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Posted: 14 years ago

Is this love

Maan puts his hands in his hair in frustration, as Geet ran away. He did not know what had gotten into him. He knew he should stay away. Why did she come to his room? His hormones needed to be controlled, he scolded himself.

But god she was oh so …cutting his thoughts there. He got dressed and went to the office room, to find her avoiding him. Hmmph! He thought , two could play the game. He abstractly looked at the wall and told to no one in particular but of course only she was there, I am going to the main house to check up on Daadi, wont be long. As if she cared how long he would be he thought acidly. Now stop thinking nonsense, he berated him. What was happening to him? He was defending her from his thoughts as well?

He stormed out of the door but could not resist one last look at her, as he turned , he saw her looking at him with longing. With some inexplicable emotion that he did not want to name. Is this love? The thought rebelliously popped in his head. Is this what it is?

This longing, this war within, that made him want to run to her one minute and away from her next. He knew she was slowly but surely driving him crazy. He had never ever let anyone affect him the way she did him. Her silly antics were amusing, her playful ness like a breeze that cooled a warm skin. Her smile was like sunshine that made everything seem brighter.

Why leaving her alone like that irked at him? Why did he want to ensure she was okay one last time before he left her to her own device. Why did he want to run back to her?

Oh hell! He thought he should be worried about daadi, her health not his emotions. Putting a plug on his thoughts, he walked into daadi's room and talked unintelligently about this and that, too distracted with the last look he had seen in Geet's eyes.

Geet had heaved a sigh of relief when he had announced that he was going up to the main house. He had not looked at her, so she was safe to feast her eyes on him. She was reliving the moments that had transpired in his bedroom before sanity had come. She was confused. Did she want him to stop or did she want more. She kept on glancing at the door, checking to see, if he is back. Oh she was like a kitten on hot bricks, skitterish and haphazard in her thoughts, in her movements. One minute going to kitchen to drink a glass of water then coming out again, in case she missed it if Maan came back. But why should he, he could always work from the main house can he not, looking at the laptop on the office table. No he will come back. Happy with her conclusion, she went about finishing her work when her stomach grumbled and she realized she was hungry.

She went into kitchen, listening for the sounds that would announce Maan's arrival. She remembered that line, Har aahat pe lag ke woh aaye from some movie, at the time she had thought nothing of it. Today, it so described how she felt.

She made some gobi paratha but had managed to get the flour on her face, as she had tried to move her wayward tendril and remembered how Maan had tugged at them and tucked them behind her ear. She was really giving too much credence to what had just happened, she thought. NO, her mind refuted. It was more than what it looked. It was something intense, something intangible, she could quite put her hand on the pulse. Then a thought skittered in her brain.

Is this Love….

Title based on song -Is this love – whitesnake


I should have known better
Than to let you go alone
It's times like these
I can't make it on my own
Wasted days, and sleepless nights
An' I can't wait to see you again

I find I spend my time
Waiting on your call
How can I tell you, babe
My back's against the wall
I need you by my side
To tell me it's alright
Cos I don't think I can take anymore

Is this love that I'm feeling
Is this the love that I've been searching for
Is this love or am I dreaming
This must be love
Cos it's really go a hold on me
A hold on me

I can't stop the feeling
I've been this way before
But, with you I've found the key
To open any door
I can feel my love for you
Growing stronger day by day
An' I can't wait too see you again
So I can hold you in my arms


Is this love that I'm feeling
Is this the love that I've been searching for
Is this love or am I dreaming
This must be love
Cos it's really got a hold on me
A hold on me

Is this love that I'm feeling
Is this the love that I've been searching for

Is this love or am I dreaming

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Posted: 14 years ago
maar dala.......allah.....maar dalaa......

yaar u r tooooooooooooooooooooo good!!! Amazing......thanks for this.....two parts in one day??? Wow what a treat....i wanted to say pleaseeeeeee continue....i mean i know u will soon but don't wanna beg today since u already gave us two stunning parts!!!!

omg omg.....wow is all i have to say....ur writing is beautiful.....it really really is beautiful and that is what makes reading this even more fun....whenever u write something romantic......or when geet touched Maan's chest......i felt butter flies in my stomach....my whole stomach turned upside down....it feels as though i am really watching them live.....u really have a way with words....amazing!!!😳

thank u for two amazing parts!!!! Hope to see more.

-Shivani
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Posted: 14 years ago
Absolutely splendid! It was so beautiful! How I love this budding stage in a romance, always gets to me. The unsaid, the looks of yearning, being conscious of one another & yet not saying anything, looking & searching for the other when one is not around.............it was all penned so beautifully by u. Great piece of work, loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

maar dala.......allah.....maar dalaa......

yaar u r tooooooooooooooooooooo good!!! Amazing......thanks for this.....two parts in one day??? Wow what a treat....i wanted to say pleaseeeeeee continue....i mean i know u will soon but don't wanna beg today since u already gave us two stunning parts!!!!

omg omg.....wow is all i have to say....ur writing is beautiful.....it really really is beautiful and that is what makes reading this even more fun....whenever u write something romantic......or when geet touched Maan's chest......i felt butter flies in my stomach....my whole stomach turned upside down....it feels as though i am really watching them live.....u really have a way with words....amazing!!!😳

thank u for two amazing parts!!!! Hope to see more.

-Shivani



thanks shivani...it is a high praise coming from you..i hve read your posts and your replies..and you are amazing..yourself...

yes i shall write...more...may be not tonight...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lghosh

Absolutely splendid! It was so beautiful! How I love this budding stage in a romance, always gets to me. The unsaid, the looks of yearning, being conscious of one another & yet not saying anything, looking & searching for the other when one is not around.............it was all penned so beautifully by u. Great piece of work, loved it.

Lana.



thanks lana...

yeah..it does that to one..does it not...its always a push and pull thing...the initial throes of love is so confusing...one...knows..better than..to desire..but...desire one does...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Love sick puppies.....who can't seem to accept what's happening to them!!! Prem rog hai bhiaya...aur iska koi ilaaj nahin!
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Love sick puppies.....who can't seem to accept what's happening to them!!! Prem rog hai bhiaya...aur iska koi ilaaj nahin!



kabhi kabhi...dard hi daawa..hai Abs..how is your migraine now?
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And some more fights...

And so as Daadi coughed again, Geet ran to the nearby medical store; not with the intention of bringing medicine for her, but to walk away from the awkwardness she was facing with all the teasing and questions. Daadi quickly realized what just happened. But Maan refused to understand anything that Geet says or does. This girl is just beyond his understanding; or maybe he does not want to understand her?

It was getting dark and Geet had been away for almost an hour. Knowing that trouble is Geet's best friend, a fear rose in Maan's heart. 'What's taking her so long? The medical shop is just around the corner. She's new to this place. Did she forget her way back? Oh no, Geet is out on the streets at this hour - alone! I must go look for her. I hope she's safe. God ,this girl is totally crazy and is going to kill me one day!' And so he went out in search of her.

Geet, aimlessly walking on the streets of Delhi, is thinking about what she has been going through for the past couple hours. The sudden urge to keep looking at Maan, the effect of the hurt caused by his bitter words, the longing to see him hale and hearty. These emotions were building an unknown storm inside her - a storm that she was not ready to face just yet. She kept questioning herself and her newly found unknown feelings.

And then suddenly she sees a gang of guys approaching her. It is then that she comes back to her senses and realizes she's on the streets at this late an hour. Her pace quickened as she crossed the road to avoid passing the guys. But to her astonishment, they crossed the road too - only to come face to face with her. She was frightened. She didn't know what to say or do. She quickly turned back and started walking the other way. Goondas being goondas, they overtook her and once again came in front of her. They tried to make her talk, they teased her, played with her dupatta and her hair strands. In fear, she again turned back to go the other way, this time running quickly to escape them. She ran a few steps only to bump into Maan. Her happiness knew no bounds when she saw him. He had once again come to save her.

And so the fight began. All of them fighting Maan whereas 2 still holding Geet tight. These were not mamooli goondas, they had come prepared with tools. And so they hit Maan hard enough to make him bleed in his face. Seeing this, Geet could not control herself. She pushed away the men holding her to run towards Maan and see if he is ok only to face the cruel goondas again. They held her tight and this time, threw her aside. They pulled her dupatta and tore it in pieces.

This made Maan go mad. His anger rose to high that he could not think straight. Left and right he kept fighting with everyone that came his way. He was almost in front of Geet - wanting to assure her that when he is around, she need not worry. And then boom! One goonda hit him hard with a stick on his head from behind. Not able to understand what just happened, he turned around only to be hit again - this time in his face, then stomach and then legs. Before he fell on the ground, he turned to look for Geet one last time. Geet saw his expression of helplessness and began to sob.

Dhan ta nan - and you hear cops car siren. Obviously this made the goondas run away lest they get caught. Geet ran to sambhalo Maan who was almost unconscious. Their eyes met for one last time before he closed his.

Scene shifts to the house. Doctor says "he has been hurt very badly. His head injury is not fatal but he has multiple fractures in his leg and needs complete bed rest". Geet cannot stop cursing herself for her foolish acts which caused so much distress to Maan. She begins to sob like a little girl when Daadima comes and tells her to control herself. "Agar aap apne aap ko nahi sambhaal payenge, toh Maan ka khayal kaun rakhega. Aaj se Maan aapki zimmedaari hai. Aap hi ko unki dekhbhaal karni hogi".

Geet agrees, not because she had feelings for Maan but because of guilt. And then we see Geet taking care of Maan. Sitting by his bedside, moving her hand gently across his hair. She even comes as close to give him a kiss on his head, but Geet toh Geet hai. She comes back to senses and thinks to herself 'yeh kya kar rahi hai'. pagal mat ban, apne aap ko sambhal. Maan sir thik ho jaye, uske baad teri zimmedari khatam. phir tu yahan se chali jaane. Tu hamesha unke liye pareshaani ka karan banti hai. Lekin ab nahi. Maan sir ke thik ho jane ke baad tujhe unki zindagi se jaana hoga.'

Din-raat, subah-shaam, Geet is busy doing Maan's seva. Even at night, she keeps a watch over. She is always with Maan bina palak jhapkaye, bine kuch piye, bina kuch khaye. She tends to his wounds and ceaselessly prays that he becomes alright else she will never forgive herself.

Bas...aaj ke liye itna hi. Hope to continue with the scene when Maan ko hosh aa jaye and prem kahani aage badh jaye. Hope you like my first attempt😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
Vrush! tum ham sabko dheere dheere pagal kar do gi😉😉 Loved it! You describe everything so beautifully and the picture we get while reading is just perfect! 🤗🤗
I love the way you included that song to match up with the words/feelings.😊 Waise, I just wrote another chapter of my story and also included a song in there! 😆 when I read your update....i was like..😲...hehehe! 😊
keep updating....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

this one is for Starlite and Armu...posted it in the one they made the request as well...silly me!!

Stat Warning in place.18 and above only..


Wicked Game

Maan had been sleeping fretfully, he had been thrashing in his bed and he woke up with a start, breathing heavily, sweat forming on his brows, hell he was dripping with sweat everywhere. Then he remembered the dream as vividly as if it had actually happened.

It was etched on his soul. The feelings were real, even if it had been a dream…he felt wicked at what had happened. How he had held Geet. How he had made love to her. He was still throbbing with emotion, his heart rate was still fast. Was it only a dream or was she really there, he wondered. He could still feel her. Smell her fragrance. The softness of her skin, the trembling of her lips, cool yet searing right through to his heart.

Oh what was happening to him he wondered, running his hands in his hair. He sat up against the headboard, putting his head back, reliving each and every part of his dream.

She was there in front of him, open hair, flying about her head like many arms of an octopus flapping to catch him in their grip. Her eyes calling out her with that come-hither look. Her parted lips slightly trembling. She was wearing a black salwaar kameez that was a sharp contrast to her alabaster skin. She shone like a beacon to a drown ship. He walked upto her and stood in front of her, face to face. He felt heat emanate from her. He wanted to be enveloped in her heat, mingling his with hers. He was craving for her touch, her feel. He inhaled deeply, trying to control his staggering breath. He raised his hand to see if she was really there. She took his hand in hers, lacing her fingers with his. He looked at their joined hands and then looked up at her face as she took a step to close the gap, almost. There was hardly any distance between them. He could feel her breath when she exhaled.

His eyes drifted to her heaving breasts. He was fascinated with the movement they made with every breath she took. He then looked up into her eyes. Lord, it was his undoing. They held emotions that made him want to crush her to him. Make him want to run his hands wildly in her hair and kiss her till both of them were breathless. He let go was whatever little was left of his self control and he asked softly, what are you doing here Geet? She just smiled, her sweetest smile, not saying a word. He implored with his eyes to tell him something..give him a sign but her reply was to put her head on his chest facing down, as if a sudden bout of shyness had attacked her, as if her boldness had suddenly deserted her and she wanted him to take over.

He felt she was playing a game with him. A wicked game that made him feel the way he did right now. Speaking volumes with her eyes yet not a word out of those lips. His eyes travelled to those lips, luscious lips that were always a rosy pink, oh so kissable. He knew what had driven him crazy. It was those innocent beguiling eyes and those sensual lips, that were contradicting what the eyes told. He had wanted to kiss them so much, it had been an exercise to stop himself many a times to just kiss them, he had almost done that a few times. But today he did not want to stop. He did not want to walk away. He wanted to taste them. He wanted to drink them. He needed to know if they were as sweet as he had thought they would be? He slowly moved to her lips in a trance, being pulled by some unseen force. He registered that her her closed just when he put his lips to hers and heard her sigh. As if she had been wanting, waiting for this. Just like him. His dam of self control broke and his emotions took over. He gathered her in his arms, pulling her as close as the clothes would allow. He felt the answering heat on those lips. They trembled with desire, they were supple and warm and he died a small death with the taste of them. Honey, he thought I will never be able to have honey without thinking of her lips.

He deepened the kiss, lifting her off her feet in his eagerness to gain better access. He entered her mouth and felt a lightning like jolt pass through him when their tongues touched. Tentative at first and then in earnest. Geet sighed and whispered as they came up for breath, I have never felt this way in a voice that so unGeet like. She sounded huskier, throatier, Oh she drove him wild with those words.

Instantly he picked her up in his arms and took her towards the bed and gently sat her on the edge and he went on his knees. He removed her shoes, one after the other. Geet sat there mesmerized by his actions. He ran his hand up her calf and she felt a current pass from where he touched to her very center that seemed to melt even more now. She felt a mass of nerves that tingled to every touch of his.

He gradually moved up his hands to her waist, lifting the kurta up as he went higher. She had moved her bums to help him lift the kurta but did not help him in other way. She was lost in those eyes staring back at her and was automatically doing what he beseeched with his eyes but not actively helping him get rid of her clothes. She felt langarous, a strange lethargy despite the heightened sensation, as if it was not really happening to her and she was actually watching this from somewhere else.

He finally got rid of all her clothes, stood back to take in her magnificence; she was even more beautiful than he had thought. The curves of her body,devine. The rise of her firm, pert breasts a beacon calling him to suckle them. The curve of her waist, asking to be held with hands that would circle it if he spread them out around her. Her shapely thighs, gently sloping to the knees and flairing into delectable calves that rested on delicate ankle and pretty feet. Everything about her was gorgeous, the shape of her neck, long and curvaceous, he would love to cradle her in his hand.

He swiftly devested himself of his clothes, not hiding the fact of how much she affected him. He saw her eyes go the part of his anatomy that proved his desire for her. She blushed. He liked it. She looked away. He smiled. He went up to her, sat next to her on the bed and tipped her head towards him with his hand. He looked deeply into her eyes and huskily said, Geet! I want you! right now! Are you ready for this. Geet in reply looked at the floor shyness attacking her a little late but she nodded unable to say anything as she had a lump in her throat. She was still reeling at the vision Maan made in all his glory. She had seen him bare torso but like this, she gulped, he was magnificent. His sculpted body sporting not an extra ounce of fat. He was all hard muscles and her eyes darted again to see a very hard part of him and blushed.

Maan cupped her face in his hands and kissed her tenderly this time, taking his time to learn each and every crevice of her mouth. He learned how she responded when he increased the pressure, how she moaned when he pulled back. He learnt her body with his hands, with his lips, inch by slow inch. He brought her desire to a feverish pitch where the only thing Geet could do was thrash about in the bed asking for release and uttering moans that were hard to suppress. She tried to bite her lips to stop but maan's lips were running havoc with her senses. She called out maan when she ran out of patience at his onslaught of her senses and felt as if she had come home when her entered her parting her legs. Finally, she felt at a strange calmness as he made his first thrust, even though her body was wound up like a spring coiled so tight that the only thing it clamoured for was release.

And it came with a guttural sounds emitting from her and heard maan's Oh! As she reached the plane she sought unknowingly reaching out and clutching maan tightly as her body felt limp as the surfs of passion subsided… maan had hugged her tight holding her to him as he had found his peak.

That's when his eyes had opened and he knew it was a but a dream.

Wicked Game – Chris Isaak – I think he is the sexiest man ever….a voice that is sensuality personified…and the video..is best ever… lyrics..for reference..

The world was on fire
No one could save me but you.
Strange what desire will make foolish people do
I never dreamed that I'd meet somebody like you
And I never dreamed that I'd lose somebody like you

No, I don't want to fall in love
[This love is only gonna break your heart]
No, I don't want to fall in love
[This love is only gonna break your heart]
With you
With you

What a wicked game you play
To make me feel this way
What a wicked thing to do
To let me dream of you
What a wicked thing to say
You never felt this way
What a wicked thing to do
To make me dream of you
v And I don't wanna fall in love
[This love is only gonna break your heart]
And I don't want to fall in love
[This love is only gonna break your heart]

{World was on fire
No one could save me but you
Strange what desire will make foolish people do
I never dreamed that I'd love somebody like you
I never dreamed that I'd lose somebody like you

No I don't wanna fall in love
[This love is only gonna break your heart
No I don't wanna fall in love
[This love is only gonna break your heart]
With you
With you

Nobody loves no one

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