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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok guys dont hit me hard
actually a kind of idea came up my mind 2-4 days back but could only make myself ready now and so i am writing it


so here it goes...............................................

intro:

in samrats house:


samrat was tensed really really tensed but a bit happy too but didnt know how to handle the situation

the drama devdas was over ,and his chashmish has shown him a sign of love ....she still loves him but is still fighting with her feeling
the drama has cleary showed him so

but thats not what is bothering him now

what happened after he returned to home was actually something which he had never imagined will happen

he cant handle this alone he need mayank and his chashmish together

he called his chashmish but her phone is switched off

samrat-"hello mayank"

mayank-"samrat maian abhi ......."

samrat-"mayank plzz meri baat suno mujhe tumse bahut important baat karni hai "

mayank who an hour ago had just missed meeting his nupur in the crowd and heavy rain was still searching for her and didnt want to miss her again-"samrat main abhi tumse bilkul baat nahi kar sakta ...i am really into something very important.....i will call u later"

and mayank disconnected the line


samrat-"hello mayank....."
dammm!!!


samrat u really need to face this alone thats what dr martha said too


samrat takes a deep breath and comes out from his bed room and goes towards his hall


samrat -"i am sorry maine tumhe zyaada intezaar toh nahi karaya naa....actuallly ek important phone aa gaya tha(he lied)"


person-"no its fine "


samrat-"kuch loogi Nupur"


and then it shows that opposite to samrat nupur is seated

nupur-"coffee..."


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should i continue😕

continued on page 4 & 8(last)

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EtherealRati thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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you are telling that nups sitting in sam hall..........wow nothing can be better than this..............yup you should continue jaan...........i would love sanu first meeting too.....sanu deserves that........sam suffered a lot ........3 years are not less....he lived with the guilt of killing someone.....kash aisa hota.........and after that sweet mayur reunion.........but yaar according to the situations right now....its least expected i think...........but i expect cvs to show a sweet sanu reunion at any cost.......the show needs it now.......

and you write in an awesome , way.......you are a very nice writer sush........please do continue this..........😛
Edited by surbhi123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely start and do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful start pls do cont.......and pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nups in sams house???????????interstin.......sush plzzz continue soon...wud defo want to knw whts next.....n thnx for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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you have too!!!cos its come very very intresting!!good one!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Omg omg omg so awesome man so nups is in Sam room omg wow perfect SaNu reunion offcourse u should continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dam it
what was that
nupur is alive
sam know about it
n he is talking with her casually
kuch samjh nahi aya
kya pak raha hain tera dimag main yaar
plz try to continue it soon
warna main soh soch ka mar jaungi
ki agge kya hoga
plz continue soon
n pm me meri jaan
sanu🤗
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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is tht even a question?

Its a MUST continue ASAP from my side..!!!

damn sure u hv something rlly interesting up ur sleeve😳
The tiny winy small part 😆u have posted is very gripping.

Luv ur style of writing:)

Do cont soon
Thanks for the PM

Lots of Luv
ZeeJay!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW twist in story gosh loved this first part now can't wait for next update do continue soon and thanks for pm

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