiping the lipstick from her forehead or should I say mang. This is what happens in my story :

Kripa comes out drying her hair and she goes to the mirror. She notices that the lipstick is not gone. She tries to wipe it off with the towel but it does not come off. She pouts😭(still crying) and asks herself why is it not coming off😆. She tries to forget about it but can't. It keeps her up all night. She thinks about what angad did and why. Finally she gets some sleep but only a few hours. She tiredly gets out of bed in the morning because she remembers that she is to meet Mishti and Prithvi at the caf. She takes a shower and goes to the mirror and notices that the lipstick is still in her "mang". She thinks about what to do about it and decides to hide it under a hat till it wears off. She wears a white shirt and black pants and a v- neck sweater on top of the shirt with a at the ones that have the brim going down. She does her hair into two pigtails. She looks like a school girl just the same way she looked in nainital😳. When she gets to the caf, Mishti and prithvi are waiting with .... obviously Angad 😊(mishti always invites him because she is infatuated to him😉. Mishti compliments Kripa that she is looking very cute today and Prithvi agrees😳. She slowly sits down and looks at angad in a very disappointed look. Angad does not respond with eye contact. He can't face her. She holds her head up with her hand. Mishti asks what has happened. Kripa replies that she did not sleep well yesterday. Misti says that she will get fresh coffee and breakfast for anyone. Prithvi and angad are ignoring each other for what happened the other night. Prithvi does not know what to say to Kripa because angad is there so he excuses himself because he need to freshen up a little.(Mishti is the only energetic one today). Angad thinks about what a coward Prithvi is😈(how mean). As Kripa's head keeps falling because of tiredness, angad notices that the lipstick mark is still there. He directly says that, So as I though, you do like me🐷(what a pig but our pig). Kripa tiredly says that she tried to but it will not come off. He replies "maybe it is destined that we have a relationship between us"👏. Kripa says that there is a relationship between them, it is nor of love or friendship but it is also not a relationship of hatred. It is also not a relationship of hatred because there is something between us😊. She decides to leave to leave and says to angad in a very care free way "will u please tell mishti and prithvi that I am very tired today, I apologize for leaving and I will see them tomorrow"😆. Angad is about to comment😡 but Kripa picks up her finger and says "I know you aren't my bloody servant but I am asking this as a favor from a "friend" of a "friend"😆. Before she leaves, she says "please" in a very sweet childish way😳 like nothing happened yesterday. Angad is struck by the cupid's arrow of attraction😉 and seems confused. That's all for today but I will be back tomorrow. Another day without kyph but a day with my imagination. Hope you all had fun reading and if anyone did not read the first 3 scenes of my fan fiction please read the bottom so you are not confused.

Fifth Scene

Angad is left stricken by the cupid's arrow of attraction and is left confused as Kripa leaves the caf😳. He then has a soft confused smile as Kripa has just left the world's happiness and questions into his lap😉. Just then Prithvi comes and asks where Kripa is. Before Angad can say what Kripa said to say, Prithvi accuses Angad that Kripa left because he was bothering her.(how mean😡 )Since Angad is thinking about what Kripa said to him, he just says "whatever" to Prithvi and leaves😆. Mishti comes and notices that everyone left except Prithvi. She asks where they went. Prithvi replies that he does not know where Kripa went ans that Angad must have went to flirt with other girls😆. Mishti does not hear this and says "what" but Prithvi tells her that it is nothing and they should sit down and enjoy a brother sister breakfast😃. They tease each other and start to eat. Now as angad gets to his car, he notices Kripa waiting for a taxi. As he is about to walk toward her, a crowd is stampeding toward a man with a purse in his hand. In this crowd, Kripa gets pushed, pulled, shoved and thrown to the ground. By the time Angad gets there a cloud of dust is clearing. He sees Kripa on the ground all dirty and has scabs all around her arms. She is bleeding and notices angad staring at her. She makes a childish and look at angad. She tries to get up but the scabs sting and her limbs are hurting. Not wanting to, Kripa extends her arm to angad so he can help her up. He does grab her hand but picks her up into his arms👏. She does not tell him to let her down but crosses her arms. She then says that she is not saying anything because he helped her and as a human being, if he can drop her to the doctor she would be thankful(still in his arms like a baby😳). He takes her to the car and as she gets in, he pushes her in😆. She makes a mad face and before she says anything he says "be careful" and smirks😈. Kripa twists her face and looks away. They are at the hospital and he takes her inside. He signs in and takes her to the doctor. As she is going to get her checkup, she tells angad thanks and that he can go. She enters the room and when he is about to leave, a nurse says that he should stay😉 because looking at kripa she might have a fracture and won't be able to go home alone. He stays but as you all know angad he can't stay in one place😆 He starts to walk around the hospital and sees an infant ward. He enters it and picks up a little baby girl and starts to play with her😳(how sweet). Kripa comes out of the room with crutches and a thin cast on her ankle. The previous nurse tells Kripa that her boyfriend😆 is waiting for her(obviously she means angad) The nurse says that he took a left from straight down and Kripa goes the same way. She then sees Angad playing with the little baby girl. She smiles😊 and then angad sees Kripa with the crutches and puts the baby down. He walks toward her and she is still smiling. When he asks what happened. She gestures her head for him to extend his face toward her, He confusingly does it. she just looks at him and ........... kisses him on the cheek😲! Now if you guys and gals want to know why she did that you will have to wait for tomorrow😛. I need to keep some suspense😉 so sorry. I am waiting to tell you all. But waiting has its own reward. Please tell me if I am writing like Ekta Kapoor( 🤢 )or if I am getting boring. I would like to know your opinions so see ya!

Sixth Scene:

She gestures her head for him to extend his face toward her, He confusingly does it. she just looks at him and ........... kisses him on the cheek! He has his eyes wide open and is shocked😲. He stares at her and has a look that says "what was that for". Kripa just says can we go now and angad is like "huh"😕. She repeats let's go and starts to limb out of the hospital. Angad follows her surprised. Since he is not on earth due to what she did, he opens the door for her and when he realizes that nobody is getting in He sees Kripa driving away in a taxi😆. She waves and says thanks😊. He tells himself that he does not really understand this girl but somehow he feels a little too possessive about her and remembers all the Kripa and Prithvi moments. He slams the door he is holding and gets into the car😡. He drives to his house and when he gets there he looks over to the outhouse, she sees Kripa playing with a little puppy😃 from the window(who knows where the puppy came from). He smiles and instead of going into his house he heads out for dadi's house. When he gets there, Dadi is planting some flowers. She tells her acha bacha😃 to come to her and he smiles like a child and starts helping dadi with the flowers. He tells her that he needs some help with his feelings. She asks him what is the matter. He says that there is this girl. Dadi is like ohhhhh. Angad blushes😳 and tells that this girl is not really his friend but not his foe either. She irritates him everytime but he still does not feel like hating her. He tell Dadi that everytime he sees her with another guy he feels that it is wrong. He gets angry fast when she is with someone else😉 (guess who)but he likes to tease her about everything. There is something in her that he wants to keep to himself all his life. He tells Dadi that he becomes possessive of this girl very fast.😉 He does not know what their relationship is. Dadi asks if this girl is special to him. He asks Dadi in what way do you mean. Dadi says "you are so innocent mera bacha". Then he tells Dadi that he also did something kind of upsetting to her. Dadi frowns and asks what he did. He tells her about the lipstick/sindoor moment. Dadi says " aare, you are in love or else you would not do such a stupid and insulting stunt to her. He tells her that he does not believe in love". Dadi says that it is not important to believe in love. It just happens. Once it happens, there is already belief in love. You really love this girl even though you don't realize it and deny it but you do love her. You should tell her even if you think she will reject you. Dadi says that it is very important to express your love to someone before it bottles up inside your heart and your heart is shattered into pieces.👏 👏Angad remembers everything between him and Kripa. everything! Dadi then asks him who the lucky girl is. Angad says that he has to tell that girl before anything wrong happens😆. He hops into his hot sports car and races out with dirty clothes. He is at the outhouse, he enters the outhouse and calls for Kripa. There is only a puppy basket and he notices that Kripa's room is empty. All her belongings are gone. He notices a note on her dressing table. He picks it up. It said: Dear Khanna Family, As I said, I would leave after a month. I am fulfilling my promise. I am never coming back to Mumbai. I am sorry if I have caused anyone any trouble and I thank you all for this great stay. Please give the following note to Dadi. Angad is shocked😭. He can not move. He can not believe that Kripa has left. He turns around and sees a picture of him pinned to the wall and is colored on to resemble a figure like Charlie Chaplin😆. It says, Angad, I will miss you. Love, Kripa. 💔....(his heart broken a million times)Angad tells himself "Love, This is what I get for love, loneliness😭😭😭.

So This is where my sixth scene ends and looks like you all will have to wait some more. Tata!

Kisse ki hona chati hai par,

Kisse_ki_nahin(3)


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Posted: 20 years ago
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wowww...its so long i didnt read the whole thing...i jst read 2 scenes n i really liked it...very nicely written kissi_ki_nahin3 👏
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thanks i really liked it . u did a great job👏
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this looks like brilliant/amazing/wonderful creative work........1 day i will have the patience to read stuff like this, i just wish today was that day......but well done, it must have taken ages, keep up the good work and soon you will be in balaji!!!!!!

i also like the multi coloured writing, so im gonna steal your idea!!!

Jots 😃

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Hm...You sure got my attention😆...Really thought that you were going to describe a rather masaladhar scene here...😕😡😳

Good one...😆

Raksha😛
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hey great work

popst the next part as soon as u can

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey,

i wasn't sure that this type of fiction would be worth reading but i thought i'd read a scene because i had a few minuits to kill....i ended up reading it all and can't wait for more...that was great!😊

Best line in my opinion was:

"it is not important to believe in love. It just happens. Once it happens, there is already belief in love"❤️

Thanks for that...keep up the great work... 👏

Roma

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Posted: 20 years ago
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kisse_ki_nahin3 .........its briliant yaar surb i think iys wicked but not fair cant wait to read the next fiction story
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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏👏👏WOW! Thank you so much you should be writing for KYPH or you should be made co writer, you have an awesome imagination!!👏👏👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey thanx for the sixth scence. It was good. make anagd go to nainital and get kripa back.😊

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