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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok guyz, keepin the new promo in mind--i came up wid sumthin:😉

the last bit we saw waz maaneet huggin *drools*...okies...so i am realli realli hoping that maaneet continue their romance wid a slow number "peeloon" being played--(which waz also played during the aaj tak segment)--so they share a very very hawt passionate moment!!😍
okies then here cumz the bad part!
sum lame paparazzi's from nowhere cum in and start shootin their pix randomly!! 😲😲maan is not much affected; firstly cuz hez drunk and 2ndly we all noe he doesn realli care wat ppl arnd think of him!! khair, geet on the other side, is hell scared of the consequences that will follow...she doesnt noe how to skip the situation...
the whole crowd of the disc gather up there and start gossipin (h8 such cheapness buh yesh this sadli happens) ---pari walks in as well--though shez a happi-go-lucky person, she gets a bit pissd off seein them together like this--she goes up to maaneet and says: "mujhe toh pehlay sey he tum dono perh shaq tha (pauses) disgusting!"
and she leaves--pari's track ends here!😲 (gud news fer pari h8ers, btw m not one of 'em!)
maan now sumwat gets into his consciousness--he takes control of the situation, holds geets hand tight and leaves!👏
they reach home, widout conversing a word in the car, buh ofc geet cant stop tearin and maan this time doesnt pay much attention to it😕
they reach outhouse, geet quickly changes bk to her signature salwar kameez (the blue one onli)....shez in her room, still tearin abt all wat has happened ....
maan is downstairs--hez completely in his senses now--he recalls watever happened at disc--he gets daymin pissd off and curses himself fer hafin that drink in the first place!😕
hez thinkin off all this, wen the light goes off!😉 he hears sumthin fallin off in geet's room, so he quickly finds a candle. he lights it and goes into her room. on his way he thinks "geet zaroor pareshan horahi hogi, mujhe ussay baat kerkay is baat ko yaheen ka yahee khatam kerlayna chahyay, werna yay larki pata nahi kaunsa toufan kharha kerdaygi!"
geet has alreay lightened up a dozen of candles in her room...
she turns arnd and maan is standin jus an inch away...
they share a deadli eyelock *mahi plays*
geet gets teary agen and sayz " sir app plz yahan sey jayay..mujhe apse koi baat nahi kerni...jo hua woh sahi nahi hua"
maan, who initially thought he wud handle this whole issue calmly looses his cool...
"yay tum mujhe bata rahi ho?? 😡geet sab tumhare galti hai"
geet: "sir ...laykin"
maan: (interrupts) " laykin kya geet?? main toh wahan pari key saath tha, tum wahan aae he kyun...aur in fact tum he thi na jo mera hath paker ker mujhe waha sey ley gai? kyun geet?....kyun tumhe farq parha jab main uske kareeb tha...(he closes up on geet) kyun geet, jawab doh?!"
geet: (confused, doesnt noe wat to say) "sir...woh main...woh...sir....apne bohot pee huwi thi...main nahi chahti thi key...."
maan: (interrupts agen) "key main pari kay kareeb hoon jis tarha main tumhare kareeb hota hoon?"
geet: (bks off a lil) "nahi sir...aisi..aisi koi baat nahi hai..mujhe toh...."
maan: (interupts agen! gets a lil more angry ) "tumhare wajah sey pari bhi chali gai! itni mushkil sey mujhe apni pasand ki larki mili thi...aur abh.....(pauses)...khair, ap tumne galti ki hai toh abh tumhe is galti ko sahi kerogi!"
geet: "sir ..main??..woh.."
maan: (pauses fer a while) "chaho ya na chaho abh tumhe he meri magaytar bana parhayga"
geet: (scared to death, quiet fer a while) "aur agar main inkar ker doun toh?"
maan: "nahi ker paogi...in fact tumhare paas koi aur option bhi nahi hai, kyunkay kal har channel ki breakin news or her newspapers ki headlines tum aur main hongay"
geet: (shocked like hell then tears up) " kyaa....yay, yay nahi ho sakhta..."
maan: (feels bad fer her, buh then remembers hez pissd off cuz she accused him of all that happened) "geet! mujhe toh waisay he in cheezoh sey koi farq nahi parhta. logh meray barain main kya sochte hai mujhe issay koi matlab nahi hai! laykin tum jaisay chotey shaher kay logh, jinke liyay izzat sey bhar ker kuch nahi hai...yahan tak kay apni jaan bhi nahi, tum logon key liiyay yay toh bohot barra issue hai, right?" (gets flashes of hoshiyarpur times)
geet is stunned, she doesnt noe how to react or wat to say.
maan continues "jahan tak meri baat hai mujhe sirf apni dadi ki fiqar hai! maine unse wada kiya tha kay main unko apni mangaytar is friday tak milaounga....aur abh jab tumne pari ko yahan sey bhaga diya hai...toh abh tumhe he meri mangaytar bana parhayga!"
geet: (gets bold) "nahi! mujhe nahi..."
maan: (pulls her close, holds her tight from the back) "shush.....(softens up a lil) ...geet aik aur shabd nahi...werna...." *mahi plays*
they share a deadli eye-lock, the wind blows hard and all the candles go off!!
geet gets scared (shez supposedly scared of dark😉)---she holds him tight, maan also gets a tight grip of her...he slowly moves his hands up to caress her face and then.....
jo next jo hoga..woh CVZ decide keraingay!!😆😆😆
thatz all i cud cum up wid!!😉
kaisa laga??😛 do lemme noe!
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Bobbi. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
Pretty smart predciton you got there Uzma.
I don't want to see any sort of serious fight or takkar so soon within Maaneet.
Infact, i'm hoping for more romantic and intense moments between the two.
Thanks for sharing this whole bit though 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey its nice... even I've been thinking abt what will happen nex... how do they get away from the disc?? & whats gonna b pari's reaction??
well I really liked d way u proceeded wid the story...
But one thing I didnt like was their serious fight... Dont like to see them fighting... their nik-jhoks are really sweet & fun to watch but when they get into serious fight... I cant bear it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey uzma🤗🤗🤗

i loved it but didnt like the part where u said ab CVz dekh lenge😆😆

keep up the good work😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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kya prediction ki hai!!! 👏 👏 👏 i hope CVs cum up wid sumthing lyk dat..............it wud bhi wonderful to see dat!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dats gud....but cvs are really unpredictable....lets wait n watch wat happens!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow nice
actually thought that i was reading like the actual episodes written update or something...too good yaar
hope this happened
thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran102

wow thats reaally good

😳😳 thanx hunny!
haf been thinkin realli hard since yest, infact i waz jus thinkin abt wat might happen next the whole day😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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but if this appears on the headlines.....then dev and nt will know of geet!!

btw i loved the prediction!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sonia-xx

Pretty smart predciton you got there Uzma.

I don't want to see any sort of serious fight or takkar so soon within Maaneet.
Infact, i'm hoping for more romantic and intense moments between the two.
Thanks for sharing this whole bit though 😊

thanx sonia!!🤗
darling romantic or intense moment hai na!! beginnin main "peelon" song sequence or end main lala land moment!😉😆
well i jus added in a fight cuz if u think from geet's pov she waz def. sure maan wud question her that y she dragged him away from there and y waz she soo affected wen he waz dancin wid those nangi punji gurls!!😆
and the his list of questions goes on u noe!
in order to avoid it, she put the blame on him so he gets pissd off and leaves from there!!
buh poor geet--things jus got bad to worst fer her!😉
and after a fight follows a romantic moment(to make up fer it)---toh a fight is not all that bad yah?!😉😉😆

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