FF:PREMEER note pg-110

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Posted: 15 years ago

THIS IS A STORY ABOUT A BOY AND A GIRL WHO FALL IN LOVE DEEPLY AND MADLY WITH EACH OTHER. THEIR JOURNEY STARTS WITH HATE AND CLASHES BUT WITH EVERY PASSING SECOND THIS RELATIONSHIP TURNS INTO A STRONG FRIENDSHIP AND THEN IN LOVE.

CHARECTER SKETCH:

PREM JUNEJA:A person who is the owner of the juneja empire.the eldest son of his parents he is very close to his family but can't express his feelings.a person who is not loved by all because of his rude nature.physically attractive tall,dark,handsome the drea man of every girl his dark brown eyes have a passion in them.

HEER MANN: a bubbly and lovable girl.her jolly nature makes her loved by all.she believes in family values.she is the only daughter of her parents.Not so rich but very cute.She is fair,broad eyed girl

CHAPTER 1

prem is in his way to office as usual on time.He never gets late and hoping to not get late as he is having a very important meeting this morning.after that he is gonna take interviews of the candidates for his personal secretary.He planned his whole schedule on the laptop.He calls the manager Mr.Sharma just to confirm that his presentation is ready.while he was in these thoughts suddenly a girl came in front of her car.prem made a sudden break and the girl got little hurt.Prem came out of his car and shouted on her.

PREM: tumhe dikhayi nahin deta kya?
HEER:mujhe dikhayi nahin deta?dikhayi to aapko nahin deta chashme ki sakht zaroorat hai aapko!
PREM:kya kaha tumne mujhe chashme ki zaroorat hai mujhe?
HEER: ji bilkul thik sahi suna apne agar aaj me beech mei\ nahin ati to ye puppy apki car ke neeche aa jata
PREM: nahin aisa bilkul nahin hota maine us puppy ko dekh liya tha.

HEER: acha aap ek saath kitne kam karte hain?aap driving ke saath phone par baat kar rahe the aur aapka dhyan road par bhi tha?
PREM: tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhse is tarah baat karne ki tu janti bhi ho main kaun hu.?

HEER;NAHIN! aur janna bhi nahin chahti is desh ke prime minister ko bhi traffic rules todne ka koi haq nahin hai.

CHAPTER 3

WILL UPDATE THE LINK OF ALL THE CHAPTERS ASAP.
CLICK HERE FOR CHAPTER-4

click here for chapter-1

click here for chapter-2

click here for chapter-5

chapter-6..

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Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago

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nice....

wen you continue plz do let me know!

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Nice story !
I liked it !
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Good start continue soon..... Prem ko tumne kadoos banadiya 😔, premeer ki ladayi! ab maza ayega

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awsum start...
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nice one
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Heer Jhansi ki rani always ready to fight...........

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UPDATE......................................
PREM AND HEER BOTH WERE FIGHTING ON THE ROAD LIKE KIDS.IN BETWEEN THEIR ARGUMENTS A CAR PASSED WHICH STOPPED NEARBY PREM AN HEER A LONG TALL AND SMART GUY CAME OUT OF THE CAR.HE WAS PREET PREM'S YOUNGER BROTHER.HE WAS IN A STATE OF SHOCK AFTER SEEING HIS BROTHER FIGHTING WITH A GIRL LIKE THIS.HE CAME IN BETWWEN THEM TO STOP THIS SUPERHEATED CONVERSATION.
PREET: BHAIYA AAP YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HAIN? ABHI TAK OFFICE NAHIN GAYE?
SUDDENLY PREM REALISES THAT HE IS LATE FOR THE MEETING.HE RUSHES TO HIS CAR GIVING A WARNING TO THE GIRL.
PREM: TUMHE TO MAIN BAAD MEIN DEKH LUNGA.
HE DROVE VERY FAST TO MAKE IT TO THE OFFICE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.WHEN HE REACHED HIS OFFICE HE WAS APPROXIMATELY AN HOUR LATE AND THE DEAL WAS GONE.THIS HAPPENED TO HIM FIRST TIME HE NEVER LOST ANY CONTRACT BUT THIS TIME IT HAPPENED ONLY BECAUSE OF THAT STUPID GIRL HE THOUGHT.
PREM WAS NOT IN A GOOD MOOD HE WAS VERY FRUSTRATED.SO HE CHOSE TO CANCEL THE INTERVIEW FOR HIS SECRETARY BUT HIS DAD SUGGESTED HIM THAT HE CAN TAKE THE INTERVIEWS AND HE AGREED FOR THIS.

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PREM LOCKED HIMSELF IN HIS CABIN FOR 3 HOURS.NOBODY DISTURBED HIM AS THEY KNOW THAT THIS MAY RESULT TO FACE THEM THE ANGER OF PREM.IN BETWEEN THESE THREE HOURS PREM'S DAD TOOK THE INTERVIEWS AND SELECTED A GIRL.THIS GIRL WAS LOOKING VERY PRETTY AND ELEGANT HER MIND WAS VERY SHARP AND SHE WAS VERY CONFIDENT SHE WAS WEARING WHITE BASE SUIT WITH EMBROIDERY FROM RED SEEDS AND A RED DUPATTA AND HER NAME WAS HEER MANN.

guys! her are the links of the update of chapter-1 just click on the following.

update-1&2

update-3&4

update-5&6

update-7&8

update-9

Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago