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Posted: 15 years ago

YOU'RE STILL THE ONE

Part 9

As Nikki walked into Sanjeevani in the evening, she saw Sid's message on her cell to join him and the gang at the cafeteria for a cup of coffee. Her mood lifted as soon as she saw the message. She had missed her friends! When she joined the group, she was greeted by all of them with a hug. They all inquired about her health and told her how worried they were when Sid informed them about her migraine. Ridhhima reprimanded Nikki for not letting them know about her ill health, one of them would have surely comeover to take care of her if they had known.

'That is the precise reason I did not tell anyone ? I did not want to inconvenience you guys or unnecessarily worry about me ? and bother yourself because of me'.

Armaan walked upto her, and looked into her eyes, and asked her seriously,

'Nikki, I thought I was your best friend. Don't I mean anything to you? Why do you hide things from me? You know how much it hurts me? How come you never mentioned to me about your migraine attacks? How come you never let me know when you need help? You are the first one whom I talk to when I need help! But you ??never tell me anything ??I am really hurt !' he said sadly.

Nikki looked at him emotionally completely drained,

'Armaan, aisa mat bolo! I love you, you are my best friend, you know that! You are my family! You of all people should understand how much you mean to me. But I do not like to bother you or make you worry about me!'

Armaan was still sulking ?..

'Okay, baba, I am sorry, ab maaf kar do, next time I will not do that. I will tell all of you guys, and make sure that you are there to take care of me', she said holding his hand and then looking around all of them.

Sid trying to diffuse the tension ?.. suddenly jumped and came over where Armaan and Nikita were standing and said,

'Guys, it is celebration time! I have great news for you! Nikki is back on to the New Sanjeevani project. Dr. Modi had to relent!'

Armaan looked surprised and looked at Nikki for a conformation. When she nodded, he turned around to Sid and said with a big smile,

'Hey that is really great news! I haven't seen that - Dr. Moody give up so easily. You are great, dude ?.. the first round goes to you Sid! Way to go, man, best of luck! Here, give me five!' saying that they both high fived. Both of them gloating over Sid's success in making Abhi take back Nikki in the project. Suddenly everyone started to speak at the same time ?. wondering how Sid had managed to do it. Except Riddhima and Nikki. They were exchanging knowing glances communicating silently, not saying anything.

'It is celebration time!' Armaan said happily to Sid.

'Yes, it is! And so I am taking Nikki out for dinner today.' Sid said happily.

Everyone was taken back by this announcement, thinking Nikki and Sid were going on a date. They looked at Armaan to see his reaction ?.

'Hey, that is a great idea! Nikki deserves that! She has been working too hard lately and not having much fun!' he said hugging her. In his mind, Armaan was very glad to see that Nikki was going out with Sid. Sid was a good distraction after Dr. Modi. Armaan would agree to anything and anyone, who was ready to take Nikki's attention away from that creep and also show Dr. Modi that Nikki was worth much more than what he had given her.

'Now just wait and see Dr. Moody ? how I get you into trouble. Kal party mein tum dekhna kya haal hota hai aapka! You are going to pay for all the tears you have brought for Nikki and for taking advantage of her and hurting her till now,' Armaan thought wickedly. The match between Dr. Modi and Sid was on now, and he was going to make sure that Sid won hands down. He already had a plan in mind, to help Sid win the second round too?. against the great Dr. Modi. Tomorrow they all will watch as Dr. Modi squirmed and lost his cool once again, Armaan thought with great pleasure!

Nikki was not happy with the way this conversation was going, nor the way her friends were interpreting this friendship with Sid. So to avoid anymore talk about it, she turned to Sid and said,

'Sid, shall we go! We need to finish the work before my night duty starts. We are already late. Bye guys, catch you later, I will meet you all at lunch tomorrow to arrange everything for the party.'

Both Sid and Nikki, left the cafeteria, letting everyone wonder what was going on between the two of them.

'Arre, they both look cute together, na? Mr Lambu and Miss sexy?' Atul blurted out.

'Shut up, Atul!' all of them screamed at him together.

'Kyun, did I say something wrong?' he asked innocently.

They gave him a disgusted look and decided to disperse.

Armaan and Riddhzi were walking back together. Armaan was in a deep thought. This worried Riddhzi, about what was going on in his head. She was sure that he was upto some trouble .... and that scared her. Already the things were so bad between Abhi and Nikki. She didnot want him to make it worse. Nikki had already suffered so much .... Armaan had no idea!

'Armaan, kya soch rahe ho?' she asked casually, trying to find out what was going on in his devious mind.

'Riddhzi, I was thinking about entertainment for the party tomorrow' he said innocently. 'How about having some games for the kids, then for us doctors, so that the kids can enjoy, without getting tired too much. You see, with Ayesha's health so delicate, we cannot make them run around much.' He said with concern.

Riddhima was surprised by his sensitivity and gave him a hug suddenly. 'Armaan, you are so sweet, thinking about and caring for the kids so much. I think it is a great idea. So let us decide on the games.' She said getting excited.

'Okay, you think up of games for the kids and I will think up of games for the adults! I think 2 ? 2 games for each should be good enough. Then we can have some music and a bit of dancing followed by cake cutting and snacks' he said.

'Great! I already have a few ideas, I will get the things ready for them tonite and confirm with Nikki tomorrow! I am sure she will have no problems, since she told us to take care of the entertainment for the party.' Riddhima replied.

Armaan's brain was at its devil's best! It was already working overtime. A wicked smile came on his face, but he was successful in hiding it from Riddhima, since he was sure that she would have never agreed to his idea!

As Armaan and Riddhima, parted and went home, Sid and Nikki were busy getting their work done. Suddenly, Sid realized it was already time for them to go for dinner.

'Nikki, chalo, lets wind up. It is time we left for our dinner, else you will be getting late coming back.'

Nikki once again, tried to get Sid to change his mind about dinner.

'Sid, I will grab something in the cafeteria later, let us finish this today. Already I was not here to help you yesterday, and we are lagging behind.' Nikki said.

'No way, Nikki! I already told you. You are going out with me. I am not listening to you. You need to eat properly. So get going!' he was already closing the files and pulling her out of her chair.

Nikki couldnot help smiling at his forceful ways.

'Okay baba, lets go!' She said with a smile.

She was surprised as Sid walked towards a sexy yellow sports car. And opened the door for her.

'Is she yours?' she asked excitedly.

'Isn't she a beauty?' Sid confirmed proudly.

'Yes, she is!' Nikki gave him a big smile.

Sid took her to a nice Punjabi place close by. Nikki was surprised,

'How did you know I love Punjabi food?' she asked.

Sid said, 'Well only fools don't like Punjabi food! It's my favourite too.' he said jokingly.

Nikki remembered Abhi. She recollected how he loved Chinese and she loved Punjabi food. Suddenly her face became sad. And Sid noticed that.

Sid told Nikki, as they sat down at the table, 'Nikki, I am not sure what is bothering you. But I know that you are hurting. I can see it in your eyes, but don't worry I will not ask you anything about it nor expect you to share it with me. All I want you to do is give me an opportunity to make you forget it, that's all? Will you do that, please? After today I will never bring up this topic, promise! All I want to do is, make you smile!' he said seriously.

'Oh Sid! You are so sweet! And you make me smile always! Thanks a lot for everything!' she said, 'I will try, to smile ...... all the time .....okay?' she replied with watery eyes.

Suddenly, her mobile rang, and she was surprised to see Abhi calling her. Her heartbeats increased as she picked up the phone to talk to him,

'Hello!' he heard her say softly.

'Hi Nikki! How are you? Are you feeling better?' he asked with a husky voice. He sounded so sexy ? she thought.

She didnot reply for a while, lost in her dreams about him and Abhi wondered if the line had got cut.

'Nikki?' he said tentatively.

'Yes! I am better!' she replied a bit curtly trying not to get so affected by him.

'Is your headache gone? Have you eaten something?' he asked again, wondering why she was not answering comfortably. Maybe she wasn't too well!

'I am fine Dr. Modi. I was at the hospital in the evening working with Siddhant. And now I am having dinner with him. In a bit, I will be reporting for my night duty. Anyway, thank you for your inquiring' she replied, a bit stiffly.

Abhi was taken back by her tone. First it was soft, but then she had suddenly become aloof. He couldn't understand, maybe because she was with Siddhant. He was getting more and more irritated now! Why was she eating out when she had just been so unwell? Can't she take some rest and eat at home? But no she had to galavant around the town with that Siddhant. He visualized the two of them sitting across a table in a restaurant enjoying themselves and that got him even more angry. He hated this feeling ?. he was angry, irritated, jealous, everything at the same time. He wanted to shout at her ? but then remembered, he needed to keep his cool. With great difficulty things were under control ?. One more wrong move and everything will be back to as bad as it was earliar ?. they both needed time ?..

'Ok, bye then. I will see you at the party tomorrow! Good night!' saying that, he kept the phone down before Nikki even replied.

Nikki was taken aback. He was so abrupt. But atleast he did not get angry at her. She has to remember to maintain her distance, and not get so affected by him or show him her real feelings else there will be trouble all over again. Even though she was finding it extremely difficult to keep her cool and maintain the distance, she had to do it!

'Nikki, what happened? All okay?' Siddhant interrupted her thought. 'What did he want?'

'Oh, nothing ! He was just inquiring about my health that's all and wanted to know if I was going for the night duty!' she said casually. She did not want Sid to be suspicious about the real relationship between her and Abhi. She did not know how he would react. She wanted to avoid him getting to know her any better than this and complicate the situation.

Both of them got back to their comfortable self again, in no time. They joked about their collage experiences, Nikki talked about all the fun the gang always had and Sid told her all about his experiences at the graduate school in US. Time just flew, they finished their dinner and headed out of the restaurant.

Nikki was shocked when Sid extended his hand and gave his car keys to Nikki saying,

'Want to ride her?'

Nikki eyes started to shine with excitement and she said, 'You ought to be joking!' but when she looked at him, she saw his lazy smile and nod.

'Really? You would let me drive it? Would you trust me?'

'Sure, come on ? get in and let me show you how it works', he said ushering an excited Nikki inside the car in the drivers seat.

Nikki heard him with attention, and when he was done giving her all the instructions, she started the car.

She was so thrilled to drive the car. There was a sudden rush of adrenaline which made her so excited. She was thoroughly enjoying herself. Sid had guessed it right, Nikki enjoyed the thrill and speed. He should remember that for future. Slowly she started picking up the speed and started riding the car fast. As she touched the speed of 100, he said,

'Careful, this is your first time. You need to be a bit slow. Don't go too fast ?..'

Nikki made a face at him, but slowed down,

'Spoilsport! I thought you would let me race', she replied childishly.

'Maybe next time ?. ' Sid said smilingly at her.

By the time they reached the hospital, Nikki's hair was all messed up with the breeze, and her eyes were shinning with all the excitement, that she looked absolutely wild ?. Getting down from the car ? she said,

'Thanks Sid. I haven't has so much fun in such a long time. Thanks for forcing me to go out for dinner. And thanks a lot for letting me ride this beauty ?. I loved it', she said admiring his car once again.

Sid was happy to see that she had forgotten all her problems and was her original self.

'Anytime ?? then we should do this more often, I guess!' he said smiling at her. 'Now go inside and get back to work, mam'. He said waving her bye.

She walked into to the childrens ward, excited to tell Ayesha all about her drive in Sid's car.

Ayesha had been missing her ? she had not seen Nikki for 2 days. As soon as she saw Nikki , she satt up with excitement and gave her a tight hug ?..

'Nikki di, I missed you so much, but Boyfriend told me that you were unwell. I was so worried ?. Are you okay now?' she asked looking at her intently, checking to see if all was fine.

Nikki gave her a tight hug, kissed her forehead and told her that she was absolutely fine. She told her all about her ride in Sid's car and how much fun it was. Both of them talked for a while ?. And then as she saw that Ayesha was hardly able to keep her eyes open, Nikki told her to close her eyes and go off to sleep. She was so happy that Ayesha was looking so much better and would be able to enjoy her b'day party tomorrow.

But before the party, Nikki had a surprise gift for her. She was going to be mad with happiness when she finds out the surprise ?.

After putting Ayesha to sleep, Nikki goes for her night rounds. The night passes uneventfully. In the morning, Nikki leaves without seeing Ayesha ?. She wanted to see Ayesha and wish her when she had the her gift with her ? for that she had to still go somewhere.

Nikki came back in the afternoon with Ayesha's gift and straight went to the Children's ward ?.. there was so much excitement ? and as she entered the ward with a small basket in her hands ? all the kids surrounded her ?

'Nikki didi, what have you got for Ayesha ??. It is her b'day, do you know ? she had been waiting for you '?. All of them were talking at the same time.

She just smiled and went straight to Ayesha ?. And extended her hand and gave the basket to her ?..

'Ta da ?.. surprise ?.' She exclaimed. Ayesha jumped up in her bed to take the basket in her hand peeped inside the basket.

'Oh my god, Nikki di, you got me a puppy' she said excitedly as she saw the most cute looking puppy sitting inside the basket, all curled up and his eyes wide with a bit of fear in them ! 'I love you, Nikki didi, and I love you too puppy' she said with all the love in her eyes. She hugged Nikki and then carefully picked up the puppy from the basket and hugged him.

Nikki could not take her eyes off the two of them. She kept on watching them. She did not notice that someone was watching her too! Abhi saw her when she entered the Children's ward ?.. and had stood there watching her interaction with Ayesha ?? She was so beautiful ?. And when she was happy she looked even more pretty.

Suddenly, the puppy jumped out of Ayesha's hands. He jumped on the bed, and then on to the floor and hid himself under the bed. Some of the kids started to scream in fear and some started to jump up and down on the bed with excitement. There was chaos all around ?

Nikki immediately bent down and tried to get under the bed ? trying to get the puppy out ?. But as she approached him, he got more scared and he moved back. Now he started yelping too ?.

'Don't' worry , baby, I will not hurt you, please come ?..' and she started to make cajoling noises to sooth the ruffled puppy. But it was no use ? the puppy, kept on moving back ?.getting more and more scared.

Seeing all this chaos ? Abhi decided that he will have to take things into hands before Nikki converted the Children's ward into a circus ?.

'Dr. Nikita ?.' He shouted ?..'what are you doing ? under the bed?'

Suddenly hearing his voice, she forgot that she was under the bed, and tried to get up, and hit her head on the underside of the bed, and screamed,

'Auw ?.., can't you not shout at me all the time, Dr. Modi', she said sulkily, still under the bed, with just her butt and legs sticking out. 'See what you have done now ?. I hurt my head all because of you', she said rubbing her head where she had hit it. Her scream scared the puppy even more and he started barking loudly.

'Dr. Nikita, will you bring yourself out of there first, then we will see about my stopping to shout' Abhi told her irritatedly, worried if she was hurt badly.

As she moved back and came out, hand on her head where she was hurting ?

'Let me see, where you have got hurt' Abhi asked her, moving her hand away and feeling her head very softly. He could feel a bump coming up rapidly ?.

'Auw, Dr. Modi, it hurts, can you not touch' she screamed once again, giving him a stare.

'Sorry, Nikki. I need to check, and see how bad it is or if you are bleeding' he said softly, 'please let me see, I won't hurt you, promise!'

Nikki kept on staring at him ?. As he came closer and once again he felt her head. Satisfied that she was not bleeding ? he instructed the nurse to bring some ice immediately ?.

He made Nikki sit on Ayesha's bed ? with Ayesha looking anxiously at Nikki.

'Ayesha, baccha I am fine, donot worry. Dr. Modi will fix my head in no time, and then we can play with puppy, ok?' Nikki told Ayesha lovingly, to make sure Ayesha was not worrying.

Slowly she felt something touch her leg and tickle. A smile erupted her face as she realized, what was happening.

Abhi getting irritated at her asked, 'What is so funny, Nikki? You are hurt. There is a big bump on your head and you are smiling. Has the bump on your head affected you so much that you are going mad?'

Nikki indicated him with her eyes to look near her leg. The puppy was closely standing next to her leg, looking up at her with hopeful eyes? he did not like to be ignored ? so had decided to make his presence felt.

'Can I?' she asked Abhi indicating if she could pick him up.

Abhi couldnot help smiling and allowed her to pick the pup up.

She gently lifted him up, put him on her lap and patted him. In meantime, the nurse got the ice, and Abhi started to apply the ice on her head. They made such a cute site ?..

Nikki sitting on the bed, Ayesha on one side of her, clinging close to her, Puppy in her lap, waging his tail, as she stroked him, and Abhi applying ice on her head.

Abhi thought ?. she was so crazy ?. Getting into trouble all the time ? putting him into trouble all the time ?. But he just couldn't help ?. Loving her naughty crazy mad ways ? he just wanted to take her in his arms and crush her in a hug. He kept on staring at her ?. taking in her happy face ?. full of love for Ayesha and the puppy.

As her bump subsided, puppy relaxed and Ayesha once again happy, Abhi left them and went back to his duties. Nikki told Ayesha, that she will keep the puppy with her and take care of him till Ayesha was ready to go home. Then when she went home, she can take him with her. Now, the first thing they needed to do was find a name for him .....

Ayesha said, 'Goofy!' immediately and Nikki agreed. She loved the name and it suited him perfectly. He was such a goof ball getting her into trouble! And the puppy also agreed. He started wagging his tail and yelping in all the excitement.

Nikki told Ayesha to take care of Goofy till she went and had her lunch. Then she will come back for him. All the kids, were very excited and told Nikki that they will help Ayesha to take care of the puppy ?.

It was already 5 in the evening ?. And Atul had called and told the nurse in the children's ward that he was headed back with Ayesha in be there in another 5 minutes. All off them were waiting in their hiding places for them to enter anytime now.

As soon as they heard them walk-in, they all jumped out shouting ?..

'Surprise!'

'Happy b'day, Ayesha!'

From then on ?.. it was party time! There was so much excitement, fun, shouting and playing. Ayesha loved the decorations and all the gifts she received. Goofy had settled down by now too. He was running around with all the kids, thinking that all the excitement was just for him. He was in love with Ayesha already. As soon as he saw her come into the room, he jumped into her hands ?.. and refused to get down.

Abhi, was there too, though in a sobre mood. He was enjoying all the fun that Ayesha and rest of the kids were having. But he could not take his eyes off Nikki. She was more excited than Ayesha herself. She was having so much fun, making the kids play all the games that Riddhima had arranged for them ?. She was a kid herself and when they were ready to start the last game she insisted that she also wanted to play ? and he knew exactly why ?.. he thought smiling to himself.

In this game, all the kids and Nikki had their hands tied at the back. There was a plate in front of each of them, from which they were supposed to eat ice-cream, directly, without touching with their hands of without any spoons. And the one who finished the first would be the winner. Riddhzi had thought up of this game since she knew Ayesha loved ice-creams, especially the chocolate flavour.

As soon as Armaan whistled, they all started to eat the ice-cream directly from the plates. They all looked so funny .... struggling on their knees .... hands tied back ..... ice-cream smeared all around their mouth, nose, chin and cheeks. It was hilarious! A couple of the kids even collapsed on their ice-cream plates smearing their whole face.

All the doctors were chearing of the kids. They were more excited than the kids themselves. Abhi was cheering for Ayesha, helping her by guiding her what to do. Right next to them was Sid cheering for Nikki. As the game progressed, Sid was sat down right next to Nikki, cheering her to eat faster and faster .....

'Shut up, Sid! I am trying na?' she retorted.

'Here let me clean up your face, you are looking like a clown ' Sid saying laughing at her. And taking the napkin, he cleaned up her nose tip and around her lips slowly.

Abhi kept on looking at both of them. He was getting irritated as their closeness didnot go unnoticed by him. They both were like two kids, innocent, enjoying their crazy game ..... but he was hating it ......

'Fast Sid, else I will be the last, hato jaldi!' Nikki panicked and moved away her face so that she can start eating again.

Armaan noticed their closeness too. He also saw Abhi's angry eyes on them .... and a cunning smile appeared on his face as he thought ?

'Great going, Sid. Dr. Moody is climbing up the wall already. Aur agey toh kya hoga unka?'

Ayesha was the first one to finish her ice-cream, so as soon as she was done, Abhi jumped and declared that Ayesha had finished first and was the winner. Armaan blew the whistle to indicate that all were to stop eating.

'Sid, u are so stupid .... I lost all because of you! If u did not stop me to wipe my face ... I would have finished first.' She sulked and started making faces at him. Ayesha started laughing at her, saying, 'Nikki didi, still I would have won. No one can beat me at eating ice-creams .... that too chocolate one ... it is my favourite, so don't blame poor Sid'.

'Theek hai, theek hai, stop gloating now .... and Sid stop staring at my face and open my hands' Nikki ordered Sid . Sid went behind her, stood close to her and opened her hands. As he was doing this, Nikki looked up she could see Abhi staring at both of them. She could not make out what he was thinking, but his eyes were dark and they were broodingly looking at them. He kept on looking at her ... as if blaming her for something. But didnot say anything. She just could not look away .... as if she was under his spell. They both were lost in each other. Suddenly Ayesha pulled her hand and said,

'Nikki didi, here is the napkin, now you can clean your face yourself, no need for Sid to do it.' She said jokingly.

Nikki suddenly became self conscience realizing how stupid she must be looking with ice-cream all over her face. She looked away from Abhi and started cleaning. When she was done, she asked Ayesha if her face was clean. Ayesha nodded her head, indicating that there was still some more ... Nikki asked her where it was .... all this time Sid and Abhi were observing both of them. Slowly Abhi came close to her, took the napkin from her hand, and started wiping with it. His hand was so close to her lips ? that Nikki's heart jumped and came to her mouth. She was unable to breath. Her lips parted in surprise. He kept on staring at her and then looked at her parted lips. She was so conscious of his eyes on her lips that her cheeks turned completely red and when he lifted his eyes once again, he was glad to see that she was as affected as he was with their nearness. She was looking straight into his eyes. They were both as if frozen in time .... forgetting everyone around them. They were in their own world, all their differences forgotten.

'Nikki, Sid, are you guys ready ?.... We have games for the adults too!', Armaan interrupted, 'Dr. Modi, would you like to join in?' he asked, knowing completely well what his answer would be.

'No thanks, Dr. Mallik. I think ......' but before he could say anything further, Armaan said excitedly, 'Good Dr. Modi, we need someone to referee so you can help us out.'

Gathering everyone together he started explaining the game to the interns and Sid. Since the game was to be played in pairs, he paired them up as ? Anjali and Atul, Muskaan and Rahul, Nikki and Sid and Riddhima and himself. Abhi was observing all this, knowing completely well what was going on in Armaan's head. He was having a tough time controlling his anger. He wanted to go and bash up his face ....

As Abhi blew the whistle, the first part of the game started. Here the girls were supposed to put a knot a tie around their partners necks.

All the girls ran to the counter where the ties were kept and came back to their partners. Each one was struggling, since none of them knew how to do it. Riddhima was having a tough time since Armaan was distracting her by flirting with her and whispering something in her ears, making her blush. As usual, Muskaan and Rahul were fighting, hitting each other and blaming the other for not able to get it right. And Atul was the best! He was telling Anjali, that however she tied it, he will wear it and never remove it, since she was the best. He did not care even if they lost.

But Abhi was distracted by what was going on between Nikki and Sid. He could make out how conscious Nikki was. She was struggling because of their height difference. And then Sid decided to bend down so that she would be more comfortable. Abhi's insides were burning ... he wanted to just grab Nikki's hand and drag her out of this place. There was a shuttered look on his face. He saw Sid was slowly and clearly giving instructions to Nikki, so that she could finish the task at hand. And they were the first ones to finish it?. All the kids were cheering for them as they ran towards Abhi, to show him and declare them as winners of the first round. Nikki was so excited that they had won the first round ..... she had a big smile on her face. But as soon as she saw the grim look on Abhi's face ... her smile vanished. She noticed that he was staring at the way Sid was holding her hand as they had approached him.

There was fighting and blaming going on between the other 3 pairs as they lost to Nikki and Sid. Among all this confusion the 2nd round started. Now this is what each pair had to do ... they had to start from one end of the room and reach the other end. But the way they would be doing it was ? the guy had to carry his partner in his arms, stepping only on the bricks which were already laid down in a line. The first pair to reach the other end wins. Everyone, looked at Sid accusingly ... he had a distinct advantage ... he was the strongest, whereas Nikki was the smallest and the lightest to carry. They knew who would be the winner.

Abhi did not like this game at all .... he just wanted to leave the party and go. He could not take it anymore .... but he had no choice. It was Ayesha's party and he saw she was thoroughly enjoying it.

So he blew the whistle, and all the four couples started. All the guys lifted their partners in their arms. Rahul started complaining how heavy Muskaan was, and asked her why she cannot stop eating so much. Atul told Anjali that she was light as a flower and he was surely going to win this round. Armaan didn't say anything ... for him this was nothing new... he must have lifted Riddhzi a million times. As Sid lifted Nikki in his arms, Nikki just clung to him tightly, holding on to his shirt, to make sure that she was balanced well. Abhi was observing them closely. His expression unreadable. After a few steps, Atul could not balance anymore and was disqualified since he stepped off the brick. Rahul continued to struggle with Muskaan for a few more step, but he also gave up. Armaan and Sid were the only ones in the game now ..... both were neck to neck in the race .... everyone was cheering for both of them. Armaan saw that Sid was right next to him ... and in the last few steps slowed down a bit. No one noticed, but that gave Sid a chance to reach before Aarmaan by a split second .... and so once again Sid and Nikki were the winners.

Sid let Nikki down and in his excitement of winning gave her a hug. They both gave each other a high five happily, but as soon as Nikki turned around she saw Abhi. And she saw the irritated look in his eyes.....

Armaan decided to announce the winners of the game just at that moment ....

'So the Best Jodi of Sanjeevani is .... Sid and Nikki. Dr. Modi can you please give out the gifts to the winners ... here you go' saying that he thrust a gift wrapped parcel into Abhi's hand, giving no choice to him once again. With a grim face, Abhi gave the gifts to Sid and Nikki. All the time he was throwing accusing glances at Nikki, as if she was doing something wrong and letting him down.

While Armaan, noticing this was gloating. He had achieved what he had set out to in the first place. He made sure that the winner of Round 2 ..... of the battle between Dr. Moody and Sid ... was Sid!

He had successfully shown Dr. Moody how good Sid was for Nikki ....

Abhi abruptly left the party ... after wishing Ayesha a happy b'day once again, kissing her on her forehead and telling her bye. He did not talk to anyone, but just turned around and left. Nikki knew that he was angry ... already he had told her to keep away from Sid... and she was defying him once again and getting closer and closer to Sid.

The rest of the time just flew away as Ayesha cut her cake and everyone eat it and the snacks. They all had a great time .... except Nikki.

Ayesha was whining that her boyfriend had left without eating the cake. She requested Nikki if she could go and give it to Abhi. So Nikki was forced to see Abhi ?.. she was trying to avoid him because she knew she was in trouble ? Abhi had left the party abruptly in a huff. With great difficulty they had established this delicate balance ... and she had to make sure nothing went wrong now ?.. otherwise the financing will be in jeopardy once again.

She saw that Abhi was busy working on his lap top, when she reached his cabin. She knocked and came inside.

'Dr. Modi ....' she said nervously, cake in her hands, which were sweating due to the tension.

'Why are you here, Nikki? Is your party over? Don't you have a date with your friend today?' he asked her angrily, not noticing the cake.

'Please, Dr. Modi ...' she started once again trying to explain.

'Please what? Please give you off tonite so that you can go on a date?' he continued as he got up from his chair and walked around the table to face her.

'Abhi, please listen .... Sid is just a good ....' she tried to explain about Sid, forgetting all about the cake, but Abhi interrupted.

'I just don't care !... did I ask you what Sid is to you ?... your action already speaks for itself!' he told her angrily. He kept on coming closer and closer to her, till she was trapped between him and the table. She kept the cake on the table and held on to the table with her hands on the two sides.

'Abhi ... please ?.. !' Nikki pleaded

'Please what, Nikki? Not interfere between you and Sid? You have a right to be close to anyone you choose to be! Who am I to stop you?' he asked her sarcastically. Now they were barely inches apart, his angry gaze boring into her. She could not breathe anymore. He was so close. She was so aware of him, she could feel his heat thru her clothes, could smell his mild aftershave and hear his heartbeat. She was completely lost in his dark eyes, trying to tell him something with her big eyes, unable to say a word.

Abhi's frustration knew no bounds. His jealousy was making him go crazy. He was unable to keep away from her anymore. He hated the way Sid was holding her hand, carrying her and the way she was clinging to him today. Suddenly, he bent his head, and took her lips into a kiss forcefully .... he held her face in his hands, and feasted on her lips as if he had been starving for days .... the dam of his desire was broken ..... and his emotions overtook all his senses .... he could not stop himself ... he was like a man who had found water in a desert after days of going without it. He moved his hands away from her face .... and wrapped them around to collect her in a hug and bring her as close to him as possible, till they became one! Without realizing how hard he was hugging her, he lifted Nikki off her feet. Nikki had her arms around him and was clinging to him helplessly. Neither of them realized for how long they were like this, kissing each other as if their life depended on it. Finally, unable to breath anymore, Abhi lifted his head and let her slide down. But still he was unable to let her go!

He kept on staring at her, looking into her jet black eyes. Suddenly, it hit him, how much he loved her! He realized that the reason for his insane jealousy was his love for her. He just cannot keep away from her .... he cannot see her with anyone else .... nor can he live without her?

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Edited by ANfan_1810 - 15 years ago
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Apologies everyone, this is coming in 2 times 24 hours which was how long i was supposed to have taken - but my hard disk suddenly decided to come up with a head of its own and started threatening me with smart failures and all - i freaked out pretty bad, cause there is so much of lab stuff on this ONE hard disk, that i couldn't even think of letting it crash and die out on me ... spent a good 10 hours from yesterday to today backing up my data and its all done now!

To cut my rant short, i somehow lost the file that contained the earlier version of this chap 2 and had to redo it much to my agitation! but while doing so, i figured i wanted to take it another way (as i have done now) than the way i had in the original version. just like i had anticipated, it doesn't finish here, in 2 chapters, although it was meant to with the original version ... but in this chapter, although i linger on more with the mystery of armaan and abhimanyu - i give away some points for the readers to toy with - while adding a lighter AN reaction ... not entirely a necessary addition, but i had fun doing it, which is good for me, considering i had to do chap 2 twice!

Aite, enough from me - enjoy reading! AND, don't forget to leave the feedbacks!

Link to previous chapter:
Chap 1

Ecoutez Moi, Love!

~2~


The snow flakes were falling big and heavy but they never made a sound. Softly, each flake touched upon the brown and gray contours of the ground. To disappear into anonymous few drops of water. He grudgingly marveled the ease with which they lost their identities. If only it was possible for him ...

The over cast skies were so low upon the city, so ready to open up and let go of what they had held back upon too long - Abhimanyu wondered if nature was conspiring to become a reflection of his present state of mind. He quickened his pace keeping his head low and burrowed into the raised collars of his over coat, while his feet, which had once upon a time been accustomed to these icy sidewalks and unpaved inner trails alike had not forgotten the trained caution in their steps, without his active attention now.

It was only late in fall for the first snow to already have been falling all day today. Certainly, the winter was come far too early this year.

He thought back of the time he had been a student in this same campus - late nights out and repeated snoozing of the morning alarms, the grudging awakening when the sun finally became too bright to avoid even with eyes tightly shut, the sight of the white blanket from the dorm passage windows which would make one stop in their step and smile the silly smile however groggy with sleep one may be, the mid day snow fights on the Central Diag in between classes, the range of snowmen with all kinds of props imaginable usually built by girls and occasionally by the guys who were talked into the kiddie play by their pouting sulking girlfriends ... it was four years ago that he had last witnessed the falling of this first snow on the campus he had graduated from. And four years ago, that life had been only ever as complicated as it could be on a night before an exam one was most likely to fail, or the morning after a drunkard frat event which gave horrible headaches and occasional memories to be embarrassed and teased about ...

For all the emotional welling Abhimnayu had fought to keep at bay, a strong sense of nostalgia filled him. He missed being a boy now that manhood had been completely attained. And momentarily his eyes stung threateningly. In an undertone he cursed the frigid air and blinked rapidly before regaining his overt composure again.

So many times, over the last few months, he had heard her talk of professors and lecture halls, take home tests and anatomy lessons, campus cafes and bar crawl Fridays, and so much of everything that had been as much a part of his own life as it was her own now. Except, she didn't know one real thing about his side of the story. His, for her convenience, was the make believe world of Armaan Malik, a Med student like herself, enrolled at an esteem midwestern Med school. When fact was that the hospital unit of the same college was where he had been a fellow for over a year, before being hired on their staff as a surgeon. He was over six years her senior, as opposed to the one year she had been led to believe.

So caught up in his thoughts between the past and present he was, that when he finally stood at her doorstep, he realized he hadn't been quite aware of the roads and streets crossed while making way from the hotel to her apartment. For a moment he just watched the snow flakes fall and melt upon the little shrubbery beside the pathway to her door. Finally, grim, but resolved, he pulled his cell and speed dialed her number.

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Nikki stood mulling over thoughts, while occasionally stirring the contents of the pan, absent mindedly, her gaze stuck mid air, unblinking. She'd been trying to gather the pieces of facts she knew, and put them together to make sense. A rather futile attempt, considering she didn't have all the pieces yet. It didn't stop her from endlessly contemplating. Awaiting an explanation was hard, and here she couldn't even figure what the explanation was to be for?

Somewhere in the background, she had the kitchen radio playing, to an empty kitchen, barring her, its inattentive audience ...

Can't stop the rain from falling down, oh
Can't stop the world from turnin' round, oh
Can't stop my heart from loving you
No,
no [No, no], no matter what you do, baby ...


It had been Christmas time last year, when they met the first time. A bunch of high profile Christians who happened to be major donors to his college hospital funds had succeeded in getting the administration to organize a festive season Cancer Awareness week, which in addition to the few talk sessions that were typical of any cause oriented event, had included much else, remaining considerate about time of the year and the consequent mood of the participants. A smart decision for their fund raisers - the Christmas day fete, couple days of rally around the four campus quads, and ... the eventful winter ball on New Year's eve ... had raised quite an amount for their cause.

Why she had chosen to be there instead of spending time with her own family in the south, while additionally escaping the bitter winter, was not one reason to explain - although the prominent one could have been her unwillingness to spend another break shuttling between the homes of her real mother and step father, and real father and his current girlfriend. The only reason she ever went back to visit her scattered family was to spend time with her twin step siblings, both boys and 7 years each, whom she was absolutely fond of. But somehow, last winter, even that had not persuaded her into not spending another holiday without experiencing the spirit of celebration in the air, unaffectedly. She knew being alone was something she had not tried before, but when she'd seen posters of the Cancer awareness week outside the office of her Department Chair, she had proceeded to take her chance and volunteer. She had never been to that side of midwest before anyways, and if nothing, she could spend time exploring a new city - what better time could there be than Christmas.

Looking back at all the things that had led to her participation in the week long events, she had always found herself pinning it down as a fateful decision to have made, one that had eventuated her meeting Armaan Malik.

A shrill ringing from her cellular, tore her out of the reveries of the past, and she most certainly missed a beating of her heart before registering it as such.

"AM," she muttered, leaving aside the laddle, the pan, and its contents, not before she had lowered the flame of the stove, and rushed to get it from the TV couch across from the kitchen in her studio apartment.

"Hey!" she said, somewhat rushed. "You called ... " her eyes checked the wall clock and she completed, "In 19 minutes!"

"I did say I wont hold you up didn't I?"

"You did." He could hear her smiling through those words, and it did good to his nerves, which weren't relaxing no matter how much he tried. "But there are times you don't keep your word, so I can't be certain." The tone of her blame was only of harmless teasing, but given his own prevalent thoughts, he couldn't help feeling guilty.

"Are you done cooking?" He could do with a good filling meal, and he could do with a temporary change of topic.

"Its getting done, but I can keep talking. Or you can, and I will listen." It was a mild hint from her, a hint of unassuming assurance, cause whether he had said it out loud or not, she had sensed his need to talk. As in, him talking, her listening. Would he ever find a way to be worthy of this girl? Clearing his throat, he rung the doorbell, heard it in person, and heard it resounding in his phone.

Then promptly, he quipped, "Someone's at your door ..."

"There is ... wow, you heard the bell?"

Double heard, he wanted to correct her but didn't, even if she was this close from discovering his physical presence so close to herself. And for that one moment, he couldn't help a small smile from warming his otherwise cold lips - for the instant, before the gravity of the evening would set in and begin to play spoilsport, she was bound to award his person at her doorstep with the most priceless reaction he could imagine. Because even the brief happy anticipation of meeting her did little to ward away the chill that was settling upon his now stationary form, he shuffled his feet, and nestling the headset between his ear and the right shoulder, gave his hands a rub.

"Go on and get the door!" he urged her, then realized it was a little too much urging to sound impersonal, and added hastily, "I mean ... it must be freezing outside with the snow and all ..."

"Snow? How did you know it was ... snowing here?" Her suspicion was not misfound, and he wished she would be a little slow to catch on things once in a while.

"I ... er... from the weather forecast."

"You had time to check the weather in New York, but not call me once?" This time, there was an edge of complaint in her words, in addition to the suspicion. He rolled his eyes, and rubbed his hands with greater vigor than before.

"Nikki, sweetheart, can we talk about all my insensitivity after you attend to your doorbell? Cause however callous I may be, with your own considerate attributes you cannot allow a guest to freeze and die upon your doorstep."

"Hmm... yeh ..." she murmured making way towards her main entrance, and he could hear the shuffling inside of the door on his phone, given the stillness outside. Then abruptly, he thought there was no movement.

"AM ..." she started tentatively, "Who would it be at this hour on a Friday night? I mean ... I'm certain I'm expecting no one." It took effort for him to keep the curse on the tip of his tongue unspoken. Aloud, that is.

"You're never going to find out if you don't go open the door." He said, not sounding too warm, cause well, how could he, when warmth felt like such a far cry with all the delay.

"I know ... but ... " she paused, and Abhimanyu was seriously tempted to tell her it was him, and if she could please, PLEASE let him inside! "You know what, I'm going to run up and grab my pepper spray first ..."

"WHAT?!"

"Hush! Stop yelling!"

"Why?!" he said unable to cut the sarcasm, cause this was getting tiresome now, "You think the stalker on your door may have supersonic auditory skills to detect my pitch from inside of your phone?"

"Hush! No! Its cause I thought I heard someone's voice outside just this second ..." she paused, then grasping his mean remark a tad bit late, retorted back, "And you will do yourself good by not being mean to me after ignoring me two whole days!"

Awesome, he thought resignedly, just awesome! Why were girls oh-so-impossible to deal with!

"Fine," he said in a whisper, not just to obey her bidding, but because it was him she had heard outside of course. Although, come to think of it, why was he hiding the existence of a human on her door ...? "Exactly!" he exclaimed, "Of course you can hear someone, cause hello? ... you just heard your door bell ring, and that can only happen if someone is at your door to ring it, right?"

"That's very enlightening Armaan Malik. What would I do if it weren't for you?!"

It wasn't her jab that reminded him of his primary purpose, but the name she had called him. At least she would stop calling him that after tonight, he mused, although there was a bright possibility that she would stop calling him anything at all after everything ...


"Well are you going to open the door or not?" He asked her simply.

"Actually, now that you put it that way, maybe I wont. Whoever it is can just tire of waiting and go back." Oh no, he thought desperately!

"But ... what if its someone you know. I mean, it could just be a harmless unexpected guest ... you know?"

She didn't answer him right away, and he prayed something would make her open the door and let him in ... or he was so going to tell her it was him - why wasn't he already doing that again? ... No bright reason ... except, the surprise was better this way, and he still cared about catching that reactionary expression on her face ...


"If it is someone I know, they can call me and say they are at my door and ringing the bell ... yes. Someone I know would do that ... I'm sure."

Abhi inhaled with effort, to calm himself, and also because breathing was becoming laborious with the extreme cold descending upon him. It would have done him good to be more prepared for this weather - say a hat, gloves and an extra thermal inside ... but his plan had been so sudden, he only had the one over coat upon him which he'd worn yesterday morning while leaving his home for the hospital. That time in a well heated car, to be inside a well heated hospital - it wasn't meant to shield him from the weather he was subjected to now!

"Hello?! AM? You listening to me? What do you think?"

"Uh ... yeh ... yeh I am ... Nikki ... I ... I still think you should open the door and see who it is." Nikita frowned to herself, pulled her phone off the ear and gave it a weird look wondering why he wouldn't let go of the issue ... did he not see her point, or was he so unconcerned with her safety? "What if ... what if its ... you know ... " he fumbled on, urgently seeking himself to come up with something convincing, "What if its your neighbors? Yes! The new ones, who's potluck you're missing?" He was relieved, and even pleased with himself to have come up with this ... Meanwhile, having seated himself on the freezing step outside her door, the cell cradled between left ear and left shoulder now, he continued to rub his hands and shoulders to instill surviving warmth.

"You think so ...?" she begun thoughtfully, then went on, "AM, how did you guess that, you could be bang on!" He wanted to tell her there was no intelligence involved in the guess, only dire need ... but yet again, he remained quiet as she continued, "You know I excused myself on the pretext of having caught a chill and ... maybe ... oh I know what!" she exclaimed as if with sudden realization, and he only wished with all his might that she would cut short her talking and let him into the house now. In a much lower voice than the already subdued volume, she went on in the way of explaining, "Why that witch! I bet she's here to check on me, to make sure I wasn't just lying and backing out ... Her gall to be so presumptuous!"

Transiently, Abhimanyu couldn't help chuckle, and be amused. Poor dear missy new neighbor, who was getting cursed behind her back for no real fault of her own! Oh Nikita Malhotra, he thought feeling inevitably fond of her naive ways, you're such a child!

"Well good for her to be freezing outside, that snoop! I'm not opening the door and she can go back without getting the satisfaction of having caught my lie!"

A part of him wanted to laugh out loud, but another part of him felt such immense self pity at her final verdict, that laughing was out of question. Plus he was so cold, he doubted his facial muscles and jaw would be obliging enough to even smile now. At the very thought, his teeth began to chatter.


"AM?!" she said promptly, in obvious concern, and he pursed his lips to stop himself, as shivers went through his entire body in recoiling. "Are you ... were those your teeth ... I mean ... where are you?" It was his chance. He just had to tell her he was at her door step and the worst would be past. He had almost given into the temptation too, but his words seemed to have a mind of their own.

"I ... I'm in my bed ... I mean ... erm ... I just got out of the comforter and ... brrrr ... its ... its cold!" There was no act involved in the latter bit. It came naturally, from how true it was at the moment.

"Well then get on a robe or something duh!"

Soundlessly, Abhimanyu pounded his head thrice with a soft fist. Was there anyway he could convince her to open the door? Anyway that is, without telling he was waiting for her to? Yet again, he shivered, not quite inaudibly.

"Armaam Malik get your robe on before ..."

"I am ..." he cut her short, flinching at the name. Why couldn't she stick to AM? "I am ... looking for one ... I er ... haven't sorted out my clean laundry from yesterday yet." He lied, so easily, that the guilt of his bigger lie returned to turn him grave.

"Someone's organized ..." she muttered. "Anyways ... so ... erm ... you said you felt like a chat?" Another subtle reminder that she was waiting.

He couldn't get himself to be appreciative of her understanding this time, cause here he was at her doorstep, freezing to death, because she had to wreck vengeance upon a mean missy new neighbor!


"Nikki ... I think you should ... "

"Please! Please, do not say you're still hung up on the doorbell." Of course I am, he thought, shaking his head. "She must have already gone AM, cause I don't hear a sound no more and ..."

*DING DING*

"She hasn't I suppose," he quipped hopefully, having taken her cue and rung the bell again.

"Why that little piece of varmint, she can't be serious about ... "

"Time out Nikita Malhotra!" Abhimanyu cut her short. "You know, I'm sorry I suggested it might be her, cause .." he almost got himself to tell her the truth, almost. "Cause, just in case its someone else, you've already had them half frozen to ice age folks and ... and that's not good."

"Hmm." she said after some seconds, and he dared to raise his hopes. "Okay ... maybe I'll go get my ..."

"No! No pepper spray please!" he literally pleaded catching her thought, "You don't want to blind them after killing them most nearly! Is it what against the statutes of the American Constitution to pay you a visit on a Friday night?! Geez! What's the big deal?!"

"Okay okay, peace!" she muttered, taken aback by his sudden reprimand. What was wrong with him! She was being more than nice to him and he ... Argh! On his side, Abhimanyu raised an exhausted head to the skies not so far above tonight - and saw more and more and more snow coming. The fact that he'd lasted so far made him stubborn about giving in now. Then again, how long could he keep on like this? He'd better just tell her and get himself inside.

"Listen Nikki ..." he begun, but this time she cut him short.

"Fine! I'm getting the door, happy?! But please keep civility lectures to yourself, really! After two days of not calling me up when I was so dead worried and ... " He tuned out to her remaining words, concentrating on the sound of movement inside once more, through the phone, and he couldn't help his long sigh! Oh thank heavens at last! Yes yes yes! He'd survived, and he would still manage to give her the wildest surprise of her life, woot! Before the second most wildest, and not quite the appealing way as the former...

"Armaan ...?" she said tentatively, and very, very softly ... so much, that the emotion of her voice, which was definite of worry and fear, distracted him from the agitation of being called the wrong name. "There's ... no ... no one at the door ..." she whispered, and it was now distinct, the fear in her voice.

"What?!" he shot back bewildered, his voice cracking, slightly from the cold, keeping its volume in check. "What do you mean? I mean ... how can ... how can that be? The bell just ... just rang!" Inside his head he was majorly confused. With a start he wondered if she'd moved houses and somehow not mentioned it to him? He'd been here last like over 3 months ago ...

"I know!" she whispered back ... "AM ... I'm ... I'm really scared now ... do you ... do you think ..."

"Hush Nikki!" He said in an assuring voice, cause she was sounding truly worried. Then cautiously, he asked, "How do you ... how do you know there is no one?" The door was still shut. How could she ...

"Well I'm looking through the door eye and I can't see a soul!" she explained. Huh? Oh! It struck him finally! He was sitting low on the step, too low for her to see from the door eye! Ha ha! This time, he really wanted to laugh out loud! Relieved, that he was at the right place, which really he should not have doubted now that he thought of it - cause how eerie would the coincidence of the doorbells be at her different house, same time as his own at this apartment! Ha ha, duh him!

"Er ... Maybe ... maybe its a parcel for you? Nikki, listen to me - just open the door." He said it with a collected assurance, "Trust me ..."

"Okay ..." she replied in a small voice, of a little girl, and he had the instant desire to hug her tight and cuddle her ... just as the door knob made the clicking sound, and the door opened upon him ...

She stared at him, her eyes widening slowly, but surely, as the sight of him took its own time to register.

"Armaan ..."

She finally whispered, sounding highly uncertain of her eyes, and her own voice ... Abhimanyu, this once at being called that name, could only smile. Genuinely. Because the sight of her in the sponge bob tee and pj's had gladdened her heart in a way that not even the name could undo .. for now ... In that one instant he believed he'd made the best decision of his life to fly down tonight ... to come to her ... so he could tell her all and never fear losing her again ...

Yes, he believed it would all work out. Somehow he did.

"Its Abhimanyu ..." he told her softly, getting up from the cold stone step, even as the weather had briefly ceased to affect him. "Abhimanyu Modi." He told her, simply, seriously, and earnestly.

And closed in on the distance between them. His smile widened at her doe like baffled eyes, which sought him, without blinking, and he had reason to believe she hadn't heard him yet. She was still getting over him standing there, before her. As if to prove his point, gently, he pulled her into a hug, and then, because she was so warm, and because the warmth was so welcome to his freezing self, and because it was her ... he couldn't help tightening the hug into much more than a greeting gesture.


"I missed you ... " he whispered into her hair, and the disbelief in her sort of left in that second, cause he found her fit into his arms and relax - like she had always been meant to ...

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Edited by spln - 14 years ago
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Ah! The oh-so-regular updater arrives at last!

This space shall be reserved for me until I find time to read........
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and shall you take into consideration the fact that i wasn't 'all that delayed' by my usual standards in posting and so u can read sooooon and comment? 😆

plus - HD threats are genuine reson *looks grave in expectation of an agreement*

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Posted: 15 years ago
Annie great Great update .
Even if .... and yes I shd say hopefully ,now that Abhi Nikki come together ....can u pls still continue this ff....i wanna see their chupke chupke romance n fights plsssssss
n yes v sweet part ..also it was light n fun filled , so i liked it more!
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nj right?
just read your story, awesome!
and annie, loved yours! hes finally admitting why he cares...
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^^Aishuuuu! Are you or Nainz finally gonna update and move the story?? *begs with big puppy eyes that she knows Aish will not be able to resist*
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^^ thanks aish! =) i'm glad you like it - i'm slowly but surely catching up on reading more stories by people on this thread - shall get back to u as son as im done with yours!

cheers,
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@AbhiNikiLuver

ahah me and aish updating our story. pretty funny 😆😆😆 we def. will try to, but uh no promises on when :)

~Naina

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