Naksh FF- Part 3. Akshara is Pregnant.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is part 3 of my series. & since i'm not getting any replies , i just thought of writing up another one, and seeing how this one goes. this is actually pretty fun. 😛 And this time I decided on doing it on Akshara's point of view. Since she has no clue about her pregnancy.

I woke up with the sun in my eyes. I got up from my bed with a bit of pain in my head. I couldn't go back to sleep obviously, because i have a responsibility towards my family. I looked up at the clock and it was 11:00 in the morning "Oh God! I'm late" I whispered to myself. I quickly grabbed my towel and went to the bathroom to take a shower. Once i did that i took out a purple sari out of the closest and wore it. And thats when I realized that I should get downstairs and help in the kitchen. I climbed down the stairs quickly, and i suddenly slipped off of a step. And thats when I knew I was going to end up in the hospital. But I didn't. I felt somebody's cold hands wrapped around my waist. My first guess was that it Naitik, but he was gone on a business trip, so it couldn't be him. I instantly turned around and saw Naitik. I couldn't believe it.."I thought..-" Before I could say anything he cut my off by putting his hand on my lips, and gave me a big hug. "Let go of me!" I whispered to Naitik. "What if somebody see's," I said as I struggled to get out of his grip. "Let them. I don't care." Naitik replied. This moment was nothing above or below perfect.. But suddenly I felt something coming up my stomach again. It was the same vomiting feeling i had yesterday. "Naitik let go. My stomach." I somehow managed to say. He let go of me, and I ran to the bathroom again. "MA!" Naitik yelled. "What happened, Munna?" she asked as she came out of the kitchen. "Go to Akshara. Quick. She's in the washroom. "Okay, I'm going!" Gayatri said as she ran upstairs. "I'm calling the doctor!" Naitik said to his mom. "No, no!" His mom said while bringing me out of the bathroom. "Its normal." she told him. Naitik blushed. "Oh," he said. What do you mean, Ma?" I asked. "Akshara doesn't know?" Naitik asked? "No, Munna, she doesn't. The doctor put her to sleep right away. She had too much stress. She needed sleep. So we didn't get a chance to tell her." she said. "whats wrong..?" I asked "Akshara! You're about to be a Mom!" Gayatri said with joy!




And also, if you haven't read part 1 and 2 the links are below:


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1479618

Part 1 Link ^


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1479625

Part 2 Link ^

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1480469

Part 4 Link ^

thanks! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey buddy

very nice FF yaar

plz edit ur post heading as Naksh FF

plz post d nxt part soon

i cant wait 4 akshi's exp.

n hw naitik react

Edited by divi4u - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u wrote it vry well yaar!!!!!! i loved each n everi expression u used!!!!!!! nyc yaarr!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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if u are thinking of discontinuing it.. plz dnt.. itz really gud yar..
n listen.. try n post ur other parts of FF here only.. click on "post reply" n den continue in this thread only.. dnt make multiple threads.. k..
take care..
bi.!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the feedback everyone! and i'm new to this, so i'll keep in mind to not make different threads, and posting them here. i'm working on the next part now. since I am in the middle of one know. i am just going to make another thread. but after part 4, i'll continue and make them just in one thread. 😊
and i also changed the name of my post from YRKKH Next Episode.. to Naksh FF, due to a request.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing....well written....👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very very nice ff
plz cont soon
when u do plz can you pm me
i dont want to miss it xx

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