Love-Shot :: A Rain soaked Romance...!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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"...Perfect is an image that she likes to pose,
bottled up inside, is what no one really knows,
that style is just something I wouldn't do
this is all because I'm perfect for you..."


...Akshara waitin' for Naitik to cum back from the office**

Clock struck 5, Naitik had promised Akshara that they'll go out tonite cos today is Sunday, the first sunday of August.. & we celebrate it as Friendship's day!! Both of them were really excited to celebrate it in a special way. cos they too started on their journey of life as Friends..!! Naitik had planned they'll go for a Hrithik Movie, cos HR is Akshara's Fav. then a candle light dinner !! waoh..how cute** to make it a special for Akshara !!

..the wait is on... its 7 now... Akshara is very upset cos of Naitik. She tried callin him several times, but everytime Naitik is disconnectin the calls.. poor Akshara**

Akshara, finally decides to change & go to her room, out of all the dissapointment.. :((

Immediately, her cell beeps.. BEEP...BEEP...."you have a message"
yes, this was the tune set for her Cell's incomin' sms.. lolz** cute naa.. ;))

at first she decides not to check the inbox n just ignore the sms, as she ws very dis-heartened...

but all of a sudden, she realized tht may be its Naitik's message...?
so, she checked the message & yes it was from Naitik only, her dahlin' Hubby...
the sms was "Main jaanta hu Akshara aap mujhse bahut naraaz hai, par main kya karoon achanak ek meeting aa gayi hai..."

Akshara : 'hun...." aane do aaja inhe, mujhe nhi baat krni inse... hmesha kaam-kaam-kaam. mere liye to waqt hi nhi hai... hun!!

she decides to call Varsha.. so when shje ws about to call her, her cell rang n ths time it ws "Main aarti teri gaaun.."

the tune particularly set for her MIL... howw cute...**

she recieved the call:

Gayatri ' Beta tumlog ghar kab tak pahuchoge..?"
Akshrara : "Maa hum to abhi ghar pe hi hai..
G : Kyun tumlog abhi nikle nhi ho.. ?
A : Nhi Maa... wooo... wooo.. inhe kuch jaruri kaam aa gaya tha to ye abhi tak ghar nhi aaye hai... :((
G : Ohoo, ye munna bhi naa...
A : Maa aap chinta mat kriye main thik hoon
G : nahi beta. agr aesa tha to munna ko hme pehele hi bata dena chahiye tha, to hum tumhe b saath le aate...
A : Nhi Maa.. aap pareshan mat hoiye, ye aate hi honge:(
G : thik hai jesi tumhari marzi.. acha maine to ye batane k liye fone kiya tha ki hume thodi der ho jayegi.. tumlog hmara intezar mat krna...
A : Ji Maa...
G : theek hai, rakhti hoonn..
A ; Ji Maa..!!'

Akshara finally heads towards her rooom... all of a sudden she could her the musical tip-taps of water droplets...

and wonderr what it was rainin'// waohh

'Saawan bhi to jaaye piharvaa... ""

she stood there gazin n starin at the rainfall, greenery, breeze... it as just awesome..

she went bak down memory lane n she started smilin thinkin of all the lovely n unforgettable moments spent with Naitik, since the day she met himm.

all those moments were just too adorable...

outdoors, shoppin. daman trip, movie, gol-gappe, ice-creams, everythin..

woh saare lamhe jise Akshara aur naitik ne pyaar se sanjoye the... :))

worth cherishin' n all ths was enuf to cool down her anger n dissapointement..

n she started smilin' n said " Naitik aap b naaa... main aa aapse gussa ho hi nhi paati paati hoon,.." her cheeks bcame red , she started blushin'

how sweett....!!

She felt like dancin in the rain, so she came out of the portico n started njoyin..

she was runin hr n thr, dancin, singin.. njoyin like a child...

she got too involved, koi sudh-budh naa rahi zamaane ki, Akshara ho gayi baawri apne saawre ki..**

sudenly, Naitik enters the Singhania Sadan's gate, but Akshara couldn't hear anything, the gearin of the car, enythin.. she ws jz herslf... njoyinnn...

Naitik too got so surprized watchin Akshara behavin n hvin fun like ths..

he came close her n gave her a warmm hug frm the backk.. Akshara had goose-bumps..

haa...Naitik... Naitik.. Naitik... aappp....

Naitik : shhhhhh.. keepin his finger on her lips.... mesmerising**

Akshara had the best feelin... day dreamin**

Naitik held her by her waist, took one hand n kept one his shoulder & one in his other hand.. started dancin...

"sanson ki sanson mein dhalne do zara..."

Akshara ws nw close to his heart, she could hear his heart beatin for her & the Naturee givin a musical touch to her heart thumpin...

best romantic date, one could think of..

haathon mein haaath, barsaat ki ek raat, aur apne piya ka saath...**

they both danced to the tunes of nature...

soft breeze, rain drops drizzlin, trees swayin... awesome ambiencee for a love couplee... Akshara & Naitik...!!

after havin a great timee.... with each other.. Naitik finally holds her in his arms n picks her up n starts movin inside the house...

Akshara was noww.....** like
.. Piya baawri bhayi baawri...**

sshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....

this was one of the best time of their life's

they both were now in their Bedroom..Naitik finally closes the door... n lights offf !!!!

sssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........................!!!

So, sometimes even Nature is the one of the purest forms of God...!!
This is how a Rain Soaked Romance was the reason behind Akshara & Naitik's love bond & the relationship they share is a Bliss !

A Rain- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Soaked Romance
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pree4ru thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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haye shikzzzzz its wow yaar jitni achi siggy maker oh utni hi achi one shot bhi lethi hoo

lagta hai ish baar nandini ki aatma romance ke mood mein thi 🤣 ROFLL****

jokes apart :

ur one shoot was wow yaar serioulsy enjoyed the deatlied scene felt lyk i am seeing the scene in reality hope they shw something lyk this in shw😍

Edited by preksha_naksh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooooowwww....shikha di amazing loveshot....im still into it...superb...aisa agar tv pe dikhate toh, all of us wld be 😍...Awesome👏....Loved it...😃😛😳

Edited by sia.k_1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn


i wrote it all... bt i guess..sm mishapp happend its no more here


i messed the postttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

hate myslffffffffffffffffffffffff
pree4ru thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: starry.phoenix

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn


i wrote it all... bt i guess..sm mishapp happend its no more here


i messed the postttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

hate myslffffffffffffffffffffffff

tats wat me thinking wer did the part disapper koi nahi yaar hota u write again we wil wait

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Posted: 15 years ago
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u read the whole partt ??
n nooooooooooo.. ntw nww... m so upsttt

wil do it laterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: starry.phoenix

u read the whole partt ??
n nooooooooooo.. ntw nww... m so upsttt

wil do it laterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr


nope jus till tat akshi geeting wet naitik coming frm bak nd akshi nt talking to her actully acha it gt erased ab jab leko gi tab kuch aur naya hoga i am sure so gud oly kahte hai na jo hoa hai woh ache ke liye hota😃

@take ur own time to update😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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shikha its soo good.. continue dear.... plzz jaldi karo 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very well written Shikha di👍🏼...dun get upset..v'll wait!!
Edited by nikki18 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: starry.phoenix

"...Perfect is an image that she likes to pose,
bottled up inside, is what no one really knows,
that style is just something I wouldn't do
this is all because I'm perfect for you..."


...Akshara waitin' for Naitik to cum back from the office**

Clock struck 5, Naitik had promised Akshara that they'll go out tonite cos today is Sunday, the first sunday of August.. & we celebrate it as Friendship's day!! Both of them were really excited to celebrate it in a special way. cos they too started on their journey of life as Friends..!! Naitik had planned they'll go for a Hrithik Movie, cos HR is Akshara's Fav. then a candle light dinner !! waoh..how cute** to make it a special for Akshara !!

..the wait is on... its 7 now... Akshara is very upset cos of Naitik. She tried callin him several times, but everytime Naitik is disconnectin the calls.. poor Akshara**

Akshara, finally decides to change & go to her room, out of all the dissapointment.. :((

Immediately, her cell beeps.. BEEP...BEEP...."you have a message"
yes, this was the tune set for her Cell's incomin' sms.. lolz** cute naa.. ;))

at first she decides not to check the inbox n just ignore the sms, as she ws very dis-heartened...

but all of a sudden, she realized tht may be its Naitik's message...?
so, she checked the message & yes it was from Naitik only, her dahlin' Hu

very very nice start👏👏👏

cont soon buddy.....m waiting eagerly.....desperately😉😉

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