*Anjaana Anjaani* **Discontinued!**

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Ola guys! Sup?? How ARE you all??? Well, here I am... Ready to write a new FF...! (I'm HOPING it'll be a FF and not a SS) Well, I know you all are like "Yaar, she didn't even UPDATE on her first FF and she already started a second one" types... But guys, my friend Ritika is assisting me on this... This is NOT completely written by me... Well, not exactly... That idiot of my friend is not ready to join IF... So ALL the updates will be posted by me...

Let me give you the basic outline of the FF... The story's titled 'Anjaana Anjaani' The whole FF will be written from the POVs of the 2 principal characters, Ayesha and Mohit, 2 netties...(Me writing the POV for Mohit and Ritika for Ayesha). Well, according to Ritika, it is going to be an unusual story... A different tale... Blah! Blah! (She talks a LOT, Pardon me for that). I honestly, HONESTLY hope that you'll like this FF/ SS. It's not specifically based on only ONE pair...

There's no "Character Sketch" as such... You'll understand how they are yaar! Chalo, me giving you some homework... Post what YOU think about Ayesha and Mohit... Also, tell me how we guys are as a team... And as individuals (in writing)... Thanks in advance...

With this, we begin:


cooldude_killerlooks: Hi! Sup? We're meeting today for the FIRST time... Awesome na?? See you at Club 18 today evening @ 7... Bhool toh nahi gayi na?? :P

galzalwaysr@@x: H3yy... I can't believe we're meeting today... And I did NOT forget it... After all, how can I?

cooldude_killerlooks: Of course! I'm so dashing, smart and cool that you cannot afford to forget me! :P

galzalwaysr@@x: We'll see about that when I actually SEE you at Club 18. I'M the one who is going to decide it.

cooldude_killerlooks: Its 5 already... Go and get ready... In front of me, you HAVE to look good... You'll need a LOT of make-up for that... Right? I always look good... So NO problem for me... :D

galzalwaysr@@x: The character you described suits you a lot. And your character suits me...!!! BTW... I g2g... Have lots of work to do.

cooldude_killerlooks: Bye! See ya soon... *Hug* Will you gimme a hug atleast??

galzalwaysr@@x: Dekhte hain... :P

Mohit's POV

God! I can't believe I was flirting with that kiddo! Well, as they say, Necessity is the mother of all evil! I'm meeting the kiddo for the first time today. Ok, fine! She's not exactly a kiddo. She's 16 and I'm 19, but I'm still older and smarter and cooler, which precisely make me more mature than her, right? That kiddo seems to be really sweet, though. Enough about her! I need to get ready. Surely I'm gonna wear the ever-so-famous black fitted shirt and blue jeans. That's bound to impress her (Haha!) After all, I've worn that pair 5 times and ALL the 5 times, some girl's proposed me!

Ayesha's POV

Ha! That guy's so silly! I am going to meet him AFTER all this while! I mean, it's really weird when you are friends for 2 months with someone and not even meet him/ her once!! Oops, Its 6 already... Gotta go change!

Mohit's POV

Club 18's going to scare that kiddo for sure! Reason number one, she's not 18 yet. Reason number 2, I doubt if she's EVER been to a pub before. Reason number 3, me!

Ayesha's POV

Ok. I really HAVE to leave now. It's getting really late now. After much deliberation, I've decided to a wear a cream coloured top and half-jeans (you know, the pair of jeans which comes up to my knees). Definitely cute, but no signals being given here!

Mohit's POV

The stupid girl! I was on my way, to meet Ayesha, when this IDIOT of a girl came in front of my i20 car, my BRAND new i20, I must say. God knows what she was thinking about. What if had got hurt? Worse, what if my car had got hit??? *shudders* I can't IMAGINE the consequences. Oh shit! 7.30?? I'm getting late! Kiddo's going to be wild!

Ayesha's POV

I almost got hit by this guy who closes his eyes while driving. How else could he have NOT noticed me? The JERK! Jerk... That reminds me! I have to meet up with Mohit!!!!!! Shit! Its 7.30 already??!? Let me finish arguing with the guy, and then I'll leave.

Guy: Can't you WATCH where you're going, you fool??

Girl: Actually, I should be the one telling that, you, you MAD ASS! Just move now, I gotta get going.

Guy: Didn't your parents tell you that you are not supposed to back answer your elders, EVER?! Now jump outta my way or I'll run my car over you (mutters to himself: Bloody fool)

Girl: Oh, come on! LOSER!! (walks away)

Finally, after much ado, they enter Club 18 (separately, of course). And Ayesha calls Mohit up.

Ayesha: Hey Mohit! Where ARE you? I've been waiting so long!!

Mohit: Same here, dumbo!!

Ayesha: I'm sitting on the sofa to the left side of the bar, please come soon, will you?

Mohit: How on EARTH did they let you in?? You're not even 18. Damn, you must've produced a fake ID? How could you??

Ayesha: Everything's possible.

Mohit: Bloody hell! All I can see on that sofa is that IDIOT who bumped into my car.

Ayesha: WHAT??? It was YOU??!!

Mohit: Oh! She's your friend or something?? Tell her I'm sorry, would you? Oh, wait! You came with a FRIEND??

Ayesha: No!! You fool! It was ME!

Mohit cut the phone and walks towards Ayesha. Her jerks her up and looks into her eyes.

Mohit: (with a low voice) Do you REALLY think I'm a mad ass, Ayesha??

Ayesha: (unable to speak) Uhh... No....

Mohit: Uh huh! I knew it... So next time, don't call me a mad ass... Ok, kiddo?? (winks)

Ayesha: Oh, just SHUT UP!! (leaves his hands and goes off walking)

Mohit: (shouts over the music) Oho! Kiddo's getting angry??

Ayesha: (blushing) Just shut up, okay? I'm going now!

Mohit: You came to a pub for the first time, and you're getting up and going?? Stupid!!!

Ayesha: I told you to shut up!

Mohit: So mesmerized by me that you're not able to say anything beyond 'Shut up'?? How cute!!! (pulls Ayesha's cheeks)

Ayesha: Oh c'mon! Keep dreaming, dude! I hate this place and most... YOU!!!

Mohit: Shut up and listen to me!! Wait here while I get something for you. You're favourite's sprite, right?

Ayesha: Yeah!!

Mohit goes to get the Sprite but just for the heck of getting back at Ayesha, he adds a shot of Vodka to her glass. Unsuspectingly, she has the drink in one go.

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Precap : "Mohiiitttt!!!!!!!" Somebody pulls Mohit back from where he was, talking to the DJ (his friend, Karan).

Well, I hope you like this FF! Do hit the like tab if you really liked it! Comments and criticisms welcome!

<3 Aishwarya and Ritika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yay!.. The first to comment!... 😛
Awesome Blossom!.
Loved Mohitz attitude!... Completely "aaj ke ladke" types!..😉
And Ayesha really seems cute ya!....
Waiting eagerly for the next part!.... 😊
Hmm... Ayesha gets drunk??... Its pakka gonna be interesting!.. Do add a song if possible!...😳
Luv ya loadz!
-Shar...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting concept

love ayesha she;s sweet thanks 4 d pm i wish there name's were mayur 😊
Edited by samiralovemayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the concept is really nice 😊
do continue soon waiting for ur next update 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mjht_Forever

<font color="#6633cc">Yay!.. The first to comment!... 😛
Awesome Blossom!.
Loved Mohitz attitude!... Completely "aaj ke ladke" types!..😉
And Ayesha really seems cute ya!....
Waiting eagerly for the next part!.... 😊
Hmm... Ayesha gets drunk??... Its pakka gonna be interesting!.. Do add a song if possible!...😳
Luv ya loadz!
-Shar...
</font>❤️



Song toh coming!! For sure... Your wish my order! 😆

YESSSSSSS! I hoped and hoped ki you'd like Mohit!!! 😉

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