DOWRY DEATH - By CIDians - Page 2

Like Zerry said, I too didn't like the final twist of Trupthi's father setting the trap to kill Mithali in revenge... they should have instead portrayed him as a sympathetic character rather than wanting to take "revenge" on someone who had not done any intentional harm to them in the first place. It would have been better if Mithali's death was accidental, and the in-laws accidentally blurting out their plan to Trupthi after they witness what had happened. That would be more apt, them getting caught in their own trap.

Also I think the title was rather inaccurate since their motives were more regarding extra-marital affair than dowry... so they should've either worked to give the dowry part prominence or changed the title. Preferably the former.

Hmm..everyone's already said everything I wanted to post. But, neverthless...

In the end they should have found some solid evidence that the dad was the one who made the call. They didn't even find solid proof and the dad just pulls out his gun and starts confessing??! Or they should have shown some kind of plotting to get the dad captured....let's say, it goes like this:

(The doorbell rings at Trupti's parents house and Trupti's dad opens the door. Trupti is standing there crying. )

Dad: Trupti! Tum aagayi! Kaha chali gayi thi tum? Aur kya hua! Tumhari haath jal gayi!

(Trupti bursts out crying...)

Trupti: Papa! Mere apne pati aur unke maa baap ne mujhe marne ki koshish ki! Mujhe unke godown mein bandh kar ke rakha unhone....Bohot mushqil se waha se bhaag aayi...

Dad: Mujhe pata tha! Mujhe pata tha...iss mein unhi logon ka haath hai! Abhi CID waalon ko khabar karte hai...

Trupti: Nahin papa! Nahin! CID ko mat bulao....

Dad: Lekin kyun?

Trupti: Mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai papa....maine kissi ka khoon kiya hai!

Papa: Kya?! Yeh kya keh rahi ho!

Trupti: Haan papa...main jab apni cell phone lene apni ghar gayi, toh wahan Mitali aag mein jal rahi thi! Agar mein ghar mein hi rukti, toh yeh sab nahin hota! Marna toh mujhe chahiye tha! Mithali toh kamaka mar gayi.... (cries some more)

Dad(Looking gleeful): Toh iss mein tumhari galati kya thi?! Chalo achcha hi hua ki woh mar gayi! Woh issi ki layak thi!....chup ho jao Trupti beta. Iss mein tumhari koi galati nahin hai. Uss ki wajah se jo tumhare saath hua...uss ki baad toh koi bhi baap yahin chahega ki usski aise hi bayanak maut ho jaaye...

Trupti: Papa...yeh aap kya keh rahein hai....?

Dad: Haan Trupti beta...maine tumhare sasural waalon ke baatein sunliya tha. Mujhe pata tha ki woh tumhe marna chahte the....issiliye maine tumhe ghar le aaya. Aur jab mein tumhare ghar mein tha aur tum andar gayi suitcase laane ke liye, maine hi phone kiya tha Mithali ko, Sandeep ban kar, aur usse ghar bulaya....

Trupti: Papa! Yeh aapne kya kiya....!

(The door bell rings again...dad goes to open the door. The CID team enters the house)

Dad: CID?! Aap log yahan? Dekhiye...maine kaha tha na, Trupti ke sasulral waalon ne hi usse pakad ke rakha? Dekhiye Trupti unki khabse se bhaag kar, ghar aa gayi...

Abhijit: Bohot ho gaya aapka drama...

Dad: Yeh kya keh rahein hai aap? Mujhe toh kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha...

(Trupti comes forward...)

Trupti: Papa, aapko aisa nahin karna chahiye tha... (and takes our a tiny microphone attached to her dupatta and gives it to Abhijit, crying)
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And you can imagine what must've happened after this....😉 hehe

THE END

Kay....I agree, not great, but definitely better than that "pulling out the gun" act!!

Originally posted by: Shagnika

Involving the character Mitali was completely unneccesary and added to the negative point in my opinion. Instead of bringing in things like Extra marital affair and sense of revenge, theyshould have concentrated more on the Dowry aspect. They could have shown that they disnt find any dead body till
towards the end. Even of they did, it must hav not given much help... U know some trick that they find proof against the the in laws. 😕

i agree