Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 107

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wrote this for you anjana, nargis and Rev...inspired by Bri...whose..piece i have read..


From Tomb to Womb

It has been only eight weeks since I have existed. I have seen a life that not many see in a few lifetimes. It was one rainy night that I was conceived and I knew I was loved, I feel I was the happiest that day. The day I found life I saw tears in her eyes but she had met someone that day who told her to get a hold on her emotions. And she did, if not for him she would not have learned to fight. If not for him she would have died and I would have found a Tomb within the very womb that gave me life.

I have seen her in anguish, in pain. She bore all that for me. Whether it was coal on her hand or being dragged by her brother, she took all that from her so called family to maintain my existence. They tried to put her to sleep but she remained awake and he was there again as our saviour. She had run through fields, she had borne a wound from a sword and he had been there to save her once again.

I have been jolted, jostled pushed around, bumped into and I knew I could not show my disturbance to her for she had a lot to face and adding to her woes was something I wanted to avoid. So I lay silently not making my presence felt but I knew she remembered me every time she touched her stomach.

She even talked to me whether it was to find courage or to give me strength but I knew I had to hang on. After all we only had one another. I could not let her down after she left everything she knew for me. Her life changed because I was there in it. And she had shown her strength of character, her determination to keep me, how do I not respect the woman and stand by with her in this fight. Be her strength when I know I am her weakness.

She finally made it through many a pitfalls and it was all because of him. She called him Maan, Maan Sir but to me he is no less than God who saved her and me not once but many a times. He has picked her up when she has fainted; he has lifted her when she was hurt, covered her when she need to be wrapped. He was always there to dry her tears. He was her man. I am sure he is the man who would be worthy of her. I am sure he would be man who would take care of her.

He would not only protect her but love her. And I have lot to tell him. I want to say

Thank you for saving me

Thank you for letting me live

For I want to see her

Give her the love she has given me

To touch her and know she is mine

To tell her that I will fight with her

Go to the end of the earths with her

Be the best I can be for her

And bring to justice the one who gave her tears

Give nightmares to the one who gave her fears

Bring a light that will shine on her forever

Will you be that light

Will you be the knight

Will you be her friend

Will you hold her hand

So that I can be born

And remove all her thorn

One more request I have

Can I call you DAD?

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Posted: 14 years ago
Vrush...beautifully written....what more proof to keep the BABY?!!! Love the last line...........Thanks!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowie... the baby talk... i like it like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ nags

thanks babes...

@ gouri...yeah...strong advocates for keeping the baby na...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

@ nags

thanks babes...

@ gouri...yeah...strong advocates for keeping the baby na...

yes vrush... strong adovate to keep the baby... please post this on FB also.... they those crazy baby hated see this... let them feel a bit for that baby....
Edited by deniac - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great....................... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
i really enjoy all ur writin whether its those full of passion and romance or the most touchin and humblin one that u wrote frm unborn childs prospective now.
will always wait for ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Abi thanks..girl..arent you supposed to be working..but..me feeling good to see you sneak to read my updates...muuaah...

@gouri...yeah..posted it on fb...

@sapnaajay...thanks so much..humbles me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it to the core...
if one is not already in love with Maan...the image the baby presents of him
will surely make the fall more easy....i so love and adore him.....
since very first i dint want them to bring this pregnancy angle as i dint want MaanEet to go on on carrying their past as a baggage into their future...
Geet's not going for checkup and no doctor confirmation was giving me little hopes but this promo dashed it all out...
but unlike few opinions i read here and at FB i don't want her to have a miscarriage...
so if the baby has to come...it will and i'm sure the baby will be included in the protective orbit of Maan's love and care .....
i'm just praying that like they did all situations, tracks and moments...the actors, PH, CVs and Director handle this most most most important track
with out most care
admire your writing style ........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vroom , This is just not good - this is marvellous..
God! I could sooooo feel the baby speaking. I had goose bumps while reading the update..
Wah - wat a reason to hang on to life?? I know baby - its been a bumpy ride.. But just like Geet - her child too is so full of positives and do I see a little bit of Maan in the baby ??? As Protective of Mom as his papa 😆😆...
If not for him she would have died and I would have found a Tomb within the very womb that gave me life.
So I lay silently not making my presence felt but I knew she remembered me every time she touched her stomach.
Be her strength when I know I am her weakness.
These lines just tugged my heart strings..

And bring to justice the one who gave her tears

Give nightmares to the one who gave her fears

These lines convinced me that the baby is being influenced by Maan.

U have once again proved that u are a versatile writer!!!
Intense, light heartedness, perspective everything facet of human bonding is seen in ur updates..
I hope u get many takers for this update!!
Aaj ek zindagi aur jine do, Aaj ek sapna aur dekhne do, Aaj thori khushi milne do.. ...(mauled Kal ho nah lyrics 😆)...

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