OS: Crossroads- part 2, page 2 (08-01)

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Ladies,

Jagtap is dead and I guess he took the diaries with him. After the last episode I couldn't write anything. I though, maybe after sleeping over it one night I could pretend he didn't die at all and give the diaries a proper end. But sorry, I couldn't even do that.

Still I feel much to attached to my Meany to accept he's gone for good just like that. I need some closure for God's sake! So I decided to take matters in my own hands😆

Short warning from my side: My english is surely terrible and I'm not a fan fiction writer at all. It feels strange to take characters other people created and pull their strings. Nonetheless, I have to let it out of my system😆

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Heaven is just what I thought it would be. In fact I've been living it for the past years already, but only now it feels complete. Taking a deep breath I let the fresh air deep into my lungs. Fresh grass, I always loved that scent. Funny how alive you feel once you are dead. It's like being reborn, absorbing everything around you like a curios toddler discovering a whole new world. And yet everything is familiar. Paki laughs at me as she sits besides me. There are portals, she had told me. One-way mirrors to the other world. And as she lets her feet down, dangling them in the water, I think I've just found mine.

"I knew they would make it," I say slightly smiling.
"Of course," Paki answers patting my hand. A soft touch like a gentle spring breeze leaving goose bumps on my skin.
I tilt my head to see the strange couple, like I used to call them, better. They weren't that strange to me, actually. It almost felt like looking into a mirror. Memories that had never really left me, suddenly flooded my mind. Dark, shattering, heart wrenching, happy, a giant wave of emotions.
He stares at the empty road ahead. Hesitantly. Clenching his fist, then relaxing again. Clenching, relaxing, clenching, relaxing, clenching, relaxing.
"I am afraid," he repeats, the voice hoarse and low. And once again I can relate to him.
"Isn't there any way to reach out to them?" I ask Paki. "I know you did it. You came to me."
"It's not easy, but possible."
Looking back for a moment he lets his shoulders slouch. Go back and be at peace or face the outside world again?
"Sahib?"
"Let's go," he says clenching his fist again. Too many promises he can't break, too many people to take care of.
And one big outstanding score to settle.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome dear........i loved it u use Jags to tell ur story......so different approach.........continue soon.......
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Hey nice one.........Hope u update soon.............👏😳
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Yes you are right in a hurry both of them forgot to pick up their diaires but don't worrry once they are back at the PN Baaji will gift them new diaries and then you can restart the entries. Let the creativity flow my friend.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ruby (that's your name, right?), can you read my mind?😆I had some similar thoughts on Thursday too. Since the PN is the actual madhouse full of meanies, whackies, actors and what not😆


And of course thanks everybody😊

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great start eva!!!..loving it!!
oh but i will definitely miss the diaries😆
hope u update soon!
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Great stuff Eva. People have been demanding Jags diary and finally you gave one. I am glad you gave a closure to the diaries.
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Amazing Eva. Would like to read more
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Wow........I love your creativity Eva! This is awesome! Please continue dear!

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