ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 33

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Hello Doston!!...must be very mad at me ..but i have a valid reason for the late update..actualli i was shifting..to another house..and there was no internet 4 so many days ..and then there was so much work for me ..but as soon as i got internet connection..i was up last nite.. and finished writing..the update..i realli hope u all will like it.. and plzz sorry for the late update..but im sure u all will like it....love u allllll..and thanks alot for such lovely comments ...mwaa..i loved reading them..thanx alot for ur patience once again..and for bearing wid me.. lols.. and 2day is 1 of ma frendz bday..who readz this FF..and likes it..so this chap is dedicated to all of u..and specially her..
Happy Birthday Shagz!



~Chap 14~

"Maan plz darwaza kholo.. tum kya ladkiyon ki tarha naraz ho kar darwaza band karke beth gaye ho!..im sorry yaar!"..Geet was constantly apologizing..and knocking on the door..but there was no response..

Maan: Geet..plzz tum yahan apna time waste nahi karo..i have lots to do..for my presentation..so plzz..mera door peetna band karo..aur yahan say chalee jao!..he told her to go

Geet sighed.. giving up..and quietly went to her room..
After she went..Maan came to his bed and fell upside down..and closed his eyes.. Geet's question echoed in his mind.."tum kaafi badal gaye ho?"..he abruptly opened his eyes..and sat up..thinking has he really changed..

"Main nahi badla..main abhi bhi wahi Maan Singh Khurana hoon!..lekin Woh bhi theek he to thi..main pehlay se thora change hogaya hoon..he stood up, went to the mirror..and started looking at himself

"pehlay jo Maan Singh Khurana..mazaq to kya..hansta bhi mushkil se tha..aaj woh khul kar hansta hai..khul kar mazaq karta hai..main itna kaise badal gaya..woh bhi sirf in 6, 7 dino main..i Have changed?!..i think its because of Geet's company..main pagal ho gaya hoon..uss k saath reh kar..HuH!..iss ladki ne mujhe sach main adha pagal to kar diya hai..isse pehlay poora pagal karay main he sambhal jaaonga!..lekin yeh mazaq kal tak continue karoon ga..Mujhko iss ne bohot pareshaan kiya hai..badla lena to mera haq hai!..aur jahan tak badalne ki baat hai..to koi bhi Maan Singh Khurana ko badal nahi sakta.i shudn't take it seriously..woh meri dost hai..iss liye main uski help kar raha hoon..aur uskay saath thora mazaq karleta hoon..warna..thats for sure that no 1 can change me!..he assured himself looking at his reflection in the mirror..

On the other hand Geet went to her room..totally frustrated..

" Maan is really overreacting.. .. ..lekin agar woh teray baare main aisa kuch bolta..to tujhko bhi bura lagta na Geet"..she was blabbering to herself.."lekin mujhe thori na pata tha..k woh is tarha serious hojaye ga..aur waise bhi maine sach he bola..pehlay tha woh sado types..the angry young man..koi baat nahi Geet.. dinner karne to aaiga na..bas tabhi sorry bol dena..haan!..thats a gud idea..haina Baba Jee..thank uu BabaJee" ..she thanked her BabaJee..while excitedly lying down in her bed

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Geet beta..Geet..utho..abhi tak so rahi ho..Mrs. Handa was waking up geet..sitting next to her..lovingly touching her forehead..Geet slightly opened her eyes..got up..and put her head in Mrs. Handa's lap..

Mrs.Handa: Kya huwa..tabiyat to theek hai na!?

Geet: hmm..yes Maa..im ok..bas was a little tired..aap kahan gaye thay?..she asked in a sleepy tone

Mrs. Handa: woh hum bas aise he.. Bhabhi ki Ngo meeting thi to wahan gaye thay..

Geet who now got up: acha..waise Maa..woh Khurana uncle ko aap se kya baat karnee thee..

Mrs. Handa: pata nahi..kya baat hai..lekin tumko pareshaan hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hai beta..yeh hum barhon k beech ki baat hai..

Geet: ofcourse maa..but main soch rahee thee k hum log kitne time main move hojaingai

Mrs.Handa: hmm..woh to aaj raat dinner k baad he pata chalay ga..aur dinner is almost ready..so cumon..main tumko bulane k liye aai thee..

Geet: Dinner?

Mrs. Handa: yes..time dekho..raat k 8 baj rahe hain..

Geet: oh yeah..main to shaam ko soi thi..she sed realizing..

Mrs. Handa: chalo..jaldi se dining table par chalo..isse pehlay sab tumara wait karain.. she sed getting up.."i want u on dinner table in 15 min. ok"..Mrs. Handa ordered while leaving..

Geet: Okay Maa..

Geet hurriedly got up..and went to the bathroom..

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Geet got to the dining table..and thankfully..Mrs. Handa and Khurana..both were in kitchen along wid dadi..so the dinner wasn't ready..Mr. Khurana and Maan were sitting on the dining table.. talking

Geet: hello uncle..she sed cheerfully..stealthily glancing at Maan..who now stopped talking..and looked in other direction..

Mr. Khurana: hello Geet..aao na beta..betho..

Geet sat on the chair..which was infront of Maan..and next to Mr. Khurana

Geet: sorry..i hope maine disturb nahi kiya ho..lagta hai aap log zaroori baatien kar rahe thay..

Mr. Khurana: nahi nahi beta..nothing serious..we were just talking about business..by the way..tumhara college kaisa chal raha hai..

Geet: too gud uncle..

Mr. Khurana: adjust hogayeen naye mahol main? He asked generally

Geet: yes uncle..all coz of Maan..he really helped me..and still he is!..she sed looking at Maan who was now looking at her too

Mr. Khurana: that's gr8..so tum logon ki dosti hogayee phir se? bohot saalon baad milay ho na..

Geet: ofcourse uncle..hum log aik do mulaqaat main he..kaafi ghul mil gaye thay..Kyon Maan?..she tried to make him speak

Maan: hmm..

Mr. Khurana: that's pretty nice..warna Maan zyada dost nahi banata..

Geet: lekin main to special hoon na..there was silence for a moment..i mean..his childhood frend..

Mr. Khurana smiled: hmm..

Geet got a little embarrassed.."aur uncle aap ko pata hai..Maan is REALLII SWEET..she sed looking at Maan wid apologizing eyes..

Maan cud easily notice that she was telling him that..he smiled but quickly brought back again that angry expression on his face

Mr. Khurana: achaa..woh kaise..actually kya hai na..iski maa..aur dadi hamesha kehtee hain k yeh kaafi akhrhoo hai..actually mostly ladkiyan kehtee hain

Maan: DAD!!..he sed in a complaining tone

Geet: nahi nahi uncle..woh to jab yeh ghussay main hota hai na.. tab thora chidchida hojata hai..warna..i knw..hez very caring and a full gentle man..she kept praising while looking at him..

For an unknown reason Maan started blushing..he was feeling stupid..

Maan: ok Geet..i think now dad knws wat u r trying to say..he sed staring angrily at her..telling her to stop..

Mr. Khurana smiled.." Beta actually its U!..shayad tumhare meethay saath ki wajah se..yeh Maan bhi sudhar gaya hai..!..he told Geet..looking at Maan..who was now totally embarrassed..

Maan: Dad!..i was never that akrhoo..

Geet: so tum maantay ho k tum pehlay akrhoo thay..she sed excitedly looking at him..

Mr. Khurana: haan Maan..ab bolo..

Maan was now frustrated.."Dad..aap apnay betay ki taang keech rahay hain..Geet k saath milkar.."..he complained like a kid

Mr. Khurana: ab Geet bhi to meri beti jaisee hai..soo

Maan: ohh ok Dad!..

Geet was soo touched ..."thanx uncle"

Mr. Khurana smiled..

"kya baatien ho rahee hain?" Dadi sed cuming out of the kitchen..wid Mrs. Handa and Khurana behind her

Mr. Khurana: Kuch nahi maa..Main aur Geet aise he Maan ko pareshaan kar rahe hain..

Mrs.Khurana: haha..acha..

Mrs. Handa: to phir to main Maan ki team main hoon..theek hai Maan..

Maan looked at her in hope.."thanx a lot aunty..i really needed the support"

Every1 laughed..

Mrs. Khurana: chalo..ab sab khana kahlo..she sed sitting in her chair..

Bholu and 2 other servants were serving the food on table..and every1 started eating

Mrs. Handa: Bhai sahab aapko koi baat karni thee

Mr. Khurana: oh haan..

Mrs. Handa: koi zaroori baat hai kya?

Mrs. Khurana: aik surprise hai

Geet: WoW surprise..she excitedly jumped in her chair..every1 laughed..

Geet: ohh..ss..sorry..She sed embarrassingly looking at every1 and Maan..who just sighed..

She ignored and kept eating her dinner..

Mr. Khurana: parjaai..aaj hum jaa rahay hain?

Every1 except for Dadi and Mrs Khurana looked at him..

Maan: dad..hum?

Mr. Khurana: poori baat to sunlo..tum nahi hum!

Mrs. Handa: aap..aur kaun..kaun kahan jaa raha hai?..she sed confusingly

Mrs. Khurana to Mr. Khurana: oho..aap bhi kya pahelian bujha rahe hain!..now she looked at Mrs Handa.."Bhabi hum..matlab..main..yeh (Mr. Khurana)..maa..aur aap..jaa rahe hain..business tour par..London

It was a Surprise for Mrs. Handa..Geet and most importantly Maan!

Maan: dad..aaplog and business tour..aur main..yahan par akela..

Geet was sad that every1 forgot about her..

Mr. Khurana: akelay nahi..Geet hogi na tumhare saath..!

They both looked at each other.."But dad.." Maan tried to protest but Dadi cut him off

Dadi: tum log ladte nahi ho..achay se rehtay ho..baday ho..to hum tum dono ko saath main chor kar jaa saktay hain na..

Maan: lekin dadi..he again tried to say something but this time Mr. Khurana interrupted..

Mr. Khurana: Maaann!!..he sed looking at him..telling him to stop..

Maan quiet down..

Mrs. Handa: Lekin bhai sahab..hum log..iss tarha..bachon ko akela chor kar..

Mr. Khurana: Parjaai..hum ne yeh faisla bohot soch samajh kar liya hai..aur ab Geet aur Maan bachay nahi hain..im sure they can take a very good care of themselves and also they can take care of eachother too..and as Geet sed..Maan is realli sweet to her..so therez nothing to worry about..aur waise bhi..it is all about ur and our business..aap wahan naye dealers se bhi mil sakti hain

Mrs. Handa: Lekin..

Dadi: Rupinder!..meri baat bhi nahi maano gee..main bhi to chal rahee hoon..phir business k liye bhi acha hai..pareshaan hone waali koi baat nahi hai..mana nahi karna..

Mrs Handa looked at Geet..and then at Dadi who was insisting..

Mrs. Handa: ok..theek hai..hum chalain gai..agar Geet ko koi pareshaani nahi hai to..hum kabhi iss tarha alag nahi rahay!

Geet: no no..maa..i will be ok..u go!..she sed sadly..but pretended to be ok

Mr. Khurana: Geet bhi humaray saath chaltee..lekin uska college tha to iss liye..and Maan yahan business sambhalay ga!..rite Maan!..he sed to a quiet Maan..

Maan: rite dad!

Mrs. Khurana: bhabhi..ab aadat daal lijiye..jab Geet ki shaadi hogi tab kya karain gee

Geet felt her cheek turning pink on the shaadi topic..she stealthily looked at Maan..suddenly she remembered when Maan grabbed her..and asked her to marry him..she looked at him..and every1 else to make sure no 1 was looking at her..specially Maan..or else he will laugh at her

Mrs. Handa: haha..tab..tab ki tab dekhi jaaigee..lekin kabhi kabhi yahi soch kar fikar hoti hai

Mr. Khurana: fikar nahi karain parjai..upar waale ne iska bhi kuch intezaam karke rakha hoga..he sed smilingly

Mrs.Khurana: acha..aik aur surprise hai..

Maan: aik aur surprise..he sed nervously

Mr. Khurana: hmmm..aur woh yeh hai..k hum aaj raat he nikal rahay hain..3: 30 par

Geet and Maan: wat!!!

Mrs. Handa: lekin mera saamaan..!!

Mrs. Khurana: aap ne pack kar liya hai..remember..shift honay k liye..u have packed up..

Mrs. Handa: oh haan!..

Dadi: to phir chalo..sab ready hai..u take care of ur passport

Geet: and wat about Visa..

Mr. Khurana: hogaya hai..mera contact hai embassy walon se

Geet: ohh ok..uncle..aik request hai!

Mr. Khurana: bolo na beta

Geet: kya main aap logon ko airport chodne aa saktee hoon

Mr. Khurana: hmm..haan agar Maan maan jaye..because it will be late..and tum kaise wapas aao gee

Geet looked at Maan wid pleading eyes.."Plzz Maan" she sed in a low tone..

Maan sighed..

Dadi: maan jaao Maan..waise bhi humko drop karne to aaogai na..to Geet bhi aajaigee saath main..waise bhi kal Saturday hai..phir Sunday tum dono ki chuttee

Geet: oh yeah..

Maan: ok!..hum chalain gai!..

Geet: thank uuu Maan..look uncle..i told u..hez sweet!..

Maan: o plzz Geet..dont start again..he pleaded..and every1 laughed once again

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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
loved it
update next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
U really updated after long tim
Liked update
Maan was jus extending that teasing part i felt
Liked the way he was convenceing himself ki he isnt changing
Dinner table convo was fab
Maan n Geet alone in house awesum lets c wat happens
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hii!! Missed you soo much
hope the house move went ok!!
Wish you well in your new home!!
thanks for a wonderful update .. great set up for the next chapter!!!
can't wait!!!
thankx again!!
Uzma xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome! Maan was talking to his reflection in the mirror.....lolz......just like Geet talks to herself.......lolz......Geet was trying so hard to manaofy him......that guy was acting all pricey hun....dil mein toh laddoo phoot rahe honge itni tareef sunke.....lolz.....hmm.....the Khuranas have something planned......trying to make Geet and Maan spend some time alone......great! Superb update! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
awwwww it was amazing
cant wait for the nxt part
atleast u got internet connection now lol
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Why do I have a feeling that all this is a plan of the oldies
(Sorry,I meant the parents)???
I keep thinking that they found out from somewhere and now they want to turn into the truth...Whatever it is!!!!!
Yay...now Maneet will be stuck under one roof together for quite some time....perhaps they could even fall in love by then...
This is great way to keep the ff going...I love it!
Please update soon...and Congrats on ur new house!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
can't believe maan and geet all alone in the house
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it....i cant wait for maan geet scenes alone....Plzzzz do continue soon

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