Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 42

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Vrush...this is not the first time...and nor will it be the last time...CVs love your ideas!!!

ummmmmm nags will write, but when u write miss di?? lolz i guess by the time i come back from the gym i will find something!!

Ah nags has given me an idea..shivani..and i shall work on it tonight...

spoiler is that it is based on precap..

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Ah nags has given me an idea..shivani..and i shall work on it tonight...

spoiler is that it is based on precap..

awesome!!!! thanks!😳

Only Time will Tell'

He wondered if his plan will backfire as he recalled how she had agreed to find him a bride. What had made him think to push a little harder, to get her to admit what he saw in her eyes? But he had been shocked by her answer. Did she mean it? What if she did? What if all he felt for her was one sided. No, he dismissed that thought, I have seen her eyes. She hides something from me he thought. She feels. She wants. She believes like I do that we are meant to be.

He slept fitfully, with the dream of her in his head, of her being his bride. Of removing from her body, more than just the jewelry, he dreamt of taking her in his arms rather than devouring her with his eyes. He wanted to make a movie with her not a picture in a frame in the mirror that was but a mere reflection.

Yet he had goaded her, as her words had hurt him with the type of woman he wants. When the only one he desired, stared at him in the mirror, looking at him with yearning but hesitance that he wanted to remove. He had wanted to gather her in his arms but had mauled her with his words. He cursed himself for his temper, which she evoked without trying. He berated himself for feeling so much yet unable to tell her. He almost admitted that she looked beautiful, hell she looked ethereal, a dream. He knew he could look at her unblinkingly for ages for he was a starved man, hungry just for her.

Does she know how he feels? Does she realize that he does not look at only woman only this child-woman, who beguiled him, enraptured him with her innocence, her beauty and he simplicity. It did not matter to him where she came from or what she wore, for she would stand out in crowd because he only had eyes for her. He dug his hands in his hair, reliving the moment she had refused to admit her feeling plainly etched in her eyes, radiated by her body so close to him. He knew she loved him, hell why didn't she say it?

Is it that she wants him to make the first move? Is it that she is shy? He wanted to shake her into admittance but something held him back, something he saw in her eyes along with the love, along with desire. A hesitation, a step back as if she feared she was not good enough for him, when he worshiped her.

He had walked to the office this morning, with determination to let her know of what she made him feel, of what she should know. But a shower of photographs revealed her state of mind even though she hid behind flippancy. His quick temper riled at her jibes, he stopped himself form telling her anything. He went through the motion of rejecting every girl she sent without even looking at them. An insult, a retort, plain pigheadedness, whatever it took to make it clear to her that she is the one he wants. But the last straw was when she used Sasha in their games and to add fuel to the fire he already felt.

He howled at her in his ire, calling out her name, he dismissed Sasha like an undesired fly hovering around so that he could let her know what she had just done.

As she came meek and obedient, his temper rose further, he screamed at for going through this charade like it was her mission not work.

He threw the photos in her face letting her know that he was disappointed in them, he asked her what games was she playing at getting Sasha involved in it.

He asked her why she sent her of all people. Her reply though witty irked him. She threw his words back at him for asking for Pari from heavens above. She felt she was doing a good job, he was just pigheaded enough not to comply. All the girls were good enough she had said, but did she even know his heart's desire?

He stared at her longingly. He wondered what she would say if he told her, his Pari is right in front of him. As she blabbered about looking even harder, he stopped her from going.

He blurted, "what if you did not find the Pari, would you be the one?" She looked shocked but looked down to hide her pain. Is that not what he saw in them, a pain? Why pain? Is she abhorrent to the thought of being his? He tortured himself with that thought. Then not helping himself any further he turned her face and forced her to look at him.

"What are you hiding behind those down-turned eyes, Geet, why are you not looking at me!" Would a life with me be so unthinkable? Would you find it unbearable to give some happiness to me? He thought he said those words out loud but expressions did not change.

He mused if ask her to be his Pari, will she consent? Just when he thought she will answer she turned to run away, he caught her wayward, stole and held her near him.

"Let go," she begged, but he was not in the mood to give. He only wanted to take from her, take her in him.

Only Time lyrics - Enya
Who can say
where the road goes
where the day flows
only time
And who can say
if your love grows
as your heart chose
only time
Who can say
why your heart sighs
as your love flies
only time
And who can say
why your heart cries
when your love lies
only time

Who can say
when the roads meet
that love might be
in your heart
And who can say
when the day sleeps
if the night keeps
all your heart

Night keeps all your heart

Who can say
if your love grows
as your heart chose
only time
And who can say
where the road goes
where the day flows
only time

Who knows - only time
Who knows - only time

Maan's insecurity, attempts to decipher Geet, and getting her to admit are so well written in this piece! 👏

i dont think he is an insecure man..he is wondering why she is not...telling him the truth he sees in her eyes...

i tried to put that across i am not sure..if i succeeded..

once again another fantastic update.... ⭐️

Originally posted by: yasu09

once again another fantastic update.... ⭐️

really enjoyed reading this latest update!!!!!!

thank you yasu...just some totally from Maan's outlook...

Di yeh aapnay kya kardiya? 🤢 i am speechless!!! I was restless this whole day......whole flippin day.....i worked out for a hour and a half at the gym.....came home ate dinner....and then 2 hours later i ran outside for another half and hour.....AND I AM STILL RESTLESS!! Now came back and noticed that u had updated....and read ur scene and now i am even more restless!!!!😭

I think i need to go run more......but it is late already.......it is 9 pm!! maybe i should do crunches!!! By the way di, i almost fell off of the treadmill today!! 😆 I was running and then suddenly my ipod started to play the original background score of Maaneet.....and so i closed my eyes for a second and saw Maan wink at me!!! I lost my balance a little.....but i grabbed a hold of the handles in front of me and prevented myself from falling!!! Wink??? whatever lets not go into that!!!😆 I just think that my mind is all turned upside down.....

now to ur scene (sigh) it was just (i need to drink water so i can stop myself from screaming outloud)😆


just beautiful!!!! I loved everything about it.......Maan's perspective......was just.....excellent! It made perfect sense of what was going on in his mind!!! Di now i am suspicious....are u sure u didn't make the characters of maan and geet?? 😲
Everything was just mind blowing........all the way till the end.......i was going crazy.....when i finished i sighed extremely loud and just sat on my seat with my left hand on my head......just running through everything that u had wrote....seeing every image of what u have written!!! lolz then i shook my head screaming DIIIIII!!! I am telling u i will die early!!! (lets just hope not) I can't believe that u think u will fall flat on ur face!!! More like every time i end up falling flat on my face when i read ur scenes!!! I am the one who gets anxious nervous hoping that i won't croak....or hoping i won't break my jaws with the constant blushing......every time i read ur scene i go crazy.....craving for more wanting more.....reading it over and over again!! Tryin to capture everything that u have written and just play in my head......this is what ur scenes do to me.....it drives me insane! Di aapka yeh magical scene mujhe pagal kardega......more like pagal kardiya!!! I can't believe i asked for more...😆especially even though i know what happens to me after i am done reading it....

I go into some unknown land......i get soooo quiet.....u get me thinkin Di......😆
wow......di u really really are an amazing, mindblowing, magnificent, awesome writer!!! U r rocking!!! U capture everything in ur writing and just make it beautiful as ever!!
U r just amazing and very expressive with ur words that it touches my heart in such a way that i can't even imagine!!!

No i am not buttering up anythin i am truly saying this from the bottom of my heart!!! My heart is just going extremely restless.....isn't working out supposed to calm a person down?? Here i am still going nuts....why isn't it helping me?? Hell i worked out an extra 30 mins....and then another extra 30 mins....after dinner.......i ran with flip flops.......almost tripped a couple of times 😆 lucky didn't fall.....it was dark the streets.....then i dropped my cell phone because it slipped out of my pocket.....so i had to hold my ipod and cell in my hands and run back home like that!!! 😭

Thanks for an amazing.....amazing....amazing scene di!!! U totally totally rock......keep it up....u have it in u.....there is no way that u should be anxious and nervous.......we need good writers......and u just have that talent......and so show if off!!!! Show it off well....why hide it right??? 😉

Oh man.....i wish i can continue....but right now my head itches soooo much after that last run....i got bit by a couple of mosquitoes.....i am going to jump into the shower and wash my hair!!!!!😆

But di, u just keep on writing whenever u can.....i and many others are always ready to read ur awesome scenes!!! ⭐️
u r a true rockstar......so keep rocking those magical hands......and keep the smile on ur beautiful face....and with that smile keep shining like a star!!!! ⭐️

love
-Shivani!!!!