TASHA poem..trying to be creative!!

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nazia.icycool

@nazia.icycool

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Posted: 14 years ago

🤓 guys please dont laugh this is the first poem i have ever made ,that too in seconds...comes straight from my heart..hope u like it! 🤓 😊

Black or White ,
Nakku makes dutta's life bright,
So Nakku never go out of Dutta's sight,
We hate to see him in plight!!!
He saves u like a knight!
and is always ready to fight!
So please hugs him tight
Do enjoy the suhaag raat at Night!

hope u all like it!!..waiting for comments 😳 😊 😆 🤣 🤡

Edited by nazia.icycool - 14 years ago

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Megha

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Posted: 14 years ago

Naz u r not only creative but super creative dear...what a hilarious poem dear!🤣

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-MeMyselfI

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Posted: 14 years ago

I luv it😊... sethji and baaji should sing it all the time to annoy Dutta

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shonapinky

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nazia...diz iz d First and d Best SR poetry i ever read...!!😆😆😆🤣awesum yaar...!!!👏😆keep writing more...!!😆

Edited by shonapinky - 14 years ago

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huma

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Posted: 14 years ago

the last line did it for me 🤣 too good nazia

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@ImmaculateDream

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wah! kya poem bana daali nazia 😆

Good one!

👏

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-Ritz-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow nazia. u know poetry as well. Awesome. 👍🏼 and it came straight from your heart. awww Nazia. 😳 I told u before apne dil ki sunate rehna. OMG nazia this is too funny especially the last line. 🤣

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

Creative and funny poem! Me like it very much.

Please do write more.

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gp00

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Posted: 14 years ago

Too sweet...❤️

This romance has inspired the poet in you! Nice job!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: nazia.icycool
🤓 guys please dont laugh this is the first ever poem that i made in seconds...comes straight from my heart..hope u like it! 🤓 😊

Black or White ,
Nakku makes dutta's life bright,
So Nakku never go out of Dutta's sight,
We hate to see him in plight!!!
He saves u like a knight!
and is always ready to fight!
So please hugs him tight
Do enjoy the suhaag raat at Night!

hope u all liked it!!..waiting for comments 😳 😊 😆 🤣 🤡

what was this???? Yaar ... if TaSha read this poem they will be immediately off to their SR rather than listening to it. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

No offence dear .... but its too funny.

Edited by nelufar - 14 years ago