Rang Badalti Odhani Sep 20 2010 Written Update

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Hi Guyssssssssss,
Well, Just to let you all know, the RBO Express, Third edition is up and I want you all to find some time, and read the newspaper with your coffee!!!
Now, Back to our Shanak world! I think it was a rocking episode and I can't wait to update!!...S, lets daudooooooooooofy!!
1. Shanak goes to the washroom (nature call, phir see??? 😲😆) and finds it decorated it with Candles (Washroom kyun decorate? *scratches her head*...Yahaan par bhi saath saath? 😲...*looks at the gals naughty faces*...I mean, yahaan par bhi romance karnaa tha kya....tum bhi naa ladkiyaan!! Mujhe maasoom ko bhi bigaadogi! 🤣)...and a message for Shaan on the Jacuzzi glass wall that "Mahapurush ko Soarie aur thunku" (Sorry and Thankyou to the great man!)...Shaan wonders why Khanak is doing all this? Why cant she get it that it's very difficult for him to manage these things! Khanak stares at him chori chori chupke chupke! Just then Shaan tries leaning on the wall and ends up pressing the shower button. The water oozes out of the shower and Shaan gets wet! Khanak bursts out laughing!Shaan notices khanak laughing and rhetorically asks her if she finds this funny! Khanak moves her head in denial but keeps laughing! (And guys! Seriously, Shaan had opened the shower only for a second, he had just becomes slightly wet when he had closed the shower! But right now, there is water oozing out of his head and spreading across his body, and makes me wonder, yeh itna saara extra water aa kahaan se raha hai!! Sar par tanki khol rakhi hai kya? 😲😲 🤣...Aaata chalaa jaa raha hai, aata chalaa jaa raha hai....Now, makes me wonder which gravitational law are these two introducing now....Yeh Serial kam Phyics enigma zyaada hotaa jaa raha hai mere liye *scratches her head*...I also need a spl paatshaala for myself from prof Shaan!🤣...Ranjini, u noting down the Blooper? 😉)...Shaan blames Khanak for all this! Khanak keeps laughing that makes Shaan pull her into the shower with him! Khanak gets wet instantly! (Guys, I mean, not even a second, didnt even give me a chance to bat my eyes!!...😲😲*sits on the floor, sar pakad ke* Pls koi yeh mystery solve karo...Itnaaaaaaaaaa water aa kahaaan se raha hai?? *pouts*)...Khanak struggles in the water and Shaan asks her sarcastically if she still feels like laughing? (*Red Siren ringing*...WARNING...WARNING....HAWT HAWT HAWT Stuff ahead! Read at your own risk...🤣🤣🤣) ...Suddenly, their dil ke armaan jaagofy and they stare at each other! Khanak tries leaving from there when Shaan pulls her back and comes very close to her! Khanak has her left hand on the glass wall and Shaan traverses with his hand from the top of her shoulder all the way to her fingers! (Guys, I need a treat for describing each of the ahem ahem scenes!! Okie!!....Meri haalat toh dekho, sitting in office and watching and describing these scenes inpromptu!!...Tumlogoan ke liye kya kya karnaa padtaa hai!! *hands on Hips* 😆😛)...He covers her left hand with his and Khanak closes her eyes. Shaan comes very close to her lips and Khanak's right hand moves to his chest! The heavenly sent water from source unknown and puzzling to DD falls between their faces and shaan's Lips and her lips come very very close!! Shaan covers her right hand too with his hand and basically locks her with the glass wall of the Jacuzzi! He takes her left hand and helps her find a place on his chest (and I feel as If I am writing a M&B Novel right now! 😆😆)....he holds her by waist, then he moves back to her arms and presses them hard! Khanak traverses back her hands to his chest and closes her eyes! There lips are at a max of 2cms distance and they were about to kiss when suddenly Khanak slips. While slipping, Shaan's nose and lips end up caressing Khanak's cheeks. (Okie, I have added this part, which I had deleted initially, for god know what reason! I guess because I am very maasoom nah! *Innocent muh* 🤣)...Shaan holds her on time from falling! (Ooi Maa...yeh fall kahaan se aa gayi beech mein?? *shakes her head to get out of the trance*....*adjusts her collar*,....err...I am alright....ahem ahem...*adjusts the folds of her shirt* I am alright! 🤣)...Shaan holds her tightly from the waist and supports her! They both have a Hawt eyelock (and I didnt know I would ever call an eyelock Hawt! 🤣)...They both suddenly realize what they got into, disengage themselves, break the moment and Khanak moves from there to stand faraway! (But inside the Jacuzzi, ki agar waapis retake karnaa ho toh, I am ready! 🤣)...Well, Shaan does come close to her, goes behind her, gets his lips very close to her ears when Khanak starts sighing deeply and suddenly runs away from there! (le!!....ad Faayda kya hua for this whole 5:28 mins teaser ka?? 😲🤣...End result...Dono achi tarah nahaa liyee! 🤣)...Shaan sighs and closes his eyes to get a grip!
2. Shaan and Khanak are sitting on their bed with their backs towards each other! Khanak's hair is wet and Shaan is in his under T-Shirt. They both look very uncomfy and keep giving each other the backward glances! Khanak sneezes (le! Yeh kaam Shaan ka nahi hai??? Mommy Mommy, cheenk aayi hai....aaachoo!! 🤣)...Shaan taunts at her for being delicate and calling him delicate inturn! Khanak pouts and tells him that she has become delicate after living in the city! Shaan taunts further that yeah right! As if noone ever sffers from cold in the village! Khanak asks him why is he angry with her? After all she didnt tell him to press the "saawer" button! 🤣...He got wet and inturn made her wet! Good thing that she closed the "Saawer" ka button! (Ohh! Yeh tanki ON thi....🤣...Now, Next Ques - Why was the shower button on for so long? Shaan ko Mommy na Shower ka button band karnaa nahi sikhaaya?? *Pulls Shaan's cheeks like a baby*🤣🤣)...Khanak suddenly realizes that she is venturing into forbidden territory and she shuts up her mouth embarrased! Shaan also gets embarrased! Shaan starts stammering and is not able to say anthign when Khanak asks him if he could give their friendship one more chance! (Friendship??? Didnt she wants her love and Pati back?? 😡😡....yeh ladkiyaan meraa BP, free of cost badhaati hain!!😡) They look at each other when Khanak tells him that she knows he is angry with her but she just wants one more chance and she says Please in her classic khanak cute style! Shaan doesnt say a thing and comes back wearing a proper T-Shirt! He starts leaving bcoz he ahs some work when Khanak asks him for his answer! She tells him that if his answer is No, she would feel bad but atleast she would know his answer! Shaan gets agitated and tells her that they cannot be friends anymore because they have gone beyond friendship. he asks her the meaning of joking with him, decorating the room with flowers etc? Khanak exlains that she is trying to please him bcoz she knows he is angry with her! Shaan tells her to avoid acting oblivious to past! Khanak tells him that she is trying to forget the past when that pisses off Shaan bigtime! (😡😡😡....yeh gol gol baat hi karni hai, toh as well Khanak goes back to Dhulwadi!....😡😡)...Shaan again pulls her towards him and asks her angrily that what is that she wants to forget? That's when Khanak tells him that she can forget Suraj! (*DD is shocked*....*DD holds the table* *DD Shivers*.....*DD watches the screen blankly with open mouth* *DD gets a push from behind*...*DD Snaps out of it*...*DD realizes her BP is now in control but her hyperventilations have increased*...*DD Faints*...🤣🤣🤣)....Shaan stares at her, Khanak tells him that the reason behind their marriage can be forgotten! Shaan releases his hold on her (Bewakoof, what better proposal can you get stupid!!...yahaan Mommy kaam nahi aayegi!!....grrrr....Abhi Khanak ne BP shaant kiya toh yeh badaa raha hai....Yeh dono DD bachchi ki jaan leke hi rahenge!! *Pouts* 🤣)...She tells him that she is ready to forget all those things that stand between them! She extends her hand and asks him to hold her hand permanently!! (I just LOVE LOVE LOVE Khanak!! I love such brave gals, who are not caught in the feministic vanity of guys proposing first!! Jo apna hai, usmein kaise sharam!!....Way to go Khanak!! Love you!! MWAH! *DD realizes she is jumping on the seat in the office*...ahem ahem...sorry...bhavnaaoan mein beh gayi thi! 🤣🤣🤣)...She looks at him expectantly...Shaan folds his hands and tells her that she wants to be friends (Friends?? 😕😕😕....Yeh phir aa gaya..."Just Friends" se "Just" nikla, toh Friends?? yeh kahaan se aa gaya? *DD beats her head on the table*....Le! Aasmaan se gire, khajoor pe aatke! 😕🤣)...but the first rule in friendship is to be truthful and have faith but she has already broken his faith! Khanak tells him that she has not broken his trust! She thinks in her mind that she wishes she could tell him the truth that she never got his letter else she would have....(Kyun? Why cant she tell the truth?....Mujhe yeh toh bachpan se samajh nahi aaya!! 😕😕...Yeh bhi mystery reh gayi, that why cant these protaganists speak openly!!....Clear communcation ...Kyun...Kyun ...Kyun?? *DD beats her head on the table again*...boo-hoo!! 😭)...She tells him that she cannot explain everything but cant he for once, accpet her silence! Shaan agrees to accept her silence on the condition that she answers his one Q - Why didnt she come to meet him the other day? Khanak keeps quiet!! (Muh khol baba, nahi toh meraa sar tootegaa ya yeh table!! grrrrrr 😡)...He asks her whether she read his letter? She nods! He asks her then why didnt she come? Khanak keeps quiet! (*DD feels her BP rising yet again*...grrr😡)...Shaan asks his second question, why did she send Natasha to him? Khanak again keeps quiet! (grrrrrrrrr 😡)...He asks her third Q - Why did she leave without meeting him?...She again keeps quiet!!...Shaan tells her that she has no answers for his questions than how can she ask him to forget everything? (Shaan yeh, Mrs Dhulwadi ka Dhulwadi express se ticket katwaa....else mujhe permanent BP problems hone waalein hain!! 😡😡)...Its not easy for him! He asks her to stop playing games with him. He sometimes feels that his existence doesnt make a difference to her! Khanak gets tears in her eyes and she moves her head in denial! Shaan tells her that sometimes he feels that he is the only important one in her life, Whenever he gazes in her eyes, he sees himself...whenever he listens to her talk, he feels that she has similar feelings as he does for her, but then if this is the truth then why did she send Natasha to him? He asks her whats in her heart and what does she want? He urges her to answer any one of his Qs! Khanak moves away from there but doesnt reply! Shaan tells her that she wanted him to talk with her, so, he is ready...he wants replies to all his Qs....Why is she testing his patience? Khanak thinks that she cannot lie further and she shld tell him the truth! Shaan tells Khanak to talk! This was the most imp decision in his life and she didnt realize that she shld have talked it out with him. How can she call herself his friend? Why didnt she care for his feelings? Khanak tells Shaan that she doesnt know how to explain that she...Shaan cuts her and tells her that he is trying to understand her but she doesnt talk openly! Khanak tells him that she cannot talk openly! Shaan tells her that he feels she is hiding something from him! He is trying to talk to her desperately, get his answers but she doesnt care for him! He urges her to reply to his Qs and then he would do whatever she wants! He is ready to face the truth no matter how bitter it is, but he cant bear her silence anymore! Khanak asks him why are words important to him? The eyes speak more important things than mouth! Cant he make out from her behaviour or her eyes? Shaan tells her that he used to feel initially that he can understand all her unspoken words, her crying, smiling everything but he was wrong! He made a big mistake in understanding and reading her! Khanak tries talking with him but Shaan tells her to leave him alone! Khanak agrees to live him alone! (yeh Ladki toh mujhe BP, Choloestrol, Palpitations, sab deke hee rahegi!! 😡)
3. Mangal and Hetal are having the food in the house and enjoying Harilal's food! Hetal is miffed about leaving the house! Mangal tells her that if Khanak leaves from here then she would leave with 20L. Mangal will take that money and they can then elope!...The HAVELI can go to hell! (Ek kaudi bhi haat nahi aayegi!!....Mein hoon na, sarp devtaa!! 😆😆)
4. Khanak picks the Ganesh idol and leaves the room.
PRECAP - Khanak is in some Sardar/waiter disguise. Shaan asks the sardar to find kHANAK MADAM WHO HAS DISAPPEARED! Khanak tells him to first have cold water and calm his anger down! Shaan agrees but realizes that the sardar knows too much about him. He asks her how does he know that he is angry? She asks Shaan that if she says "Pleaghe" to him, would he let go off his anger? That's when Shaan recognizes her to be Khanak!
Awesome episode...the first half was deadly!!! 😳👏
Love,
DD
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DDDDDDDDDDDD SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB AWESOME MAHA MAHA MAHA MAHA HOT HOT HOT HOT N UR COMMENTS MADE ME LAUGH OUT SOOOOOOOOOOOO LOUDLY THAT IM GOING MAD OUT HERE.UR PAL PAL KA DETAIL SESCRIPTION OF THE MOMENT JUST MADE MY PULSE GO DOWN HAIIIIISHANAK WERE JUST BEYOND HOT FIRE ALSO KYA CHEMISTRYY HAI BOSS I FEEL LIKE MAKING THEM DO THIS ALL IN MA BATHROOM NOW🤣🤣🤣 now everday i shall remember this scene wen having a bath🤣🤣 v all thought shaan would back off par voh toh rukne ka naam to kya soch bhi nahi raha tha n grls i have seen the scene a million times by now n im telling u their lips youched in the end b4 khanak slipped a little they did cause shaan went very close 2 her b4 she slipped n the lips met a little..god the scene of the century...haila i cant live anymore after such a awesoome scene 2 day toh no sleeping at all .this scene is registered in ma mind body n soul frever🤪😍😍😍☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hot Hot Update Nikita👍🏼..B4 i lose my senses i am so outta of here.!!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DD.. you have to name this update as HWAT UPdATe... LMAO!!!- loving it.. and it is criminal to watch this at work.. *(yaa i did!!!!)
All that you have written so far.. the shower scene🤣🤣🤣
BTW... the shower was on babaa.... and then Khanak's hand turns it off.. so there is water coming down the whole time from the shower. 🤣
Edited by -Veena- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Update done...Enjoy, but at your own risk! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakforever

DDDDDDDDDDDD SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB AWESOME MAHA MAHA MAHA MAHA HOT HOT HOT HOT N UR COMMENTS MADE ME LAUGH OUT SOOOOOOOOOOOO LOUDLY THAT IM GOING MAD OUT HERE.UR PAL PAL KA DETAIL SESCRIPTION OF THE MOMENT JUST MADE MY PULSE GO DOWN HAIIIIISHANAK WERE JUST BEYOND HOT FIRE ALSO KYA CHEMISTRYY HAI BOSS I FEEL LIKE MAKING THEM DO THIS ALL IN MA BATHROOM NOW🤣🤣🤣 now everday i shall remember this scene wen having a bath🤣🤣 v all thought shaan would back off par voh toh rukne ka naam to kya soch bhi nahi raha tha n grls i have seen the scene a million times by now n im telling u their lips youched in the end b4 khanak slipped a little they did cause shaan went very close 2 her b4 she slipped n the lips met a little..god the scene of the century...haila i cant live anymore after such a awesoome scene 2 day toh no sleeping at all .this scene is registered in ma mind body n soul frever🤪😍😍😍☺️
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Actually, I didnt write this, but their noses touch and before she slips, he caresses her cheeks with his nose and lips!!.....😆😆😆
Edited by Dancingdoll - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmida

Hot Hot Update Nikita👍🏼..B4 i lose my senses i am so outta of here.!!! 😆

yep gal....My senses are also lost, my BP is high because of later half and I am also outta here!! 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Veena-

DD.. you have to name this update as HWAT UPdATe... LMAO!!!- loving it.. and it is criminal to watch this at work.. *(yaa i did!!!!)

All that you have written so far.. the shower scene🤣🤣🤣
BTW... the shower was on babaa.... and then Khanak's hand turns it off.. so there is water coming down the whole time from the shower. 🤣

🤣🤣🤣....yeah Veena...and put all parental controls on the thread!! 🤣🤣.....
yeah, I realized later on that the shower was ON...But you tell me, did I have a reason to think tht the shower was ON...Isnt it a normal stimulus reaction to close the shower when you open it accidentally....ya you go ahead and take the shower, ki chal, Thakoor ne shower on kar diya, probably god wants me to take the pending shower and hence, lets go ahead and take it? or do ur natural flexes tell you to close it? so, when Shaan removes his hand from the button, I naturally thought that the shower got closed....and infact no water oozed for sometime, after he removes his hand!!🤣
Ranjini - Blooper list gal!! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DD.....loved it...it was smoking...steamy....and Hawtttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

And your update as usual had me...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 love you *muwah*
As Veeni said ..shower was on...Khanak closes it while sliping....🤣🤣🤣🤣
And yes...the far off shot before she slips his lips touch her cheeks for sure😉🤣🤣🤣 the cheek that was very near the lips....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..
Hum..me two minded really about Khanak hiding the truth..loved her clearing Shantanu's doubts about Suraj and the whole accident...that was truly very straight forward and brave of her as well as askin for his hand...but then Burthal messed up....and then again Khanak sealed her lips from telling the truth as she does not want to ruing son - mother relatioship I think or it has to do with the No Tamasha promise....hum....
Lets see what tomorrow brings...
Me leaving for Karachi on Wednesday early..so may not be able to log on tomorrow or for more then a week..willl miss you alot..adn your whacky quirky updates....
Till we meet again *muwah & hugs*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kubare

DD.....loved it...it was smoking...steamy....and Hawtttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Yeah! was writing a Mills and Boons Novel! 🤣...But Krishan, today they surpasses -PG-10 too!!....Now, do u know what u need to do in ur OS? 🤣🤣🤣🤣
And your update as usual had me...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 love you *muwah*
Mwah Mwah Mwah!😳
As Veeni said ..shower was on...Khanak closes it while sliping....🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ab mujhe kya pata that Shaan is so burdthal, when the commonman reflexes tell him to immediately close the shower, Shaan went ahead with his shower of the day, openly!!.....🤢🤣...Ab ismein meri kya galati? *innocent muh* 🤣
And yes...the far off shot before she slips his lips touch her cheeks for sure😉🤣🤣🤣 the cheek that was very near the lips....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..
Yeah Krishna, I wrote that then deleted it...I have no clue, why I did that but I did!!!.....*cluesless muh*
Hum..me two minded really about Khanak hiding the truth..loved her clearing Shantanu's doubts about Suraj and the whole accident...that was truly very straight forward and brave of her as well as askin for his hand...but then Burthal messed up....and then again Khanak sealed her lips from telling the truth as she does not want to ruing son - mother relatioship I think or it has to do with the No Tamasha promise....hum....
Yeah! I too think it might be the "Tamasha promise" else, it didnt make sense!!!!....but that Tmasha promise ki toh aisi ki taisi!! thatw aas made only to increase my BP...I am telling u, mere khilaaf saazish hai!! 🤣🤣
Lets see what tomorrow brings...
Me leaving for Karachi on Wednesday early..so may not be able to log on tomorrow or for more then a week..willl miss you alot..adn your whacky quirky updates....
u off to Karachi? 😲😲😲...Kyun??...*holds Krishna's hands from behind*.....Tusi jaa rahe ho?Tusi naa jaao na!!...But seriously...why r u gng there? leaving ur besharam partner alone...ahem ahem...I mean, Maasoom partner alone here? 🤣🤣🤣
Till we meet again *muwah & hugs*

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