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Posted: 15 years ago
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its amazing meeno ....................i loved it .......ineed ArTi are made for each other .........hope they confess and declare it soon .........loved the OS lots and next time plz do me pm wen u write more ..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aite- Now im free from skool
so i will defo write on soon

thnc for reading once again=)
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Helllo guyys....

Ok this is a Monaya Os- DIL HUA FIDA😳😳

This OS is dedicated to Sana, she requested for it...I know its reallly late...but here it is! I had it written but just needed to type it...
Hope you all enjoy it...its veryy long, so take your time and enjoyyy😳

P.S: It'll be easier to understand the beginnning if you read the endind of ARTI- DIL HUA FIDA...it'll make more sense😃😃

Ok...you can read now...happy readingg

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As mohit and sanaya walked away from arjun and rati they began to laugh.

Sanaya- Loh Iss waqt to hume taxi bhi bahut mushkil se mile gi. (she put her hands together in a prayer way) Plzz God, kaheen se bhi taxi ya riksha bej doh.

Mohit: Tum toh aise keh rah ho, jaise tum jo bhi mango gi, who tumhare samne a aye gi.Magic huh?

Sanaya- eh Hello, jab bhi mein tumhe bulatey hoon, tum ata ho ya nhi?

Mohit- Kyunke who mein hoon, sab meri tara, sweet aur cute thore na hote hain.

Sanaya smiled and pulled his cheeks - ofcourse, you are one cute single piece in the world!

She really meant it, from the bottom of her heart, Mohit was a sweetheart! He was the sweetest guy she had ever met, he was always there for her, and helped her even when she didn't need any. He was always there to cheer her up on her worst days, always ready to make her laugh with his cute jokes whenever she was sad. All of these qualities really made her fall for him'HARD!

Even though Sanaya was not at all like Gunjan, they only shared one similarity. When Gunjan fell in Love, she didn't tell Samrat about it, because she was afraid that these news will break their friendship into pieces, and he might not like her back.

Sanaya also didn't tell Mohit because she thought this may effect their awesome friendship and things may never be the same again. Mohit was a chilling kind of person, doing stuff just for the fun of it, and she knew him well, from what it seems like, he didn't share the same feeling-according to her perspective.

Mohit- Oye taxxiii Rukhoo( waving his arms in the air)
Sanaya- thnxx God, hume finally koi taxi mil gaye.

They sat inside, it was reallly hot, even though the weather oustide was pretty cool.

Mohit- Soo, Neetu aunty, iss waqt ghar pe? Everything alrite?

Sanaya- ofcourse, you know she pops up anytime(she told him excitedly) .
She is just like me, un ko time ki koi parwa nahe, milna hai toh phir milna hai!

Sanaya continued to talk about her aunty. Mohit just listened to her, with all his ears!
He loved to listen to her talk. She had so much energy and hyperness in her, and who bahut cute baatein karte hai.

Actually, Mohit loved everything about Sanaya, Escpecially her personality. She was fun to hang around with. Mohit always wanted his girlfriend to be like her. He loved her with all his heart, and wished she could be his girlfriend(aand more').
But he knew he was asking for something impossible.
He knew Sanaya well, and he certainly wasn't her type of dream guy. Oh well, he got to spend 14 hours a day with her. What more could he ask for? He was happy with what he got. But he kept in mind to try to act like the guy sanaya liked, he always listened to her and did what she asked sweetly.

Mohit- WOW ( he said still stuck in his own little dream world)
S: Kya WOW?
M: hmmm, who tumhare Neetu aunty, WOW, She sounds like a greatt person.
S: who toh hain (she said smiling) you know'.

Suddenly the taxi started to slow down, they both wondered what was up.

S: Kya hua Bhaiyya?
M: Dekhtein hain.
M and S went oout of the car following the taxi driver outside.

M: Kya hua?
Taxi Driver: Maaf kijiye, meri taxi ka tire flat ho gaya hai. Mein app logon ko app ke ghar tak nahi poncha payon ga.

S: Oh Nooo! (disappointed)

M: Oh well, ab toh kuch nahi hho sakta. Lets walk'only option,

S and M started to walk alongside on the road. There wasn't much traffic around, as it was getting kinda late and everyone was usually at home by this time.

S: I loooove Night walks. They are soo relaxing and its not that hot at night.

M: me too, they really are veryy relaxing. Mein apne girlfriend ko har Raat ko walk pe la jayon ga.

Sanaya blushed and was glad it was nite so M couldn't see her tomato face.

Sanaya- Yea I'll be very happy( she was joking but wanted to see what M would say.

M: huh? TUM????

S was hurt by his tone of voice when he said tum!

S: don't get too excited, I was just kidding, I meant ko whoever she'll be, willl be happy!

M: just kidding yaar, anywyz tum ghar kaise jao ge?

S: I dunno yaar, I have an idea, I'll climb on your back and since you're so strong u can give me a ride to my home'hahaha

M: Ok come, I dunt mind.

S: Moooohit, I was just kiddin( hitting him playfully)

Laughing and thinking once again what a sweeet and humble guy he was.

M: haha, by the way, my house is very near.

S: yea yo, I didn't think about that. But still I am very tired, my feets hurt.

M: tum'

S's phone rand at that moment, before M could finish what he was saying.

S: hey mom'

Maa: kahan ho?? Abhi tak aye nahi?

S: taxi mein phas gaye thi, but mein kuch derr mein ate hoon. Rastey mein hoon.

M: oohh rehne do ab, tum rok jao, Neetu aunty left.

S pouted'- kyon? Itna jaldi

Ma: actually unho ne ajj halwa banaya tha, and tumhe dene aye thi. Bas, unko jana tha toh jaldi chale gaye.

S: oohh

Maa: beta u can stay, but jaldi ghar a jana, ar phone kar dena. Okay?

S: haan jee, theek hai. Bye

Maa: Byee

M: kiya huwa? Tum ghar ja rahe ho? ( he secretly wished she wasn't, he wanted to spend some more time with her)

S: nahe, Neetu aunty chale gaye.

M: itna jaldi? ( secretly smiling, yahhooo)

S: yea who mere liye halwa drop off karne aye thi. She cooks its realllyyy good. God, She is the best1

M smiled.

S: oh well, lagta hai ab toh mein tumhre saath phas gaye hoon ( she said blushing)

Mohit- koi baat nhi ( he said flashing hisi full smile)

S: tumhe kya lagta hai?

M: kiya

S: Arjun aur Rati ghar chale gaye hoon ge ab tak?

M: kyun? Tumne wapis jana hai'mein kya bahut boriing hoon?
He asked as he pouted.

Sanaya put her arm around his neck and said: nahee pagall, mein to aise hi pooch rahe tho. Mein tumhre saath kabhi bore nhi hoye, and I know I will never be. ( she said as she winked at him)

M: haan, I will alwyz try to entertain you madam moselle, kabhi tumhe akele nhi chodonga ( he began to get lost in her)

Sanaya lost in his eyes, lend out her hand : promise'

Mohit held her hand tight : forever'

They were lost in each other and none of them noticed.

S: (finally entering Earth) hmm, Mohit, teri building ( she said as she let go of his hand)

Mohit felt awkward, he didn't know what just happened.


They were entering Mohit's building'
Mohit- Rati ke ghar chalein.

Sanaya (she wanted o spend time with him, so she tried to make an excuse)- Maybe who abhi nahe aye, aur agar a bhi hoye, to PUKKA, who soh rahe ho ge. She loves to sleep, By god!

Both started to laugh, they loved Nupur's BY GODS, and Rati used it often too.

Mohit- ok, mere ghar ajao.

They approached the elevator.

There was a reallly creepy guy, he was young tho, and he kept staring at Sanaya,
Sanaya felt uncomfortable, and Mohit was mad, because no one had the right to look at her like that, and no one had the right to make her feel uncomfortable. So he came and stood infront of sanaya, as to protect her.

Sanaya secretly smiled, and said I LOVE YOU to him in her mind.

They aprroached Mohit's floor, 7th floor, and they got out.

S: what a creepy man.

M: pora ka pora Duffer.
Both looked at each other and sighed at the same time.

M: finalllyyy, betne ke koi jaga mili'
S: I know eh, lekin can I get something to drink, im so thirsty.

M: ofcourse, one min.

While Mohit was gone to the kitchen, Sanaya turned the TV on, and turned to starone, MJHT repeat was on.

Mohit came with 2 glasses of coke
He came and sat beside her.

M: ohhh MJHT, yeh toh koi puranee episode lag rahe hai. Right?

S began to drink her coke, and looked carefully. Oh shoot!!!! This was THE epsiode. The episode where she accidently (ya right) said I love you MOHIT, instead of SAMRAT.
Shoot! Sanaya though, what if Mohit sees this'mere secret bomb ho jaye ga. What will he think of me'Oh god'whyy? Oh channel change kar deti hooon. Ha!

She began to change, but Mohit held her hand, and said : kya kar rahi hoo??Dekhne do na plzz'and I know ke tum bhi dekhna chahti ho. Right?

Sanaya: haan..lekin..yeh bahut old episode han.

Mohit- toh kya howa?

Mohit took the remote control from her and put it on the other side of the sofa.

M: hum dekhein ge.

S: samrat plzz

M: dekho, sanaya meini hamesha tumhari baat manta hoon, tum mere liye nhi dekh sakti kya?

S: fine dekho!

Sanaya kept fiddling with her hair, or biting her lips because she was soo nervous. Oh God, plzz who scene magically delete ho gaya ho, ya un editors ne edit kar di ho.

Anwayz as they were watching, Both were thinking- they looked ready made for each other, no wonder their fans thought they were dating, it seemed as if their eyes were speaking to each other in some different language. Both Mohit and Sanaya could not understand each other's eye language. Why? What was soo difficult to understand?
What were their eyes saying to each other, that they couldn't understand?

Sanaya felt uncomfortable-for the first time'and went to the bathroom.

While she was gone, the scene that was about to change their lives forever FINALLY came.

Mohit saw, with a hugee surprise, how whole heartedly sanaya said- I LOVE YOU MOHIT, her eyes were saying- mein tumse pyar karte hoon.. This was the beautifl language that their eyes could not underestand, because they denied the fact that any of them may be in love with each other.

Mohit was just sitting there shocked! Happpy, very happpy, he couldn't believe it!
Maybe it was a mistake'bUt he knew it wasn't. he knew sanaya well, and his heart was saying- Maan lo, Mohit, yeh ghalti nahi he, yeh sachaii hai. Face it!

Mohit felt his heart beat reallly fast, and he felt like getting up and screaming I LOVE YOU TOO SANAYA! But he was patient, and his wish was fulfilled!!! Maybe Sanaya knew about this, and that's why she is taking hours in the washroom, oh well lets wait and see.

He saw, what he had to, and then turned the t.v off.

Sanaya finally came out of the bathroom, she was afraid, and she didn't know what would happen.
She walked down the hall and approached the living room. The tv was off and no one was there. Where was mohit? The balcony door was open, he must be there. She entered the balcony , it was reallly big, and beautifull!!! Specially the view.

She stealed a glance at Mohit, he was looking really upset. Sanaya walked really slowly. Oh damnn,'I knew it!!! Damn, he saw it and he is angry now'Stupid me, why did I have to say it'couldn't I keep my mouth shut!!!! I really dunt wanna lose u Mohit'

Mohit was sitting on the bench swing, she went and sat beside him.
He was still looking angry and not at her.
Sanaya put her hand on his shoulder and asked: Kiya huwa Mohit?

Mohit removing her hand and said: Mujhse baat mat karo,

Sanaya: Sorry, Maine washrooom mein thodi zyada der laga de na? Sorry.

Mohit rolled his eyes and said: Pagal, aise koi baat nahi( he tried to hide a smile)

Sanaya moved closer to him, and touched his arm: Bolo na, kya baat hai'Mujhe nhi batao ge?

Mohit looked at her, deep in her eyes, he finally understood the "language of eyes" it was lovee'He saww truee love for him in her eyes. His heart was dancingg. He now knew that the love had been there for a pretty long time, he just had to look deeper.

M: tum mujhe apna kuch bhi nhi manti'dost bhi nhi.

S: yeh kaisi fazool baatein kar rahe ho'yeh kis ne kaha? And you know very well'ke tum mere SAB se ACHE dost ho'
( she was feeling hurt by his words, she thought she made it pretty clear all the time how much she valued his presence and his friendship, so then why did he think like that?)

M: mujhe bhi yehi lagta tha, but I guess I was wrong.

S: moooohiiiiittt, aisa kyun bol rha ho? You're making me mad now..come to the point'seedhe seedhe bol...

M: I cant believe ke tum mujhse apne zindage ke itna badi baat chupao ge.

S was tensed and came more closer: Konsi baat?

M looked in her eyes with soo much passion and said romantically- yehi ke tum mujhse pyar karte ho'( he flashed his best smileee)

S was shocked'ohh so he did see the scene. What is she supposed to do now?
Sanaya was shy, and looked down'

M: kyun chup aya? Sanaya, bas aik bar hi bol deti.

S stil looking down, in a low voice said: Kyunke mujhe laga agar meine keh diya toh hamari dosti awkward ho jaye gi.

Mohit was sad.He didn't wannt her to think like that, his poor baby!

M; but why'aisa kyun laga?

S: kyunke tum mere liye waise feel nhi karti jaise mein tumhare liye.

M lifted her chin and made her look at him, in the eyes and asked: tumse yeh kis nen kaha? Sanaya, mein tuumse bahuuttt zyaada pyar karta hoon, par kabhi himmat nhi aye ke tumse yeh bol payon.

S suuddenly started smiling and quickly gave him a tight hug. She was reallly happpy, and her heart was doing the balle balle dance.

S whispered I love you in Mohits ear.

Both their hearts skipped a beatt😳😳

I lOVE YOU TOO
, Mohit whispered back.

As they parted, Mohit slowly and passionately kissed Sanaya's cheeks.
She blushed.

Mohit: Oh hooo, tum toh sharmati bhi ho.

Sanaya playfully punched him on his chest, and said: Shut up, Mohit.

Sanaya just had one question in her mind: why didn't Mohit tell her?

S: mohit'tumne mujhse kabhi kyon nhi kaha'tum to lardke hoo'you know, first move and all.

M: yea I would have, but I used to think I am not your type of guy. He said sadly.

S: haan, who toh nahi ho.

Mohit pouted

S held both of his hands tightly and said: Par tum sabse alag ho, aur sabse khaas, mere liye sabse important ho.

And then she kissed him on his cheek'sloowwwllllyyy

S: don't ever think like that again ok?

M: I won't but u know pyar mein kyya kya hota hai'

Both started to laugh and hugged each other tightly again,

Comfortable in each other's arm, they stood there promising to never let go,

The smiles on their faces could not define the happiness in . their hearts.

This night changed two more people's lives forever- in a good way

😳😳MOHIT&SANAYA-MADE FOR EACH OTHER
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OK guys, this was my 1st and last os on Monaya.

I am not a fan of Sajan or monaya, but still I wrote this and I hope i was upto your expectations
Oh and I didnt watch the scene where Gunjan says I love you mohit, i just heard about it from my sis, so if i made a mistake plzz ignore itt😃.

Do press the like button and leave your comments- criticisms most welcome😃😃

Hope you all enjoyed it..

Luv, Meeno<3
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!
You Made Me Blussh Girl....You Are Shoo Talented And I Have To Say Thanks To You..Love You Jii....Amazinngggg....Mazza Agyaaaa....Hayeee This Was Shoo Romantic Jii Agar Yeh Asal Main Hota Itna Mazza Ataa Naaaa😳.........Thank You Very Much...Keep It Up Jii....And Write More Stories And OS....Laghta You Have Mande Thousand Of FFs Jaaanuuu.....Will Wait For More MaYur Too.....
Thanks or Your PM...

*Sana*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Sana, youre a fast reader...I thought it was really longg....hahah

glad u liked it)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love your Arti Os .. Ver nice Confession...

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