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Posted: 14 years ago
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hii guyss this is my very first ff and i am only writing this because i am fed up with how joytis track r turning out to be so i decided to share with u how i think it should be like! i will start as soon as i get time ok😊

i will be doing from joyti and her new in laws n how she gets them down from heaven to reality! so bare with me as i am not gud also i won't be showing too much of joyti n kabir romance !

it the second day of joyti and kabirs marriage! joyti has been asked to cook sumthing sweet by the wicked witch chachi. joyti has cooked a sweet dish and her sis in laws her helping her serve it!

on the table all the mens of the house are waiting for their breakfirst aswell as chachi! joyti says" i have cooked halwa aswell as everyones fav dishes hope everyone likes it" then she goes up to chachi n tells her "chachi sa i have cooked a sawor dish for u since u don't like sweet!" chachi says " how would u know that wht i like" and taunts her, joyti calmly tells her that " people can tell ones likeness with their behaviour, since u never talk any sweet i thought that u r more bitter person!"😆

then she tells other womens to sit near their husband and it their breakfirst! but they say that they would later but joyti insits! and forces them to sit together! chachi sa starts her bitter talking "joyti none of the womens of this house will sit with the mens sines it the ritural of our family1 joyti tries to protest but gets no chance! so she lets it go1

then she goes near chachi sa and say! " are chachi sa app yaha kiyo bathei hai" chahchi tells her that " ye meri sit hai eyha hamesha mine bet thi ho" joyti is like😕 ok and replies " likin up to iss gar ki bahu hena to phir up eyha kese bet saktehe kuki yeh to asamman hua hei is ger ki riti riwag ka" and chachi sa shouts!" JOYTI!"!!!

ok thats it for now tell me if u like it then i will continue and plz ignore all the grammaer fautls! plz do comment!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very well done. Please continue....

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