SS on maaneet TOGETHER FOREVER part 15 page 51 - Page 4

Originally posted by: sharmake11

yu did great job pls cont see soon another chapter

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

Noor,

nice one.. please add me to your P_M list and continue sooon.

Originally posted by: HeAvEnS

loved every bit of it .....amazing

can't wait for maan to find her and smack her for running away and giving up hope ...

continue soon

hi my sweeties 🤗

maan looked at dadi and smiled
he got to his feet took his caar keys and went down to his car
he started his car and knew where to go
he smiled to himself and started to drive

geet put her dupatta over her head and entered the durgaah she didn't know why she had
come here but this was the first place that came in her mind when she left the khurana mansion

she remembered the day when she had come running for maan and ended up in the durgah to pray for him
thinking he had met some accident.
she remembered how maan's dori had dropped on her
she remembered how she realized her love for maan
this last thought brought tears in her eyes

geet: babaji yeh aap kya kertay ho meray sath?
jub b may nay kisiko chaha hay vo mujhay chor kar chala gya
kyu baba ji kyu
mujhay aap kis gunnah ki saza day rahay ho?
dev say meri shaadi hui aur wo mujhay dokha day kar chala gya.
may nay us waqt b aap say koi shiqayat nai ki
phir jab mujhay maaloom hua k may dev k bachay ki maa bannay wali hu tab b may nay
kuch nai kaha. koi shiwayat nai ki. may apnay saray khaandan say us bachay kay leay larri.
kya yehi mera gunnah tha k may nay apnay bachay ki jaan bachanay kay leay apnay ghar
walon say larai ki?
apni aur apnay honay walay bachay ki jaan bachai?
kya yehi meri galati thi babaji? huh?
agar yehi meri galti thi tou is sub may uus masoom ka kya kasoor hay jo is waqt meray
undr janam lay raha hay?
aur jab may dev kay deay huay dokhay ko bhool gai thi aur maan kay sath apni zindagi
guzarna chahti thi tou aap nay maan ko b mujh say cheen lia
kyu babaji akhir kyuuuuu (sobbing)
kyu laitay ho aap mujh say itnay itihaan jo may day nahi paati? jin ko dainay ki himmat ab
mujh may nahi hay babaji kyu?

geet had started crying and she sat down on the steps (the same steps near where geet had
realised her love for maan)

then someone placed a hand on her shoulder from behind. she looked up and turned her head
around to see who was it

maan reached the durgaah parked his car and stepped out
he put a rumaal over his head and started walking inside the durgaah
maan remembered that this was that very place where he had seen feelings for himself in geet's
eyes
the same feelings which he had been hiding from himself.... from geet.....
he somehow knew where she would be right then
he stepped in the durgaah and prayed for geet's safety and prayed for themselves to be together
once more
he then tied his dori and turned around
ther he saw someone she was sitting down on the steps
he walked towards her and placed a hand on her shoulder from behind
she lifted her face and turned around
maan saw her and felt bad

geet looked at the person who had placed hand on shoulder
and got up

she got up and maan asked
maan: maa ji is every thing alright?
the old lady seemed sad
lady: nahi beta
maan: kya hua maa ji?
lady: beta may yahan apnay shohar kay sath ai thi aur is saaray rush may hum dono alag
ho gaye, ab mujhay wo mil nahi rahay. pata nahi kaha hon gay wo? kaisay ho gay?
maan: kuch nahi hota maa ji aap meray sath chaliey hm dono mil kar unhay dhundtay hay
lady: jeetay raho putter.
maan liked the concern this old lady had for her husband. maan thought if geet and he were
separated in this busy place would she be also concerned about him?
maan smiled at this thought and helped the lady in searching for her husband

geet: uncle ji aap theek tou hay na (she saw a old man standing behind her he looked worn out)
aap yaha beth jaiyay.
geet helped the old man sit down on the steps
she quickly grabbed a glass of water from near by and gave it to the old man
geet: yeh lijeay uncle ji ye paani pee lay
old man took the glass and drank it
man: shukria betay
geet: koi baat nai uncle ji yeh tou mera farz tha
man: khush raho
geet noticed that the old man seemed sad
geet: uncle ji aap theek tou hay na? aap udaas lag rahay hay. koi pareshaani hay?
man: han beta
may yahan apni patni kay sath aya tha laikin is sub beerh ma hum dono alag ho gay
mujhay nahi maaloom k wo kaha hay. kaisi hay. pata nahi ab tak us nay apni kya haalat bna
li ho gi?
geet liked the concern this old man had for his wife. she thought what if she and maan were
together would he also have become this concerned about her. she quickly removed his thought
rom her mind as she remembered how maan had left her all alone
geet: uncle ji koi nahi hum dano mil kay aap ki patni ko dhundtay hay
man: shukria beta
sada sukhi raho.

geet helped the old man to get up and then they started searching for his wife

on the other side maan and the old lady were searching for the lady's husband

no luck on both sides

maan: maa ji aap dono kis jaga pay alag huay thay?
lady told him and maan said that they should go look there

geet : uncle ji aap aur aap ki patni kaha alag huay thay?
the old man told her and geet suggested that they should look there what if she is waiting
for him there

maan and the old lady reached at that separation point
maan made the old lady sit on the steps and told her that he'll be back in a minute

geet and the old man reached at that place
the old man pointed at a women sitting on the steps
she had her back towards them
man: wo rahi pagli wo hay meri patni
the old man seemed happy now and started walking towards the lady
dhe tapped her shoulder and the old lady turned her hear and stood up
both of them were really happy to see each other again
geet saw there reunion and smiled

maan was coming back with a water bottle in his hand for the lady
but when he saw the couple's happy reunion he smiled and turned around
as soon as he turned around he saw an angelic face that caught his attention

guyz i know that this was boring and you want maaneet scenes

iy was sweet but we want maaneet

Originally posted by: rinky70

iy was sweet but we want maaneet

hey...
it was awesome yaar..
how cn u call it boring....
so the old couple brought maan and geet together.... cool...
cnt wait to read the next update...
pls update soon... 😃

Originally posted by: nehara

hey...
it was awesome yaar..
how cn u call it boring....
so the old couple brought maan and geet together.... cool...
cnt wait to read the next update...
pls update soon... 😃

oyee hoeeyyyy.. inni jaldi..... 😃