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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: soapbubble
Dye,
that's seriously beautiful 👏👏👏- and it's worthy of a larger audience but sadly only Kriya fans will actually 'get' it.
Never mind, we feel the love you put down so beautifully.
Bubble

Bubble! you are very kind! Yes, when Kriya is the inspiration then the audience ought to be Kriya fans nai?😃

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Dyehard

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Just in case there are any other finicky Ghazal purists out there (I doubt it, but best to be sure!) I am sorry I had made a very silly error in the second sher of the Ghazal. I don't know how but I got in an unsuitable Kaafiya!😕
I have now rectified the error and replaced "Dastak" with 'Aahat'. And changed the sher a bit. So it is following the rhyme pattern now.😊
I am perhaps talking to air, huh? 😆 But there is no accounting for the high standards of silent readers!😉😛😃