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Posted: 14 years ago
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confession aka revelation

I was jus trying to take a nap this noon wen these thoughts just sparked my mind.
we'll this is how i thought the revelation of truth will go on...
GEET: ouch....
MAAN: running over his room over to the door, kya hua geet ? tum theek tho ho?
GEET: kuch khas nahi...
MAAN: aab jaldi karo dadima hamara intizaar kar rahi hein, in pitch darkness he could'nt even move. kisne kaha tumhe lights off karne ke liye?
GEET: aap ko to bahana chahiye mujhe tana maarne ke liye. yahain pe. pointing to the wardobe behind the doors, she had done a mistake.
naintara came in her sizzling saree, hardly could she make out anything of the desserted room ( y on earth dadi sent me this to room, am i maid to go & pull maan veer ji & his so called fiance downstairs to rode off) & trying to sound as pleasing, she knew how maan hated intruding.. vadde veer je (2) pushing over to the door, om my god hardly there was room for maan & geet to stand & this lady pushed in? the door was hurting geet but more than tat the awkward positon she was standing now that bothered her more, she was breathing wat maan was exhaling, their eyelashes making content everytime they blinked, not a skin depth difference between the two, an NT pushed in to see if anyone was inside it hurted geet more , lest she yell or shout the best maaan could do at such a situation was lock his lips over geet's, both of them froze. NT sensing tat no one was there bolted the door safely & went downstairs.
dadima maan veer ji nahi hain.
DADIMA: lagtha hain maan aapne mangethar ke sath hume party mein join karenge. hum chalein.
geet was speechless this was wat she expected the least. both of them so into eachother that they had no clue of the entire environment, maan helped her by carrying over to his bed & laying her down & turned, she was in tears. he turned back & in the candlelight saw her tears.
MAAN: geet main tumhari aankhoon mein aanso nahi deksaktha.
geet took off her hands towards the oly source of light tat was illuminating the room the candle to put it off, maan holded her hands,
MAAN: mera matlab main tumhare aankhoon mein aansoo aane nahi doonga, & with golden grace wiped her tears off oly to see her cry morely, her eyes were red like fire.
MAAN: geet woh ho gaya maine jaan bughkar ....
GEET: interrupted KISS
MAAN: haan. unable to speak a word more...
GEET: chale jao, in utter disgust of wat had jus happened, she sensed it was the time she unravel her mystery yet she'll be too close to his feelings tat it wont be any easier to separate him from her.
main tumhare liya nahi hoon.
MAAN: main tumhara haqdaar houn.
GEET: mughe koi haaq nahi un ehsason ka jo mughe tumhare aur khinch rahe hain.
MAAN: woh ehsas tumhare ankhoon mein bus mere liye hain.
GEET: woh ehsas khatam ho gaye, mere sath hoshyarpur mein. un dhoke ke sath, us zabardathi ke saath sab kuch khatam ho gaya.
maan recollects geet speaking 3 din mein dhoka dekar chala gaya.aur bade ne kaha bhool jao.
GEET: khatam hogys sab kuch kuch nahi hain mera paas. maan comes closer catches her hands tightly. 3 din ki dhoke ke shaaadi ke baad sab khatm hogaya. geet's eyes were like blazing fire.
maan let's go off her hands. was shocked. she continues main saab tyaag ayi houn. aab jina ka bus ek hi sahara hain, us dhoke ki aakhri nishaaan. maan sensed something terribly was going wrong.
main nahi chahthi ki mere zindagi ke bogh mein aap dab jao.
maan tried to speak his throat was dry, he could not utter a word. only this he could think she coming to amritsar for some motive.
and after he saves her she embraces him & tells its not my fault .
her talks on the office stranded night.
mere galthi nahi main maa banne wali houn...
thunder had fallen over maan... but his brain still ran over something
the way she reacts wen he comes up to console her after firing off ( she said mera baccha...she goes on mere atheeth ka saya bhi aap ke liye theek nahi"
maan was spellbound. he could hardly take it in. still he managed the lady he loved was after all not his, she belonged to someone else.
all he could manage was : KOUN?
GEET: NRI< canada se... & he could think the day he met her in canada embassy.
his tired mind was now connecting the dots. terror had struk geet's life similar to something that had happened to him years ;long ago, but this was even more painful...
MAAN: tum usi mile?
GEET : airport mein mughe aakele chod ke apni patni ke sath woh canada chala gaye. woh din tha auraaj tak mein ne nahi socha na dhoondha. geet was not her wen she was speaking, her emotions had taken off... maan had rested his hands over the candle near by, never sensing tat blood was oozing out his torn capillaries, tat pain was mere nothing to wat geet was undergoing.

GEET: mugje jaane do.main aap sab log se dor chali jaoungi. & she stood up. maan too stood beside her almost giving her way to walk off, & raised his hands touched her forehead tum sirf meri nishaan ho geet. geet before she could touch her forehead knew
wat had happened. maan ne geet ki maang bhar di. they were one souls now. he bowed to her with such grace & told main tumhari bacche ka baap banna chah tha houn. he wanted to ease her pain, embrace her & let her know, he was there for her always. he took the candle in one hand & geet's on other moved a step forwar took a circle with her, The bride and the groom take the first step of the seven vows to pledge that they would provide a prospered living for the household or the family that they would look after and avoid those that might hinder their healthy living. & another turn During the second step of the seven pheras, the bride and the groom promise that they would develop their physical, mental and spiritual powers in order to lead a lifestyle that would be healthy.and one more During the third vow, the couple promises to earn a living and increase by righteous and proper means, so that their materialistic wealth increases manifold. and another While taking the fourth vow, the married couple pledges to acquire knowledge, happiness and harmony by mutual love, respect, understanding and faith. & next one The fifth vow is taken to have expand their heredity by having children, for whom, they will be responsible. They also pray to be blessed with healthy, honest and brave children. slides her in front of him While taking the sixth step around the sacred fire, the bride and the groom pray for self-control of the mind, body and soul and longevity of their marital relationship. and the final one When the bride and the groom take the seventh and the last vow, they promise that they would be true and loyal to each other and would remain companions and best of friends for the lifetime.

i could'nt think of one incomplete part.. the taveez or mangl sutr...

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