FF:PREMEER note pg-110 - Page 20

Originally posted by: NIMMY

hehe......i knw lots of them where Q.s but wht to do exam de kar yahi hal gaya hai.........

loved it

Plz add me to your pm list

and loved the fact tht prem culd nt deny heers request...........

and the last part was.... utterly romantic

THANKS! ADDED U IN MY PM LIST.NOW I CAN UNDERSTAND THE REASON BEHIND UR QUESTIONS.

ALMOST READY WITH THE NEXT PART WILL POST IT IN 10 MINUTES.

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PREM: KYA TUMHE PEHLE KISI NE KAHA HAI HEER KI TUMHARI AANKHEN BAHUT KHOOBSURAT HAIN.

HE SAID IN A TONE NEAR TO THAT OF A WHISPER.




SHE DIDN'T REPLIED BECOZ THE WAY PREM WAS LOOKING AT HER MESMERIZED SHE FELT BOUND BY THE GAZE IN HIS DARK CHOCOLATE BROWN EYES.


PREM: TUMNE JAWAB NAHIN DIYA HEER.


SHE MOVED HER HEAD SHOWING A NO AS THE ANSWER OF HIS QUESTION.


PREM: I AM GLAD THAT I AM THE FIRST ONE TO TELL U THAT U REALLY HAVE A VERY PRETTY EYES.

HIS TONE WAS STILL NEAR TO THAT OF A WHISPER.AS A RESPONSE TO HIS COMPLEMENT HEER BLUSHED AND LOWERED HER EYES WHICH BROUGHT A SMILE ON PREM'S FACE.


PREM: EXCUSE ME FOR A SECOND.

PREM SAID THIS AND MOVED TOWARDS THE ALMIRAH AGAIN.HEER DIDN'T TAKE A LOOK AT HIM AS SHE DON'T HAVE THE COURAGE TO FACE HIS EYES.SHE WAS FEELING VERY SHY AT THE WAY PREM WAS LOOKING AT HER.SHE CAN STILL FEEL THE GOOSEBUMPS WHEN SHE REMEMBERED HIS TOUCH AT HER CHEEKS THE MOMENT HE TUCKED HER HAIR.



SHE WAS LOST IN THOSE FEELINGS WHEN PREM CAME IN FRONT OF HER HOLDING A WOODEN BOX IN HIS HANDS.


SHE NOTICED THAT HIS EYES SWELLED UP.HE WAS ABOUT TO BREAK DOWN BUT CONTROLLING IN FRONT OF HER.


HE TOOK HER ONE HAND IN HIS HAND AND PLACED THAT BOX IN HER HAND.


PREM: ISE KHOLO HEER.

HE SAID LOOKING IN HER EYES.HIS EYES WERE STILL WET.


HEER: MAIN NAHIN KHOLUNGI.

PREM LOOKED AT HER QUESTIONING.

PREM: PAR KYUN HEER?TUM NAHIN JANTI KI YE KYA HAI.PAR MAIN CHAHTA HOON KI TUM JANO HEER.MAIN CHAHTA HOON KI TUM MUJHSE JUDI HAR BAAT KO JANO.MAIN TUMHE AAJ APNE BARE MAIN SABKUCH BATANA CHAHTA HOON.PLEASE IS BOX KO KHOLO HEER KYUNKI MUJHME ISE KHOLNE KI HIMMAT NAHIN HAI.

HE PLEADED TO HER.

PREM SAW THAT HEER'S EYES BECAME WET.HE CAN SEE THE PAIN THAT SHE IS FEELING FOR HIM.THERE WAS NOT PITY FOR HIM IN HER EYES BUT THERE WERE PAIN WHICH SHE IS FEELING IN HER HEART.

HEER: I AM SORRY PREM PAR MAIN IS BOX KO NAHIN KHOL SAKTI.ISE DEKHTE HI TUMHARI AANKHON MEIN ITNA DARD HAI PREM AGAR MAINE YE BOX KHOL DIYA TO TUM EK BAAR PHIR USI DARD SE GUZROGE PREM JISKE SIRF EHSAAS SE TUMHE ITNI TAQLEEF HOTI HAI.AUR MAIN TUMHE ITNE DARD ITNI TAQLEEF MEIN NAHIN DEKH PAUNGI PREM.

AND A TEAR ROLLED ONTO HER CHEEKS.

PREM: PAR HEER KUCH DINO MEIN HAMARI SHADI HONE WALI HAI DO DIN BAAD HAMARI SAGAI HAI AUR MAIN CHAHTA HOON KI.....

HEER: SHHHHH..(HEER PLACED HER HAND ON PREM'S LIPS WHICH MADE HIM NUMB.)
HEER:MAIN JANTI HOON PREM KI HAMARI SHADI HONE WALI HAI AUR SHAYAD ISI WAJAH SE MAIN TUMHE TAQLEEF MEIN NAHIN DEKH SAKTI.
SHE SAID THIS AND TURNED TO LEAVE FROM THERE PLACING THAT BOX AT THE BED.

PREM: ISME SANJANA KI PHOTOGRAPHS HAI HEER.
HE SAID AND WAITED TO SEE HER REACTION.HEER FELT ROOTED AT THE PLACE WHERE SHE WAS STANDING.SHE TURNED TO LOOK AT THE BOX AND THEN SHE LOOKED AT PREM.

PREM: KYA AB BHI TUM ISE NAHIN DEKHNA CHAHTI HEER?

HE SAID LOOKING AT HER.

SHE CAME NEAR TO PREM STILL LOOKING INTO HIS EYES.

HEER: NAHIN! AB TO MAIN ISE KABHI NAHIN DEKHNA CHAHTI.KYUNKI ISMEIN US INSAAN KA CHEHRA HAI JISNE TUMHE ITNA DARD DIYA.TUMHARE CHEHRE KI MUSKURAHAT GAYAB HO GAYI SIRF USKI WAJAH SE.AUR MAIN AISE KISI BHI INSAN KI SHAKAL TAK NAHIN DEKHNA CHAHTI JISKE SIRF NAAM SE IN ANKHON MEIN AANSU A JAYE.
TEARS STARTED FLOWING FROM HER EYES.WHICH HURT PREM A LOT HIS HEART ACHED THE PAIN GREW MORE IN HIS EYES COZ HE CAN'T SEE THAT.HIS OWN PAIN WAS ALMOST LOST IN THAT PAIN WHICH HE FELT SEEING THOSE TEARS IN HEER'S EYES.

HE DON'T KNOW WHY BUT HE JUST HUGGED HER TIGHTLY.AT FIRST HEER CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHAT JUST HAPPENED BUT WHEN SHE FELT THE WARMTH IN HIS ARMS THE WAY HE JUST HELD HER IN HIS ARMS MADE HER MELT IN HIS ARMS A HAVOC CREATED INSIDE HER.PREM GRIPPED HER ARMS MORE TIGHLY AROUND HER FEELING THE WARMTH OF HER BODY AND HEER ALSO MOVED HER HANDS AT HIS BACK AND HOLD HIM TIGHTLY AS SHE DON'T WANT THIS MOMENT TO END.


I KNOW THAT ITS VERY EMOTIONAL PART GUYS BUT I JUST FELT THET IT WAS NECESSARY.WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS AND SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES.

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and thanks a lot for ur response to the previous post. 😃

me*
hey very emotional update
but still great 😊
prem is so sweet he and he wanted to show heer sanjanas photos 😭
im glad heer didnt want to see them and she shouldnt anyway 😛
i hope prem forgets his love for sanjana and start loving heer
and i hope heer throws that box in the trash and all the other things which reminds prem of sanjana
thanks for the pm
update soon

its very nice awesome part waitingggggg for next asap

Originally posted by: sonia7

me*
hey very emotional update
but still great 😊
prem is so sweet he and he wanted to show heer sanjanas photos 😭
im glad heer didnt want to see them and she shouldnt anyway 😛
i hope prem forgets his love for sanjana and start loving heer
and i hope heer throws that box in the trash and all the other things which reminds prem of sanjana
thanks for the pm
update soon

thanks! will update asap!

wow!!!!!!!!!it ws grt!!!!!

Originally posted by: moon_mine

wow!!!!!!!!!it ws grt!!!!!

their first hug!!!!!

i mst say m lovng this chap!!!!!!!

hw wll cud heer feel his pain!!!!!

dunno knw wen prem wll realise his love for heer?????

watng fr that moment to come!!!!!!!

nw watng for the nxt part....

update asap!!!!!

THANKS! I M ALSO WAITING FOR THAT MOMENT. 😉

WILL UPDATE ASAP.

Awesome update !
Loved it !
It was indeed a very emotional part !
Loved Heers care towards Prem !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !