Mayur Sajan FF: Milege kabhi hum tum??? # 2

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Hello friends.....

Welcome to thread # 2 of my FF...

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It's all because of supportive and encouraging readers that I could do this.

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I never imagined that any of my FF will reach to page 100... 😆 😆

But just because of you all, I am here. Opening up a new thread of this FF.

😊 😊

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Now, I am stopping my chapar chapar...

And scroll down for Concept, CS and old parts' overview just if you want to...

I am posting them soon...

Love,
Shreyu

P.S: Keep encouraging me in future, too.. 😊 😳
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~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~INDEX~~~ ~~~ ~~~ ~~~


Story So far- Page 1
Part 25 - Page 2
Part 26 - Page 8
Part 27 - Page 12
Part 27 - Page 17 - Last Part
Edited by ..Shreyu.. - 12 years ago
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**** **** **** ****Concept**** **** **** ****


Nupur lives alone in Mumbai with her sister's son. Mayank is in business with his father. Mayank's dad is very angry. Gunjan is Mayank's cousin. GuNur are best friends and colleague in a Computer coaching class. Samrat owns that class. He is Mayank's best friends. He secretly loves Gunjan, but Gunjan doesn't believe in love.

**** **** **** ****Character Sketch**** **** **** ****



Nupur Bhushan:
A girl, who is 22, lives alone in Mumbai. Her parents are abroad. She has a sweet 'bhanja' to take care of, because her sister and jiju met an accident before 2 years. Nupur loves him so much. She teaches in a computer coaching class for earnings. She will marry a person who would accept her with her 'bhanja'. She has no hurry.

Parth Malhotra:
Nupur's bhanja. A sweet, naughty boy of 4 years, who makes his masi run behind him everywhere. He loves his masi and can't see her sad. But no one knows how understanding this little boy is.

Mayank Sharma:
A boy who believes in hard work. He is very serious about life but he is also fun-loving. His moto is: "WORK WHILE YOU WORK, PLAY WHILE YOU PLAY?
THAT IS THE WAY TO BE HAPPY, LET'S SAY?"
He is 24 years. M.B.A. from a reputed university, and he helps his dad in business.

Suresh Sharma:
Mayank's dad, who always wants to see Mayank happy. He gets very angry sometimes and can't control his temper. He lives only for his son, after his wife (Mayank's mom) passed away. Once he gets angry, he needs time to cool down. Only Mayank can cool him down.

Samrat Shergil:
Mayank's best friend, who lives alone and owns a Computer Coaching Class. (Right? He is Nupur's boss.) He believes a lot in true love for life time and marriage.

Gunjan Sharma:
Mayank's cousin. But they have not met each other for last 15 years. (Like Suhani & Samrat in MJHT track) She is Nupur's colleague. Samrat has a crush on Gunjan, but Gunjan doesn't believe in love or marriage at all. Her dream is to be a great industrialist of India. For that she is collecting money by 2 jobs. One in computer class on week days, and then in call centre on week ends. She is somewhat angry, but can do anything for Nupur, her bestest friend.


Ok.... Here was the Concept and Character Sketch, if anyone forgot what was that 😆 😆 😉

Now, I will post the outline of the story very soon...

I promise to finish it in as short way as I could... 😉 😉 But if I can't help it... Its up to you, whether to read it or not... 😳



STORY SO FAR


Nupur is doing a teaching job in a private computer coaching class, which is owned by Samrat. She has to take care of her sister's son, Parth, a 4 year old sweet and smart kid, as her sister and jiju died in an accident a year ago. She is upset in her life due to a bad guy who had bothered her so much. She believed in love till that time, and she was bubbly and chirpy girl. But after Akhil did injustice to her, she became a calm and sad person.
Gunjan is a fiery girl who wants to make her career and doesn't believe in love until she finds a perfect person for her.
Mayank is a person who believes in hard work and he also values his friends more than anything. And he is Gunjan's cousin, too. He and Gunjan haven't met each other for so many years, so he didn't know where she is. Fijnally, he completes his post graduation and comes to India.
Samrat owns the Computer coaching class. And he is head to foot in love with his employee, Gunjan Sharma. But as he is not sure about her feelings, he doesn't say. He is Mayank's best friend since college time.

All their lives take different direction just in one day…

At that day, it was Mayank's birthday and Samrat wanted to spend full day with him. He takes him to introduce Gunjan and Nupur. Mayank gets attracted to Nupur and he also comes to know that Gunjan Sharma is in India only. The cousins meet after a long time and so Gunjan is not willing him to go away so soon. As Nupur and Gunjan had to go to take Parth shopping, the decision is taken that all four will go with Parth at mall.

Parth is a very friendly kid and becomes Mayank's best pal in no time. While Mayank was talking to Parth and Nupur, Samrat and Gunjan decide for Mayank's surprise party.

So Samrat and Gunjan leaves for arranging party, where Samrat started to love and adore Gunjan even more. And Gunjan became Samrat's really good friend.

Here Mayank and Nupur share some cute moments in mall, which effects Mayank's mind more than anything, while Nupur becomes a little uncomfortable.
Then at evening, Mayank and Nupur are compelled to participate in best family competition with Parth due to Parth's stubbornness. And to their surprise, they won the event.
Later Samrat and Gunjan makes Mayank come with them for a party. Nupur also goes there as Parth was excited for that.

While they were enjoying the party, something happened which shouldn't have.

When Samrat-Gunjan and Mayank-Nupur were engrossed in a dance, Akhil made Nupur cry by some rude comments. And she went from there.

While Gunjan and Samrat were searching Nupur inside, Mayank went outside to look for her and he made Nupur feel good by his consolation.

At that moment, Nupur felt all her pain vanishing, she cried in his arms and told him everything that Akhil had done to her.

Mayank made her understand that she should not stop living her life due to him. That day, both became life long friends, always ready to help in bad times.

After that Mayank and Nupur slowly fell in love, but they had still not confessed it to each other.
Here, Samrat and Gunjan also shared strong bonding and Gunjan started feeling something for Samrat.
And more over, Mayank and Samrat's college friend and Gunjan's school friend came in India, who helped Gunjan to realize her love.

One day, Samrat and Gunjan finally confessed their love to each other and were so much happy to tell Mayank. But at that same time, Mayank's dad had told him to go to business tour for a month.

Mayank met Nupur and left for business tour.

In this one month, they both missed each other so much. Because of this, Nupur realized her love, and Mayank decided to propose to her as soon as he meets her on reaching home.

As he went India, fate played with them.

They were going to get engaged due to their parent's wish when Akhil again created problem for them.

After this, Nupur's parents took Parth with them abroad.

Mayank and Nupur were feeling sorry for each other and were not able to meet each other. But due to Samrat-Gunjan-Sheena's planning, they met on 4 day picnic again.

They confessed their love and returned Mumbai with even stronger bond.

Here, Gunjan is trapped by RV but she saves herself and Samrat also helps her in recovering.

Mayank's dad reads Nupur's diary. He comes to know about truth about Mayank, Nupur and Akhil. So he agrees for their marriage.

Mayank-Nupur and Samrat-Gunjan all have their engagement now…

Nupur's parents also agreed and Parth is more than happy with this news. They all came to india as oon as possible for engagement.

And now, engagement is coming up…

Mostly tomorrow…

So keep reading…




Edited by ..Shreyu.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: achoose

woow...2nd thread...congrats dear................................


Thank you Achoose... 😊

I can't say how much happy I am... 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I know, the pic I have posted is really simple and bakwas...

But please forgive me for that...

I uploaded the pic on IF for the first time...

Will try to do better than this in future... 😊

And I also know, that I have not done good in story so far...

Lekin acchhe se likhne jati to bahot jyadaaaaaaaaa lamba ho jata...

So bear with me...

Love,
Shreyu 😊
Edited by ..Shreyu.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Shreyu..


Thank you Achoose... 😊

I can't say how much happy I am... 😳 😳

u r always welcome dear....and i am so happy that i am the 1st to comment in the 2nd thread.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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best of luck for your new thread
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey congo 4 ur new thread!!!
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hi... congrats on ur new thread....
ur last 6 updates wer awesome... read it in 1 go...
looking forward 4 d engegement....
thnx 4 d pm.. do cont soon..
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woooooooow shre congortssssssss 🤗 so happy 4 u hun n don't say ur not doing good so far in d story ur absuletly doing fantastic n ur good at wat ur doing so don't underestimate ur self shre lov samira

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