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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: HamiSky

Seriously..now there is a ebbing of emotions and shud be rightly used by the CVs...

like last weeks's Shakti-Aruhis torture..if its going to be Aman-Arushi wedding...we can cloase our doors to the show!
Waiting to see realistic n intereting out pour of emotions..esp the dialogues!
Pratigya shud speak up now as she knows what is the real cure to Krishna's illness...he himself ahs stated it clearly,

Agree!😊
by the way, here in the Uk we had the new promo shown on friday...the one where Krishna gets up from the bed and leaves Prat....he said he is punishing himself for loving her. Exactly what is being shown all of last week and hopefully this week.
He is being harsh because he has decided to punish himself, he cannot punish her anymore except kill her, so in his bid to rub of his feelings for her, she is getting the brunt of the edges.....So she really needs to speak up...she cannot be that blind!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Agree!😊
by the way, here in the Uk we had the new promo shown on friday...the one where Krishna gets up from the bed and leaves Prat....he said he is punishing himself for loving her. Exactly what is being shown all of last week and hopefully this week.
He is being harsh because he has decided to punish himself, he cannot punish her anymore except kill her, so in his bid to rub of his feelings for her, she is getting the brunt of the edges.....So she really needs to speak up...she cannot be that blind!!
thats an old promo...it was the prmo for teh current sequnece goin on!!
i thot there wud be a promo this weekend...nthng!!
guess if maha epi is der we will get to see a new on Wed or so on the maha episode!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
MERA,
tusi gr8 ho.... 👏 👏 i was eagerly waiting 4 this thread n u posted it. we all r with u dear. u raised the right points. i hope the CV's consider it n not test our patience anymore 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: MERARAI

A CALLOUT to POPs (Producers of Pratigya)

from W.O.P (Watchdogs of Pratigya)

Let's start with a thank you from the WOPs to POPs for all their hard work in bringing us a unique show 👍🏼that we've tuned into since the beginning.😃 Congratulations POPs!👍🏼 as you approach your 200th episode in a fortnight.👏


👍🏼❤️ 👏👏👏👏👏 ...And My Wishes and prayer that this Serial surpasses all the previous records and becomes a unique show in the anals of TV History !!
👏❤️

In recent weeks, we, the viewers feel like we have been on a bumpy ride trundling down the track. We are very concerned that the initial charm and uniqueness of this show is being compromised with the introduction of multiple tracks out of thin air while many existing tracks remain suspended. The deux ex machina resolution of the plots that disregards the internal logic of the story is frustrating to us.

We understand the show is being used as a platform to shed light on several real-life issues in smaller communities in India. However, POPs have recently introduced random, far-fetched tracks into the mix on the show😲😕. While the tracks put forth may address real issues the resolution is often contrived thus shortchanging us of the anticpated realism.😕 We feels like we've been taken for granted as loyal viewers who blindly tune in to watch any and every track dished out to us.😕

AUGUST ended up being the month of DISGUST... ''kaahe aap ne humre saath aisa kiya?" Why the sudden change in story telling? First week of August was all about the aftermath with the coal-face painting of Pratigya by the Takurs. Then we had a whole week of Saxsena's rona-dhona followed by a week of Takurs failed attempt at a Prat Barbacue. 😕

We were rewarded for sitting through two weeks of disagreeable episodes with a week of intense and gripping drama, a treat for fans of Krishna and Pratigya alike. We'd like to give a standing ovation👏 to Arhann Behll, Pooja Gor and the Takur family for their brilliant performances in the hospital scenes.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 ⭐️They were gut-wrenching and very moving episodes all at once. 👏

But before we could digest the high drama, the focus abruptly shifted to a marriage proposal for Arushi out of the blue from Aman Mathur . Arushi's character sketch is vague, is she of marriageable age or are the Saxsenas ready to marry her off to the first educated man who comes along with a proposal?

Honestly, we prefer less of the rona-dhona marathon sessions from the Saxsenas. We can only take this family in small doses especially after the recent tracks put them center stage.Who is going to call out the Saxsenas on their double standards and when? We would love to see Krishna be the one to call them out on it.👍🏼 How's that for realism?

If Adarsh and Komal are the parallel couple on the show why have they been given so little air time in recent weeks? There is plenty to address in the Komal/Adarsh marriage. Why relegate this couple to the back burner while Krishna and Prats take baby steps towards reconciliation? They are an interesting pair and we'd prefer to watch their love bloom instead of the Aman/Arushi love story that is not very appealing idea at the moment. Time will tell if we will warm up to this track or if it will be like watching wet paint dry.

These gripes seem insignificant when compared to the track that was introduced out of thin air and dragged around this past week. Was it really necessary to stretch Katra Naresh's reign of terror and Arushi's deux ex machina response for a whole week while we were teased into hanging in there for a few snippets of Krishna and Pratigya's much sought after moments? Was it necessary to pound us with the build up of that formidable track day after day that served to make our stomachs turn in repulsion? Mr.Jaswant Manaria has played the character of Katra Naresh to perfection 👏but this repulsive track has to end right now.😔

We tune into the show for entertainment and escapism from the treadmill of every day life. It's been all gloom and doom for weeks now. How about a few light-hearted moments in the coming weeks? A few one-liners from Krishna or Komal will do the trick.😉 We miss the happy-go-lucky Krishna Baba. Will he ever surface again to entertain us or will he, forever, remain a changed man?😕

Did we really need the sexual harassment track to distract us just so the Krishna/Pratigya love story can be delayed a little bit longer? Viewers have been longing for the Krishna/Prats romance to move along😳. We know this track is your trump card 😳😉to keep us hooked on to religiously tuning in every night. This carrot has been dangling before us for weeks now while the romance track seems to be moving along at a snail's pace. Just a gentle reminder.... fustrated viewers are not good for your TRPs.😕👍🏼


There are a few scattered tracks still in suspension including SS's elections. The editing and continuity still needs some attention as well. After all it's all in the details.


We hope these glitches are addressed asap. We are looking forward to record TRPs⭐️ for this show in the months and years ahead.


POSTERS: Now Chalbo! Please voice your opinions and concerns to POPS on this thread.😃

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MY thought are highlighted in blue...

Apart from Editing..costume and Make up are an area of concern....chunky jewelry are fine on Kesar and Amma..but for a refined and educated woman...Simplicity is the key !!

Second am tired of seeing Pooja Gor in open hair..doesn't ur stylist have any ideas regarding any other styles...she has sufficient lenght which can be manipulated into knots,top knots and various Plaits ..why open hair??

Costume..The Thakur's are supposed to be rich..but we see them only with limited number of clothing..[Are they follower's of Gandhian teaching's 😉 ] and have restricted their spending's and are busy serving the poor and downtrodden.......


Art Director' , Where the hell is Shakthi's Bedroom...on day we see him coming out opposite to Baba's room and another day ...we see him descending from upstairs...where are the bathroom's ?? and what happens to the sofa's and chairs in Krishna's room..do they wax and wane like the moon ??


Adarsh continues to b Momma's boy...don't you think it is time he became his own Man..and also now that Komal is changing [permanently , we hope]...don't you think , somebody in Sax family take over her education..after all the sax keep harping on it !!

Request to Cratives..IF the Aman Fmly are the kindred Spirits of Sax Family...do us a huge favor and chuck them ...never ever show them let them remain in the convo between Aman-sax..make a brief appearance during the wedding and fly away to their world...

GIVE US SOME LIGHT HEARTED AND HAPPY MOMENTS BETWN KRIYA ...OUR PATIENCE IS WEARING THIN !!


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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Hi Meera,
Thnx for the post.
I think the Creatives r having creative block...for a while now! Either they need to hire new associate or it will continue like this.
Krishna is the heart & soul of the show. POP's seems to have lost sight of that fact! The show is #2 because of him...Pratigya's character has been played in many of the past shows. They need to start concentrating on him & show less of other characters who don't have direct link to him.
-Sona
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Very true. They are having a mental block.
Krishna should leave the four walls of his bedroom and go out to spend some time alone or with T & C. This may cool him down a bit and then he might be ready to start conversation with P. Dont mind if there is lot of anger, pain and argument as long as the ball starts rolling.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
seriously mera, i have now words for this post!😊its awesome and i loved reading it ! keep the good work up!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mera ....a very well written post and I agree with you.👏

CVs.............up until KriYa marriage, the show was at its entertaining best especially Krish/Tunna/Chandu.........afterwards it has been quite stressfull to watch.....but still it was fine and manageable until Angad died..........the beginning of court track and the subsequent tracks however have been quite frustrating......especially the current Arushi track. Is this track needed to teach Krish a lesson about a victim and her purity......can there not be any other ways or any other finer tracks.😕
There are so many tracks left half.........its a long time since Kesar is carrying...no changes in her?...is the election track complete?, Angad..is he really dead?.....Adarsh-Komal story not moving ahead...and I wonder if KriYa love story will be pushed to next year.😕
There are so many social issues to address....but the introduction of unnecessary tracks is very irritating and boring....and the story is becoming just too, too serious.
CVs....pls do something........enough of tensions and roller-coster rides🤢

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