Unbreakable Bonds [Mayur and Gunur] : Pt 4 : Pg 32 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Mahak,

Tujhe hamara deal yaad hai na?? jaldi jaldi update karo... We have a long way to go after that 😉
Agar update late hui tho... sorry - I will go to sleep.
Phir mujhse gussa nahi karna...
With love,
Nivya..



Yup, i remember our deal.

i am updating it right now.

don't u even think of breaking ur promise!
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ....Anchal....

Wow so mahi.....u updating it today?

Cool man!

I am happy that u are going to write it.....by the way, i must say that u have a nice readers bunch..

I will be pming alright? So update as much as u can.

-Anchal



Correction- They are my friends and not just readers.

Yup, i will be frequently updating now.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93


Thank You so much for the awesome reply!

Hope you like the further story..

I can't possibly reply to everyone individually due to lack of time.

But i am very grateful to all of you for commenting.

Those who commented, i wanted to say that you guys cheered me up.

Thank you for commenting and letting me know that my work isn't boring you.

And thank u guys for clicking the like tab even.

Thanks to everyone, including the pressers of like tab.


I am grateful to Many people for clicking the like tab.

I will make sure that next time i gift a siggie to the people who commented and took their time out for me and my work.

Thanks a lot.

Love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94






Nupur's pov-

Well, to say that I wasn't surprised would be an understatement. Things still amaze you, don't they? The next day I opened my cupboard to find out a chocolate in it. I knew the reason behind this. How could she? I mean the last thing I wanted was her to pity me. Everyone would pity on you. You are such a looser.

Wasn't it enough that my life was spoiled, that she wanted me to feel sorry for myself? Why was she doing this? But then, why does she always do this? Well, do I deserve this? But then, do I deserve anything that happens in my life? Yup, you do. You hurt him. She never had the time for me. Damn me! I shouldn't have had opened up to her.

Yesterday, it was such an emotional breakdown for me that I forgot whom I was sharing things with. You never think twice before speaking. Urgh. I know she is my elder sister, but we have never shared things with each other. Too late for the realization. Things were different in the past, but now everything has changed. So did her. Didn't you?

She is bitter, rude, arrogant and what not! I can't imagine how much someone can change by mere poisoning of brains. Check yourself for it. I lost my sister sometime back. Although she is alive, but I don't know who is she. Neither do I know who I am! Oh yeah, you know why you changed.

I already have other problems in my life to think about this new one. Why did I break down yesterday? Well, it was because' But before my conscience could finish it up for me, I shouted at it for being so blunt. I didn't want to remember anything about yesterday. But it is said that memories never die.

Oh hell! I threw the chocolate on the bed. I realized that if I was same as I was earlier, then I would have melted that chocolate and eat it like a kid, coloring my face too. And he would have licked it off. I refused to hear my conscience and went ahead.

I picked up my bag, and started heading for my college. But Gunjan came in between. I don't her "di" as we have only one year age difference and we used to be friends. Before' Hell I remember everything. Why do you keep on repeating them? Because you are running away from truth.

Right now, I had no courage to fight with my conscience. I just made a face at Gunjan and moved aside. I saw pain in her eyes. Hell! She need not pity me. I am happy as I am. Really? Are you sure? But Gunjan seemed to be bossy. She stopped me from going away.

She asked me, "Where do you think you are going?" I wanted to reply something repulsive, but suddenly I realized that she was my friend too. She knew everything now. It's entirely your fault. I replied, "To my college."

I could see a surge of emotions in her eyes. Hadn't been those distances, I would have had hugged her and cried till I could cry no longer. You can still do that. She was my friend. My best friend. That was a long time back.

She kept her hands on my shoulder and said, "You don't need to do this. You deserve better. You can still opt for another college." Yeah! I could! But I didn't want that. Is it because of him? Nope. I was angry at her concern. Where the hell was she when I actually needed her? Busy with her life.

I rudely told her, "Listen, you don't need to teach me anything. I can still handle myself. You weren't there when I needed you, so there is no need of you for pitying me. Don't you dare interfere in my life." I could see tears sparkling in her eyes. I hated myself for this.

Gunjan smiled at me sweetly and asked, "Aren't you going to share things with me like we used to do earlier? Aren't we friends? And come soon so that we can play UNO like before." This was the limit.

I blasted at her. I said, "Listen, the last thing I want is your sympathy. And please don't dare to call yourself my friend. You weren't there when I actually needed you. Now when you know everything, stop being nice to me. Everything has changed. Be the same old rude sister to me. I don't need you. I don't need anyone in this entire universe."

I went out after banging my door. I had seen tears in her eyes. I hated myself for that. I brought those tears. You realized? But things had changed. A lot. I wasn't a snapper, but time made me one. Blame time now. I wish my conscience had an on-off button to shut it off completely.

I headed towards the college, knowing well enough that teaching in the same college which changed my life, wouldn't be that easy.

To be continued...

I hope you all like this part.

I really tried another style of writing, and noticed that this one takes time.

But i wish that you can comment on this and tell me how far is it nice.

I dropped loads of clues, let's see who can catch them.

I would be updating as soon as possible.

P.S.- i know that i am not updating any of my other ffs, but i have no time in the weekdays, so i try to update them in weekends. but this time my projects are killing me too. So do forgive me for not updating them. i will update when i get time.

Please do comment and hit the like tab.

With Love,
-Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
Wow Mahak!

This was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

I really L-O-V-E-D it.

What's the mystery?

And its P-E-R-F-E-C-T

The way you showed the feelings was just O-U-T-S-T-A-N-D-I-N-G

By the way, how do you end up writing so different every time?

How do you adapt to new styles?

You are the most versatile writer i ever read.

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!

Ya, Update kar jaldi.

Varna i won't talk to you.

And those who want PMs, Kindly add me in your pm list.

PS- i am the first one to comment...

PPS- Ya, those are your readers. Sorry.

PPPS- you really mean that u will make siggies? I mean those who comment will get siggies? Won't they? See i am commenting! I want my siggie okay?

-Anchal
Edited by ....Anchal.... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

I couldn't wait for Anchal's pm.. I was continuously checking for your update and I got you!!

Ok,coming to the update - You never stop to surprise me ,Do you?
While reading the prologue, I thought those were Nupur's lines.. But you prove me wrong.. And Gunji as Nup's elder sis?? Difficult to imagine..But still a change is always welcome.. Last one is imagining Nupur TEACHing in college 😲 Its something worth to wait and watch...
In one word - its UNIQUE.. and I stopped guessing anything on this... Will blindly follow your updates 😊
PS: Okay,so you are one step closer to our deal...Lemme see how fast you update the next one.. Otherwise you never know😆
Edited by Nirvrithi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
loved the conv btw gunur..
hmmm...whats the mystery??? waiting 4 the mystery to get solved soon...'loved the update..pls c ontinue soon............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
hay awesome start yar n its completely different 4m other things
n thanks 4 the pm
👏 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

Hey mahek,

Change is super
i loved it ,
I am seriously worried for the Nupur
something bad has happened with the nupur and Gunjan was not there with her
As you said please update it and please apne dusare FF bhi please update karo
Aruna
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi mahi outstanding n amazing update lov
thanks 4 d pm 🤗

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