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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyya NJ! Long time no see!

The whole green pink or lavender thing kinda moved my thinking route towards the whole clothes factor.....but no. Alas, Nikita is not as predictable as I thought... 😆 AM? Armaan Malik. To be or not to be, that is the question. And I think Abhi has the wrong answer...

I would love to know under what circumstances he had to become Armaan Malik and the reasons for doing so. And she is only in her 2nd yr of colllege and she is dating a what? a senior doctor? What is the age difference? six years? eight years?

Would like to know how he is gonna explain to her that he is not the AM she thinks him to be...

And is Armaan using Abhi's name then? 🤔

Update soon! (Then again, do the words "update soon" really mean anything to you? 😆)

Sheena
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Posted: 15 years ago
I'm awake...do you realise I've to do soooo many chapters of maths in this very month? 😕
I've Laws of indices, surds, complex numbers, coordinate geometry, logarithm, locus and straight lines to finish and each chapter contains around 300 sums from each book and I've got 2 books to work with!!!
Have some mercy, Mitzi...I'm drowning here 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwwww...he cooked n held her thru the night....perfect gentleman...isn't he? n cherry on the cake, he let her back in the projct....n now he still is testing himself n her whether he loves her or not!!!

am sooooooooo enjoying this Annie....n Sid ko bhi khayal rakhna hai Nikki ka!!! Sweet....meaning more JEALOUS Modi...life is bful!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
so i begun reading up entries here as well, not fast enough, but something!

@ratika
- that was a much better tweaked version of where the show should have gone with AN ... i wish the creatives would consider being more natural once in a while! good job!

@rhea
(from sheena's account) - so erm, ur only done posting 2 chapters for now, right? ammy sure seems the mystery - i almost thought the signs about him made him sound like a doll/baby/dog! :P :P update soon!

@khushboo - ooh the heavy dose of AN and dilemmas! it had the impact alright, although i somewhat missed the lighter vein to AN! looking forward to more from you, for this surely can' be the end of your entriess, right?!

@annie - i'm such a godforesaken fool - so just above my first post on this thread was posted chap 8 by you, and just out of curiosity i couldn't help skimming through it - i should not have! now i know the future of what i shall get in chap1-7, but ill be reading them very soon! u seem like the super regular updater on the thread!

@ everyone else who's written - shall be reading more asap! meanwhile, working on the second installment of my own! =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
@spln sorry dear don't know your name.I liked it. Something is hidden in ur short ff.I will really like to read the continue part.
Sorry to forget.Welcome to AN writing challenge.
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks shale (i got the name right yeh?)

i'm nj =)

thanks for the welcome, and yeh, the idea as it occurred to me, quite vague at that time, had one major twist to evolve in its time - shall be updating soon!

cheers,
nj
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Posted: 15 years ago
nj.......i have yet to unreserve my comment....but just know that I'm working on it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi nj,
thanks for reading my FF. this is my first attempt at FF.... so am glad that people are liking it
I have been reading your FFs, and really enjoy it ... you have a unique style of writing ... which is great.
Am waiting eagerly for your update ... so please do it soon .....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Guyz!!Give more attention to story rather than writing.I know its pathetic, even i get bored sometimes reading my own.😆
Love doesn't understand Logic
Part 4
Nikki reached Sanjeevani and found Atul busy in reading a file at nurse station. She rushed toward him to ask about what happened after she left the party. Atul noticed someones questioning gaze on him n looked up to find Nikki standing besides him with a worried expression. Nikki asked "What happened after I left?" . Atul stared at her n asked "Why did u run away?" Nikki tells him "Atul I was scared". Atul tried to make her understand "Nikki we all r friends". Nikki interrupts him and said "I know that Atul that's why I m scared. I don't want to loose them. To face your beloved ones is much more difficult than others". Atul tried consoling her by putting his hand around her shoulder "Nikki, how long can u run now when everyone knows the truth about you n Abhi's relation". Nikki lowered her eyes in an attempt to hide her pain "I think you are right I have to face it no matter how difficult it going to be for me". Atul smiled and said "Remember one thing I am always there for you". Nikki returns the smile and hears Armaan voice from behind "not only you Atul but we all are". Atul looks towards them; Nikki turned around to find all the gang there with a smile on there faces rather than questioning eyes.

All proceeded towards Atul and Nikki, Armaan put his hand around Nikki "Hey Niks how can u forget your best friend, u'll always find me standing beside you". Nikki is unable to meet the eyes of Armaan and speaks in a feeble voice "Ah''Armaan I was going to tell you about it" Armaan stopped her from giving explanation "Nikki we don't need any answer which makes you uncomfortable. I promise that none of us is going to raise any question regarding this , until u feel like speaking about it your own. Ok ?". Nikki eyes get teary hearing this , the fear from which she was running had disappear in seconds after meeting her friends. She huged Armaan tightly and wasn't able to stop her tears from flowig which were washing away her fear. She felt lucky that she at least had friends who were always their to support her. She wished that everyone was blessed with friends like hers. All smiled and Muskaan said "Its time for group hug!" All hug in a group and say "Yay!!"

One stern voice breaks their hug "Silence please. This is a hospital; we have to maintain silence here. Now you all are resident doctor here not interns anymore". Everyone turned to see Dr. Shashank standing there with hands crossed across his chest. One more man standing beside him, watched them all in amusement specially Nikki who was smiling. After such a long time he himself was smiling watching Nikki's smile. That one smile was giving him so much pleasure, this man was none other than Dr. Abhimanyu Modi. But after seeing him all Nikki's friends smile disappeared, strange anger and hatred took over them. All of them controlled their emotions specially Armaan who was not able to tolerate his presence. Dr. Shashank teasing them with fond smile said "At least now you all behave like responsible doctors. Your internship period is over". All doctors smiled hearing this and Armaan replied on everyone's behalf "Don't worry Dr. Shashank we all will do our best and not give you any chance for complaint. It's just that we all have met after long time from where we started our journey". Dr. Shashank gave an assuring smile "I know that Dr. Malik, It's good to see you all back in Sanjeevani. Isn't it Dr. Modi?" and turned his face towards him. "Yes, Dr. Gupta you are absolutely right. Finally the time has come where our interns turned doctor takes Sanjeevani to new heights" replied in professional tone. Dr. Shashank takes a leave from there after wishing them all best of luck.

Abhi proceed 'Welcome you all in Sanjeevani". Armaan interrupted him "I don't think you need to welcome us in Sanjeevani as it is our own place. I think we should welcome those ppl who are new and some ppl not even welcome but still here". Abhi took a deep breathe and understood that Nikki was right ,that now he has to fight with them also. He thinks in his mind "Jiah , isn't she enough for me to fight with that god has sent these devils also. Life is already a hell to live , now they are planning to make it worse than that. Before Sanjeevani was the only place where he used to come to forget his home tensions but now even here he not get his piece of mind". The tension btw two people was clearly visible now which usually was hidden before. All were gazing at him like a pack of lions look at their food. Armaan and others came forward leaving Nikki and Ridhima behind and Armaan said in a warning tone "We all are here now together and if any one tries to hurt our friend, then he better be prepared for the consequence". Abhi felt like punching him on his nose right way but he was also controlling his emotions as they were standing in Sanjeevani. Abhi thought in irritation "What does he think of himself? He knows nothing what Nikki and I went thru. But its his habit from the beginning to jump into conclusion without knowing the real truth. First he jumped into the matter of Patil where Nikki misinterpreted him. Than he again jumped to the conclusion that I was trying to molest Nikki ,whereas I wanted to express my feeling to Nikki"

Armaan said indirectly to hurt Abhi "I think we should add one more rule to Sanjeevani Dr. Modi, so that no senior male doctor can take advantage of junior female ones". This was the limit of Abhi's patience , to show Armaan border line he said in calm voice "I don't think we need that Dr. Malik, what a person does in his personnel life is something private. I think we should stop interfering in other's personnel life. We are not kids that we should impose rules on the people. We all are doctors here so we should remain here as professionals and stay in our limits in order to maintain the harmony of the hospital". Abhi and Armaan were facing each other as if at any point of time this hospital was going to convert into a boxing ring and they would start hitting each other with their fist rather than words. There was complete silence between them now because both knew that if anyone spilt a singe word against the other, then they would surely loose patience. They both stood giving each other killing looks, on Armaan side there was Ridhima, Atul, Anjali, Muskan, Rahul and Nikki but on Abhi's side there was no one except Nikki. He knows that Nikki was not physically present with him but some where deep inside ,she is with him. He could guarantee that after what happened last night, she would run away from her friends to warn him against her friends. That was the biggest strength for him to fight even if the whole world went against him.

Abhi looked at Nikki's worried expression which worried him as well. He knew that whenever anything like this happens ,she felt miserable. She was torn btw those two which made her helpless, she was not able to fumble any word in this condition because it would make people against her . Abhi don't want to drag Nikki once again in same dilemma and said "I have a meeting with board's members" and took a leave from there. Nikki came forward to face Armaan, held his hand and said "Armaan, everything is finished between me and Abhi. So it's better to leave this matter here". She was very well aware that it was the biggest lie of her life. What happened last night was proof enough that they still felt for each other strongly and their separation had made them longing for other. But she had lied to her friends because she didn't want them to hurt Abhi in anyway as it hurt her in return. Armaan put his hand above her and said "I am glad that it finished. Frankly speaking he was never a perfect match for u. You deserve much better than him. We all will help you to find a good, smart, loving and caring partner". Nikki gave a fake smile to them and thought: she didn't know whether Abhi was a perfect match or not but her heart only wanted him.After that all left for their respective duties.

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Armaan was at the nurse Station after his duty finished, checking some files. When someone called him from behind, "Hello, Dr. Malik". He turned around to find Jiah standing behind him "Remember we met at the party". Armaan give one sided smile "How can I forget you Mrs. Modi". Soon his others friends except Nikki who was still busy in her duty, joined him at nurse station to notice Jiah talking to him. Armaan asked "So you here to meet Dr. Modi?" Jiah replied "No''., please don't tell him that I m here. I am here for my check up with gynecologist. Actually I want to give him a surprise. I hope you understand". This sentence is heard by all Nikki's friends whose anger now reaches to their extreme. Jiah asked them "Well I want to know why you all shocked to hear that I am Abhimanyu's wife. Didn't he ever tell you that he is married? Well it's not his fault, he is very reserved from nature and usually doesn't open up with people about his personal life . Ok I'll take leave now and best of luck to you all for your new beginning". Armaan couldn't stop himself from thinking how Dr. Modi betrayed his friend, how he used her and threw her from his life. He was not only using his friends to fulfill his need but was also betraying his wife. Now he is family planning, he has to pay for what he did to his innocent friend who gave up her life and trust for this selfish person, for whom she had a fight with her friends. He is not going to leave him so easily; he has to pay what he did to her.

Armaan said "He is such a bast***. If god forgives my one sin then I'll kill him". Rahul and Muskaan said in unison "You are right Armaan. We have to act as soon as possible". Atul agreed "Yes. Sometimes I also feel like doing something to him but couldn't as I was alone". "Don't worry Champ. We'll all teach him a lesson" replied Armaan. Anjali asked "How?" and Armaan said "first let's go and find him". Ridhimma hesitatingly said "I don't think we should do anything like that". Armaan surprised with Ridhimma statement said "What? You mean we just leave him and forget what he did to our Nikki". Ridhimma tried to make Armaan understand "I am not saying that, but first we have to find the whole truth from Nikki and then take any action". Armaan furiously said "I promised Nikki that I am not going to ask anything from her. She has taken a decision to move forward with difficulty. Now you want me to scratch her wounds which she is trying to forget. I don't want her to look back. I don't need to find the truth as I already know that he betrayed her and that's enough for me". Last sentence of Armaan left Ridhimma with no words to argue further but she was really scared of Armaan's anger right now.

Armaan turned and asked the Receptionist "Where is Dr. Modi?" Receptionist checked the register then told him that "He just left for some important work. May be you can catch him in the parking lot". After hearing this Armaan rushed towards the parking lot and others followed him. Ridhimma was scared of thought about what Armaan is going to do with Abhimanyu.

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Abhi was going to settle himself in the car, when he noticed Jiah leaving from the main gate of Sanjeevani. Before Abhi could stop her she left from there in her car. He got worried as to what she was up to now; it reminded him of his last encounter with her. Her last words to him ring an alarm bell in his ear. He took his cell out and called Nikki immediately and asked before her "Hello Nikki! Are you alright?" Nikki taken back by his sudden action said "Abhi everything is alright. What happened? Why are you asking me this?" Abhi didn't listen to any of her question and asked again "First tell me are you fine. Has anything happen to you or around you?" Nikki calmly said "Yes I am fine and everything around me is fine as well. What happened?" Abhi relieved to hear this said "Nothing. You just take care of yourself. If anything happen, or you feel something wired just call me immediately. Ok". Nikki couldn't understand the worry of Abhi and said "Fine". But before she could ask anything, Abhi cut the phone.

He took a deep breath and leant his back on the car door. When he heard of footsteps approaching him, he straightened himself and looked toward the voice. He saw Armaan and his gang coming towards him with fire in there eyes. They came and stood besides him, Abhi turned toward Armaan and asked "Yes Dr. Malik. What happend?" Armaan said in ironic tone "Nothing. It's going to happen now , specially after what you did". Abhi replied in confusion "I am sorry I didn't get you. What are you trying to say?" Armaan said "How cheap you can be now Dr. Modi. After betraying our friend and your wife, how can you pretend to be innocent?" Abhi said in anger "Mind your language Armaan. What do you know about my life? Who the hell are you to judge me? You don't know anything, so it's better to keep yourself away from this". Ridhimma felt that the matter was getting out of hand and she called Nikki from her cell , first isolating herself from the group. Ridhimma said "Nikki, wherever you are just come to the parking lot immediately". Nikki couldn't understand why all people were so tensed and asked "What happend?" Ridhimma replied in hurry "Don't ask question, just come here". Nikki replied "Ok fine I am coming".

Armaan commented "I don't need to know who you are as I am already aware of your true colors". Abhi said "You know what your problem is, you always make opinions about people without actually knowing them". Armaan said "Whatever I know about you is enough to judge you. You are one of those people who make fools out of innocent people and use them for their selfish motive". Abhi said "Whom did I used Dr. Malik?" Armaan replied "You used Nikki to fulfill your need". Abhi got more furious "Armaan, I love her. My life starts and ends with her. She is my life, my reason to live and what you are saying I even can' think about it". Armaan unbelievingly "By this act you may fool Nikki but not us. I am not going to leave you". Abhi said "It doesn't matter what you think about me. I don't think I need to give proof of my love to anybody". Armaan caught hold of his collar "U have to pay for all the tears which she wasted on you". Abhi pushed his hand away "I don't have time for your nonsense" and turned to open his car door. Armaan turned him around to punch him right on his nose, Abhi couldn't judge what was happening and his face hit against the car door due to impact of the punch and cut his lip . Abhi lost his sense for a short while and landed on his knee with one hand on the car door and other on his knee.

Nikki hurriedly arrived and screamed at the sight "Abhi!!"

Guyz u can surely kill me for not adding AN together for any part but story doesn't allow me to do so.To get AN together u hav to bear me a little more.Please post ur commnets otherwise i'll stop writing thinking that may be u didn't like it.Be fair n honest about ur opinion on my short ff, it surely help me to improve.
Edited by wow123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

Awwwwww...he cooked n held her thru the night....perfect gentleman...isn't he? n cherry on the cake, he let her back in the projct....n now he still is testing himself n her whether he loves her or not!!!

am sooooooooo enjoying this Annie....n Sid ko bhi khayal rakhna hai Nikki ka!!! Sweet....meaning more JEALOUS Modi...life is bful!!

@bold...😳 😳 😳 I LOVEEEEEE jealous Modi!!! 😃 *giggle*
@bold and underlined...🤣

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