OnE Shot :sneha aur akshi aamne samne

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Posted: 15 years ago
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aaj kahin one shot aaye naksh ke romance par toh socha ki kuch alg hojaye ab mein ff toh update karti hoon for change one shot hi kyun na likhon aur aaj 2 naye writters ka janam hua (sia nd pravzz) toh unhe dekhar main socha kyun na one shot likhon naksh romance par nahi balki present track par

so here i go
it rashmis birthday nd akshara orders cake nd books an hall @royal resturant takes all responsiblites frm decoration to food in short organiser of the party akshara invites naitik's friends rashmi's friends nd her maayke wala bt rajshree tells only shurya nd varsha wil cm as wat will elders do so akshara calls dem home to give rashmi their blessing
@singhaniya :living room
maheswari family enters:
radhe krishna nd rashmi takes their blessing nd gay3 tells gud u came here or i ws gonna send rashmi to ur place akshara told us tat oly shaurya nd varsha r coming nd we also decided we wont go as all childerns will be nd let them enjoy ab enjoy nahi karege toh kab karenge
jus den naitik nd akshara enter
akshara : arre ma aap bauji nd talks nd says ma ab hum nikalthe hai wahan ja kar tyaari bhi dekhni hai
nd naksh leave
on other side
sneha leaves her house with mithali saying she will be bak soon
they reach the resturant it was empty decoration ws made naitik ws standing alone in the corner nd akshi was telling the decorater ki as soon as birthday girl enters flowers shud falll on her wit sum glitters nd naitik is admiring listening to akshi instruction the decoraters goes to get nessacry stuff nd naitik akshara alone in the hall nd naitik bcomes mischevious
nd goes to akshara nd tells kay baat hai naaraz mujhse nd akshara said nahi naitik main bhala aapse kyun naraz hongi nd is abt go out bt naitik holds her hands nd pulls nd akshara is blushing nd says naitik to leave nd naitik says aapko chodne ke liye thodi na pakda yahan koi nahi hai sirf aap hai aur main bas aur pyyar nd leaves akshara nd on the mmusic system nd kneels down on his knees nd fowards his hand to akshara nd asks will dance wit me nd akshara gives her hand in naitik's hand nd they dance 😍 nd hand dance karte karte ek dusre ke bahoon mein aur aankhon mein koo gaye bas aagya decorater aur naitik akshara wer embarced jus den she remebered ki she left phone in the car she asks naitik for keys nd goes nd gets the phone nd sw some gifts lying so taught taking while coming she dashed wit sneha nd gifts fell down she
sneha says sorry meri wajah se aapke sare gifts ghir gaya akshara says its k nd collects all the gifts nd goes in sneha ws abt to go wen she sw the card she sw akshara wsnt der she searchs meanwhile here akshara enter the hall as soon she enters red roses fall on her nd she was enjoying thoses flowers falling on her nd naitik enjoyin g seeing her happy nd taking pics jus den akshara realized dis one ws suppose to be flowers for rashmi's entry nd ws abt to go to the the decorater naitik pulls her nd says kahan chali yeh sab maine karwya sirf aapke liye nd kisses her forehead nd cheek nd ws abt to kiss her ki sneha ajati hai nd is shocked😲😲😲 to see naitik wit someone else nd naitik says snehaji aap yaahan naksh half emaraced nd naitik calls akshara nd says this snehaji nd akshara interupt toh yeh hai sneha nd naitik asks aap janti hai inhe akshara says nahi nahi abhi jab mein phone lene gayi tabhi inshe takrayi aur gifts ghir gaye aur in hone ne madhat ki nd naitik says oh theek nd asks snehaji aap yahan kiss kam se aaythi nd sneha is still in shock doesnt reply nd jus den mithali cm nd says sneha tu yahan hai main kab se tujhe dondh rahi hoon nd sees naitik nd says aarre naitikji aap yahan is bit suprised to see akshara naitik says haan inshe milye yeh hai akshara mreri biwi nd sneha is shocked to hear dis nd tells woh akshara ji apna card wahan ghira hua mila toh dene aagye nd leaves
naitik wah re meri kismat akshara asks kya hua jab bhi aapke saath tym spend karne jata koi na koi aa jata kabhi decorater kabhi phone toh kabhi sneha ji inhe bhi abhi aana tha nd both laugh nd rashmi all friends arrive nd party gets over
@next morning
sneha comes to office nd tells naitik ki she wont be able to work more as her mom wants to get her married so i think i shhud leave the job naitik wit half - hearted accepts nd she leaves
jus den akshara comes to the office to give some files which naitik forgot jisme naitik ne akshara ke kiye hua jewellery designs raktha hai aur akshara sees sneha going nd asks naitik wat happen suddenly sneha came naitik is lyk she left the job as her fmaily wants her to marry nd akshara is lyk theekh ab main chalti aap kaha lijye ga
@evening all men come home nd give news tat sneha left bt gt a new designer nd akshara asks itni jaldi aap logoon ko designer kaise mile gayi
naitik dondhne ki kya zarurat hai mere samne hi hai
akshara kya nd dadjee said haan bahu ab se hamre sare designs tane banno hai bas jo file tulekar aayi woh sbako bahut pasand
bas phir naiksh spend more tym together nd sneha gayi trying to forget her luv nd strt a new lyf

hope i didnt bore u guys😆

Edited by preksha_naksh - 15 years ago

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nikki18 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omg! pree it's toooooooooooooo goooooooooood👏👏

u knw wht ..i really wish CVs cums across ur OS n show us d same thing😊

i totally forgot dat i was reading a OS..wow!! superb!!👍🏼

luvd it..very well written!!😊

Edited by nikki18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aweosme pree....i wish this turns out to be real....😆 waiting for sneha to cum to know akshi is his wife...

superb...keep it up...!!! gimme me five😃...u also wrote 😉...
Edited by sia.k_1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey Pree its very good...🤗 hug isliye coz tumne Sneha ko bhaga diya...😆 😆 i was laughing so much while reading ki sneha ne job chhod diya....🤣 yaar kabse i am waiting for this day....😍 hehehe

chalo tumhare one shot ne ek hew hope toh diya....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww pree...nyc updatee yaaaarr! ..

i wish d maha epi shud b lyk dis oly .bt CVz vl surely drag though i badly wnt d stury line to end up dis wayyy!😃..

AWEUSMMMMM pre! ...good jobb! ..loved it ..keep rawkingg!😊😊..

n i loved it wen sneha saw naksh romancing ..dat moment made ma dayy!😆😆....sneha afta knwing d truth vl b lyk kyaaaaaa 😲😲kyaaaaaa 😲😲kyaaaa ..😲😲😆😆😆 ..hilariouss! ..loevedd it ..keep it up gurll =D
Edited by pravz_me - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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tum sab ek den mai one shot
but it was ......wawww yaar it super
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
kash ke drimi ko
and CVs thori se akal aiye
and dy read it
wyse sneha didnt took out a word nahi metali ni
😲😲😲😲😲
yaa bolti jho band hogayegi onki
😆😆😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG pree superb yaa... nyc concept..
n naksh romans rowwkk😳😳😳
MB.. gud done..👏👏
n kash ke ye serial aise hi ho.... n i was also thinking dat akshi will be designer in track..
lets hop ke sneha job chod degi..😛
kitne log OS bana rahe he.. gud keep it up guyzz..😆
luved it...... do moree,,
Edited by shriya_naksh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi friends, i want to know after sneha and her mother with the marriage proposal what will be the reaction of naitik and akshara .and what will be akshara 's move next. will she leave her sasural or not do u think naitik willsay everything y he did all these things?what is going to happen in naksh marriage marriage life? i don't want akshar to leave the house.manasi, tafseer,siak praveze me please kindly tell what to do all think i want to know . idont want naksh to separaate again. if some thing like that happen yrkkh will loose somany fans, and like this year yrkkh will not get any awards next year. the cv's should handle this positive way. akshara should not leave her sasural. naitik should be with her. trust is the important thing every marriage. in marach they have united. now not again. no body will see yrkkh anymore if something happen like that. i dont want in fact nobody want naksh separation. they were not all happy in their marriage life for the last one year. at least cv's shopuld end this track in a positive mode. no separation of naksh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Pree🤗

very nice OS yaar👏👏👏👏 really lyked ur idea of writing an OS on Sne-shi (sneha-akshi)🤣 meeting😆
Naksh romance part was awesome as usual😳😳😳
do write more👍🏼
Edited by divi4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANXXX PREKSHA THIS SHOT IS VERY ROMENTIC & VERY EXCITED. PREKSHA MEIN AAPSE EK HELP CHAHTI HOON KYA AAP MERI HELP KARENGI. YEHAAP LOG JO SHOT LIKHTE HO ISME JAHAN AAP KA NAME AATA HAI NAME KE NICHE YEH PHOTOS KAISE AATEY PLEASE HELP ME & REPLY SOON.
BYE BYE..............................................

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